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Reviewer: ellibrohada Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 12:18 AM Title: Prologue

Want to read

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:29 PM Title: A Future So Bright

excellent story;) are you maybe going to do some o/t, f/t? ;) btw what happened to eleazer? thanks for sharing this on here for us ;D

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 2:33 AM Title: A Future So Bright

WOW!! I can't believe this truely very intriging & absolutlyly captivivating story has come to an End!!! SNIFF** SNIFF**

Thanks 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing story!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!  I really appreciate that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 2:36 AM Title: Safe Haven

Love Siobhan!!  Great job with her character...so feisty!!

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 2:03 AM Title: Taking a Chance

Oh goodie!!  Hope Aro meets a drastic end!!  Can't wait to see what is in store for these two!  Love the story!! 

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 5:14 AM Title: Cover Up

You are doing a fantastic job with the story...No need to worry!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:37 AM Title: A Future So Bright

Great job. I loved how you ended it even though it sounds dangerous. Mwah!  Congratulations. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I really enjoyed finishing this story, which for me is weird because I usually don't want my stories to end.  Thanks for sticking with me, and we'll see about getting my newest story posted here soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:13 AM Title: An Unexpected Surprise

I can't believe this beautifully captivating story has almost come to an end with only 1 last remaining chapter left!!! sniff, sniff!! Anyway I truelly have enjoyed following this most amazing & wonderfully well written story!! Thanks for all ur hard work & I definaly give this a 10 star rating.



Author's Response:

OMG, thank you!   That means so much to me.  I'm really happy that you've enjoyed it.

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:06 AM Title: An Unexpected Surprise

I love his tenderness and his awe in Bella in this chapter.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm really glad you liked it.  This chapter was a little difficult to write because of everything that's happened so far, but I like the way it turned out.

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 5:43 AM Title: Looking Ahead

U Truely are such an amazingly talented writer!!! I just wanted to thank for writing such a truely captivating & intriging story!!! U truely amaze me with ur abilities as a writer time & time again with ur beautifully captivating flowing written words!! Thank for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this amazing story!!!  I definatly give this a 10 star rating!! I will most definatly be impatiently awating ur next update!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much.   I really love it when people love my writing, and I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it.   Hopefully, the next chapter won't be that far off.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:59 AM Title: New Game

OMG!!!  He has the world on his shoulders...that's a HUGE burden to bare.  That along with the guilt of his father's death.  He still has a lot he has to work through over the next two or so chapters.  Thanks for the update! :)



Author's Response:

I know, but it'll be okay.  I promise.  Now I just hope the next couple of chapters do the rest of the story justice.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: New Game

Does Charlie know about Bella and Edward?  Great chapter. I love that Edward was finally allowed to be a little vulnerable. 



Author's Response:

As of the end of this chapter, it doesn't look like it, but by the next chapter, it will be common knowledge to everyone.  It will more than likely take place "off-camera" so to speak, meaning I won't show it but by the beginning the next chapter, it will not need to be told.

Thanks for your support! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 8:45 AM Title: New Game

THANKS, I WANT BELLA TO MAKE ESME A GRANDMOTHER!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2013 11:14 PM Title: From the Ashes

Huge chapter. Huge. Great job. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 4:09 PM Title: From the Ashes

Where does this leave Bella?  Will Edward go back for her?



Author's Response:

Well, of course he will.  Sooner than you think.  But I'm trying to wrap it up.  There's just a little left.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 8:01 PM Title: Caught in the Crossfire

No words...only sadness. :*(



Author's Response:

Awww.  I'd hug you if I could.  It'll be okay.  I know it doesn't seem like it now, but I promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 7:49 PM Title: Old Enemies

Can I choose option C, neither????  I want all the good guys to come of this alive!  Lucky me, I somehow missed my alert for this chapter, so I get to go right on & see that everyone makes it out alive(wishful thinking!). :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:13 AM Title: Caught in the Crossfire

Just wow!  Great chapter.  Will there be a reunion with Bella.  Will he think she is the reason Carlisle died or will he see it in a different manner.  Again, wow.



Author's Response:

Well, not really sure what Edward's state of mind will be for a little while, but yes, there will be a reunion with Bella.  We'll see.  And thank you!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2013 3:08 AM Title: Caught in the Crossfire

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 12:50 AM Title: Old Enemies

you suck.  these cliffhangers are killing me.  great chapter though.  you are truly building my curiousity and excitement.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know, but the next chapter is coming up soon.  So stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:30 AM Title: Old Enemies

NO! UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZ!



Author's Response:

Updating very soon.  Stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 1:37 PM Title: Sins of the Father

Aaaaahhh!!!  I was glad to see that Irina lived.  I would like to think everyone will get out alive but I'm guessing Irina doesn't make it and...Peter is my other guess.  Thanks for another great chapter!  I can't wait to see how they get out of this newest twist.  



Author's Response:

Oh, I don't think anyone is going to expect what happens!  I'm gonna surprise everybody.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 4:03 AM Title: Sins of the Father

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 2:19 AM Title: Sins of the Father

Woah. You are great wih the twists now. Good chapter. 



Author's Response:

I'm trying to keep up with the level I've created, but there's a big windfall coming, so get prepared.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:38 AM Title: Sins of the Father

Yes it is that.



Author's Response:

From here on in, it's just going to escalate, but up or down, only I know.  ;-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:29 AM Title: Secrets of the Past

Of course anyone that evil you must finish the job Irina.



Author's Response:

Trust me when I say that she won't make that mistake ever again.   Might also have to do with the chances of Aro dying being very good.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2013 1:26 AM Title: Secrets of the Past

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 11:00 PM Title: Secrets of the Past

Love it and cant wait for more. Hope you can update again soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  More is definitely on the way.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:59 PM Title: Secrets of the Past

Aaaaaaaaaah!  You are killing me slowly with all of these cliffies!!! :) Oh My Goodness!  This story has gotten so convoluted, I can't tell who is lying & who is telling the truth.  I look forward to the next chapter, I think.  Although, it doesn't look good that Aro is weilding a gun. :/



Author's Response:

Well, I can tell you for sure that Irina is telling the truth.  And the truth will come out pretty soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 11:09 PM Title: Secrets of the Past

You are ultimately evil woman!  Great irina story. Great chapter. Biting fingernails - waiting. 



Author's Response:

*rubs hands together manically*  I know.  And don't worry.  You won't expect what happens next.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Secrets of the Past

LOVIN IT!



Author's Response:

Great!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:11 AM Title: Hitting Hard & Fighting Back

Hahahaha!!!  I really didn't see that one coming, but I did think it was Vladimir or Stephan(whichever one is still alive, I can't remember 😁).  Well, you've done it again, left me dying for more.  It was a great chapter & I'm glad Edward had the strength to tell Aro off.  It also gave us a little insight into the past.  This is me anxiously awaiting your next chapter! 😄



Author's Response:

Funny you should mention Vladimir, but that will be for later.   And I'm glad you were surprised.  I love when that happens.  The next chapter is not that far away.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:53 AM Title: Hitting Hard & Fighting Back

Holy crap I was totally not expecting that ending.  Great job.  I am anxious for your next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I know, I love when that happens!  The next chapter is on its way.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:39 PM Title: Hitting Hard & Fighting Back

now Irina is alive. So Will that plan out for him to get out of there? He has to heal then he will have a buddy in Irina to go to. I just don't think HE loves Bella she is just a kid he has taken to trying to save her.  Bella may love him but it is the saviour deal.

 

good story.



Author's Response:

Well, as far as how this is going to help him get out of there, the next chapter or two will be very telling.   And it's okay about Edward and Bella.  Like I said, I'll just have to work a little harder on that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 5:24 PM Title: Torture

The televison program I told you about is Scandal. The guy they caught and thought tried to assisinate the president was tortured by the CIA. That was awful. As the program progresses he has started having flash backs of the water boarding. When they tortured him I had to fast forward through that.

If you kill off Edward then he can go on to be with HIS KATE. I keep going back to that because he knows he loved her and their long time afair was more than he thought at the time. Bella is just a today thing. If you kill her off then not today. She is just a kid being captured and she looks on him as her savior. So.. I really don't buy their love. Don't be mad it is what you have given me here. He is still morning the loss of Kate.. STILL



Author's Response:

Well, of course, he's still mourning for Kate.  She's only been dead for a week.  And yes, he blames himself for getting her killed.  If he didn't, he would be just like Aro and Jane.   But that doesn't mean that he doesn't care about Bella or maybe even love her.   It's not Kate's voice calling him back from being mostly dead.   And it's okay if you don't get it just yet.   I just need to do a better job of showing it.   Not to diminish anything Kate might have meant to him, but the truth is, we don't even know if she loved him that way.   And he might not ever know either.

Also, I'm not killing off Edward.  That would be like getting rid of Katniss or Wanderer.   He's the main character, and we won't be changing perspectives this late in the game.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I love reading everything everyone writes!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:57 AM Title: Torture

You astound me with Edwards inner thoughts. Very well written. Great job even if you left me on the edge of my seat. 



Author's Response:

Somehow, when I'm writing this, it just comes.  And the next few chapters are going to hopefully go back fast as far as pace, so maybe they won't be so hard to write.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:30 PM Title: Torture

I think the Calvary has come!!!!  I look forward to the next chapter!  :)



Author's Response:

EEP!  I think you might be right, but will it come in the form you imagined?  We'll have to wait and see!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 12:51 PM Title: The New Strategy

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 12:44 AM Title: Torture

Poor Edward........is he really giving up. Who is there to rescue him?



Author's Response:

EEK.  I really want to tell you, but I can't!  I'm sorry!

Thanks for reading and reviewing though!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 9:53 PM Title: Taking a Chance

Bella is a naughty, she is playing with fire.



Author's Response:

First, I'm glad you've enjoyed reading, and I'm working on new chapters this weekend, so stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:10 PM Title: New Tactics

I love and I found the story very well.

Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 3:11 PM Title: Cover Up

I like what you write!

Thank you, this is a good chapter.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 2:09 PM Title: The Shift

Kate damage but good for James.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 12:21 PM Title: Isabella Swan

I love this chapter and especially the end.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:35 AM Title: A Stone's Throw

I also want James or death!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 10:27 AM Title: Mortal Coil

So I wonder who is going to kill James?

Kate and Edward?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 9:58 AM Title: New Assignment

Kate is angry, it is normal to James killed his sister.

That will kill James?

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:29 PM Title: Back to Where it all Began

This chapter was well written, but I don't have anything else positive to write (j/k).  I never like reading about Edward being tortured, but I can tell you that I'm so hooked on your story I can't wait for your updates!:)  Thanks! :)



Author's Response:

I know, I don't like it either, but trust me when I say it's the lesser of two evils.  The next chapter might be worse, but it's a low point, and where do you go after you've reached bottom?  Up.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:32 AM Title: Back to Where it all Began

brutal but worth it.  it keeps it realstic.  how does he think he will deal with aro - wow?



Author's Response:

I don't want to spoil anything, but don't worry about that.  Even though Edward goes through all that in his head, he'll definitely have help when the time comes.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:12 AM Title: Back to Where it all Began

Okay this was not as bad as the one on television the other night of the guy who they thought tried to assisnate the president. That one I had to fast forward through.



Author's Response:

I must have missed that one, but I'm glad this one wasn't so bad for you.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 4:09 PM Title: Letting Your Guard Down

Sorry I haven't left a review every chapter but I couldn't wait to get the next chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update again soon please.



Author's Response:

Don't worry about reviewing every chapter.  I just love that people read my stories and like them.  I love sharing them with everyone, and any good response is better than a bad one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'm working on my stories now, so stay tuned.

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 4:13 AM Title: The New Strategy

Love it!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 3:44 AM Title: Last Resistance

:):)

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 2:22 AM Title: Innapropriate Contact

:)

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 12:05 AM Title: Waking Up

:)

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 11:33 PM Title: New Tactics

Loved it!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 11:09 PM Title: Cover Up

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 11:34 PM Title: Letting Your Guard Down

Aaaaaaaa!!!!  So terrified for poor Edward.  Please don't make us wait too long to find out what happens next???  Great chapter!  Thanks for the update! :)



Author's Response:

I've got the rest of the story mapped out, so hopefully, it will be easy to write itself.  But I want to make it as good as it can be, so it'll take a little bit.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:27 PM Title: Prologue

Great chapter. Loved the direction. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 6:09 PM Title: Letting Your Guard Down

Wow. He let himself be caught?!?  Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yes, it's all part of his plan.  We'll see what happens next.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:02 PM Title: On the Run . . . Again

I am addicted to this story! I can't wait for more and to find out what happens next! I also love how you made the charters and their interactions with everyone! 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you're enjoying it!  I'm working on it all right now, so stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:27 AM Title: On the Run . . . Again

Love this fic and can't wait for the update! Big surprise...huh...Edward's going to take over Aro's business or Bella's pregnant?? Don't really have a clue.

Author's Response:

Great!  Like I said, I've got the rest of the story mapped out.  Just have to write it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:19 PM Title: Last Resistance

I hope it's them.

Author's Response:

I'll reply to all your reviews in this one place since you read so much in such a short time.  First, I'm really glad you like the story, and I hope you finish it.  I really like writing it, and have the rest of it mapped out now.  I just have to write it, so stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:13 AM Title: Safe Haven

Still surprised by Bella's forwardness.

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Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:01 AM Title: Innapropriate Contact

I think I like Siobhan's name...only because it's my own. I love that Stephanie used it in her books just because I rarely see it or hear it in the US. I don't think Edward will be able to help himself & he will fall for her anyway.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:45 AM Title: Taking a Chance

Can't say that there will be a happy ending? Yikes...I'm afraid to read on. Love how Bella just puts it out there...Go Bella!

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:10 AM Title: New Tactics

I'm enjoying the story. No questions yet.

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 3:21 PM Title: On the Run . . . Again

I'm so hooked on this story!!!  I really can't get enough of it. :) Thanks for the update!  I'm looking forward to reading what their next move will be.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  And don't worry, their next move will be even better than the others have been thus far.

Have a Happy New Year!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:36 AM Title: On the Run . . . Again

I would guess that they need someone to  help them.  ... Great chapter.  I am excited by the way you write this story.  It is so full of suspense.  Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

Oh, you have no idea!  But we'll leave that for later.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  And Merry Christmas to you too!

Reviewer: IANticipate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 2:57 PM Title: On the Run . . . Again

Just found your story.  Could not stop reading once started.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Awesome!  Good to have you on board, and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Bits & Pieces

You are keeping us on our toes.  Did I read correctly that it was Edward's fault they were found because he kept his cell on?  Was that for Siobian?  Making us wait for an update, while knowing that they're being followed...aaaaahhhhh!!!  Thanks so much for this update!  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what he's thinking, and it's very possible.  And yes, he held onto it because of Siobhan.  Now that she's okay, we'll see what happens to that phone. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm going to be working on all my stories this weeks as I don't have to work at all.  Yay!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:18 PM Title: What I do

James n'est pas un aide de tout repos !!!

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:15 PM Title: Prologue

Je pense que ça va me plaire.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:58 AM Title: Bits & Pieces

Good show!  Yes you started it with a few human moments then BANG!  Perfect. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:02 AM Title: Bits & Pieces

I was gonna ask about this new Brit.......

can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Well, as I said in the end notes for the chapter, it's Sam Claflin.  He played Philip in PotC:On Stranger Tides and Snow White and the Huntsman as William.  Like I said, I think I'm starting to like him a lot.

And thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm working on it right now.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 9:58 AM Title: Bits & Pieces

good story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 3:10 AM Title: Bits & Pieces

I am truely enjoying reading this very captivating & intriging story!!! Thank 4 ur hard work!!! 1 suggugestion if possible would be 2 update more regularly.



Author's Response:

I'm writing and planning as fast as I can, I promise.  My muse is somewhat elusive these days, but I'm plucking at her heart strings as often as I can. 

I'm really glad you're like the story, and hopefully the next chapter will come together a little more quickly.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:30 PM Title: The Plan Ahead

I just found this story & I can't put it down.  I'm so addicted!  I'm looking forward to your next update. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:48 AM Title: The Plan Ahead

Grea chapter. I like Emmett o derivations and I loved the way Edward let go in this chapter. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  I loved writing Emmett, and I think we'll see his humor again in the story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Prologue

loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 10:38 PM Title: Prologue

I really like this tory. Its so different and I can't wait to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you're liking it, and welcome aboard for the journey.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 4:42 PM Title: Laying Low & Going Crazy

Beautiful chapter. Great job. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:42 PM Title: The New Strategy

I am so intriqued by this sotyry.  So please continue it.  But, I totally understand that you are working on other stories, so if you abandon this one just come back.  I will still be here.

Great chapter.  Is Edward stupid for hanging on to the cell phone yes, but I understand his mental need to hear from his friend.

You are doing a great job with this story.  So please continue it after you do what you need to do.



Author's Response:

I swear not to abandon this story.  I'm making notes and hoping to work on it a little at a time until it's good enough to post.  Thanks for sticking with it, and I promise you won't regret it.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:34 AM Title: The New Strategy

I just discovered this story yesterday and read all of it to get caught up. I really enjoyed it. I know you said you were busy with RL & other stories, but I hope you find the time to update this soon. It's very good. Thanks, Maria 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and it's great that you like the story.  I'm making notes for this story right now in the hopes that I'll be able to finish it soon.  I don't know how long that's going to be, but hopefully no more than a few weeks.  Bear with me, and we'll see the end of this.

Again, thanks for reading, and thanks for the review!  It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:16 PM Title: Last Resistance

That was a very tasteful and intense lemon. I really liked Edwards point of view for it too. We don't get that very often. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, we don't get Edward's POV much, so it was fun to write.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:26 AM Title: Decoy

I actually knew what 5 large was - but what is the "new cable installed"?

Is it lemon time?

Great chapter.  I cant wait to see what's coming.



Author's Response:

That's Carlisle's way of telling Edward about a new message from Aro.  Before cell phones and computers, messages were sent through a cable.  And mum's the word on lemons.  ;-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:04 PM Title: Decoy

please update soon... love this story and want to see how Edward keeps them safe and fall in love with each other...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it.  The next update will be as soon as I can get it ready.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Safe Haven

I don't trust siobhan.  What is with all the stopping?  She's sshifty man, shifty.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's being her normal unassuming self, but don't worry about her.  I can vouch for her, I promise.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:10 PM Title: Innapropriate Contact

It's interesting that Sio is there.  I mean she found him so easily that it is a little disconcerting.  Now her tracker is out, but if she found Edward wouldn't it be simple for others to find her?  So many more questions with a third party added to the mix.  great chapter.  I like how you have really made the possibility of Bella and Edward so complex.  I like how Edward is struggling with his feelings as well.  Good job.



Author's Response:

It would be possible to find Edward and Bella if someone was directly on their trail.  But with his tracker removed, his phone disassembled, and him being mobile for a good 24 hours means whoever is looking for him will actually have to look.  There'll be more on that in coming chapters.

I'm really glad you're liking it so far.  I hope I don't disappoint.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: Taking a Chance

Interesting Bella being the agressor.  I can't beleive they were spotted though, they were so careful.  BTW, I need help deciphering the messages.  I get some of them and others not so much so if you could help with those I would appreciate it.  Great chapter.  See you next week.



Author's Response:

Well, as you've probably guessed, the messages are almost all written in code, so I guess you kinda need my brain to really figure them out.  I'll PM you.

Thanks for reading!  And I think you'll be surprised.

Reviewer: CrookedSmile24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:05 PM Title: Taking a Chance

I've just finished reading all eleven chapters, and I am really enjoying the story so far.

Reminds me a little bit of the Jason Borne movies....I see elements. Looking forward to what is yet to come.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment.  The Bourne Trilogy is one of my favorite set of movies.  And I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: grizzlybear Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Prologue

I really like this story too! I have it on my favorites and I look forward to your updates.



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you're liking it!  There's more to come!

Jo

Reviewer: JenDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:47 AM Title: Cover Up

I really like this story. I can't wait to see what happens. Are u planning to do chapters in Bella's POV or will the whole story be Edwards?



Author's Response:

First of all, thanks for being my first reviewer.  I don't know what it is about new stories that people don't want to review on, but anyway.  At present, I have no plans to write any chapters from Bella's POV.  But there might be the possibility of outtakes in the future for her for certain events.  We'll see.

Thanks for reading!

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