Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:52 AM Title: Altering Plans
so charles isnt alll bad a glimmer of love for his daughter there!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:29 AM Title: Bliss
LOL that was one hot chapter..
I am laughing though, poor them with the consumation... hell..
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:50 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
LOL Can't wait... for the NC17 rating.. LOL
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:22 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
I am glad angela is going with her.. (hopefully)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:19 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Great job! I love that she was caught and I hope she gives them the information that they need. I wonder who killed Newton.....
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: Princely Reformation
awww.. can't wait till they meet LOL
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:15 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
I read the first few chapters on my mobile so hence the no reviews.. but I am really enjoying your story I am going to keep going..
Thanks for putting it up here..
Author's Response:
Thanks TSO. I'm doing a little happy dance to have you reading it. I hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:10 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Well as always it was great. I like how she added. Edward to the loop meg
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
The plot thickens. We were all so eager to blame Tanya for all of the mischief although I do believe a lot of what Tanya said or believed was all in her head. Edward fooled around with her but I don't think he ever said he'd rather have married her instead of his presumed "cold fish".
Can't wait to hear Tanya's secrets!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:51 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
I'm glad they've got Tanya and that Bella thought to let Edward know what was going on.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:31 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Alice is quite feisty in this story, eh?
And if Tanya didn't do the killing...?? hmm...have we seen a "james" yet?
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:11 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings
great chapter, so there is more to the plot than just tanya and her jealousie, i look forward to more thanks tracy
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:39 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings
:) adding to the mystery...
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Oh the intrigue!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:42 AM Title: Bliss
I like how you wrote this. Very romantic and funny. Please keep up the great work.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Glad they got Tanya, but now we know that it wasn't her doing the had Mike killed. Can't wait to see who it is. Great job, keep up the good work. ;)
Date: 31 May 2010 11:21 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
What a sweet story.. I love the twists and turns...please update soon...
Date: 31 May 2010 10:29 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Ah, the plot thickens! I'm very courious as to who is behind everything although I still believe Tanya knows more than she's letting on. Maybe I'm wrong...but I just don't trust Tanya.
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 9:15 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
The mystery continues...If Tanya did not order the murder, who did? Hmm who do you have planned for this evil? Cannot wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 9:12 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
I love this time era! I cant wait for more!
Date: 31 May 2010 9:08 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
hmmm now who is behind the murder then. hmmm
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Awesome. I love how the ladies set this up without the men knowing about it. I was curious when Bella knew that Jacob was coming back to talk why she would call for Esme. It was smart for them to involove Jacob in the search instead of someone from their own guard.
I'm happy that Bella thought enough of her husband to include him, even in secret, on the meeting with Tanya. He deserved to hear it from her. Tanya's admission was a bit surprising. I was sure she knew about the murder. Now, with the new threat, Edward and Bella won't be able to relax which isn't good for her. Speaking of Bella's condition, please tell me I'm right and she is going to have twins. She shouldn't be showing yet with just one baby.
Great chapter. I'm curious to know where the new threat is coming from. Can't wait for more.
Date: 31 May 2010 8:30 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
Yes yes yes. About damn time someone put that pompous ass in his place. I just hope he allows Angela to go with BElla. I can see some drama in their future but I hope they overcome it. Please keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 8:07 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
And the suspense grows. Lord I can't wait to read more of this. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Princely Reformation
Now I really like Edward. He tuned Jessica down and wants to be a real man for awhile. I bet the wedding will be beautiful. Please update soon.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 7:39 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Oh you are so good at cliffhangers. I could feel her pain over losing Tony. I think she will all of a sudden be a very happy woman when she finally sees Edward. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince
I like Edward. I think he plays around because he thinks he will never find true love. Will he ever be shocked when he sees Bella. Keep up the awesome work And I look forward to reading much more of this, Or maybe a sequel.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 7:09 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Good chapter and nice twist.
Date: 31 May 2010 7:08 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
Do not worry about writing in the 1st or 3rd person. This story is wonderfully addicting either way. I just can't wait until Bella and Edward realize that they know each other. Awesome story and I look forward to reading more of it.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 7:03 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Tanya better spill her guts. Do we already know the murderer?
Date: 31 May 2010 6:48 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Oh man I have a feeling her "Tony" is Edward. Man I can't wait until they meet. Please update soon and keep up the awesome work. Tahnk you fro such a wonderful and addicting story.
Marguerite
Date: 31 May 2010 6:41 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
I am glad the Tanya was caught and Bella was smart enough to tell Edward of the meeting.
Date: 31 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Loved it! Also thanks about the time-line I was actually about to ask myself!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 31 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
well at least Tanya, however evil she may be isn't going to die so that's somewhat good news but still the killer is out there somewhere, bad news. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 31 May 2010 4:15 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 31 May 2010 4:05 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
is it possible that she might have twins???? since renee says that bella was bigger than she was at that stage... she may be carrying two instead of one!
i'm really happy that bella is soo happy with her closest family members around her. i can't believe that between her and jacob, they were able to find tanya. how did she manage that? she's truly very smart
and seems like tanya wasn't the one who killed mike... but who was???? i can't imagine anyone else besides tanya who would try to spread rumors about bella like that.... and then kill mike to cover their tracks. i have no idea....i like that you are keeping us on our toes in this story. i was so sure that tanya was behind everything. but it feels good to be wrong.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 3:57 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Off with her head! Sorry, I just always wanted to say that after reading Alice in Wonderland! But it certainly fits here. And now to figure out who else is in on Tanya's plot. Hmmmm
So much going on behind the scenes...I'm so totally engrossed in this story line, setting, characters...love it love it love it !
Date: 31 May 2010 3:55 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
well....just because I hate anything and all things related to Tanya, I hope the bitch burns!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
loved it like always update when you can thanks......
Date: 31 May 2010 3:11 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Thanks for clearing up the timeline!
Based on Jacob's surprise that Bella seems pretty big, and also on how sick Bella has been feeling, is there a possibility that she's having twins?
It looks like there's a puppet master behind Tanya. Someone who was hoping that they might be able to influence things if she were on the throne?
I can't wait to read more.
Date: 31 May 2010 3:05 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
I'm so glad Bella gets to see her mom and Jake again. I love them as brother and sister and how close they are. :0) Good news that they caught Tanya and at least now they know that Tanya didn't have Newton killed so there's still someone out there.Wonder who it will end up being??? Sorry to hear about the rain that cut your trip short but, I was really happy to see this update this morning. :0)
Date: 31 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Loved it!!! So glad that Tanya has been finally caught!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 2:40 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
the wicked witch is doomed!!!!! Hell yeah!
Great chapter! what are you cooking up on that brilliant mind of yours? I can't wait to see what happens in the future...
I love your Jacob! Just a little question: He is still unmarried, right? shouldn't he be married before Bella?
Again, amazing chapter, I can finally breath better although I think my nails will still suffer from the mysterious threat looming in the castle...
Have a nice day!
Mina
Date: 31 May 2010 2:39 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
That was awesome! I am so glad you updated :) Also, wonder who really killed Newton? Tanya will still be in prison right? I mean she might not be executed but will remain imprisoned, right? Cannot wait for more! Also, maybe the reason Bella is showing earlier than most, is because she is having twins...
Date: 31 May 2010 2:35 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
hmmmm, I get the feeling we will have an "Oh, how did I miss that?" moment when we find out who the villain is behind the murder. I love that the mystery is more complex than originally thought. And what a show of power by Bella that Tanya was caught in Spain. Did she really think that was a smart country to flee to?!
Date: 31 May 2010 2:19 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
can not wait for more!
Date: 31 May 2010 2:03 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
I'm so glad they have finally caught the ho', but is she telling the truth? If she is then who else is out to get Bella. Oh I love the supense! Thanks for a great chapter.
Date: 31 May 2010 1:55 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
That is a twist! Who knew she didn't plan the murder?
Date: 31 May 2010 1:53 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Thank you for the update. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 1:44 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings
Great chapter, but there seems to be an even bigger threat to Bella and the baby than the skanky "lady" Denali.... where could the threat be coming from??? Great chapter, cannot wait for the meeting with Carlisle, Esme, Renee, Jacob, Edward and Bella- Tanya needs to provide answers to all those pesky questions
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 4:28 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
A beautiful chapter. ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 4:20 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
Sorry about lacking in reviews. RL has a way of creeping in on you. Great chapter, I believe that Tanya definitely has more to worry about now than ever before. ;)
Date: 27 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
OMG! I also have watched the Tudors. I can't imagine losing your virginity to a stranger in front of a bunch of yet more strangers!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:27 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
what a nice husband...now that war isn't a issue I wonder what happened to Tanya?
Date: 25 May 2010 7:50 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
keep up the good work
Date: 25 May 2010 4:01 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
great chapter, things are settled and they are happy the nasty tanya is gone but she has run so where is she? but what a lovely xmas surprise he brought her mum and brother over how special, thanks tracy
Date: 25 May 2010 1:16 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Yea! Things are finally starting to go right for these two crazy love birds. LOL! Oh but I'm sure you've got some more angst in there somewhere. LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 24 May 2010 11:19 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Edward is so sweet to have Bella's mother and brother brought to her for Christmas. What does her mother and brother think of her being pregnant? Can't wait to find out more and more.
Date: 24 May 2010 8:08 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Good chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:49 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
OMG!!!! I can not believe that someone kiilled the man who said he slept with both Rose and Bella. Who does Tanya have working for her???? Can't wait to find out more.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:45 PM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
I feel so sorry for Bella and for Rose. I hope to goodness that Edward gets to Emmett before he does anything stupid.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:15 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Oh so good were the last few chapters. I just love this story. Can't wIt to see the complete demise of Tanya. I'm happy the newt was taken care of.
Thanks. Meg
Date: 24 May 2010 3:57 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Awww what a lovely surprise!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:31 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Oh, Christmastime! Such an unangsty chapter, but a nice reprieve for our favorite couple before the drama begins :-)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 3:08 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Such a sweet chapter, especially the ending. I would say, this will be a great christmas.
Good job!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:52 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Yay, she gets to see her mother and brother. Great job!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:48 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
How thoughtful of our dear Edward!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 2:37 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Really glad it was Jacob that accompanied her mother and not her father. Hope we don't see good old dad ever again. Unless of course that is who Tanya has gone to "visit" ! They would deserve each other!
Beautifully written as usual. Thanks!
Date: 24 May 2010 12:38 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Awwwww, Edward is such a sweetheart :)
Date: 24 May 2010 12:08 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
what a wonderful Christmas gift! I am absolutely loving this story! Enjoy camping, and we'll see you when you get back :)
Date: 24 May 2010 11:48 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Edward is so good to her.
Date: 24 May 2010 10:42 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
aw he is so sweet!!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 10:21 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
How sweet of Edward!!! He is so damn sexy!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 9:09 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Love it! Can't wait to see what's next!
Date: 24 May 2010 7:35 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
That was so nice of Edward
Date: 24 May 2010 7:27 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
How lovely!!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 5:59 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Wow!! what a great gift. Have fun with your family.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Awww, too sweet that he brought her mother and Jacob to visit.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:22 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Aww, what a sweet gift! He's so thoughtful! Hmmm wonder where Tanya's hiding out
Date: 24 May 2010 4:21 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Now THAT'S a Christmas present! Great stuff. I'm looking forward to more and reading more about Rosalie as well as Alice and Jasper's little one.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Very nice! This must be the calm before the Tanya storm!
Date: 24 May 2010 4:13 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Yay! I love that they got to come for Christmas! She must be so excited. Edward is possibly the sweetest man to ever live in our fictional little world :)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:49 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Worth the wait. :-) This is a nice break from the other chapters full of tension.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Awww...that was a great early Christmas present for Bella :) Cannot wait to see what happens next! Wonder where Tanya is?
Date: 24 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Thank you for this update. I love this story. Where is Tanya and what is she up to? I can't wait to find out;)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:13 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
What a wonderful Christmas present.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Oh what a very thoughtful gift he gave her. Her mother and brother. Awesome chapter.
Date: 24 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Great Chapter
Date: 24 May 2010 2:50 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
What a sweet gift....:0)
Date: 24 May 2010 2:43 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
quail eggs are DELISH!!! what a nice surprise for her, GO EDWARD!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:39 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
woo hoo Mommy came to visit.
Date: 24 May 2010 2:27 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
aww Jake's there and Her mommy. :) how sweet. merry christmas to bella. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 24 May 2010 2:24 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Loved it! What a wonderful surprise Edward had for her. I'm glad she gets to see Jacob and her mother again. :0)
Date: 24 May 2010 2:23 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
awww, what a sweetie he is to bring her mother and brother to visit her for the holiday!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
How sweet! I hope those two are around when the "you know what" hits the fan, because I'd love to see Jacob kick some royal butt after someone tries to harm his sister!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:16 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
Loved it!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 2:14 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
So .. Tanya fled. I don't think we've heard the last of her. The looks on the faces of some of the council members - does this mean that they believe Tanya's lies?
I'm glad the tensions with France are over, for now at least, and our Prince and Princess could enjoy their time together a little more.
And a royal visit from Spain! Yeah! I hope they have a great time. I'm imagining King Charles having a debauched Christmas in Spain....
Date: 24 May 2010 2:13 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
aww!!! i'm soo glad that bella can be reunited with her mother and brother for christmas. that's soo wonderful!!!!!!
i'm glad the impending war is over and that bella was such a big part of the process
the tanya story still hasn't ended though.. we haven't caught the killer yet and the one who hired him. i hope he can be caught soon before anymore real damage can be done
Date: 24 May 2010 2:05 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
so sweet of Edward to arrange for Bella'sother and brother to visit her. Wonder where the wretched Tanya went, could she have gone off to France?? Will Bella be safe in court, I cant belive she is just yet. Great chapter cannot wait for the next one.
Date: 24 May 2010 2:01 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises
AWNNNNNN, what a cute chapter !
cant wait for more :)