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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 4:20 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

OMG!  Alice's baby is coming!  Cannot wait to see what they name him or her.  Also, so happy Bella is having twins :)  Ok, baby names!

Girls

  1. Margaret
  2. Katherine
  3. Jane
  4. Matilda
Boys
  1. Richard
  2. James
  3. Thomas
  4. Arthur
Hope these help :)

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:19 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

i'm hoping the babies will be a boy and a girl. so that it eliminates the problem of sibling rivalry, especially when it's something as important as the crown...i don't want the kids to grow up resenting each other, or grow up always competing and fighting each other.

as for names.. hmm...i can't think of any.. vannessa, lily, sophia, kimberly, kenneth, smith, matthew, david...umm..i can't think anymore... i know whatever you choose, though, it will be perfect.

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

I know I do not give you any reviews, but I love you story.  But with names wise.  My first name is Anne-Marie I am named after my Grandmother Anna-Maria, My sons name is Joseph Nicholas.  I have kind of old school names, please feel free to us any form of the name (Anne, Anna, Marie, Maria, Joseph, Nicholas).  This is my opionion

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:58 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

:)

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:53 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great chapter, so excited that Alices baby is on they way. Dont really have a name choice for you, that way to hard. lol

Reviewer: ChickenKSoup Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

I like the name Chasity.. but I wonder if the name Duke would be acceptable.. would their child ever be named Duke Duke of _____.

 

Okay, that's just some strange idea that popped up.. don't mind me :)

Reviewer: jcook169 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

The only names I could come up with that I thought were pretty and somewhat of a historical era were Anastasia, Annabelle, Estella, Anna, Olive.

Boys - Andrew, Maximillion (may be a little too pompous but I remember this name from watching a Cinderella play), Frederick (could be cute calling a little boy "Freddie"), Jonathan, Joseph, Oliver.

Good luck with the names and great chapter as usual!

 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:13 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Ok so i looked back though my family tree and here are some options

Elizabeth and the variation Eliza, Mary, Jane, Ellen, Katherine, Anne, Emma for girls.

Richard, John, Stephen, William, Thomas  for boys

These were popular names in my family from the 1600's through to the 1800's Hope this helps

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

I'm hoping for a boy and a girl. So my suggestions would be Edward the second and maybe Elizabeth for a girl. I can't think of names that would be somewhat era appropriate other than these two. Great chapter. Thanks for the double update.

Reviewer: luvnrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:00 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Very good! Cant wait for the next chapter! Sorry I didnt put any names, I like different names so I wouldnt be of any help!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 1:11 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Sofia and Henry are great names with history and strength.

Love this story!!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:32 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Thank you for the quick update! I have to put out their my twin girls names- Camila & Sabrina.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:04 AM Title: Embracing the Crown

Here are names that I think are timeless.

 

Jocelyn

Mattilyn

Adriana

Grace

Anabelle

Jaquelin

Matthew

Johnathan

Brian

Napolean...hahahaha

um....thats all I got at this moment.....the boy names aren't so great!

 

I am glad you didn't made a big spectacle out of the coronation...it moves the story along well!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:58 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Nathaniel & Elizabeth

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:39 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Leave it to Alice.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:07 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Glad the immediate danger passed, all seems well, the babies are close to coming, Alice is off to have her's. Sad that this is wrapping up, loved every minute.

Andrew, Avery, Bailey, Carter, Caine, Edward, George, Katherine, Hope, Felicity

Reviewer: Zee the Twilighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:12 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

 First off, love the chapter, great job!!! Second, names... clarisse, esmerelda, rosalinda,vivienne, george,matthew,andre,alfonso,franz ferdinand??? Sorry I could'nt be of much help...

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

So glad that Alice is going to give birth and I hope everything is going to go well.  Now onto the name issue...I've looked up monarchs in this time period (heehee I know I did research for my review!  LOL!)  anyhoo, Edward, George, Phillip, and Charles were all quite popular for males while Elizabeth, Charlotte, Catherine and Mary were all popular for girls.  So, my ideas would be Phillip or Edward for a boy and Catherine or Antoinette for a girl. 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:43 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Margarite, Helen, Aaron, Abraham, Alexander, Benjamin, Elijah, Ezra, Charles, Frances, George, Joseph, Julius, Luke, Matthew, Marcellus, lucian, Robert, Hugh, Stephen, Richard, Raymond, Ulysses, Theodore, Simon, Wilfred, Leonore, Claire, Monica, Mary, Emma, Jacqueline, Anna, Ruth, Dorothy, Ethel, Linda, Judy, Clara, Clarice, Evangeline, Katherine.....Hope these help.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:33 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: MinaR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:28 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Well, they certainly finished that coronation with a bang! LMAO

Babies names, babies names, babies names... I think I have a few...

 

Boy's Names Girl's Names Adrian Adriana     Angelo Aemilia     Angus Alice     Antonio Beatrice     Ariel Bianca     Arthur Celia     Curan Cordelia     Demetrius Helena     Duncan Hermione     Edmund Imogen     Francisco Isabella     Hamlet Julia     Horatio Juliet     Julius Katharine     Lennox Lucetta     Leonardo Mariana     Malcolm Miranda     Orlando Olivia     Robin Ophelia     Romeo Patience     Ross Regan     Sebastian Rosalind     Timon Tamora     Toby Ursula     Valentine Viola

I also found a website with british babies name: http://babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/category-british-names.html

Hope this helps.

xoxo

Mina

 

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:21 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Wow, it's go time - Alice is having the baby!  Oh, I'm bad with baby names - so no suggestions here, LOL.  Hello, Bella and Edward are the new Queen and King, woohoo!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:07 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

great chapter! It's great to see things moving along so well. Edward and Bella are expecting twins, and Alice is having her baby how exciting. :0)  As for names... I looked up names from the 1500's and these are some names I found:  Alison, Alexander, Amie, Anthony, Katherine, Clare, Daniel, Eden, Elizabeth, Gavin, Grace, Jeffrey, Jevan, Jonathan, Jelian, Lea (haha that one make me chuckle if she's a princess), Levin, Lora, Meredith, Rachel, Stephen,

I don't know if that will help at all. You don't have to use any of them.  Picking names is tough. I just went down a list and those are what kind of stood out. Good luck! Can't wait to see what you come up with. :0)

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:03 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great job with this chapter. I love that Emmett was named Duke. And that he and Rosalie got engaged. Also, the fact that Bella was gracious enough to give Kate the freedom to be with the man she loves at night. And that they're both being moved to the castle.

As for baby names, I'm not sure how relevant they are to the time but I've always been partial to Brighton, Kenton, and Ashlyn.  Just a thought :)

~Rachel

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:57 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great Chapter! Thank you. I love that they're having twins. It will be difficult to deliver them, though, and I don't envy Bella the potential breech birth of one of the twins.

Girl Names: Lily, Hope, Linda, Colleen, Aileen, please no Renesmee.

Boy Names: Matthew, Mark, Luke, (not John) Stephen, please not Jacob (which means 'second son'), Scott, Hilliard (old English, for 'brave warrior' - it's also my son's, husband's, and FIL's name, but we call them all Hilly), 

Reviewer: kiki gum Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

girl names: Anabelle,Rosalind,Lillian

boy names: William,Richard,Anthony or you could just go with Edward II...

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:42 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Well you could just go with Edward II or something like that I am not sure what version of Edward yours is in the story, I am sure she would not name him after her father but maybe her brother?    I have no idea on girl names.  I am drawing a blank there.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:23 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

LOL here comes the baby! I thought that was funny. poor alice. I can't wait for more. whatever names you choose I'll be happy with but I really can't think of any at the moment. thanks again bye

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:19 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Thanks for the wonderful chapter. For names:

female: Mary or Maria (because Bella's middle name is Marie, a reminder of her spanish origin would be Maria),  Anna or Anne (just because I love the name)

male: Thomas (because Tommy would be a reminder of Tony/Anthony), Oliver (like Oliver Cromwell), Arthur (reminder of the Great King), Robin (hey who doesn't like Robin Hood)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great chapter!
Boy names: Robert, Jonathan, Adam, Trevor, Ashton, Bryson, Jordan, Ethan.
Girl names: Alison, Rachel, Karenna, Amelia, Melissa, Daphne, Hannah, Julia.
Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:13 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

loved it andi can't think of any excpet grace, lucas, jonathan, lucy, sorry!

Reviewer: XXDEBBIECULLENXX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Theodore, Oliver, Louis

Lucile, Tabatha, Annalise

Reviewer: noshameaddictplt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:05 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

I have always loved Richard for a King's name...Richard Anthony, or Anthony Jacob....AnnaKathryn, AnnaRose, Catherine, Victoria...Caterina (if you want something a little differetn)

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:58 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Loved it!!!!

Hmmm baby names...
Boys: Anthony, Phillip, Matthew, Noah, Logan, Aiden

Girls: Abigail, Emma, Marie, Rebecca, Lily, Ella

Reviewer: susayq Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:56 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

YAY!! Alice is having her baby!  I'm thinking they need a William in the Cullen family.  How about Peter, he was a great Russian ruler.  I just read a trilogy by Susan Wiggs called the Tudor Rose trilogy and there was a Juliana in it...she was the Russian princess.  Juliana's granddaughter was Philippa, that would be a possiblity also.  I also like Sebastian for a boy, or Oliver...both would work in the time period and not be too far out there.

Thanks for the update :)
~Susan

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:40 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Great job!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:31 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Girls - Emeline, Ellyn, Amelia, Ayleth, Reina, Catalina

Boys - Rowan, Bryce, Tristan

Ooooh!  I love picking baby names!  The first 4 girls names are English, the last two are Spanish (Reina means queen... something to think about!)

The first two boys names are English and the last is Spanish.

Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next update!  Will you be usung our name suggestions for Alice's baby too?

Reviewer: FutureMrsBCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:27 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

OK so Girls go

Bethany and Claire, Benjamin and Mathew, Rebbecka and Sofia, Lorcan and Anthony, Aisling and Marie, Adam and Liam, Jeniffer and Emily , Robbert Jonathen , Lilabeth and Lily . Katherine and Elaina ,Stephain and Ian

Im sorry for all the names but mii mates having a baby and we were reading the baby names book today lol

Reviewer: ksm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

I'm going to throw in my own kids' names. 

Meghan Elizabeth: which I admit is not very regal sounding nor do I think it's era appropriate.  However, it is Irish for "Little Margaret" and Margaret I think sounds era appropriate.  Her second name is obviously one you don't want to use.

Brian Patrick: he was named after the first king of Ireland.  So, I think that qualifies as era and regal appropriate.  His second name came from my father-in-law's middle name.

Emily Katherine: she was named to represent our smaller German heritage.  Her middle name is mine!  I my mother named me Katherine after reading a book about Henry VIII.  She liked the spelling of Catherine but liked the "K" in Kathryn.  So she combined the two and chose it.

Well, there you have it.  Enough of my ego now!

Kat

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:17 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

here comes the baby loved it update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: RoseMariecullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:16 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

You should really make it tripelets...One Boy and Two girls...

Phillipe, Elizabeth, and Marie

 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

Alice's baby is coming!  Isabella isn't too far off the name of a monarch so it's a good name for a girl.  Just name them as you see fit. :-)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:57 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince

I am so excitted about this story.  I am absolutly loving it so far.  I love that Jacob is so fond of his sister and he asked Edward to have respect for her.  I have already figured out that Anthony indeed is Edward as he too had to hide who he was.  They are going to be so happy once they realize who each other are.  I am really excited to see how this story unfolds as it relates to kings and queens and Prince and Princess.  I know in that time they really did have no respect for women at all and I am curious as to what you come up with.

Reviewer: pilgrims lips Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 4:19 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

yikes great chapter

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:35 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Hmm, this is a very intriguing story, can't wait for what is going to happen next!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Great job!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:11 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

génial!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings

merci, merci pour la chronologie.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:41 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

thanks for the update...im curious to see what happens next..

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:33 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:59 AM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

génial

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:45 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

great chapter, i cant believe we are nearing the end of another one of your fantastic stories, loved this chapter at least the plotter is found and now they get to enjoy xmas, thanks tracy

Reviewer: luvnrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 5:05 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Loved it! I cant wait until sexy Edward becomes King, because James knows something they dont...hhhmmmm????

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:26 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

well.....I am glad all that got handled swiftly!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:56 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Poor Tanya. lol you reap what you sow that old cow. :) I love the punishment both her and James got. they deserved it especially James after attacking Bella right in front of everyone. the dork. i can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: susayq Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:45 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Holy cow!  I was not expecting James LOL  I don't know why he didn't come to mind when I was trying to figure it out, but he didn't.  Will Carlisle grant the land to Emmett permanently?  Then, he and Rose could marry and be together. 

I hope you enjoy your time with hubby around...even if you get no writing done :)

~Susan

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:01 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Tanya a servant. That is a pretty funny thought. I would not want her working for me. I hope Emmett get the land.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:39 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I loved it!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:18 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Just Tanya's family - no other conspirators? 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:23 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Love this story. I'm always so happy to see these updates. :0)

Reviewer: BelleDuJour Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:04 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I hope Emmett gets the Gloucester estate.  He's been so protective and patient; he's earned it!

I can't help but feel a little sad for Tanya.  (Just a little.)  Falling from an easy life to such a hard existence is going to be very difficult for her.

Loved the bit a the beginning where Bella and Edward spent their sleepless night wrapped up in each other.  Such a sweet picture of their devotion.

I followed MOTU, too, and was sad to see it wrap up.  SF still has a long, long way to go, right?  (Please?) :)



Author's Response:

I was wondering if there is going to be a sequel or something or if she's just going to leave us hanging with James out there trying to sabotage them all the time.  I was sad there wasn't more and I wasn't following for eight months like the rest of you guys.

In the way of sad news, there isn't too much of SF left.  There's going to be a lot of fast forwards in the timeline.  The chapter I wrote last night tied up some ends, flashed forward two months and then ended with a cliffie.  I'm not sure how many more chapters we have left, but I'm guessing not more than five or so...

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:51 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Wow, great chapter.  I think Emmett should get the Denali land.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:34 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

That was amazing!  I am so glad James is getting punished and so is Tanya!  Cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

They all got what they deserved.

Reviewer: christylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

The only thing more perfect would have been for Alice's water to have broke at the end! (but maybe that would have been too much, eh?)

Lovely chapter. So who gets the estate?? I vote Emmett!

 

Reviewer: Jasmine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:30 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I totally love this story. I'm sorry I don't review more often I'm usualy reading it on the bus with my blackberry on my way to work. And typing anything more than a text on that thing is a headache..lol But I was so happy with this chapter and catching it at home. I'm not sure if you'll give hints, but please tell me Lord Emmett wiil be the new master of Tanya's family land..OMG THAT WOULD BE AWESOME FOR ROSALIE..HAHAHA! Aagin love the story..

 

Jasmine

Reviewer: cshorte Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:55 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Thank you for this update. I really like this story. I can't wait until Edward is king.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:49 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Wow!  I love this chapter.  I wish Emmett would have the land of Tanya's family.

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:23 AM Title: A Day For Miracles

Interesting. Though I would have loved Bella improving a Bad Edward. Lost souls coming together in a happy reunion is just as good!

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

I am glad I have quite a bit more of this to read!

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:07 AM Title: Princely Reformation

yep, E's tony alright!

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:02 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Oh  my...looks like Tony  is Edward? Maybe I'm just not reading slow enough...

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince

great!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Awe much drama but some ease now.  Royals have always needed much protection and this is obviously why.

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:26 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Thanks, another awesome. Will E come already!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:20 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

so there are probably others still lurking around that can pose danger to the Royals....right? i hope james does not escape....

Reviewer: emeralddahlia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:58 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Nice to read a story, found u on ff,, but i'd rather read the complete version, so I dropped by.

Interesting start!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:47 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

finally solved, can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:27 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Hmmm, Tanya plowing a field....nice picture. I love it. Nothing was decided about Lady Kate (or did I miss that?). Will she go back to the "family" and work in the fields or something else? If Bella has a say I'm sure it will be a less harsh punishment. Love how Jacob, Emmett and Edward all formed a protective arc around Bella.

Too bad about James (NOT!!!!!) Methinks even the worms would have nothing to do with him!!!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:00 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

So has the threat really passed? Bella is safe, Edward is safe for the time being? Now we just need to have them crowned King and Queen, and time for babies..... Great chapter! Cant wait til the next update!

Reviewer: Cami2186 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:57 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Finally the whole plot is out. I wonder who will take over the Denali's land.
Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:53 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Great chapter

What is going to happen to Kate?

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:25 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Didn't see that coming. Should have known James would be the bad guy too. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:24 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

James is a bastard. Like I actually needed to even say that...
I am proud of Isabella for standing by Edward & being strong.  She is not a damsel in distress & I LOVE that about her.  I am hoping that Kate is not to be held with teh same punishment as the rest of them  She did what she did out of fear & love.  She should be held accountable but not the same as the others.  She did not act with a malicious heart.
Another EXCELLENT chapter.!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:10 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

ooooohhhh   give it to Emmett and Rose.

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:05 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

i'm glad they finally found out who the mastermind behind everything is...

seems like in the next few chapters, edward will be crowned king. can't wait for that to happen

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:02 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Well, there had to be a way for James to figure into this...glad to see his person did not disappoint.  I think Carlisle did a fine job in his assessment as well as his punishment.  I would have had James beheaded immediately and have it be public, especially for Tanya's family so they know the crown means what it says.

Great chapter and thank you for answering some questions.  Sorry to hear that it may be ending soon but I'm sure you'll wrap it up in the wonderful way you write.  Maybe the epilogue can be when Edward has ruled for 60+ years and is on his deathbed with Bella next to him and they can both go together like the notebook.  I've heard that it is a common phenomenon that true lovers sometimes follow each other quickly in death and die from a broken heart.

Good job and good luck this week.  I think it may be easier to deal with 2 small children than the 1 big one...just sayin'!

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I'm gleeful at the image of Tanya and her family working the land and soiling their hands. I hope that they develop callouses and blisters the first day at work. The horror!

Do the Denalis have any claim to royal blood, or any position in relationship to the throne, other than nobility? If they can claim that the throne would be theirs through a certain branch of their family, perhaps it would be better for Carlisle to end their lives. 

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:51 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Well...I do hope that all the grief is over for now, but I just can't help but to think something else is going to happen.  i have no idea what you've got planned but I'm sure it's going to be a ride!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:47 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Greay job on this one :) I'm really glad that they're making Tanya go work in the fields like the servents she used to command. And the fact that James has been sentenced to death....thank God :)

~Rachel

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:11 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings

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I found this on FF and saw that the full version was here. I really enjoyed the first 24 chapters. It is very well written. I wonder if Bella is caring twins. Looking forward to more to come

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:30 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings

Very interguing mystery who is involved?  I can't wait to find more clues.

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:45 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings

Ack!!!  Who is this terrible person in their midst?  How can the really enjoy the holidays until the truth comes out?

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:36 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

Awwww, what a sweet gift - her mom and bro!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:27 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Oh, Rosalie - be a font of knowledge! 

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:20 PM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Yeah, it figures Tanya and Kate would leave chaos in their wake - ugh.  Let's nip that action in the bud peeps!

Reviewer: tcrew Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:11 PM Title: Banished

Ding, dong - Tanya's gone!  Oh and Kate as well, yay!  Though I have a feeling that's not the last we will hear from that family? 

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings

Who could be behind this, I just dont know.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:17 AM Title: Bon Voyage

yeah don't get off the boat... LOL

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