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Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:13 PM Title: Bon Voyage

Another touching chapter, I loved the good bye that Jacob and Bella shared, as well as Edward giving her the time. I also loved the chrietening of their on board bed. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to England, or as Alice goes through her pregnancy.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:11 PM Title: Altering Plans

Sad that their homeymoon ended so soon, But I loved how Edward was able to see what kind of person Bella has become, and what sort of queen she could be.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:09 PM Title: Bliss

Juicy, sweet, tneder and well written, everything I was hoping for. I can't wait to see what happens next for these two

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:06 PM Title: A Day For Miracles

beyond words, I love how everything came together, and now I am really looking forward to the wedding night.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 12:03 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

love the sex ed. I can't wait to see what happens when Edward and Bella finally come face to face.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:54 AM Title: Princely Reformation

A sweet and touching chapter, there is a lot of hope for Edward after all. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:03 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Ok so angela and probably Alice have worked out Tony and Bella's past. But I really wish thet would share the news. It might save some of the angst. I can't wait to see what happens next, I ma sure it's gonna be great.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:43 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince

Glad Edward managed to stop that one in it's tracks. But I can't wait to see how long before he suspects that his bride and love are the same.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:57 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Awesome Chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, I am sure it's going to be great, and I am glad I can read it all with out waiting.

Reviewer: Schemering Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2010 6:25 AM Title: Epilogue

I love this story. You did an incredible job.

Reviewer: melissa109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 5:49 AM Title: Epilogue

What a beautiful ending. I loved it. This is by far one of my favorite stories. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:19 AM Title: Epilogue

Def. good tears. :)
An absolute a jewel of a story! I enjoyed it very much, thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it (And the other readers, of course. ;p)
Well done.

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:04 AM Title: A Critical Choice

Haha, love the choice for the baby's name ;D

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:00 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

So.. Edward is Tony, and.. Isabella is the girl Edward fell in love with? And the song that she was humming, caught Alice's attention because she's heard Edward play it? :D
I sure hope so! I've read other stories with a similar plot, yet, your's is quite well written. Nice job :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:14 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story, really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:41 PM Title: Epilogue

I have to say, this has been the best story.  I absolutely loved it.  The epilogue has me in such sobbing tears, it's hard to type this review.  The love and devotion of these characters you brought forth in tenfolds.  I felt like I was at court throughout the story.  Thank you for such a wonderful escape!

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Princely Reformation

Whew, I'm so happy he's second guessing his prior ways.

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

I'm glad Angela didn't tell her what he said.

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

i don't mind the slips and haven't really noticed at all.  I have noticed that Tony may be and I think he is, Prince Edward.  What a surprise these two will have.

Reviewer: loventwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:46 PM Title: Epilogue

love the story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:57 AM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

Love how Edward and Bella stand together in everything. Carlisle handled that wonderfully.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:14 AM Title: Clandestine Meetings

Tanya has crossed the wrong women!!! I am glad that Edward is not to upset with Bella and Jacob.

Reviewer: katmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue

that was beautiful. thank u.

Reviewer: BlaireTiernan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:33 PM Title: Epilogue

I love this story, I am sad that it has ended but you did a great job!

Reviewer: bocasgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:50 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

so good..

Reviewer: hyperheather77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:27 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

i cried in the end! it was a combination of happy and sad, i felt bad that she had to live without him for 20 some years after he died! i wish i knew what happened to the other characters.

Reviewer: catacatalia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Oh fudgepot!

You are absolutely brilliant :D I can't wait to keep on reading!!!!!

Is Tony Edward?

Gah, I guess I'll have to wait until they get married seeing as Bella won't be seeing him until then :)

You rock!

Reviewer: Chocolate Mocha Brownies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:55 PM Title: Epilogue

Aww... the ending is so sweet... I just kinda want to squeal and giggle until everything becomes perfect again. I loved your story; so I'm going to go read it AGAIN!!!!

Reviewer: Suggie01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Just finished this -- loved it!

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:11 AM Title: Epilogue

great epilogue.

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:44 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

love it

Reviewer: saene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:38 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

great start.

Reviewer: Nensiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Truly, an amazing story!! I loved it with all of my heart! You did a very good job on this one, i especially liked it that you put this chapter in it, where everyone is older, and where the end is, instead of 'and they lived happily ever after'   Perfect :D



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm so glad you liked it.  I still sort of gave them their happily forever after at the same time, but I like to try to do something a bit more realistic if I can. :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:29 PM Title: Epilogue

What an amazing story! I adore period works, especially one done so brilliantly. Thank you so much for the beautiful writing. This last chapter had me in tears! Again, I am SO looking forward to reading another of your fabulous stories. :)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:16 PM Title: Epilogue

wow that was so sad. Great story

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Balancing Duties

great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:48 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

great job. I am enjoying this story so much

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:36 PM Title: A Critical Choice

woo hoo

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:29 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

lol yay

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:18 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

awesome

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 2:08 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved this Story!!!!

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:54 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings

great job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:42 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

awe

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:31 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

woman power

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:19 PM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

smart Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:30 AM Title: Banished

woo hoo ho-bag is gone

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: Aftermath

uh oh

 

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:03 AM Title: The Brewing Storm

yay he is back

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra

go Alice

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful

poor Bella

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Confidante

awe how sad

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: The Demands of Duty

no no no he cant leave yet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:19 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen

awe she finally made it

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:34 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved this story.  Some historical inaccuarcies, but nothing that really detracted from the story itself.  Your Bella and Edward are the kind of rulers the world should have.  Your epilogue made me cry.

Thank you for a great story.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:13 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment

your lemons are hot

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: A Foreign Shore

good job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Bon Voyage

great chapter

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Altering Plans

how sweet

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:14 AM Title: Bliss

awesome

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: A Day For Miracles

yay *claps feverishly*

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:53 AM Title: Epilogue

OMG! That was one of THE BEST stories I've read. It has been a pleasure going thru this journey with the characters, I must say the epilogue made cry like a 17 year old watching The Notebook for the first time. Congratualtions on such a beautiful story.

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:50 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

awe

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:41 AM Title: Princely Reformation

good decision Edward

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:30 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

how sad

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:18 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince

great job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

that was great

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

awesome

Reviewer: goyabean1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 10:57 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

OMG!!! He's Tony!!!!!  Im loving this story!!!!

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:26 AM Title: Epilogue

I'm sorry I quit reviewing every chapter I loved the story so much

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Bon Voyage

wish I was Bella just for this chapter

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 1:30 PM Title: Altering Plans

The king should send the queen just to make himself look like a caring person

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 1:02 PM Title: Bliss

Great first royal union

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 11:47 AM Title: A Day For Miracles

okay I am worried about one aspect of the arrangements, please tell me that I am in error about the Angela arangements to fall through by the King

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 11:22 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

cool

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 11:10 AM Title: Princely Reformation

Yay

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 10:57 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

she's so sad, I think that's gonna change soon.

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 10:33 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince

Good chapter, it's good to get Edward's side.

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 10:17 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

I'm really enjoying this, let me guess, Edward is Tony?

Reviewer: Amortentia4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 9:53 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Good start. I'm hooked already.

Reviewer: Bedivere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:26 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh, I knew it was going to be something like this, and I was prepared, but I want to cry a little anyway. Did Rosalie and Emmett have children? I hope so.

It was a surprise that Edward died of a heart attack, hehe, It never crossed my mind as something that could kill him, but 25 years before Bella? Wow.

Thanks for sharing your story with us. I loved it.

Reviewer: squeekieboo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:16 AM Title: Epilogue

I can't stop crying!! That was beautiful!!!!

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:45 PM Title: Epilogue

That was a great story

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:27 PM Title: Epilogue

Perfect ending, even though it brought tears to me eyes. Wonderful story!

Reviewer: lilylova123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful Story :) I love it, and the ending is perfect!! 

Reviewer: CullenCarina84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 11:54 AM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful

Reviewer: regina498 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:32 AM Title: Epilogue

That was wonderful!

Reviewer: twigirl2031898 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:26 AM Title: Epilogue

That was an amazing ending,but it was sad:(((

Reviewer: maelyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 9:58 PM Title: Epilogue

Excellent story, one of my favorites. I so enjoyed it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:29 PM Title: Epilogue

Love the epilogue. Thank you! I'm deleting from favs, only because it's finished. Nothing personal. :D

Reviewer: lislar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Bliss

That was excellent - exactly as I would have wished for her and for him.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:38 AM Title: Epilogue

most amazing happy yet sad ending ever!!!! im sitting here trying to type a review and wipe away tears at the same time....wow!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Balancing Duties

awwww...i really liked this chapter.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:47 AM Title: Epilogue

La fin est tellement touchante... merci, merci

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: Epilogue

This was a great story. I liked the ending.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:12 AM Title: Epilogue

I opened this up on my iPhone while at work to read on break. BIG mistake...I started crying and then couldn't stop reading it! Let 's just say that the people I work with must have thought that I had a really small bladder today with all the "bathroom" breaks that I had to take just so that I could read a couple of paragraphs at a time. I'm sad to see this story end but you could not have written a better ending than what you did. I LOVED THIS ENTIRE STORY!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing your talented words! ;)

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:31 PM Title: Epilogue

What a lovely, sad ending. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Reviewer: jeessssss Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:22 PM Title: Epilogue

I couldn't read that without tears in my eyes! How sad, but happy at the same time! what movie did you borrow that from? I am looking forward to reading any of your future stories. you are such a talented writer. this is an instant favorite for me! Thank you for writing this, its really quite inspiring.

Jeessssss

Reviewer: bellasara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:19 PM Title: Princely Reformation

OK, I am a HUGE fan of The Tutors, and just watched the series last episode, so far I am loving this story.  I love the issues you have persented, I have said many times that I could not live in such times, woman were used, and Queens were only as good as the MALE aires they provided.  Thank you for doing a great job and I cannot wait until Edward AKA Tony and Isabella AKA Bella see each other.  Should be great fun! 

Reviewer: Coffeeholic7 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:56 PM Title: Epilogue

Aww! That was a nice ending. aww! I loved it. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:28 PM Title: Epilogue

It was a wonderful ending, but I am sad it is over. I looked forward to it every week.

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