Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:19 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Tanya got what she deserved! Ugh, I just don't like her one bit. I can't wait for Emmett and Rosilie to meet, that's going to be epic. Ah, is the Prince coming home in the next chapter or are we going to have to wait a while longer? Just wondering... :P
Rhonda
have fun at the zoo this weekend!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Love Alice. Can't wait for Rose and Em to meet
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:03 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Edward needs to come home!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:08 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
What a great surprise it is. Hope Tanya gets what is coming to her soon.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:03 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Alice throwing that wine on Tanya- priceless, Edward needs to get back quickly- though, I do hope if Tanya persists in harrassing the Princess, That Bella has her thrown in the Tower, time and time again until it sinks in. Cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:59 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Love it!!!!! Hopefully Tanya is not stupid to do anything to Bella!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:35 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
another superb chapter, poor isabella missing her edward but good news he's on his weay home but what does she have to tell him? i like that your rosalie is a good person but her friend tanya obviously is not, trouble is brewing there, love the trust carlisle places in her judgement, thanks tracy
ps have fun at the zoo
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:17 PM Title: Confidante
It is great, that Bella gets the chance to sit by the council and that her view will be valued.
I really liked, that Bella tries to ignore the rumors about her relationship with Edward, because she knows the truth.
I really enjoyed the chapter.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:14 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Ewh, Tanya. She is going to be a royal pain in the ass!
Date: 21 Apr 2010 8:06 AM Title: Confidante
Carlisle is the man! Edward shouldn't have a problem with Bella being more involved with the government, right?
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:57 AM Title: The Demands of Duty
Woowee, those two are so passionate! The girls are going to miss their guys so much.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:14 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Gah. My heart broke for Bella this chapter. I can not imagine what she must feel knowing all these women hate her and her husband isn't there to comfort her and reassure her. I hope Rosalie turns out to be a good friend to Bella.
~Susan
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:47 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Aww! Poor Bella. I miss Edward too. When is he coming back? Hmm! If Rosalie wants to warn Bella about Tanya I wonder what Tanya is up to.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:18 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
you are a wonderfully talented writer! thank you for puuting in the effort to do research an truly write the story as a period piece and sticking to the time frame. i can not wait for more!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:48 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Hi
Sorry I didn't review every chapter, I was just desperate to keep reading! I'm really enjoing this and I cannot wait for your update. Reading this gives me something to do at work when I'm bored ;) so I hope you get back to two updates per week soon! xx
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:00 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Bella needs Edward to hurry back so she can feel confident again. He left her too early in her stay in her new life. She has had too many adjustments without him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:45 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
yet again another great chapter.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 7:33 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
I hope you update soon.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:08 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Oh, Bella! Edward would never! Hang in there!
Okay, I have to go there because I love to jump to conclusions. She's been feeling nauseated for a week? Could there be a little prince or princess on the way?
I think I am going to like Rosalie. I bet Emmett will, too. =D
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
You are setting this up good, I can't wait to see what happens next. I have some ideas though. Have fun at the zoo.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:35 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
dum,dum,dum......lady denali is bad bad girl!! lol. im glad rosalie softened alittle bit, i've been waiting to see when she gets introduced. oh boy, bella is feeling sick, maybe thats a good sign!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:28 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
ohhh no!!!!!! please write as soon as you can!!!! i love the story!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:37 AM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Have fun at the zoo!
Does Edward return in the next chapter? The wait for a new chapter will be easier to take if we get Edward back.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:41 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
oh when Edward returns Bella needs to lay claim on him.....but respectfully. :D She needs to show that bitch who's boss. God I love Tanya but when she's between Edward and Bella, she gets annoying. ;) please update again when you can. i can't wait till he gets home. thanks again bye
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
<3
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:52 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
I hope Rose and Bella do get along. Can't wait to see what Rose's reaction and Emmett's reaction are to each other. Also, can't wait wait for some good Bella/Edward loving.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:51 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
So happy Prince Edward is coming home! But more importantly.....I do believe I hear the distant pitter patter of little feet coming from the Prince and Princess's chambers. LOL! I can't wait!
Rhonda
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:40 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
To bad a very large cat isn't available to scratch out the witch's eyes.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Oh boy, Edward will be home in a few days and this witch will be what probably greets him and causes him trouble. Poor Bella, with so many of his past lovers around all the time, no wonder she doubts his loyalty. Although, I love the drama and angst, please keep him honest. I'm sure the skank will put him into a situation that will cause Bella to doubt him, which is fine, like I said bring on the drama and angst. Thanks for the update. Great chapter. Have fun at the zoo. I miss those early years where they still love the zoo. Mine are into the teenage kind of parties that scare the living daylights out of me. EEK!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:11 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Wow, that was awesome :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:41 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
loved it i think rose will be a good person for bella to befriend but tanya will try to break them up but they love each other too much
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:18 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
oooohhhhhh somebody is preeeegnant... NICE!!! Loved it!!
xoxo
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Demands of Duty
iam sad he has to go but glad jasper and em will be with him
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:53 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
loved it i just know his past will hurt thembut hope they will make it out ok
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:32 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
this is a great story i really love it
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:31 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Aah, the minefield that was life at court! You nailed it perfectly! When one change of inflection or title could signal acceptance or ruin. Beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:18 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
loved it
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:28 PM Title: Altering Plans
i loved it i knew they would be happy
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:11 PM Title: Bliss
i loved it so sweet and hot
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:01 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
His past is coming back to haunt them a bit, especially Bella... hopefully his return will help her!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:40 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Bella's pregnant. Love to see Tanya put in her place and often. :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:36 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
i am so happy for them that was great i loved it
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:30 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
I really hope Tanya does not prove to be too big of a character or problem. That story line is so played out. That being said, I really think Edward has far too much love and respect for Bella to be unfaithful to her. Also, I don't think he would tolerate anyone making her feel uncomfortable. I hope I am right. You could always have Tanya beheaded. They did that in those times didn't they? On a much brighter note, I really hope Bella is pregnant.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:17 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
She should not worry about Tanya...There is no doubt that Edward loves her. Is she preganant??
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:14 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Is she pregnant?
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
i loved it i think they will be so shocked to see each other again
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:58 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Ah, Tanya. She's just pure evil. Okay, so I know she was just introduced, but I'm hard pressed to find a story where I like her. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Princely Reformation
i loved it iam so glad that edward hates how charlie acts and treats women
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:48 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
i feel so sad for her but she will have everything soon i hope loved it
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:47 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Is she fearful that she is or isn't pregnant, now THAT is the question! If Edward strays, knowinng his true love is with him, well, she should kick that beast to the curb and shave the head of any of woman who looks his way. But the greatest revenge would be to not respond to him and just make sex about procreation and marital duty. That would be painful and difficult, but all she really had the power to do. But I think Tanya will attempt to make it look like Edward strayed, when he truly did not. Since it seems she does not have much faith in him remaining faithful when presented with temptation, it seems like that plan would work! Poor Isabella, at least she may have an ally in Rosalie.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
cant wait til edward and bella are reunited! looking forward to the next chapter :]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Thanks for the chapter. I can't wait for E & B reunion!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:37 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince
loved it i hope when he meets her that they will rember each other
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:35 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Isn't it a stretch to call Tanya a Lady??? I know its her title but we already know that she will be up to no good. So Bella has to contend with Tanya, get to know Rosalie and discover that she is pregnant all in a very short time frame. I love the way this story is unfolding and the research and historical elements make it even better. Thanks!
Have a great time on your mini vacation!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:31 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
poor bella, having to be faced with all of edwards past conquests shoved in her face daily has got to be alot to handle. I only wonder how much she will be able to take before she cracks.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:24 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
AWW, Poor Bella, i see Rose already knows that Tanya is gonna be trouble. Can't wait till Edward comes home,
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:16 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
i love it iam so glad alice caught on to the fact that bella is edwards dream girl
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:00 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
loved it i just know edward was tony this should be a great story
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:58 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
oh, no...Edward needs to return in a hurry, cannot wait for the meeting between Bella and Rosalie. Hopefully Bella will talk her fears over with Edward. Cant wait!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
Edward needs to get back home and reassure his bride. I hope he has some way of silencing Tanya, and all the other harpies.
Thank you for the update!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:40 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful
hmm hope rosie becomes a good friend. and someone puts the biatch in her place.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Lady Tanya, UGH something smells bad XC
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:17 AM Title: Confidante
What a change Bella must be excited to be inlcuded when Edward returns.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: The Demands of Duty
Good Chapter. I liked the that they are all 3 going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Looks like trouble is ahead for the happy couple.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Good Chapter
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:47 AM Title: Altering Plans
I am so glad they are leaving as soon as possible.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:33 AM Title: Bliss
I cant imagine having to have witnesses, yuck.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:10 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
Good chapter, the King sure was mad. LOL
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:58 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:50 AM Title: Princely Reformation
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Poor Bella, she seems so sad.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Princely Reformation
Poor Jessica, she doesn't seem as mean as Lauren, I hope she can have a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 1:03 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
I guess Alicefigured out that her brother is "Tony" and Bella is his first love.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:47 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
This story sounds very interesting, I too have always felt that the women then were treated like items to be traded.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 11:40 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
This chapter was beautifully written , I felt transported to that age.
If you ever need help with your spanish, just tell me :D
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:54 AM Title: Bliss
Wow. i read the version on Ff.net and this one kicks ass, but i realllly want you to continue the story more romantically. i get the whole princess royalty thing but
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:37 PM Title: Confidante
Sorry to hear about everything that's happened to you. I hope your ankle gets better soon. As for the writer's block, you did a wonderful job with this chapter. It's still as charming and exciting as ever. Try not to stress too much about getting updates out. I'm sure everyone understands that you need to recouperate. Take care of yourself in the mean time =)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 5:28 PM Title: Confidante
I think Bella will make an excellent Queen. I guess I am a product of my generation so I have such a hard time with the concept of how things used to be. I cannot imagine my words being empty & not having my opinion mean something. To be a Royal must have been so much more harsh. I am enjoying this story so much & look forward to the next chapter!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:55 PM Title: Confidante
aww! so how long is the gents staying? hmm! This is torture. hmm! I can't wait for what Edward says about Bella. lol.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:24 AM Title: Confidante
o....0 troublelurks ahead
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:17 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
hmmm i like he is concerned for her
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:13 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
sigh....a little afternoon delight
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:08 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
finallycatchingup on this
love it
AllyinPerth
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Confidante
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Confidante
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Confidante
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Confidante
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: Confidante
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:26 AM Title: Confidante
Sorry you're having such a crappy time at the moment, but in my opinion you were still able to put out a good chapter. I look forward to when the words come easier for you. :)
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:17 AM Title: Confidante
I hate that Edward and Bella are seperated...but when they get back together...watch out, hope there are some really hot lemons coming.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: Confidante
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:30 PM Title: Confidante
Oh how little Bella thinks of herself. She will definately be Edwards most trusted confidante and Regent if needed. Edward needs to tell Louis to shove it and get over himself because he's got a hot princess at home that needs attended to. LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:59 PM Title: Confidante
that is quite an honour for bella to be included in the meetings, they really don't do well seperated from eachother, as for the gossips they are so wrong, excellent chapter and hope your ankle heals soon, thanks tracy