[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I hope she is pregnant.
Date: 03 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Aftermath
I'm glad that Bella was brave enough to bring the issue out into the open. I'm also glad she's pregnant. I hope she and the baby are healthy!
Date: 03 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Aftermath
YAY a happy Edward and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 2:16 AM Title: Aftermath
love it..awesome job
Date: 03 May 2010 12:18 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
aww.. is Bella with child??? How will she react to Edward not being there in the morning.. I see some trouble ahead...
Date: 02 May 2010 11:31 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
Wow! So amazing.
I think his absence will only confirm her fears, won't it? His foolishness when he couldn't have Bella is coming back to haunt her. Poor B.
Anywho, love the story!
Date: 02 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
Wonderful update. I have a feeling that Bella's expecting a surprise of her own! Edward needs to learn however, that a promise is a promise...especially to a new bride!
Date: 02 May 2010 4:19 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
I'm betting that Bella is pregnant from the way she is 'ill'. I hope Tanya goes away lol and doesn't ruin their life but she probably will. Hope you update soon
Date: 02 May 2010 1:56 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
uh oh.. i have a feeling that Tony and Edward are the same person...
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 12:40 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Hope Edward gets the chance to explain to Bella why he didn't come to bed & that Tanya is sent away before she can cause any trouble before she leaves. Edward should have been more forthcoming but he didn't know the evil Tanya had done or how Bella is feeling. These two will have enough drama for now without Tanya interfering. I'm sure she isn't done with her mischief yet but I hope you don't let her cause it now. Seems like Bella is in the"family way" so they deserve some respite before the sh*t hits the fan.
Date: 01 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
Hmm....I think Bella might be pregnant ;) YAY! Cannot wait to see what else happens!
Date: 01 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
<3
Date: 01 May 2010 6:22 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
well I am not sure if I reviewd the latest chapter or not...but anyways here it is. I love how Kate is going right back to tell Tanya (whore slut bitch) that is going to be soooo good!
Bella and Edward HAVE TO communicate with each other! It is mandatory...........if she would just tell him what her thoughts are and vice versa, nothing would be able to be blown WAY out of proportion!
But I have a feeling you knew that already!
Date: 01 May 2010 4:24 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
And the bitch, I mean, the witch is gone! THANK GOD! I would have supported the beheading but Edward did the right thing...
Great chapter! XOXO Mina
Date: 01 May 2010 2:47 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
Poor Bella. She's going to think he spent the night with Tanya. Her heart will be broken.
~Susan
Date: 01 May 2010 12:58 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
I can sense it will not be as simple as Edward thinks. By his not going to her, she thinks he has visited with Tanya. I wonder if Tanya will make an appearance just to make Bella think something did happen last night? Oh boy, and is she pregnant? YAY!!! Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 01 May 2010 12:03 PM Title: The Brewing Storm
I think Bella is pregnant.... I 'd loved her to be!!! Twins if you dont mind!!!!
Edward is awesome!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 01 May 2010 11:45 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
very good chapter.
Date: 01 May 2010 11:01 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
oh poor bella she is not so secure in her belief that edward is hers and hers alone i hope she voices these fears so edward can assure her that tanya is out and has been a while, she going to assume tthe worst and think he's with her, alice is now bedridden i hope her and her baby are going to be ok, speaking of babies and this throwing up bella has been doing is bella pregnant? hope so tyhat would put paid to tanya fantasies, off to the blog now to get a teaser, and i need to start breakaway it looks cool, thanks everso tracy
Date: 01 May 2010 9:23 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
uh oh!!!! dun dun dun. eddie eddie. poor bella. i hope you make her feel better next chapter. i've cried in the past 3 chapters. don't think i can take another angsty one. lol. love the story.
Date: 01 May 2010 7:57 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Oh dear! No need to guess where Bella will think Edward spent the night!
Love this fic - Debs (UK)
Date: 01 May 2010 6:30 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Big mistake, she is going to think he was with Tanya and she is going to get upset as possibly threaten her pregnancy.
Date: 01 May 2010 6:29 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Poor Edward! He can't spend as much time as he wants with Bella. I think Bella is pregnant. :-)
Date: 01 May 2010 4:59 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Bella is going to think the worst. I hope Jasper and Emmett or maybe Alice will set her straight. As much as she loves Edward, she will doubt him. Bella is that way.
Date: 01 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
i hope that Bella is pregnant
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 4:25 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
uh oh. bad choice, Edward. Loved the chapter
Date: 01 May 2010 4:08 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I just hope that Bella doesn't take him not being with her as a bad sign...She seems very insecure.
Date: 01 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I wonder.....hmmmm.....I'm not gonna guess. 'Cause if I do, then I'm going to be wrong. Loved it!
Date: 01 May 2010 3:37 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
i think that she is pregnant
Date: 01 May 2010 3:16 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Is bella pregnant??
Date: 01 May 2010 3:02 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Uh Oh...how badly men misunderstand us women. I had a really crappy day in my boring accountant life...thanks for helping my night get much better. I have been watching for this update all week!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 2:55 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
génial!
Date: 01 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
i do think bella is gonna have some news to share soon!! i hope its good news. poor thing, she is having all these insecutities about him and tanya, and everything is standing in their way. loved the chapter!
Date: 01 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
hmmm... is there a reason why she is feeling this way? I look forward to finding out!
Date: 01 May 2010 2:18 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Uh-oh...poor Edward. He doesn't know just how bad thats going to seem to Bella does he? Shes gonna think he was with Tanya. She is also getting sick...hmm pregnancy perhaps?
Date: 01 May 2010 2:13 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I am glad he sent Tanya away. Is Bella pregnant? I hoped they would have more time to themselves before a baby came.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 2:06 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
well thank god they finally got rid of that harpy! but poor Bella, she so upset and thinks that Edward is with her right now :(
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 1:38 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
This isn't good Bella is going to think Edward was with Tanya. He needs to nip this in the bud quickly. I also wonder if Bella is with child. (This story is getting to me I'm starting to write the way they speak)>
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 1:18 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
OMG!!! Is she pregnant? How sweet!! I would love me some Edward like this!
Date: 01 May 2010 1:17 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
oh no... by edward not being there in her bed when she wakes up, she may question his loyalty and will probably think taht he spent the night with tanya, as she claimed he did everytime he came home from extended trips. i hate that she doesn't have faith in edward and his love for her but it is completely understandable. in those days, it wasn't completely frowned upon for the men to be unfaithful, as could be seen from her father's behavior towards her mom. and with a father like hers, it's no wonder that she would question edward because that's all she's ever known, that men aren't monogamous. also, with edward's track record, not to mention her inexperience with sex, i think her fear is completely valid. i hope edward won't be too mad when she questions him about his love for her. he has to understand where she's coming from.
i'm really excited for these two though because it's obvious that she's expecting!!! i just hope that they don't question her loyalty to him if they find out that she's pregnant now since he's been away for a while. i mean, i don't know how much they know about childbirth, but the nausea doesn't usually happen right at conception. it takes weeks before symptoms of pregnancy are shown. also, it sucks that she has to deal with so many of edward's petty ex-girlfriend issues when she is feeling sick already, on top of the war going on. poor bella...
Date: 01 May 2010 1:13 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Oh Bella is so preggers! And I have a feeling that the whole Tanya thing isn't over yet. Oh well, I'm off to read the teasers!
Rhonda
Date: 01 May 2010 1:10 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Oh MY GOD, She's got to be pregnant, and he's leaving her alone on Tanya's last night in the house!!! This is NOT good!
Tell Edward to go back!
*bites nails witing for next update*
Date: 01 May 2010 1:09 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
Bella's going to have a baby!!! lol I love it. I can't wait till she sees how foolish she's being with the whole Tanya and Edward thing. :) i love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 01 May 2010 1:06 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
hmmm him not slipping in however is going to cause a greater rift I'm afraid
Date: 01 May 2010 12:59 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I'm glad Tanya's being sent away. I hope either Bella asks or Edward explains what he was doing all day otherwise she will just worry about it. Could Bella's news that she wanted to share with Edward be that she's pregnant? Her being sick and the comment about the chamber pot getting more use than normal made me wonder. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 01 May 2010 12:53 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
I'm glad Bella is proving herself to be adept at statecraft and politics, and is an asset to the kingdom.
I understand why she feels insecure, and I hope that Edward's absence after the meeting and into the night does not cause a misunderstanding between Edward and Bella. Of course, I think it will, but hopefully it will be short lived.
I'm glad Tanya is being sent away.
Date: 01 May 2010 12:51 AM Title: The Brewing Storm
uhoh- Bella is not going to take Edward not coming in well at all. He's going to have alot of explaining to do - and hopefully Bella will talk to him about her fears so Edward can put them to rest
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Well that certainly was an interesting chapter, you would think that Tanya would at least try to be a little more cunning that she was. I would like to see how Edward would do in a confrontation with Tanya and have see Bella it without anyone knowing she was watching. I would also love to see Edward beg her forgiveness for ever getting involved with a whore like Tanya.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 1:52 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Well, well, I wonder what Lady Denali has in store? Whatever it is I certainly hope Bella stays safe and she earns her own beheading! OOooo, may be Edward could do it... he did behead a redhead in Eclipse! LOL
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:59 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
Gah, I think I haave a cavity after that, it was so sweet! I loved it though. King Charlie's reactions were hilarious!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 9:50 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
I'm making a guess here, just a stab in the dark. Is Edward "Tony"? too cute if that's the truth. I can't wait to see how he explains his philandering ways to her if he is...
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 2:08 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
loved it iam so happy put tanya in her place
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:37 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
tanya is such a vicious bitch. I'm glad alice put her in her place but next time please let bella do it. its just that, in other fanfictions, I don't see bella stand up to tanya. I hope Edwards past doesn't bother bella much because thats what tanya wants. great chapter, update soon.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:35 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Its great that Rosalie and Bella are friends here, apart from her vanity I've always kinda liked Rosalie (I mean, there has to be something about her that attracts Emmett..)
I am so desperate for the next chapter, I cant wait!!! I read your teaser, and - oh dear! Is Bella going to get her heart broken again?
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:30 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I love how Bella accepts Emmett, shes gonna be a great woman and an even greater queen away from her father...
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:26 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
This story is ingenious!!!! I love this angle, and your writing makes it even more amazing, I cant wait to see how this story progresses....
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:57 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
That was vicious of Tanya. I love Alice to death right now. Thanks for the update!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:05 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Thanks for the update. I love this story.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:20 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
well hot damn Alice!
I can't wait for Rose and Emmett to meet! That ought to be good!
Will you let Bella stand up for herself in the future? I loved Alice doing it, but noone ever writes Bella kicking Tanya's skank whore ass!
As you know....I can't stand the character of Tanya....off with her head!
Oh.....Edward is gonna be pissed!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:03 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Poor Bella...I would have beat the shit out of Tanya! And did cousins sleep together back in those days? Because are Edward and Tanya not cousins???
Author's Response:
Yepp...Loads of incest back then in an effort to keep the bloodlines pure...instead they spawned nutjobs! LOL! Originally Tanya wasn't suppiosed to be related. Did I goof that up? Rosalie is Carlisle's sister's daughter...not Tanya, but I may have goofed in myrush.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Confidante
I like Carlise as the King. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:22 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Well thank goodness for Alice and Rose, Bella needs some help it seems.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:07 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
I love Alice and her temper. LOL Bella is showing that she will be the best queen to ever reign. I would love to see her smack the shit out of Tanya, though. She could always say Alice did it. LOL Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:00 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Tanya deserved EVERYTHING she was just handed to her and more. lol I love it. I can't wait till Edward comes home. :) thanks again bye
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:15 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
I love Alice. She was full of spice in this chapter. I can't wait for Rosalie to meet Emmett. I am glad that Rosalie and Bella are friends in this story. The boys need to come home soon.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:11 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Tanya needs to be sent away, her behavior should have sent her away earlier.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:37 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Lovely chapter!!
xoxo
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:20 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
<3
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:15 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Nice to see Tanya getting hers, especially from Alice, what a hoot.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:45 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
i get he feeling we have not heard the last from lady(yeah lady my foot) tanya.
keep up the excellent work
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:40 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
i love your writing!
it is very comfortable to read and it's really good:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
So Tanya is not going to go away quietly. I can't wait for Edward to come home.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Well that was intersting, I think tayna deserved more than just wine in the face but that's just my opinion, can't wait for more
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
This was a great surprise to see waiting for me tonight! I do so miss Prince Edward and hope his safe return lingers on the horizon.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:01 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
uh oh, that nasty tanya always has to mess with bella and try to steal edward away, well who can blame her, mr sex on legs. lol
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
i love this chapter!! as alwways!! :)but i miss edward!! hopefully we will see him soon? any way, great chapter! more please:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:37 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
ok, Tanya's got some freaking issues....what a mental case.....the guards better keep an eye on her..
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:37 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
ok, Tanya's got some freaking issues....what a mental case.....the guards better keep an eye on her..
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:22 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Excellent!!! I hope Tanya does go to the dungeons & Edward sets her straight! OMG - didn't she hear about Edwards "Bella" italia is now his real love? Arghh...cannot stand women who refuse to face reality; no matter what the era! Have a great time & looking forward to the update!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
oh, how i adore alice, priceless, that the only word i have for what she did to tanya! love it. and rosalie, she is gonna be fun, and perfect for emmett, just like bella said. i am sure edward is gonna be furious when he gets back, should be interesting to see what he says and does to tanya!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:24 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
GO Alice! I am so glad she reacted that way. And I can't wait for Rose to meet Emmett :) thanks for the update :)
~Susan
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:40 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
I busted out laughing when Alice throw wine in Tanya's face. LOVED IT!!!!!! Great job with this. I can't wait to see what Edward's does when he finds out what Tanya has done. You should make Tanya watch Edward make love to Bella for her punishment. lol!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:38 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Tanya deserved more. Really funny though.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:28 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
God, I Love Alice...Seriously. Tanya....jeez, ya know what, I have nothing to even say about her other than she is absolutely pathetic. I have a feeling E will definitely be reaping what he has sown now wont he? I look forward to him coming home...
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:20 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
That was awesome! Tanya should go to the dungeon no matter what :) Really cannot wait for Edward to get home :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:25 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Hmm! I think Bella needs to get new ladies of waiting. The ones she has lack loyalty to her. hmm! Also, Tanya...what else is she up to? hmm!
When are the boys coming back? I want Rosalie and Emmett to meet already.
Baby Bella/Edward?
Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:53 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
HELL YES! Feisty Alice is my FAVORITE! Never liked Tanya. Probably never will. Can't wait for what comes next. Have a great weekend, filled with fun and adventure!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:45 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Oh those pregnancy hormones will do it every time! Even with all the "courtly" manners, Alice will always be a spitfire, especially if someone goes after anyone she loves.
Can't wait for the fireworks when Emmett and Rosalie meet! Please just bring the guys home safely from their diplomatic mission. Edward needs to find out soon that he is going to be a father! Yes, I do think she is pregnant because of all the "painful stomach" issues she is having.
Great chapter! Thanks for getting it out early!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:07 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
fab chapter, gotta love firey alice who despite her station in life can still throw her drink in a bitches face, cant wait for emmett and rosalie to meet that is going to be a super mix, i hopoe they get that tanya thrown back to her ruined estate and she better stay there, thanks for posting this early when you was so busy tracy
Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:04 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
How much longer will Edward be gone? It has been far too long. Oh please have Tanya beheaded, it would be so great. I hope Edward puts her in her place in a way she will definitely understand. Please don't let Bella get any wrong ideas or have there be any trouble for the couple. I really hope she is pregnant.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:47 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
I wonder at the ability of someone of a lower place being able to 'take away' the ladies. I'd be tempted to replace all the 'ladies' that went to do Tanya's bidding. While being at the court sounds romantic the politics would make me want to have a weapon handy at all times.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:29 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Thank God for Alice! She was able to do all the things Bella wished she could. What a wretched, ugly person Tanya is. To speak that way in front of his wife but his mother as well? How shameful. I hope those ladies with allegiance to TAnya are taught a lesson as well as to who is actually worthy of their loyalty.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:25 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
I swear, every family , no matter when no matter where has a Tanya! Wonderful work. You're doing a great job showing Isabella's strengths and weaknesses. You're also paving the way beautifully for any further court intrigues.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:20 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Ugh, Edward has to do something! I can't believe the >cynicism of Tanya, and Kate all innocent, yeah, right. I think Bella is pregnant ^-^
I hate the Rosalie from the books, but here she is my heroine. Maybe she could punch Tanya's perfect nose, jeje.
Thanks for the update, have a great weekend!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 7:05 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Poor Bella, stuck with the likes of Lady Tanya! Good for Alice!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:19 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra
Tanya got what she deserved! Ugh, I just don't like her one bit. I can't wait for Emmett and Rosilie to meet, that's going to be epic. Ah, is the Prince coming home in the next chapter or are we going to have to wait a while longer? Just wondering... :P
Rhonda
have fun at the zoo this weekend!