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Reviewer: RaindropSoup Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Ficology: The Human/Vampire Reproductive System

*squee* I FLOVE this pairing. I laughed at Jessica's commentary, but then quit laughing because of Mike! Wonderful, nice-guys-finish-last, and not-so-big Mike! You did a great job describing the position and their movements, while keeping them in character. I adored how you have him care and want to make it good for her, that he could listen. I do think Mike's really sweet in canon.

My fav lines:
"She was spread so wide before him that she felt an uncharacteristic sense of vulnerability."
"He ran his tongue along the slope and closed his lips around the soft skin. Without warning, he clamped his teeth on it firmly."

And then when he grinned! *sigh* Thank you for writing this pairing and sharing. Well done! Excited to see what pairing you use the next round. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. Your sweet words mean a lot to me. :)

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:18 AM Title: Pre-Assignment

*squeals* OMG! I love this. I wasn't sure what to expect, and when I realized what kind of smut you were writing, I was a little apprehensive (I know, I know—I wrote on the same topic, but my nervousness is exactly why I wrote it). But you did such an amazing job!

The whole piece was well written, well paced, and so very real and canon. The ice was a nice touch, her voice could be heard as I read, and the ending ... *grins* I love it. Wasn't expecting it at all, which rarely happens for me.

Great start to the class, hun. Can't wait to read more from you. *hugs*

Author's Response:

i LOVE your assignment. you're like, a pro. and then i see this review and i just can't believe it. i know our topics are the same but i've got nothing on you. your story was so right in every aspect, like i said, written by a pro. i'm just a newbie here, i'm just enjoying learning so much from all you fantastic writers. thank you so much for the kind words! xoxoxo

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