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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2019 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Please update and finish 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2019 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

Please update and finish 

Reviewer: vampyregurl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

i cant wait to read more

Reviewer: fonteyn77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 10:08 PM Title: Prologue

hi just wondering when this story will be updated, great story

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 8:06 PM Title: Prologue

happy to see you have posted a new story but I really wish you would finish this one I check periodically for updates and very disappointed when there is'nt



Author's Response:

im so sorry that u keep checking for updates. the fact is that I was getting a lot of hate messages because of it and am not in the write mind for writing it. Maybe when some time has passed I might be able to get into it again but at the moment I am concentrating on other products

Reviewer: theednamo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

Finish it!!!!!

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

like the story, i think renee had something to do with charlies death. somebody needs to punch tanya in the head then maybe she will get it that edward dosnt want her. haha

looking forward to updates

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

"TROUBLE"!!!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I apologize for my last review. I thought this was like another story I tried reading. It had quite a few chapters posted but everyone was deleted. Sorry I jumped the gun before I looked into the next chapter.

Will we get E's POV?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:11 PM Title: Author's note

UGH!!!!!!!

I wish your a/n was posted in the 1st chapterbut thank you.

Do you have any idea when it will premier again?

Reviewer: kanergirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:19 AM Title: Prologue

Please update this story it's so freaking GOOD!!!!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

ok he was going to tell her I love you.. then renee busting in. Now we have to deal with tanya. What is going on did tanya get a call from renee to keep edward and bella apart. I hope this does get updated soon. So many questions and un answered questions.. good job.

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward needs to take out the trash. He also needs to tell Bella he loves her without anymore interuptions.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

loving this story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am glad that Bella is out from under Renee. I  guess Emmett realized that Edward loves and would be good for Bella. Edward will have to be patient, but Bella needs him.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GET TO SOMETHING WE HAVEN'T READ ALREADY?

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

I was so excited to see an update. Thank you. I can't believe you killed off Charlie though, that is awful. Renee would of been fine to kill off though.

Waiting for your next update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Renee is awful

Reviewer: LuvinTwilight143 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

I still think Renee had something to do with Charlie being killed I just don't trust the bitch

So happy Bella is going to live with Emmett and Rose 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am upset for Emmett for ruining the happiness of his best friend and his sister. He is being very selfish. Bella doesn't have a hope in the world because her dad just died and her mom is a horrible woman. Does Emmett not want her to be loved. Their mother loves him and he has his soulmate. I guess he wants Bella to be miserable.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward, why fetch your girlfriend if you want to make up with Bella.  Renee is a real piece of work, wouldn't be surprised if she had something to do with Charlie's death. Loved this

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

No he did not....

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Emmett is such a jerk. It is ok for him to have the love of his life, but not Bella. She seems to get the short stick in this family everytime. I am mad at Edward for being a coward and not telling Emmett to trust him not to hurt Bella. Instead he hurt her so bad. Emmett should not want his sister to be in such pain. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Bella. Renee is a real piece of work

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

SHIT IS EMMETT GOING TO KILL EDWARD NOW? WHAT A WAY TO GO IF HE DOES. HELL HE LIKE BELLA AND BELLA LIKE HIM THERE'S ONLY 3 YEARS BETWEEN THEM THATS NOT BAD AT ALL. I'M WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

WELL CHAPTER 2 WAS ALMOSE THE SAME AS CHAPTER 1 SO I LOVED IT I HOPE YOU DON'T LEAVE US HANGING AND NOT FINISH YOUR STORY IT'S BEEN HAPPENING A LOT LATELY I'M HOPING NOT TO WASTE MY TIME, I HAVE CANCER AND EVERY MIN. COUNTS IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN I'M HOPING TO READ THIS TO THE END.



Author's Response:

Hi.

Thank u so much for the review. When I posted this story there was so many mistakes and I had to fix them and it was also so long since i updated it that i need to know where i was in it. i promise u that i will complete it.

 

fiona (Robsessed73)

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'VE READ THIS STORY BEFORE BUT I'M GOING TO READ IT AGAIN I LOVED IT BEFORE I'M SURE I WILL AGAIN.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

That was funny. I have a question. How old is Rosalie? If Emmett wants to ask her to marry him, she has to be older than Bella. If she is close in age to Bella, Emmett needs to shut up about Edward and Bella.



Author's Response: Hi. thanks for the review. To answer your question Rosalie is 19 years old while Bella and Alice are only 16 years old. fiona

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 3

Jeeze...tell me its not the rents...I don't want her in trouble.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

really like it keep going please! :} :D



Author's Response: hi. thank you so much for your review. fiona

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to read more please



Author's Response: hi. thank you so much for the review. i really enjoy reading them all and I take all ideas for the story to heart fiona (robsessed73)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward. He has for to get rid of Jane once and for all. Emmett was no help with that. I can't wait to see what happens now that he knows Bella is Emmett's sister. Great job...thanks!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Great job...thanks!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

love it cant wait to see wat happens next

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy yep...anoth wip of urs to beg for...love it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) love it

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:15 AM Title: Prologue

loved it!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 10:17 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds interesting. Can't wait to catch up! Thanks!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:51 PM Title: Prologue

love it cant wait for nxt chap xx

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