Date: 14 May 2015 8:06 PM Title: Prologue
happy to see you have posted a new story but I really wish you would finish this one I check periodically for updates and very disappointed when there is'nt
im so sorry that u keep checking for updates. the fact is that I was getting a lot of hate messages because of it and am not in the write mind for writing it. Maybe when some time has passed I might be able to get into it again but at the moment I am concentrating on other products
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I apologize for my last review. I thought this was like another story I tried reading. It had quite a few chapters posted but everyone was deleted. Sorry I jumped the gun before I looked into the next chapter.
Will we get E's POV?
Date: 16 Mar 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
ok he was going to tell her I love you.. then renee busting in. Now we have to deal with tanya. What is going on did tanya get a call from renee to keep edward and bella apart. I hope this does get updated soon. So many questions and un answered questions.. good job.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am upset for Emmett for ruining the happiness of his best friend and his sister. He is being very selfish. Bella doesn't have a hope in the world because her dad just died and her mom is a horrible woman. Does Emmett not want her to be loved. Their mother loves him and he has his soulmate. I guess he wants Bella to be miserable.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Emmett is such a jerk. It is ok for him to have the love of his life, but not Bella. She seems to get the short stick in this family everytime. I am mad at Edward for being a coward and not telling Emmett to trust him not to hurt Bella. Instead he hurt her so bad. Emmett should not want his sister to be in such pain.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
WELL CHAPTER 2 WAS ALMOSE THE SAME AS CHAPTER 1 SO I LOVED IT I HOPE YOU DON'T LEAVE US HANGING AND NOT FINISH YOUR STORY IT'S BEEN HAPPENING A LOT LATELY I'M HOPING NOT TO WASTE MY TIME, I HAVE CANCER AND EVERY MIN. COUNTS IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN I'M HOPING TO READ THIS TO THE END.
Thank u so much for the review. When I posted this story there was so many mistakes and I had to fix them and it was also so long since i updated it that i need to know where i was in it. i promise u that i will complete it.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was funny. I have a question. How old is Rosalie? If Emmett wants to ask her to marry him, she has to be older than Bella. If she is close in age to Bella, Emmett needs to shut up about Edward and Bella.
Author's Response: Hi. thanks for the review. To answer your question Rosalie is 19 years old while Bella and Alice are only 16 years old. fiona