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Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 - A Night to Remember

I wish I  had an Edward

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Dirty Dancing

great song and lots of sexual tension and now I have you over 10

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The making of a sex God and Goddess

not sure the internet can prepare you for the real thing

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - I wish you were here

hot but I have never had phone sex

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 - First Love

this one was dissapointing like sex without an orgasm

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Kismet

mixed feelings on this one

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A loss of innocence - Tale of an Eighteenth Century virgin

this one would have made a good full length story

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Tomorrow

the boy has never had the right idea if what Bella needed

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Teasing Edward

not sure who was teasing who

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:27 PM Title: Another Night of Torture

I am curious as to how you will progress

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A loss of innocence - Tale of an Eighteenth Century virgin

I was just wondering if you can make this one-shit into a story, maybe? Like what happened before this night and after. Just a suggestion maybe if your up for it.

Reviewer: GigiB Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Kismet

wow...should be developed into a full blown story!



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thank you for reading and reviewing. If I do, it will be one steamy story :) Maybe I'll use some in the next multichapter story I write.

Thanks again,

DC :)

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