[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:32 AM Title: Are You Amiable?
LOL, Edward is such a damn tease! he is soooo not gonna give her what she wants, lil shit :P ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Decisions
oh my, what will Bella do when she sees no Jasper? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Eyes Wide Shut
so Jasper is back on her home turf, so to speak. what is Edward gonna do to Bella though? will Edward be able to share Bella? I am thinking at some point she will have to decide since they are all having feeling? or will they all just live happily ever after? hey, it could happen! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:30 AM Title: What Now?
awwww poor Jasper, but Edward is smart & took control. But will it backfire in his face? good cop-bad cop, which will Bella chose? or does she have to? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: After
well it was awkwardness was only after the morning-after sex, but I am thinking it was worth it LOL so will Bella have more feelings for Jasper now that he stayed with her? ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:28 AM Title: The Fantasy Continues
big bad Cullen took over but Bella was still craving The Bone ;) I bet I would have passed out after that too LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:25 AM Title: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy
"she's a squirter" best line in this chapter LOL so Jasper in a sense was Bella's first real cock in her, will she be closer to him now? I love coughing or laughing during/right after sex, husby loves it too LOL ;) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:24 AM Title: Making the Grade
ouch, what Dr Cullen just said did kinda sound like he was going to give her a good grade for sex. though I imagine he was really saying that she was confident in her knowledge of the subject she would be writing about based upon what they just did. however, that was hot to read darlin! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:21 AM Title: Research Proposal
and here we go...let the fun begin! Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Surprise
well what did they expect? she had to get some control back over the situation. not to worry boys, fun is just beginning & TexasBella always satisfies LOL ;) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:49 AM Title: Wake Up Call
I have to say I was really hoping that this breaking point would be the place that Edward finally realized he needs help and would also be the thing that would bring him and Bella together finally. I know I was wrong still doesn't mean I don't want it to be so :)
Author's Response:
I'm sorry hun, but no... Edward will be meeting someone in the next couple of chapters... I'm tickled that you're still here and reading though! Thank you!
xoxo
tb
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:45 AM Title: Wake Up Call
I think they all have some issues that need to be worked on. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
That they do! LOL. Thanks for reading darlin'!
xoxo
tb
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:43 AM Title: Wake Up Call
This gets better each chapter. Glad to see a new chapter here.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks darlin'! You've no idea how this story is doing my head in... but I'm bound and determined to see it through and do my best to make it good. I can only hope everyone enjoys it when it's all said and done.
xoxo
texasbella
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:59 AM Title: Wake Up Call
"Oh, what a tangle web we weave we first practice to deceive." Jasper may be Bella's savior at this point and time, but he is just as guilty as Edward is in the corruption of Bella. He has a lot to answer for himself.
Author's Response:
Yes, yes he does... which is why, though I now see through to the end of this craziness, there are still a couple of twists and turns to be handled.
xoxo
tb
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: Biding Time
no she sure didn't have any idea that Jasper was her new neighbor & that he would bring Dr Cullen over to introduce himself but what a damn first meet they have LOL ok I am sitting on the edge of my seat & not reclining back anymore. darlin you have a way of doing that to me every time I read this story LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:43 AM Title: Naughty Birdie
yep I certainly remember that part! well she wondered what it would be like to get caught...sometimes we actually get our wishes LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:42 AM Title: Cherry Poppin'
poor Bella, thank goodness she broke up with him! college would have sucked if she was tied to him & couldn't even get any. I just love that he was so tiny though LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:42 AM Title: Firsts
probably all Mike's negligent acts leaving her body begging for attention? LOL just love Em in this story :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Rosalie's Story
so sad but Rose seems to have overcome her history & is enjoying life. I cannot remember what Bella reveals...will go find out :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:41 AM Title: Miss Innocent
forgot TWCS also has ratings, sorry started rating now :)
I think Bella getting her belly button pierced was perfect idea for her first. damn, she didn't even have pierced ears? too funny. can't wait for their evening out :) Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Confessions
holy hell...I seriously just started this chapter, was getting comfy when I put my legs up on the ottoman & crossed them, then stretched my hands behind my head at the same time freaking read Jasper doing the same thing! that is...well just weird darlin' I think I am enjoying your story just a lil too much LMAO! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:38 AM Title: The Bone
OMG, cannot believe I forgot about 'The Bone' oh how I have missed you LOL things are heating up aren't they :) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:38 AM Title: Group Project
this was always one of my favs. Bella sneakily got paired up with Jasper & chose exactly topic they wanted. Jasper uses his southern drawl to seduce her & she just drools at it. ya know, you guys should really market that southern drawl & make some money LOL! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:37 AM Title: Frustrations
so we learn a lil about our wallflower. not too much, just a lil taste. seems she is just as excited by Dr Cullen as he is by her. will she like Jasper as much? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:36 AM Title: Together Again
still thinking about 12yr old Edward being raped & I think I know why I didn't look at it that way, he never said no! yeah, he was intoxicated but he never refused. ok enough of that on to the next chapter ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:35 AM Title: Innocence Lost
ok so when Edward was in shower sobbing after he was basically raped, I look back & think that I did not perceive it that way when I read the chapter. is it is because he was a guy.? perhaps because I remember how distant Dr Cullen can be coming up so I am just pre-judging. who knows but I really didn't read it that way :( ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Restless Memories
so both Edward & Jasper had first experience as threesome, hmmm. and the plot thickens LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:33 AM Title: Match
awwww, poor Jasper. not sorry for Alice cos she asked for that. ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Set...
oooohhhh pictures, YUM!! see TWCS is way better than FF :P
Alice seems a lil hesitant but it is her first time allowing Jasper to lead, doing it HIS way. so will she be able to keep it up & keep Jasper up? LOL ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Wake Up Call
you know I'm rooting for Edward and Bella, I always do, but here he seems too fucked up and Jasper is the more loving choice. Why doesn't that sit well with me? Bella and Jasper? no. just sounds wrong.
Author's Response:
If you let go of their original incantantions as Stephenie's characters, it might be easier to let the idea sink in...hehe. They all still have some sorting out to do, but at this point I can say that yes, this is a Jasper/Bella fic.
xoxo
tb
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:31 AM Title: Game...
so Alice is trying to seduce Jasper into staying...but will it work? guess Alice better give it her all! ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Jasper's Plans
too funny that Jasper just looks at the photo & says later to Alice! Bella has no idea yet what she is in store for :) ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2
what a way to lose it, a threesome! well I guess that is just how you swing darlin' so will Jasper always be just the wingman? ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1
yes, what is he up to? LOL I know I am rereading this, but it is just as fun the 2nd time around! or is it the 3rd? 4th? I have lost count LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:28 AM Title: First Day
oh Dr Cullen, you have no idea! do you think college girls still suck on lollipops to get noticed by the boys? heaven help us if they are still using that LOL ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
Ok, I am bringing my reviews over here with your story!!
WE'RE BACK! YAY! so happy to see this story again, I knew I was missing something and since Boys & Their Toys is over, I am going through TexasBella withdrawl! aaaahhhh, I am getting my fix again. love ya darlin' ~Tracey xoxox
Author's Response:
You are too awesome Tracey! Thank you! I'm going to do my best to get moving on this one and Elf on Holiday. (I've also got yet another TrueEnglishRose's new story, Lights, Camera, Interaction has my heavy hand in it. I've not gone co-author with her on this one, simply beta... but we've synced up so well that I tend to go over board adding thoughts and ideas to her stuff now...lol. Anyhoo... she's here on TWCS, and if you're not reading LCI yet, you should... it's a crazy one... with LOTS of sex once it gets going.
xoxo
tb
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:51 AM Title: Wake Up Call
great chapter!!! I was wondering where you were. I hope that things are better now....since you've posted a chapter...maybe things are looking better.
as for Edward....I hate to see Bella end up with anyone BUT Edward, but he's really screwing things up here. And what's worse, when he received Jasper's text, he thought "with Bella or forever more" like he would simply move on from Bella to the next one...which speaks volumes for the lack of concern and caring on his part. Edward better fix this or Bella will walk off into the sunset with Jasper and he'll be left all alone.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Things are... going. I'm trying to write when I can. Glad you are still following along and enjoying, I'm pretty sure I've got the end of this story plotted out now, all I have to do is write it. Will post as I can.
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:45 PM Title: Wake Up Call
Ooops
Author's Response:
xoxo
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Decisions
I hope your son is doing well!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:54 PM Title: Wake Up Call
whoot new chapter:D i'm glad you will continue even with the ff.net drama
Author's Response:
Pfft.. of course I will! FF isn't the only hosting site out there... obviously... lol. Thanks for following me over here and I'm glad you're still excited about the story!
xoxo
tb
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:34 AM Title: Wake Up Call
I am just loving this story. I really don't know which one I would pick. I mean I love Jasper softness and damn I love when he calls her darlin but I love a powerful controling Edward. I really don't know who'd I pick. I loved the Doc by the way. It reminded me of a Doc I went to when I was 18. He was hot and around 30-35. I went for a spider bite on my arm the had my elbow frozen. I couldn't straighten out my arm. Well I showed him my arm and we where talking about it for like ten minutes and then he gets up and shuts the door and take off his shirt. My heart was beating so fast, he was so hot. He was tan and well built. Then he said look see I got bit here and I had to have it cut out. Then he took my hand and said feel it. So I felt up his peck and I said fuck. He smirked and I blushed. We sat there for another ten minutes just looking at each other then we started talking and then someone knocked on the door. He put his shirt on so fast it was funny. After that every girl at my office went to him. I got to see him a couple more times but my job changed insurance companies and he was not on our new plan. I missed him.
Off topic for a moment, Thank you for writing these last couple of chapters. I can't even think of how you can write when having to deal with a sick son. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your son. I will keep your son in my prayers.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the prayers and the story love. Um, just have to say... if you're not writing fanfic, you should totally take your doc story and build on it! Would love to hear more!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:47 AM Title: Wake Up Call
Edward, Edward....the shit has really hit the fan this time, I don't think this mess will be cleaned up in a hurry, or if at all.
Great story
Author's Response:
Oh, it'll get cleaned up... I always tidy up with a pretty bow before I type in 'the end'...hehe.
Thank you for reading and enjoying!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Wake Up Call
Hmmm...Edward is just considering Bella and Jasper to be two messes to fix not that there are any feelings involved on his part. What caused him to lose control like that and why would Bella have been a catalyst to it? Was it because she showed strength in what she wanted from him? That she tried to take charge? So now will he be pursuing her because she is a challenge?
Bella has already determined that Edward will never be anymore than a fuck buddy without feelings or emotions and she does seem to trust Jasper. What Edward did felt beyond the realm of rough sex so it was more than unsettling. How is Bella going to feel about this the next day?
Author's Response:
All very good questions lgk... and your question about Edward going after a challenge is closer than you may think! LOL. Glad you're still enjoying this after all this time. Thank you!
xoxo
texasbella
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 4:00 AM Title: Wake Up Call
Wow, so glad to see you here at TWCS and away from FF. Very mad at them at the moment... Loved this story from way back and happy to see that it will continue. Hope to see your next update here! Thank you
Author's Response:
Yep... no more updates at FF. I'm moving everything over here and to Archive of our Own (also texasbella there). Thank you for reading and enjoying!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Wake Up Call
yessssssss! started this over on FF and i'm stoked to have found it here.
i've been enjoying the realistic dark twisted desires found in this story. the pull toward being reckless, pushing boundaries, exploring fantasies.
i've been twisted up inside following our characters journies and trying to make sense of their feelings. Most of all, your story has made me turn inward and look at my own.
thank you for all
Author's Response:
Oh wow. Thank you for those very sincere words. I love hearing stories of how my writing has affected others, so thank you.
Glad you're enjoying it...I can see the end in sight now, but obviously there is still some work for these characters to do to find their HEA.
xoxo
texasbella
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:52 AM Title: Wake Up Call
Wow, emotional chapter, I LOVE it. I want to hit Edward in the head with a baseball bat so he realizes...he needs help. Love how Jasper swoops in and saves the day for poor Bella, and how gentle and caring he is with her. Who knows what might have happened if he hadn't. Think I'm going to like the J/B pairing. No way should she be with Edward.
xox
Author's Response:
YAY!! Thank you darlin'! I hope those that stick it out are as positive as you about this being a Bella/Jasper. No fear though, Edward will get his HEA... along with everyone else that has been introduced in the story. xoxo, rach
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:41 AM Title: Match
Love this. Only got better with the 100 Monkeys reference. Holy shit. I'm almost glad I hadn't read this yet when I met Jackson at a concert. Poor boy would have never made it out of there.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:29 AM Title: Wake Up Call
OH WOW...SO amazing, even if I want her to end up with Edward ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and enjoying darlin'... um, sorry but I think you can tell by this latest chapter that this won't be an E/B story... but don't worry, everyone will be paired up and happy by the end!
xoxo
texasbella
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:19 AM Title: Wake Up Call
oh my goodness! I'm so glad inspiration struck...I hope it does again and again...soon! :) as always Texasbella, two thumbs up!
Author's Response:
big hugs and thank yous Holly!!!
xoxo
rach
Author's Response:
big hugs and thank yous Holly!!!
xoxo
rach
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:01 AM Title: Wake Up Call
ooh! So glad Jasper was there to rescue Bella, and boy Edward has had a major wake up call. Let's hope he can clean up the mess. Great chapter darlin'! xxx
Author's Response:
Always there to cheer me on! Thank you so much Lisa!! Glad you liked it. I can see the end in sight now... in fact, I'm pretty sure I've mapped out the rest of it... now I just need to write it!
love ya!
rach
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Wake Up Call
so glad i found you again so much is being pulled from FFfound some other authors i had been following as well looking forward to the next chap
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping an eye out and I can't say how much I appreciate the support! Thanks for reading and enjoying!
texasbella
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping an eye out and I can't say how much I appreciate the support! Thanks for reading and enjoying!
texasbella
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Wake Up Call
This is one of the stories that I migrated here for! Excellent chapter, will be waiting for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping an eye out and I can't say how much I appreciate the support! Thanks for reading and enjoying! texasbella
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:50 PM Title: Wake Up Call
I was so excited to get 20 update alerts! Silly me - I forgot you were in the process of moving from the other place.
I was really hoping for an EPOV after that last one, but never mind, I've got that to look forward to.
Thanks for the update(s)!
Trip
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping an eye out and I can't say how much I appreciate the support! Thanks for reading and enjoying! You got a little bit of EPOV at the end, but I'll probably be opening with his in the next one... texasbella
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:29 PM Title: Wake Up Call
Interesting turn of events. We knew Jasper felt more than a casual thing for Bella, but Edward's jealously and possessiveness with her makes me think he's not out of the picture yet.
Author's Response:
Thank you for keeping an eye out and I can't say how much I appreciate the support! Thanks for reading and enjoying! texasbella
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:54 AM Title: Naughty Birdie
What's going to happen now? Hmmm...
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
So glad to find this story again love it
Author's Response:
So very sweet of you concretewidow... thank you! I'm kind of at a disadvantage b/c not all the readers have the same log in names here as they did on FF so I'm not sure if I'm talking to "new" readers or old ones. hehe
xoxo
texasbella