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Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:43 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:42 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:42 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.

Reviewer: LBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 1:37 AM Title: In Clear Sight

Hi, I'm just wondering if you plan on finishing this story? I read it a long time ago and dropped in to check on it. I'm curious to find out how Edward ends up. I have a thought, and although I doubt it, I'd like to see if I'm right. 

Reviewer: Lovingyou-4ever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:01 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I love this story.. Are you gonna finish it or there a finished version on another site ?

Reviewer: verlema Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 8:40 AM Title: Consequences

Suprise suprise I knew that Angela would be back enjoy your little revenge now Angela but remember if he goes down you'll go down with him I can't say I feel sorry for Edward because I don't he did this to himself Please update I 'm glad that your books are selling but remember you have people that love your stories here too

Reviewer: missmelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2014 5:14 AM Title: The Fantasy Continues

I am so glad I found you here! Thanks for the lead from FF (dot) net. Looking forward to reading the entire story—finally!

Reviewer: Countrygirl2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 3:18 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen

I like this story a lot

Reviewer: Kritty67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:57 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall

Just found this story again. Was with u before the hiatus. Glad you r back, love it!

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:52 PM Title: In Clear Sight

Loving your story!

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:36 AM Title: In Clear Sight

Great read.  Love all the twists. And turns.  Thank you 

Reviewer: janosch73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 6:55 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I'm soooo happy you have returned to this story. I have missed them

Reviewer: Lotheriel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 7:33 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I'm TRULY enjoying this story in all it's crazieness! I sincerlely hope that you are planning on finishing it. We are on home stretch now, no? :)

Reviewer: Lotheriel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:15 PM Title: Cherry Poppin'

This is an incredibly interesting story. Poor Bella feeling so sexually frustrated!

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2013 3:19 AM Title: In Clear Sight

Love it! Continue!

Reviewer: bb120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 6:39 AM Title: In Clear Sight

Oh my! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! 

Love where this is going and hope you can update soon!

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:06 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall

Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:02 PM Title: Mea Culpa

DAMN! Jasper just got slapped with the "Bone" me thinks! And Edward is about to get fucked without a hug with the same "Bone".  Poor Bella. She's a disaster.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 9:32 PM Title: Sticks and Stones

DAMN! Amazing chapter!  So glad I found it again!

Reviewer: LosT-in-Twific Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 7:59 AM Title: In Clear Sight

NO, NO, NO...

I should've paid more attention and notice it isn't complete.
*pouts*

God, I'm such a Jasper hoor. * wipes drool *

And why is Edward such a dick?

This is definitely my cup of tea, LOL!

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 12:24 AM Title: Sticks and Stones

Wow. I'm so glad Jasper came. What Edward did was not okay; he needs to deal with his shit. You can't have secrets like that and be in a healthy D/s relationship.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:54 PM Title: Doubling Up

That would've been really intense for Bella, and I think that for Edward and Bella to just leave her like that is really irresponsible. If you want to have that kind of play then you have a responsibility to take care of the sub (I know it hasn't really been said, but that's what Bella is in this relationship). I've liked this so far, but this lack of care is offensive.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:55 PM Title: Research Proposal

Hot. And I like that Bella's initial response was to run away.

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Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:09 PM Title: Biding Time

What I really like about this fic is the time jumps between perspectives. It's really interesting to see the story build through the chapters and find out what's been happening while you were seeing a different part of the story. I thought it was well done :)

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 2:00 PM Title: Rosalie's Story

I was annoyed with this chapter. I get that this is fanfic and short and everything, I just prefer to read more and get to know the characters better before knowing their backstory. And often, I don't really feel it's necessary--and it kinda felt this way with this. Mostly, I just find narrating stuff like this kinda lazy; it's way more interesting to have characters talk about stuff like this. I'm still going to keep on reading anyway.

Reviewer: almondgirl3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 8:35 AM Title: Miss Innocent

I think my favourite part has got to be a gay Emmett. I really like that. I also really liked that (and this is a while back chapter-wise) that Edward acknowledges that he was raped. I think it would've been all too easy to just glaze over that and not even talk about it. I thought it was a brave and interesting thing to do with a male character.

This has got to be one of the more interesting fics I've found on here. And I really appreciate the revising (not that I read the original version) but it's nice to have the typos and grammatical errors corrected etc.

Good job :)

Oh, and I like the change you've made to Edward's demeanor. There's obviously still attraction between him and Bella, but I like that he's not really likeable. It'll be interesting to read the dynamics between them and Jasper together.

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: In Clear Sight

I haven't started this story and before I do start I was wondering is this story on hold or complete . I really want to read it but I hate getting emotionally invested in stories that I won't ever be able to  see the end of . please message me back I have heard really good things about this story and I would really like to read it!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:55 AM Title: In Clear Sight

ROFL   didnt even occur to me that Mary was Alice....DUH Me.  

 

Char and Peter seems so cool.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:49 AM Title: Life Goes On

glad they are getting away to talk.   Hope he remembers to tell the Dean he and B are dating.

 

uh oh he ended up at Rattlesnakes?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:26 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall

uh oh   for forgetting the condom.

hmmm what is E going to do???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:23 AM Title: Consequences

Well if I was going down, I'd throw the skank under the bus too cause ya know E isnt the only teacher she's doing.

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:20 AM Title: Mea Culpa

hmmm thinking its Ang and the Dean there at the end? 

Wonder how B is going to react when J tells them everything

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Wake Up Call

J is so good to her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:14 AM Title: Sticks and Stones

Monster indeed.   Eddie has gone off the deep end.  Jerk.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:10 AM Title: New Girl In Town

awww doc c and rose???   sweet.    Take control B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:06 AM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap

yummy  love me some doc f.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:01 AM Title: Mad World

her sub conscious is steering her right thats for sure.  glad j didnt turn her away

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 1:56 AM Title: Doubling Up

yummy yummy.  at least they made it good for her.  hope jazz nuttaps e.  he's being a jerk

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 1:48 AM Title: Freedom

B is a horny toad today huh?  Wow  that was a serious chastity belt huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: Appointments

Oooh Jazz is mad. Cant blame him. E is gonna get decked if hes not careful though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:03 AM Title: Cracks in the Armor

Wonder if ang will keep her mouth shut. At least e ended it with her. Glad p told j to be honest.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chastity

Well at least she is sober and enjoying the ride. Just hope he doesn't break her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:43 PM Title: Are You Amiable?

Hmm me thinks ang is gonna cause trouble. Wow hes brave doing that on campus

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:31 PM Title: Decisions

Now I really wanna nuttap e. At least b is thinking.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Eyes Wide Shut

Well at least jasper feels a little bad. Like Peter and char.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:22 PM Title: What Now?

Hope someone nuttaps e. What a jerk. Like Jazz though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:17 PM Title: After

Men suck... esp confusing with calling her sweetheart.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:09 PM Title: The Fantasy Continues

Hope she clears her head enough to ask some questions. But yummy yummy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:56 PM Title: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy

Hmmm I wanna jasper. E is just too.....raw?...for me at least so far. Guess we'll see what the future brings.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:49 PM Title: Making the Grade

Dayum. She learned that from porn? Go b.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:42 PM Title: Research Proposal

Oh semi drunk bella. What have you gotta into

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:37 PM Title: Surprise

Oh I thought she was out on the patio not in her house. Bad boys.... but yummy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:34 PM Title: Biding Time

Naughty peeper boys. Hate women like ang who make it harder on the rest of us.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:27 PM Title: Naughty Birdie

Oh boy. She got caught. Hee hee

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:23 PM Title: Cherry Poppin'

Ugh poor b but even worse for little mickey.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:17 PM Title: Firsts

Smooth move Newton... lol. Aww em and Alec.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:10 PM Title: Rosalie's Story

Wow. Cool rose and em backstories. Gay clubs are fun.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:04 PM Title: Miss Innocent

Hard to picture em gay and not with rosie. Love rosie popping her drinking and piercing cherries.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:57 PM Title: Confessions

Liking Jazz more than e but they are both scumballs at this point.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:53 PM Title: The Bone

Oooh jasper is a peeping tom. Naughty boy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:28 PM Title: Group Project

oooh sneaky E.... how convenient that she was alone.

 

OOOH   Rosalie appears.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:18 PM Title: Frustrations

oooh so B isnt a total virgin.   Good to know.   Overprotective Dads....ahhh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:54 PM Title: Together Again

Surprised he isnt just letting J stay with him if there is a guest room.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:49 PM Title: Innocence Lost

wow  he is one screwed up person from early on.

I have no issue with BSDM or sex as long as there are adults involved and all parties are truthful and its consentual.    Love the story so far BTW.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:42 PM Title: Restless Memories

oh wow.  He's been messed up for a long time huh?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Match

Yummy start.   Great goodbye till they both had to talk.    He could have said it a little more tactfully though.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:33 PM Title: Set...

oooh Domsper coming out to play. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:27 PM Title: Game...

good story time.  Sounds like he and E have real emotional issues.  hmm  Alice wants a goodbye huh?

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Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:21 PM Title: Jasper's Plans

hmm some more insight into thier history.  E sounds like a real piece of work.  Hope J finally stands up to him somehow.    But it sounds like that wont happen much.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:54 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2

Wow J got a instructions for his first time.    Love the pic

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1

Wow   E getting J to try all sorts of new stuff.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:44 PM Title: First Day

Boy he is a predatory arse isnt he.   B has no idea what she is in for huh?

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Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:41 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen

LOVE the banner in ch 1!!!

Oh wow   Eddie the pervert.  This is gonna be interesting

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:06 PM Title: Innocence Lost

loved it!

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:02 PM Title: Restless Memories

loved it!

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:32 PM Title: Match

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:27 PM Title: Set...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:19 PM Title: Game...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:00 PM Title: Jasper's Plans

loved it

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:37 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen

loved it!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:09 PM Title: In Clear Sight

:)

Reviewer: Edwards Paradox Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:01 PM Title: In Clear Sight

Are you going to finish this story?

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:33 PM Title: In Clear Sight

Gah!!  I'm all caught up and you've left me on a cliff, teetering on the edge.  I know you have no schedule for posting and it's just 'as and when' so all I will say is, this is a brilliant story and I can't wait to find out what happens so I really hope that 'as and when' is soon, lol.  In the meantime I'll make myself comfy on the cliff edge.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Life Goes On

Ooooh, this has more twists and turns than a......than a.......wizard's wand, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:55 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall

Oh my God!!  Penny dropping, do you hear it, lol.  Alec as in best friend Alec as in Emmett's Alec??  They have to be one and the same, I'd forgotten about his best friend, how slow am I, lol.  Edward's headed to a bar will he meet him again?  Who's Claire?

Can Jasper and Bella get past this?  I hope so.  What will Edward do now?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:26 PM Title: Consequences

Edward's life is well and truly falling to bits.  He seriously underestimated Angela, but then so did I.  Just goes to show that you can never predict what a jealous woman will do.

Will Bella really leave Jasper when they have their talk having just declared her love for him.  She's totally forgotten about meeting Rose at the club, is she going to turn up at Bella's duplex?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:14 PM Title: Mea Culpa

Oooh, what's happening now?  Who are Edward's surprise visitors?

Jane x

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:52 PM Title: Wake Up Call

Poor Bella her arse must feel red raw but it's the mental pain that will take longer to come to terms with and get over.  I don't think Edward will be able to clean this mess up, he really could do with some help of the professional kind.  His grip on his control has slipped and whatever he's kept burried is coming to the surface.  There has to be more stuff that he needs to deal with besides what happened with Jane and Makenna.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Sticks and Stones

Where did Edward, the master of control, go to?  It seems that he may have had some sort of epiphany though and it just goes to show that you can't avoid your feelings forever.

"Have you lost yer cotton pickin' mind!"  Lol, sorry but that line, out of context, is funny.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: New Girl In Town

Holy crap!  Alice is working for Rose.  Well I'm assuming it's Alice.  Does she know who Bella is?  Oh, the shit could really hit the fan now.  What's she doing there?  What's she thinking?  Will she turn up at the club?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:48 PM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap

Lol, looks like Bella may just have made another new friend.  Will Rose see what's going on with Bella?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:35 PM Title: Mad World

Light and dark, good and bad, Jasper and Edward.  Bella's having a meltdown and I don't think they should ignore it and just pass it off as a bad dream.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:22 PM Title: Doubling Up

I don't think that Jasper can deny to either Edward or Bella that this is something more for him now.  I really don't think he could let her out of his life now, he's really fallen for her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:54 PM Title: Freedom

Why is it that Edward is always the one behind Bella?  When they start playing Edward is always the one to support Bella whilst Jasper goes down on her.  Does this have significance or am I reading too much into this?  Is this how Edward maintains some of his distance so that he can still say this is a game?

Jane x

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