[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:10 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2020 2:09 AM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope she gives Jasper a chance and he explains everything to her. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:43 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:42 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:42 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I hope Bella gives Jasper a real chance. Please update soon.
Date: 01 Jun 2017 1:37 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Hi, I'm just wondering if you plan on finishing this story? I read it a long time ago and dropped in to check on it. I'm curious to find out how Edward ends up. I have a thought, and although I doubt it, I'd like to see if I'm right.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:01 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I love this story.. Are you gonna finish it or there a finished version on another site ?
Date: 10 Aug 2014 8:40 AM Title: Consequences
Suprise suprise I knew that Angela would be back enjoy your little revenge now Angela but remember if he goes down you'll go down with him I can't say I feel sorry for Edward because I don't he did this to himself Please update I 'm glad that your books are selling but remember you have people that love your stories here too
Date: 12 May 2014 5:14 AM Title: The Fantasy Continues
I am so glad I found you here! Thanks for the lead from FF (dot) net. Looking forward to reading the entire story—finally!
Date: 06 May 2014 3:18 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
I like this story a lot
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:57 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Just found this story again. Was with u before the hiatus. Glad you r back, love it!
Date: 07 Aug 2013 12:52 PM Title: In Clear Sight
Loving your story!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:36 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Great read. Love all the twists. And turns. Thank you
Date: 24 May 2013 6:55 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I'm soooo happy you have returned to this story. I have missed them
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2013 7:33 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I'm TRULY enjoying this story in all it's crazieness! I sincerlely hope that you are planning on finishing it. We are on home stretch now, no? :)
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2013 5:15 PM Title: Cherry Poppin'
This is an incredibly interesting story. Poor Bella feeling so sexually frustrated!
Date: 02 Apr 2013 3:19 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Love it! Continue!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 6:39 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Oh my! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
Love where this is going and hope you can update soon!
Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:06 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:02 PM Title: Mea Culpa
DAMN! Jasper just got slapped with the "Bone" me thinks! And Edward is about to get fucked without a hug with the same "Bone". Poor Bella. She's a disaster.
Date: 28 Feb 2013 9:32 PM Title: Sticks and Stones
DAMN! Amazing chapter! So glad I found it again!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 7:59 AM Title: In Clear Sight
NO, NO, NO...
I should've paid more attention and notice it isn't complete.
*pouts*
God, I'm such a Jasper hoor. * wipes drool *
And why is Edward such a dick?
This is definitely my cup of tea, LOL!
Date: 12 Jan 2013 12:24 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
Wow. I'm so glad Jasper came. What Edward did was not okay; he needs to deal with his shit. You can't have secrets like that and be in a healthy D/s relationship.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:54 PM Title: Doubling Up
That would've been really intense for Bella, and I think that for Edward and Bella to just leave her like that is really irresponsible. If you want to have that kind of play then you have a responsibility to take care of the sub (I know it hasn't really been said, but that's what Bella is in this relationship). I've liked this so far, but this lack of care is offensive.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:55 PM Title: Research Proposal
Hot. And I like that Bella's initial response was to run away.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:09 PM Title: Biding Time
What I really like about this fic is the time jumps between perspectives. It's really interesting to see the story build through the chapters and find out what's been happening while you were seeing a different part of the story. I thought it was well done :)
Date: 09 Jan 2013 2:00 PM Title: Rosalie's Story
I was annoyed with this chapter. I get that this is fanfic and short and everything, I just prefer to read more and get to know the characters better before knowing their backstory. And often, I don't really feel it's necessary--and it kinda felt this way with this. Mostly, I just find narrating stuff like this kinda lazy; it's way more interesting to have characters talk about stuff like this. I'm still going to keep on reading anyway.
Date: 09 Jan 2013 8:35 AM Title: Miss Innocent
I think my favourite part has got to be a gay Emmett. I really like that. I also really liked that (and this is a while back chapter-wise) that Edward acknowledges that he was raped. I think it would've been all too easy to just glaze over that and not even talk about it. I thought it was a brave and interesting thing to do with a male character.
This has got to be one of the more interesting fics I've found on here. And I really appreciate the revising (not that I read the original version) but it's nice to have the typos and grammatical errors corrected etc.
Good job :)
Oh, and I like the change you've made to Edward's demeanor. There's obviously still attraction between him and Bella, but I like that he's not really likeable. It'll be interesting to read the dynamics between them and Jasper together.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I haven't started this story and before I do start I was wondering is this story on hold or complete . I really want to read it but I hate getting emotionally invested in stories that I won't ever be able to see the end of . please message me back I have heard really good things about this story and I would really like to read it!!!!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:55 AM Title: In Clear Sight
ROFL didnt even occur to me that Mary was Alice....DUH Me.
Char and Peter seems so cool.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:49 AM Title: Life Goes On
glad they are getting away to talk. Hope he remembers to tell the Dean he and B are dating.
uh oh he ended up at Rattlesnakes?
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:26 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
uh oh for forgetting the condom.
hmmm what is E going to do???
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:23 AM Title: Consequences
Well if I was going down, I'd throw the skank under the bus too cause ya know E isnt the only teacher she's doing.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:20 AM Title: Mea Culpa
hmmm thinking its Ang and the Dean there at the end?
Wonder how B is going to react when J tells them everything
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Wake Up Call
J is so good to her.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:14 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
Monster indeed. Eddie has gone off the deep end. Jerk.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:10 AM Title: New Girl In Town
awww doc c and rose??? sweet. Take control B.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:06 AM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap
yummy love me some doc f.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:01 AM Title: Mad World
her sub conscious is steering her right thats for sure. glad j didnt turn her away
Date: 20 Dec 2012 1:56 AM Title: Doubling Up
yummy yummy. at least they made it good for her. hope jazz nuttaps e. he's being a jerk
Date: 20 Dec 2012 1:48 AM Title: Freedom
B is a horny toad today huh? Wow that was a serious chastity belt huh?
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: Appointments
Oooh Jazz is mad. Cant blame him. E is gonna get decked if hes not careful though
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:03 AM Title: Cracks in the Armor
Wonder if ang will keep her mouth shut. At least e ended it with her. Glad p told j to be honest.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chastity
Well at least she is sober and enjoying the ride. Just hope he doesn't break her.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:43 PM Title: Are You Amiable?
Hmm me thinks ang is gonna cause trouble. Wow hes brave doing that on campus
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:31 PM Title: Decisions
Now I really wanna nuttap e. At least b is thinking.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Eyes Wide Shut
Well at least jasper feels a little bad. Like Peter and char.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:22 PM Title: What Now?
Hope someone nuttaps e. What a jerk. Like Jazz though
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:17 PM Title: After
Men suck... esp confusing with calling her sweetheart.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 11:09 PM Title: The Fantasy Continues
Hope she clears her head enough to ask some questions. But yummy yummy
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:56 PM Title: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy
Hmmm I wanna jasper. E is just too.....raw?...for me at least so far. Guess we'll see what the future brings.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:49 PM Title: Making the Grade
Dayum. She learned that from porn? Go b.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:42 PM Title: Research Proposal
Oh semi drunk bella. What have you gotta into
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:37 PM Title: Surprise
Oh I thought she was out on the patio not in her house. Bad boys.... but yummy.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:34 PM Title: Biding Time
Naughty peeper boys. Hate women like ang who make it harder on the rest of us.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:27 PM Title: Naughty Birdie
Oh boy. She got caught. Hee hee
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:23 PM Title: Cherry Poppin'
Ugh poor b but even worse for little mickey.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:17 PM Title: Firsts
Smooth move Newton... lol. Aww em and Alec.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:10 PM Title: Rosalie's Story
Wow. Cool rose and em backstories. Gay clubs are fun.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 10:04 PM Title: Miss Innocent
Hard to picture em gay and not with rosie. Love rosie popping her drinking and piercing cherries.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:57 PM Title: Confessions
Liking Jazz more than e but they are both scumballs at this point.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:53 PM Title: The Bone
Oooh jasper is a peeping tom. Naughty boy.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:28 PM Title: Group Project
oooh sneaky E.... how convenient that she was alone.
OOOH Rosalie appears.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:18 PM Title: Frustrations
oooh so B isnt a total virgin. Good to know. Overprotective Dads....ahhh
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:54 PM Title: Together Again
Surprised he isnt just letting J stay with him if there is a guest room.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:49 PM Title: Innocence Lost
wow he is one screwed up person from early on.
I have no issue with BSDM or sex as long as there are adults involved and all parties are truthful and its consentual. Love the story so far BTW.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:42 PM Title: Restless Memories
oh wow. He's been messed up for a long time huh?
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:39 PM Title: Match
Yummy start. Great goodbye till they both had to talk. He could have said it a little more tactfully though.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:33 PM Title: Set...
oooh Domsper coming out to play.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:27 PM Title: Game...
good story time. Sounds like he and E have real emotional issues. hmm Alice wants a goodbye huh?
Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:21 PM Title: Jasper's Plans
hmm some more insight into thier history. E sounds like a real piece of work. Hope J finally stands up to him somehow. But it sounds like that wont happen much.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:54 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2
Wow J got a instructions for his first time. Love the pic
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1
Wow E getting J to try all sorts of new stuff.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:44 PM Title: First Day
Boy he is a predatory arse isnt he. B has no idea what she is in for huh?
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:41 PM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
LOVE the banner in ch 1!!!
Oh wow Eddie the pervert. This is gonna be interesting
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:01 PM Title: In Clear Sight
Are you going to finish this story?
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:33 PM Title: In Clear Sight
Gah!! I'm all caught up and you've left me on a cliff, teetering on the edge. I know you have no schedule for posting and it's just 'as and when' so all I will say is, this is a brilliant story and I can't wait to find out what happens so I really hope that 'as and when' is soon, lol. In the meantime I'll make myself comfy on the cliff edge.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Life Goes On
Ooooh, this has more twists and turns than a......than a.......wizard's wand, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:55 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Oh my God!! Penny dropping, do you hear it, lol. Alec as in best friend Alec as in Emmett's Alec?? They have to be one and the same, I'd forgotten about his best friend, how slow am I, lol. Edward's headed to a bar will he meet him again? Who's Claire?
Can Jasper and Bella get past this? I hope so. What will Edward do now?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:26 PM Title: Consequences
Edward's life is well and truly falling to bits. He seriously underestimated Angela, but then so did I. Just goes to show that you can never predict what a jealous woman will do.
Will Bella really leave Jasper when they have their talk having just declared her love for him. She's totally forgotten about meeting Rose at the club, is she going to turn up at Bella's duplex?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:14 PM Title: Mea Culpa
Oooh, what's happening now? Who are Edward's surprise visitors?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:52 PM Title: Wake Up Call
Poor Bella her arse must feel red raw but it's the mental pain that will take longer to come to terms with and get over. I don't think Edward will be able to clean this mess up, he really could do with some help of the professional kind. His grip on his control has slipped and whatever he's kept burried is coming to the surface. There has to be more stuff that he needs to deal with besides what happened with Jane and Makenna.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:25 PM Title: Sticks and Stones
Where did Edward, the master of control, go to? It seems that he may have had some sort of epiphany though and it just goes to show that you can't avoid your feelings forever.
"Have you lost yer cotton pickin' mind!" Lol, sorry but that line, out of context, is funny.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: New Girl In Town
Holy crap! Alice is working for Rose. Well I'm assuming it's Alice. Does she know who Bella is? Oh, the shit could really hit the fan now. What's she doing there? What's she thinking? Will she turn up at the club?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:48 PM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap
Lol, looks like Bella may just have made another new friend. Will Rose see what's going on with Bella?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:35 PM Title: Mad World
Light and dark, good and bad, Jasper and Edward. Bella's having a meltdown and I don't think they should ignore it and just pass it off as a bad dream.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:22 PM Title: Doubling Up
I don't think that Jasper can deny to either Edward or Bella that this is something more for him now. I really don't think he could let her out of his life now, he's really fallen for her.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:54 PM Title: Freedom
Why is it that Edward is always the one behind Bella? When they start playing Edward is always the one to support Bella whilst Jasper goes down on her. Does this have significance or am I reading too much into this? Is this how Edward maintains some of his distance so that he can still say this is a game?
Jane x