Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad the newborns and their maker are no longer a problem, that has to be a relief to the family. The amazing thing was Demetri and Leah! Who knew a Volturi guard and a female wolf would imprint? It didn't hurt my feelings when Felix killed Alec and Jane was demolished, either!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good thing vampires heal from horrendous injuries like Bella's! Also a good thing Masen is a tracker, so he could help rescue Aunty Alice. Loved hoe Jasper ripped off the head of that vamp that tried to steal Alice. It was great to see the wolves help out in the reacue, too. Now they all need to find that red-haired witch and kill her!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
That's my girl! Bella wakes up hungry for Edward before she's hungry for blood! That was a different gift for Masen to have, tracker instead of shield or mind-reader like his parents. It's good that everyone is healed and in good health again. It was a close thing for a while. Jacob damn well ought to be guilty over what he did!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Several things come to mind. Tanya being the one to help Edward and not being slutty about it was a nice sueprise. The baby being saved by Kate's shocking it was cool, and it being a sonwas great. Now, if Carlisle was in time to save Bella, then all we have to worry about is finding Jacob and killing him! The dumb bastard almost killed the girl he supposedly loved and broke the treaty to boot!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
awesome ending got mixed feelins on this glads its over for now you can spend all your free time writing my favorite story be my sub but i will miss this story what a ride
Thank you for following it to the end. It had its time to run, but now they need a happily ever after. there are still the outtakes to finish up. but they to will end soon. they are currently up to chapter 13 of this story so it's not far away. Be my sub is still my favorite to write. I am so happy you like it too! Nails233
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
this is such a great take on the story with some really unique and fun twists! I think you should absolutely come back and finish the story...I see it has been awhile since you posted. I loved the Singer Connection and the other singer story and know you can do justice to the finish of this one too! Thanks for sharing your talent!
It's funny you reviewed, i am going over the entire story tonight fixing my errors and getting it ready for its finish. I don't leave anything unfinished, I hate when writers do that to me. and i still have to finish edward's outtakes which is on my profile of what he and the others went through during these moments. it will round off the story in its entirety. Thank you so much for reading my work and i hope you continue to enjoy it. Nails233
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
no this can't be almost over sad panda i love this story its so good but i will be on the look out for your new story
Its called Be My Sub. I hope you do check it out. Thanks for Reading and Reviewing!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm really liking this story & can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)
Sorry it took so long to review. I was on vacation with no wifi! I am so happy you are enjoying it! Thank for reading it.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well done! I like your take on our favorite characters!
Definitely looking forward to what comes next!
Thank you for giving it a chance. i got the idea from twilights deleted dream scene. When someone asked me to continue i couldn't say no.
Date: 10 Jun 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
aww. I dont believe she'll sex someone else up though as she cant control it at all. I think she is just like that with Edward right? lol
I think we can all agree Bella should only lose it with Edward! thanks for all your reveiws!
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wtf who is it i hate cliffys great chapter
yeah sorry about that got a little carried away and ended up writting 3 chapters for this story in one day. my beta already has the next one and i will hopefully have it tomorrow or tonite if shes really fast! i hope you like an intence story because when the idea hit me i hit the laptop! thanks for reading! michele
if you want a hint: no story would be complete without this character!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
that was to short got to be longer
yes i agree the next chapters will get longer as the story goes on, in the begining she still doesn't know anything but she gets it in ch 5 which starts the night of the port angeles events! so there will be more to write into it. it was hard in the begining since they weren't talking and she had no clue to what he is.