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Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

It's obvious Edward won. But what I don't get is Bella. It seems Edward has run a successful shop for a good long while now, and is now expanding into CALIFORNIA. So his brand is only gonna get bigger. 

I don't get Bella giving up him up the first time, I know you framed it as a mutaul break up, but that's a farce. This Edward would take several bullets for Bella, in no way would he want her to leave him, but he would never keep her against her will.  I understand her ambition played a major factor.

Also I don't like how you have  Edward talk like their first break up was mutual and then the communication break off was as well. It wasn'tand Bella stop the long distance cause she cared for him too much. Also I remember Emment about say how Edward was after Bella left him, the break up wasn't mutual. 

I realize now that this is probably one of those angst free stories, but I gotta say, this could have a used it tbh.  With the way you wrote Edward. superb, but if only he didn't have Bella on this pedestal and maybe played hard to get for a couple of chapters before he finally showed her gentle man she remebers and they reconnect. It would have improved my opinion on this fic. 

But as I see it now, 6/10. Edward is great, and their interactions weren't bad either. Emment was too overbearing and pushy, seems like the sort of thing that Rose wouldn't go for, there's playful and then theres the guy that barges into your home as soon as you crack open the door and won't stop talking. Still hate that argument with Bella and James, she started it, don't get violent cause you can't handle words. And the break WAS NOT mutual. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

So even tho we know Bella broke them up cause of her career... Edward fee;s no type of way about anything?

 

Also for him to not ask about her previous relationships or vice versa or anything.. At this point I don' think many questions are gonna get answered. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I mean.. I guess I expected Edward to at least be more caustious with Bella.. or at least ask exactly how many more men she has been with... But nothing at all? 

 

Also Emment is overbearing and pushy. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

I mean if she loves Edward.. It sure doesn't feel like it.. And why would say that? I hope that isn't the only it's brought up..

 

But Edward is too much of a gentlemen and obviously loves Bella so I doubt he is gonna ever bring that subject again or even be harsh with Bella. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

That Bella and james arguement, it stinks of 'if you can't handle the heat, don't come into the kitchen.' She took a serious shot at him first. 

 

What makes him a asshole when she decided to belittle him? She started it and couldn't handle the heat afterwards. Using any BJJ or Boxing skills taught to her just because she can't take a few words is hella immature. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Very cute ending!!

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Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

They both can be on their knees tonight.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

I hope the tie.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

I thought he might be a bit distracting.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett is so crazy funny!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Let the goodtimes roll!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am looking forward to see what other piercings edward has!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 8

I was worried emmett wasn't going to leave!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope nothing ruins the heat between them!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

That's right!!! Hahaha one point for bella!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness!! Love the fruit idea!! Skimpy clothes not needed!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Some little tiny sleep clothes will help in nit letting edward sleep well tonight.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

He is super sexy!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait to hear their story!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I lobe the show ink masters.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

wow

 

this deserves more reviews

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 9

hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

yep later

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I would love to get lucky with Edward

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

they both will be

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

love Ink Master can't wait to read more

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh this one was awesome I loved it thank you

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

AWESOME!!! story ;) i love it when edward is a masen ;) i've read this before but still enjoyed reading it again ;) thanks for posting it on here for us ;D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) Loved this

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Je continue ŗ lire sur fanfiction....

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

:-)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

Lu avec google Translate. french.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

:-)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it

Reviewer: EmziBob Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

absolutely loved it :) great job

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it, perfect medicine and distraction for a tooth ache.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

hot!

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

I've enjoyed this so far and I'm curious to see who wins and what decisions are going to be made by Edward and Bella because it's obvious they still have feeliUngs for each other.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Teambellaedward1982 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Teambellaedward1982 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: Amazone3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

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