It's obvious Edward won. But what I don't get is Bella. It seems Edward has run a successful shop for a good long while now, and is now expanding into CALIFORNIA. So his brand is only gonna get bigger. 

I don't get Bella giving up him up the first time, I know you framed it as a mutaul break up, but that's a farce. This Edward would take several bullets for Bella, in no way would he want her to leave him, but he would never keep her against her will.  I understand her ambition played a major factor.

Also I don't like how you have  Edward talk like their first break up was mutual and then the communication break off was as well. It wasn'tand Bella stop the long distance cause she cared for him too much. Also I remember Emment about say how Edward was after Bella left him, the break up wasn't mutual. 

I realize now that this is probably one of those angst free stories, but I gotta say, this could have a used it tbh.  With the way you wrote Edward. superb, but if only he didn't have Bella on this pedestal and maybe played hard to get for a couple of chapters before he finally showed her gentle man she remebers and they reconnect. It would have improved my opinion on this fic. 

But as I see it now, 6/10. Edward is great, and their interactions weren't bad either. Emment was too overbearing and pushy, seems like the sort of thing that Rose wouldn't go for, there's playful and then theres the guy that barges into your home as soon as you crack open the door and won't stop talking. Still hate that argument with Bella and James, she started it, don't get violent cause you can't handle words. And the break WAS NOT mutual. 

It's seems so OOC to have Edward have a 'few girls' with the way you have written him. 

And still with Bella, honestly she isn't willing to compromise or give up anything to be with Edward. And his business is BETTER and BIGGER then hers, why would he give his up? That's like going from 100k a year job to 20k street preformer just cause it's fun. 

So even tho we know Bella broke them up cause of her career... Edward fee;s no type of way about anything?

Also for him to not ask about her previous relationships or vice versa or anything.. At this point I don' think many questions are gonna get answered. 

I mean if she loves Edward.. It sure doesn't feel like it.. And why would say that? I hope that isn't the only it's brought up..

But Edward is too much of a gentlemen and obviously loves Bella so I doubt he is gonna ever bring that subject again or even be harsh with Bella. 

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

So Edward was right about Bella? Tho she didn't leave him for his age, she left cause of career ambition. Very young person trait. 

I can't help but think Bella's pov is skrewed someway. If Edward loved her so much, I doubt he was happy she left and then cut off communication, seems very harsh on her part. 

They both can be on their knees tonight.

I thought he might be a bit distracting.

Let the goodtimes roll!

I was worried emmett wasn't going to leave!!

That's right!!! Hahaha one point for bella!!

Some little tiny sleep clothes will help in nit letting edward sleep well tonight.

I can't wait to hear their story!!

so good

hot

I would love to get lucky with Edward

love Ink Master can't wait to read more

AWESOME!!! story ;) i love it when edward is a masen ;) i've read this before but still enjoyed reading it again ;) thanks for posting it on here for us ;D

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absolutely loved it :) great job

hot!

looking forward to more 

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