Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't believe Carlisle had major surgery like that and did not tell his children. What is Tanya up to. I have a feeling that Kate did not "hire"the girls.
Author's Response:
He's too controlling and he feared the intrusion of his offspring ;)
You will laugh at Tanya and maybe will want to kick Kate's ass
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes!!!!!!!!! Glad Edward has discovered who his "sweet girl" is.
Author's Response:
;) He had to do it.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 The next day
I wonder how long it will take Rose to find out Bella was with her brother. Can't believe Carlisle wants them to marry for the company.
Author's Response:
Rose will find out quickly ;) Just wait to read more about Carlisle, you won't like him.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds really good. Can't wait to see what you do with this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I hope you're liking the story.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 37
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 22 Jan 2016 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
Nothing going to be the same again after the meeting Wednesday.
Author's Response:
No, and this chapter was a bit boring but I wanted to show them having good times together, not everything was always drama.
Thanks and i hope you're feeling better :)
Date: 19 Jan 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 36
I hate that their keeping secrets from each other.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, they'll made up ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
Where getting close, great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, tomorrow the next one will be up :)
Date: 17 Jan 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
There getting close to catching the bad person but there could be more then one person.
Author's Response:
Maybe ;)
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 36
Is Edward that much of a blabber mouth that he can't be trusted?
Author's Response:
More like he will be harrumphing or glaring at the culprit, making the culprit realize they are onto something. Mere bad acting. Bella is safe because she isn't usually around at work.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 36
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Jan 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
Is her dad trying to buy into the company with the help from Carmin?
Author's Response:
Hmm, no. He's just desperate to control Bella, the others just want her out of the way.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 35
I was in the same boat as you are over New Year's weekend. No internet, and I live in a very rural area, farms galore, plus my internet is satellite.
Good twist with the cousin.
Author's Response:
Oh, so you know my pain ;) It's unbelievable how much we depend on internet. Here we finally got it back yesterday, along with our phone line.
I'm glad you liked that tidbit of information.
Thanks, for reading and sharing your experience :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 35
LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 35
There getting close to catching the bad guy or girl.
Author's Response:
Yes! I love how you made the distinction between boy and girl ;)
Thanks.
Date: 05 Jan 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad we're getting somewhere on Osorio
Author's Response:
Yep, we're about to find and confront the culprit.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
It seems to all be coming to a head.
My vote: Between Women.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, we're close to the end and we're getting the final pieces to find who's behind the whole mess. Will Edward put Carlisle in his place?
Thanks, I think I'll post the first chapter of 'Between women' the first days of January. Final recount: four votes against two. Clearly a winner.
Happy new year!
Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yes I'm sure Jacob shocked Charlie and now we knew where got the car from Kate of all people, Charlie made a fool out of himself. James sure spill the beans about Carmen wonder what her husband going to be thinking.
Author's Response:
Yup, and now Charlie doesn't have anyone supporting him ;)
Everything is coming out and they'll face Carmen soon, just wait for Eleazar reaction ;)
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
:)
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas!
I hope Santa brings you lots of hugs and everything your heart desires.
May
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
He's actually going to send her to the lion's den?
Author's Response:
No, Bella will slap him some sense ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
That was a very good letter from Jake.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was time for he to move on.
Thanks for reading my story and commenting. It really makes me happy.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well played planning.
Author's Response:
Thanks :) They needed that wedding coming swiftly without trouble.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
This sure is a wacka-do bunch.
Author's Response:
Oh, and they'll get worst ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 33
Charlie there now this can't be good for bella.
The night of the puss caterpillars.
Author's Response:
Hi!
No, it will be quite the opposite because she just heard a few things he made to Renee. Bella is pissed and Jacob is finally making something right. I'm hurrying with the next chapter to post it before Christmas.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm confused and lost. I think I'll start from the beginning again.
Author's Response:
Oh, if you want, ask me. I'm here to listen :)
Thanks
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
Very mature!!!!
Author's Response:
He, he. Bella can blame her hormones and the fact that she's way younger. But Tanya really doesn't have an excuse. But they needed to have a 'fight', let them blow steam.
Thanks :)
Date: 12 Dec 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 32
Kate got fired, Carmen is acting suspicious by the minute, and Tanya is don't need words for her.
Author's Response:
But Edward finally proved he's more than capable to run the company. :)
About Tanya, well had to kick Tanya's ass sometime, right? Being pregnant that was the only way possible for her.
Thanks XOXO
Date: 08 Dec 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
Interesting. Does Carlisle know about Bella's project & is he trying to sabotage her? I'm assuming Stefan called Carlisle
Author's Response:
Hi! No, Carlisle isn't aware of Bella's project. He's just selfish thinking she's at his beck and call, completely ignoring she's still trying to finish college.
About Stefan... it's a bit more complicated, you'll see ;)
Thanks.
Date: 08 Dec 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
Victoria is in a lot of trouble.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but they'll have to find her first :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
Tanya and Stefan sure now how to become a pain the ass. Jasper really need learn how to stand up for himself against Lauren. Carmen something not right there. Charlie need to get a life, his daughter has enough problems to worry about. Now as for the woman following bella it's either Katie,Carmen, Lauren, or Victoria.
Author's Response:
Tanya and Stefan.... well she was already a pain in the ass, she had to find someone just like her.
Jasper... he'll have to plead to win Alice back, and yes, he will have to put a stop to Lauren. He will just have a bit of patience.
Charlie, well, he wasn't resting on his laurels :) he's still sure he can convince Bella to go back to Forks but he has to find Jacob first ;)
Oh, the identity of the woman will be revealed in a few chapters ;)
Thanks hun :)
Date: 04 Nov 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
I wish the uncles would man up and tell Carlisle and Carmen off. Edward can't handle much more stress. Victoria needs to go. Stephen needs to be deported.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's kind of hypocrite to askEdward to deal with them when they aren't capable :)
Oh, I like what you think about Stefan, he may take Tanya with him ;)
Thanks I really appreciate your review
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 30
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 03 Sep 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
I worry about Carlisle. I think he is getting senile. What does Kate have on Carlisle? I don't trust Carmen.
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer.
Carlisle is a nutcase normally, but now he's worried about his health... more crazyness coming ahead :)
Soon we'll find Kate's deal ;)
Carmen... well, she's Tanya's mother, I don't think it works as an explanation but I hope we know what to expect from both.
Thanks for taking the time to read and review :)
May
Date: 23 Aug 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
When are you going to update????
Author's Response:
Hi!
Well, next chapter is almost finished, I promise to send it today to my beta. I hope it will be posted next weekend.
Thanks :)
May
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it, can not wait for the party...
Author's Response:
Thanks, I think you're going to like next chapter :)
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
Carlisle a control freak and Carmen she really scary when she quite.
Author's Response:
Yeah,Bella really got how Crmen is a creepy woman.
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 12 Jun 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
I don't think Kate is going to give up that easily or Marie too.
Author's Response:
No, but they closed the one door they had left to come closer to them.:)
Thanks
May
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate your support.
May
Date: 08 May 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
Kate stole the test.
Author's Response:
Hi!
You'll see who did it ;)
Sorry for taking my time in posting the recap. I promise it will be posted by this weekend; RL was a bit busy but I finally back to my routine.
May
Date: 06 May 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
May
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate your support and cheering :)
May
Date: 06 May 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think Carlisle isn't going to be happy when he found out his son edward want to do less work.
I'll email you soon.
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long. You know how much I appreciate you always read and support me :)
May
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
what a crappy ass family. Charlie and Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Both selfish and chauvinistic pigs. But the girls aren't alone.
Thanks :)
May
Date: 20 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
smart Elope and end the discussion
Author's Response:
Thanks, I wanted to make sure they got married. :)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle needs to be checked to make sure he has not gone insane. Totally bonkers.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's wrong in so many levels.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
It's about time he put his foot down with Carlisle. Now he needs to do it with the rest of them!!!! Thank you for updating
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks for your support. You know why ;)
May
Date: 19 Apr 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really hate Carlisle! And I hope Edward keeps up with his decision having Bella as his priority.
Author's Response:
Thanks! You're right, Carlisle won't be winning 'father of the year' :)
May
Date: 19 Apr 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think Carlisle really fuck up big time,how could he be so stupid. Who knew who after his company, then he put bella in room tell everyone about his granddaughter, can you all say stupid fool. Edward sure has a lot of things to fix. But something tell me that edward had enough.
Glad to see this story is back. Something tells me there going to be some people in big trouble.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, Carlisle fucked up, sadly it will continue happening.
May
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
:) loving this story. I hope you are able to continue it sometime
Author's Response:
Thanks hun.
Date: 06 Feb 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
Charlie sure is confusing I think him and Carlisle have thing for control everything around them even the people in there live's.Guess no one telled them children want there own life.
1 Did you think bella should have called her mother,ask her advice on what to do with jacob?
2 would love see bella kick jacob ass,when she got turn into a vampire?
3 when jacob said that he wish bella was dead when she gets change into a vampire would say Bella should have left and never came back to lane push after that being said?
Your right about Alice,I think because she can see the future try to have everything her way.She not really a good friend either her and jacob are both the same.I Rosalie let her past human life and the night she lose everything,think let past eat away at her,she maybe beautiful but her parents used her I think Rosalie should have made sure this was the man of her dream before getting married.IT time for her let go of the old life you can't get back what you lose you can let past get you down or moved on tried to have a happy life.
Jasper always let Alice have her way,he always controlling people emotions make Alice happy that not right. I think he should allow someone to voice there emotions.He did to bella on eighteen birthday just so Alice can have her way,that wrong to did that to someone I think he too easy with his wife.
What did you think.
Did believe Rosalie want to be human again?
Jasper used his gift too much just so Alice can be happy?
And also would have made bella different supernatural creature?
Remember bella at end of the eclipse movie said it was a choice between who I should be and who I am.everyone was telling bella who should be not the who I am part.same of them were making her into someone she wasn't.
I also felt the book author forget what most important about the books which was the star cross lovers not about one guy. If cared about the one guy then way have two people in relationship if you can't fix the problems between edward and bella quit worry about poor jacob.
First book when great but I felt the book author made a lot of mistakes with bella character and edward character too second,third,and the fourth book's,she made thing happened too fast and cause huge mess in some area.
Author's Response:
Hi!
1 Yes, it seemed like she had a lot of trust in Renee's opinion.
2 Yeah, more when he 'imprinted' on Renesmee. Too bad Edward didn't had the chance to.
3 Absolutely yes. That was one of the moments where she needed that backbone.
The Jasper thing... I don't know. Maybe he just wanted to take the easiest way, and heped her get everything the way she wanted.
I lie Rose, though I think that was totally unfair for Emmet
May
Date: 05 Feb 2015 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Charlie sure can't make up his mind. The messages where funny.
I have two more questions.
1 would give bella and edward twin or just one baby?
2 which characters did you hate and what did you hate about them?
Hope don't mind me asking some questions,I think there were some people not very happy with bella in the eclipse book. Look fort to reading more of your stories.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Continuing with our chat :)
1 I liked the baby idea, though I hated all the imprinting and her name. Poor kid. But twins would had been awesome!
2 I hate Jacob, he's an immature manipulative boy obssesed with Bella; Charlie was a terrible father; almost every one in La Push, except Seth, Leah and Emily. I dislike Alice. Another manipulative person, and she claimed to be Bella best friend, though I hink only because she could use Bella as her doll, not thinking all the damage she did to poor Edward. And to be honest, from time to time I wanted to slap some sense on Bella.
Now that you mentioned Sue, I'm starting to dislike her more. You're right, she didn't support Leah like a mother should.
Now I will ask you, what would you had changed in anyof the books?
I'm posting another chapter later at night, so see you later.
May
Date: 03 Feb 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think there a spy in the company because how could they knew so much. Sorry had a little trouble with my internet. Wondering what would have happened in eclipse if bella over heard a conversation about making her staying away from edward, like Charlie, Jacob,Billy were all in on it together. What would you have done differently from eclipse if you could change it around? Having trouble with the email stuff.
Author's Response:
Hi! You're right about the spy, though it gets tricky to find who it is ;)
Don't worry, in fact, I'm the one who should be ashamed. I finished the next chapter of this story, but I'm still struggling with the recap. I'm even going to make a poll about which story will follow Cullen's cult (because is almost finished). I wrote a lot this weekend, but I'm still delaying the post for a couple of days.
I think if Bella had heard that conversation, she would had made an excuse for them. Honestly, she showed zero empathy to Edward. But I think it was because the author didn't really forgave Edward for leaving. But I would looove to read Bella putting those three in their place for attempting to break her relationship with Edward.
I would had change the night in the tent. Edward didn't deserve it. And I would had made Edward tell Bella how much it hurt when she was going to Jacob, maybe use Tanya's crush with him to make her realize how it felt. Though poor Tanya, she ends alone and loses her sister, I don't understand why we all hate her.
What do you think about Tanya? Do you hate her? What characters do you dislike?
You may answer me in the next Cullen's cult chapter, that one sure will be post tomorrow. ;)Please.
May
Date: 23 Jan 2015 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Edward and Bella are having a girl yeah.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm so glad you read my story, the next chapter is already written, but I'm checking certain details to not mess with the rest of the story. I hope to post it this weekend. I only have to make a brief account of the other chapters because it was like two years ago my last update on this story.
Now I have to go back to work, but I'llanswer your other reviews as soon as I get home.
May
Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
While jacob it about time you pulled your head out of your asshole.
Author's Response:
He has a lot to grow, but he's starting He took the first step.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Way to tell them bella and edward.
Author's Response:
;) Yeah!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hahaha that one way to get married without your father there, but now he knew great.
Author's Response:
I'm very fond of that wedding. It wasn't romantic, but hey! they did it.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Carlisle sure like controlling thing's doesn't he.
Author's Response:
Yeah, and he's absolutely blind to the others needs and desires.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think it jacob following them.
Author's Response:
Oh, they have too many people messing around. ;)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Tanya mom is a real piece of work.
Author's Response:
Well, Tanya's personality had to come from somewhere ;)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Tanya is don't know there so many words for her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's so dumb and blind. :)
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Charlie need pull his head out of his ass and Carlisle too. I'm glad bella and edward are there for Renee when she sick and of course her stepfather too.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Charlie and Carlisle are kinda chauvinistic and self-centered in this story. They have a long way to go to change their mind.
May
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
So sad her mom is sick.
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer, my whole family came to visit and I was really busy :( but now I'm back.
This story turned so difficult to me, see, I outline my stories before starting to post, but when I started this one I moved twice, my computer broke... so my notes were missing. I have most of it re-outlined, but it's taking me a bit to write it. I hope to post the next chapter before this month ends, it's already written, but I'm checking if it really goes eith the story.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my stories, i really appreciate it.
May
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no that not good.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
Her dad sure is a mean evil bastard.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah bella and edward are going to have a baby.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward dad is a real jerk.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Going to be a long day.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wonder what happen now must be something bad.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
That a shocker to find out about there dad.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jacob sure is acting like a jerk,using a girl real mature there. I hope edward and bella get to see each other again.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thank God jacob find another girl.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 The next day
Yeah bella way tell both your father and jacob off you go girl. Everybody dad sure can't get a clue.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella sure had a good time with edward. And her dad Charlie is so stupid he doesn't get bella does not want to marry jacob,boy some people need a good slap in the face.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon!!! Love the story!
Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
Seriouslt these two need to catch a damn break! First tell Carlisle to go to hell, if Edward is supposed to become CEO then he needs to make decisons and not have Carlisle override him. Second he needs to give some people in his company their walking papers, namely Kate, Victoria, James and then work on tossing Carmen too. Then when he hires the people he wanted in the first place maybe he can concentrate on finding out who's following them and spend more time with Bella, it's only a matter of time before they crack under the pressure and are they still reading her mother's diary?
Author's Response:
RENEE IS MAKING AN APPEREANCE WITH HER DIARY THE NEXT CHAPTER. AND THE OTHERS... THEY'LL CAUSE AN ULCER TO EDWARD , IT'S PART OF HIS 'GROWTH'. HAVE FAITH IN HIM.THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Author's Response:
RENEE IS MAKING AN APPEREANCE WITH HER DIARY THE NEXT CHAPTER. AND THE OTHERS... THEY'LL CAUSE AN ULCER TO EDWARD , IT'S PART OF HIS 'GROWTH'. HAVE FAITH IN HIM.THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Author's Response:
RENEE IS MAKING AN APPEREANCE WITH HER DIARY THE NEXT CHAPTER. AND THE OTHERS... THEY'LL CAUSE AN ULCER TO EDWARD , IT'S PART OF HIS 'GROWTH'. HAVE FAITH IN HIM.THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Author's Response:
RENEE IS MAKING AN APPEREANCE WITH HER DIARY THE NEXT CHAPTER. AND THE OTHERS... THEY'LL CAUSE AN ULCER TO EDWARD , IT'S PART OF HIS 'GROWTH'. HAVE FAITH IN HIM.THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks honey. Soon. :)
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANKS A LOT. I'M WORKING IN THE NEXT CHAPIE
Date: 20 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad we got Edwards POV first, now we know someone is out to get him and Bella..Why do they want them apart so bad to make up some lies about him cheating?
Author's Response:
Oh that's part of the mistery, muahaha. But keep in mind that Lauren was also harrassed, so bad she went to work with Tanya... in London. ;)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
looking fowrard to more
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR R&R
Author's Response:
THANKS FOR R&R
Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
HMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INTERESTING
Author's Response:
I really hope so ;). Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 29 Sep 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
i don't think charlie murdered jake
edwards and bella's time alone must have felt great because when they got back home look at what was waiting lots of phone calls
wonderwhat they are having i can't waitto read aboput the first time edward or bella hold their child it will be amazing
Author's Response:
OH NO, CHARLIE DIDN'T KILL JAKE, HE LEFT TOWN. IT WAS ALL PRODUCT OF ROSE'S AND LEAH'SIMAGINATION (AND BOOZE)IT WILL TAKE SOME TIME TO GET TO KNOW THEIR BABY BUT IT WILL BE TOO CUTE THANKS FOR READ AND REVIEW
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad Jake has realized all this and is moving on. This is best for him and Bella. Jake is going to get everything he deserves just like Bella is. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
YOU'RE RIGHT, HE ISN'T A BAD GUY JUST WEAK AND IN THE WISE WORDS OF EDWARD ONE LESS TO CARE ABOUT :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it x
Author's Response:
THANKS
Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
jake's appoligy letter
i don't like either of their daddy's.
edward is so kind and he loves her and will protect her and their child.
Author's Response:
EDWARD IS SO SWEET, HE WILL MAKE EVERUTHING FOR BELLA
Date: 15 Sep 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANKS
Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
amazing themost wonderful moment was when they anounced them man and wife . that means there will be juicy moments to come after this
Author's Response:
YEAH! NOW SOME SEXY TIMES WILL COME FOR THEM ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
What a crazy day! I hope they can enjoy some alone time now. Great job...THANKS!!!
Author's Response:
THANKS TO YOU. AND I ALSO THINK THEY DESERVE SOME LOVING TIME, NO DRAMA FOR A WHILE
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
THANKS :D
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
hurray i am so glad that carlisle was detained so bella aqnd edward can get married
Author's Response:
YES, CARLISLE JUST HAVE TO ACCEPT IT
Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad they got married, to many people butting into their lives
Author's Response:
YES, BUT THERE'S ALSO A FEW WHO THEY CAN TRUST. THANK YOU FOR READ AND REVIEW :D
Date: 01 Sep 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
looking foward to more
Author's Response:
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR READING AND REVIEWING. I'M GLAD YOU LKE THIS FIC
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes!
Author's Response:
I'M WITH YOU ;)
Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Omg loved it
Author's Response:
THANKS! ;)