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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 7:55 AM Title: Epilogue 1

Please finish story. Thanks.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2016 9:49 PM Title: Epilogue 1

Hi!!! Anxiously awaiting the completion of this awesome fic!!! This is where you lured me into your web, my dear. :)



Author's Response:

Hi!

I got most of the chapter written, just the fate of Tanya is pending... I promised one ex-neighbor who was the one who pushed me to start to write, that she would decide Tanya's fate. She just gave me her answer on November, so it's a lot of my blame to not finish. I was really busy last month :(

But how about I promise to finish it as my new year's resolution ;)

I'll try to post in the first days of January.

Thank you so much for your kind words and most of all for your patience :)

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:11 AM Title: Epilogue 1

Loved it!!!!

Please update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 4:45 PM Title: Epilogue 1

This has been a total "Soap Opera" ride.



Author's Response:

Yeah, and I found it fun. I hope you found it fun too :)

Thanks

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:59 AM Title: Epilogue 1

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 40

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 39

Go Edward! I hate Carmen and Kate!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poor Bella! I really hate Carlisle!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! What does Charlie want?

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it! I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! I really hate Carlisle!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! I really hate Tanya!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter! I really hate Kate!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Edward!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Mar 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

Amazing chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi! I want to thank you for taking the time to read and leave me a lovely review on every chapter :)  You rock!

Thanks, thanks :)

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Mar 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

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Date: 16 Mar 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it! 

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Date: 16 Mar 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

What's wrong with Bella's mother?

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 The next day

Loved it!

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Date: 15 Mar 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 2:52 PM Title: Epilogue 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 2:04 PM Title: Epilogue 1

I was so excited to get this update. Glad they are giving Carlisle a second chance. Glad Carlisle has realized  how wrong he was. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, Carlisle needed to work to show his family how much he loves them.

May

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue 1

I guess Charlie has lost his daughter and granddaughter too.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he ended alone :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 41

I was so excited to get this update. I am happy with this chapter. I love your writing. 



Author's Response:

Thank you :) You made me blush and so happy because you're the review #200 (the highest for me)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 41

Carlisle and Carmen are in a lot of trouble and so are both of there relationship.

I'm sure Charlie is going to look like the worse father ever right next to Carlisle.

As for Esme slapping Carlisle. You go mama bear!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, well, they are awful people. they deserved.

We can cheer Esme :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

Glad Bella and and the baby are doing good. I hope Bella lets Carlisle have it. He was such an ass. Love the name. Glad Renee is doing good. 



Author's Response:

Oh, she will. She, Edward and even Esme are going to say a few words to him ;) You'll see

Thanks.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 40

I hope you're feeling better.

It's my personal opinion that you can't spoil any baby or child with too much love.

I like her name too. Everyone needs a little Hope in their lives.

I'll miss them.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your well-wishes. I'm fine now :)

Yeah, baby Hope will do fine. She has love and a great name to honor.

You know what, I'll miss them too. It took me a lot of time to write this sotry, had been with me through many life crises. I almost consider it as a friend:)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 40

Did edward knock some sense into Carlisle, but I'm sure he wasn't the only one I'm prettier sure Esme had some choice words for him too. I wonder if Carlisle is as sorry as he says. Wonder if Charlie will visit too, I'll wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

They'll have a few words with Carlisle, Edward, Bella and even Esme.

Hmm, yeah Charlie will say a few words on the next chapter too.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 39

So proud of Edward. But I figured he would go with Bella.  Glad he hit Carlisle.  Maybehe knocked some sense into him. Hope Eleazar is ok. Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that punch was coming for a long time.

Eleazar will be fine, it will be just a scare ;)

Thank you for reading and giving me your opinion, i really appreciate it :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 38

What does Jessica need to talk to Carmen amount? Poor Bella going into labor like that. I cannot believe Carlisle said that to Edward. Esme is going to rip him apart if she finds out



Author's Response:

It will be revealed, nothing bad.

Well, it was unexpected. But that's how some babies like to come :)

Don't worry, Esme will have words with him, so do Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved that cat! Glad they all had a good Christmas



Author's Response:

Thanks! They needed a pet to love (and annoy Carlisle)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

Glad  Bella told Edward some about their plan



Author's Response:

Yeah, despite her loyalty to Rose, she really trusts Edward.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 35

Love how everyone is gathering their own information



Author's Response:

Maybe this way they finally reach the truth :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 34

Glad Jacob is standing up to Charlie. Stories about Charlie's mom just keep getting worse. Charlie has been working with Kate, wow. Rose is getting all kinds of information



Author's Response:

It was time for him to dot. He wasted too many years under his thumb.

Rose is proving to be really smart.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 33

Edward is lucky to have  Rose. Wow, Charlie's mom was a real piece of work



Author's Response:

And he really appreciates her efforts :)

There's a reason why he became such an ass.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 32

Carlisle and Carmen are both a piece of work. Glad Kate is gone. Stefan is watching Edward, Carmen has some nerve. Lol at Bella and Tanya



Author's Response:

One woman less to worry :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 31

I hope Edward finally puts his father in his place. Carlisle needs to get his head out of his butt. Love the background on Monday and Charlie.



Author's Response:

He will, it may take him a bit more  ;)

Thanks and sorry for taking so long to answer, I'm recovering from a cold.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 39

Carlisle is an ass! ! ! ! ! 



Author's Response:

You're so right :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 39

Carmen's neither evil or misunderstood. Her mind is a little crazy. She has such bad opinions of men that I don't think she thinks clearly. 

I also think that there's so much miscommunication amongst everyone, it's no wonder there was so much sneaking going on.

I had faith in Edward and I'm pleased I was correct.



Author's Response:

Yes, she let the mans from her past blind her enough to not see the good man she had by her side :)

Exactly! Everybody was so absorbed in their own plans, they weren't aware of what was happening around them :)

Thanks!

Sorry for taking so long, I'm recovering from a cold.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 39

Both evil and misunderstood. Glad she seems to have feelings for her husband.



Author's Response:

She had to have at least one redeeming quality :)

Thanks and sorry for taking so long to answer. I'm recovering from a cold.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 39

Knew that edward would never pick his job over bella and his daughter. Charlie could learn a thing or two about being there for your wife and child, but it's too late for that.



Author's Response:

Of course he wouldn't :)

I'm not sure if Charlie will ever learn.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Wow, Stefan is a real piece of work. 



Author's Response:

I like to think of him as an odd, really odd, duck. :) Perfect for Tanya.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad Bella and Charlotte have something to bond over besides the babies......their hatred of Tanya. Lol



Author's Response:

you're absolutely right :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

Carlisle is delusional. I don't know how  he has ran the company for so long and mad either sususseful. How did Carmen find out about Edward's plans for the future of the company?  And why can he not fire Kate? What is in those files? 



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in later chapters. But Carlisle is really delusional.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 27

Kate really has some nerve. 



Author's Response:

Or maybe she lost too many marbles ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

There are too many people in the company trying to cause trouble. 



Author's Response:

Yes, they need a true leader who's ready to face all the problems.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 25

OMGosh! I can't believe that they did not get edward. I would be soooo pissed at the girls at the office if I were Bella or Edward.  



Author's Response:

So is Bella :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Who is Edward's college friend?  Should we be leery of. Him? 



Author's Response:

No. Peter/Pete to his friends ;) is a nice but weird guy. He's just picky.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am glad that Bella showed Edward the pictures.  I don't trust Kate or James. 



Author's Response:

Yep, they need to trust each other.

I don't trust them either ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

Lol. Rose and Emmett are sickly sweet.  



Author's Response:

It was Rose turn. Imagine how she felt with Bella and Edward ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

Lol. Rose, Leah, Alice and Jasper are all too funny. 



Author's Response:

I like to have a few laughs between the drama. I like this Leah :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 38

Don't hide. Just post the next chapter asap



Author's Response:

It'll be up in a few hours :) :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 38

I don't think Carlisle'd threat will stop Edward.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you have faith in him, next chapter we will read what's going on with Edward.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 38

Poor Edward.  I hope Edward tells Carlisle where to go!!!!



Author's Response:

Have faith :) We will hear Edward next.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 38

I think Carmen husband is disappointed in her and heartbroken.



Author's Response:

And something more, you'll see. Poor guy.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 38

No..She is not even letting him answer before she runs

Author's Response:

You're right. We will hear Edward next :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

I  glad that Jacob came to his senses. Who is following Edward and Bella if it is not Eleazar's person?  



Author's Response:

I think he wasn't bad, just misguided.

The answer to your question will be answer in the newest chapters. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Tanya and Charlie are both crazy!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Absolutely right :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

I was so afraid Carlisle was  going to stop the wedding. I am so glad he did not.



Author's Response:

But for a minute we all held our breaths ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

Carlisle is too controlling.  I don't blame Aro and Eleazar for not trusting him at this moment.  I still  think  Kate is buying the stock.  I also think James is working for her. 



Author's Response:

Nobody should trust Carlisle, he lost contact with reality.

Hmm, well, Kate is other one no one should trust :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

I  hope things work out for them



Author's Response:

They will ;)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 37

Is it Wednesday yet????



Author's Response:

Hmm, sorry. I'll post next chapter (with the first part of Wednesday events) tonight :)

I just wanted to show how they really acted like a family and not the circus of the previous chapters.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMGosh! Carlisle is right, it is really a circus in his office. 



Author's Response:

Yes, I guess is the only thing everyone will agree with him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

I hope you did a Carlisle POV. Tanya is really that stupid.  I am beginning to wonder about Carlisle and how smart he is.  



Author's Response:

I did it :)

He's intelligent in some aspects. But he doesn't think clearly and he's blind when it's something about Tanya.



Author's Response:

I did it :)

He's intelligent in some aspects. But he doesn't think clearly and he's blind when it's something about Tanya.



Author's Response:

I did it :)

He's intelligent in some aspects. But he doesn't think clearly and he's blind when it's something about Tanya.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Now we know where Emmett fits in.  I can't believe that Tanya is really that stupid.  How does she think she will produce a baby in 9 months.  Dumb. Glad Renee is happy for Bella and Edward. I am wondering what Charlie is going to think about Renee being back in Bella's life. 



Author's Response:

Tanya is stupid... and desperate. Not a good combination.

You'll see Charlie's reaction :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad Renee and Bella are back together.  I hope everthing works our for Renee.  



Author's Response:

It will take some time, but it will :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Lol. Love a drunk Edward.  I can not believe that Charlie stopped them. He has got some nerve.  I hate that Bella's mom is sick. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 10

Charlie is crazy. Lol. Glad Bella stood up to him. 



Author's Response:

Hmm, the sad thing is that I know people who still think like him. not so obsessed but still :(

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Is Kate mentally ill?  I have a feeling that Tanya has the test, but how did she find it and why was she in Rose's room? Glad Edward was happy about the pregnancy.  



Author's Response:

Kate... not really.

Ah, Tanya was looking out for something, whatever she could find. She's desperate.

Yeah, this Edward is crazy about Bella :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

I don't blame Edward for being mad at his dad.  What is the deal with Kate? I think she is crazy. 



Author's Response:

You, Edward and me ;)

Yep, Kate is crazy.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

Lol at Alice fighting Marie and Kate. I am a little confused on what Alec was saying. All of that didnot make sense to me. 



Author's Response:

Alec was angry because he found a girl who is a great programmer, but Kate (HR) rejected her and instead hired some guy he didn't approve. He had to hire the girl and he's paying her salary out of his pocket. He also can't trust the guy Kate hired. Is this the confusing part? I can answer everything you want :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

What just happened at the end?  



Author's Response:

Something really crazy ;)

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