Date: 20 Mar 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 48
This whole story was fantastic. I loved it all . Very funny and super cute. Loved how everyone had a sharp wit. Such a fun story. I do not see a single reason why this one had to be removed from FF for TOS violations. They never even had sex in here at all. Well, no sex scenes. You implied they had sex because of the three children that were born. So very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ok, Edward is pursuing Bella in this chapter. Wad this before or after her son shot him? Because back in the chapter were he shot Edward, Edward seemed to not like Bella very much. I mean I know he just got shoot but I just got a different vibe from him in the other chapter.