[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2013 11:13 AM Title: Update
I JUST FINISHED READING YOUR 5 CHAPTERS AND LOVE WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR SO YOUR CHANGING THE NAME PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO LET ME KNOW THE NAME OF THE NEW NAME OK?
Date: 08 Dec 2013 8:25 AM Title: Update
When you start posting, or reposting, I'll read, because of course I forgot most of the plot.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 12:38 AM Title: Update
SoI thought of The Other Woman, or Mr. Cullens Whore. That's all I could think of. Sorry I know they're awful but I hoped I helped in some way
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
I love it! The style, the plot; they're really good. I was surprised to read in the reviews That edward's a vampire, though! I can't wait for the NeXT update :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
Wow good story you should finish it
Date: 26 Aug 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
Loving it - can't wait for more. Stupid question, but is Edward a vampire in this fic?
Author's Response:
Yes he is. It isn't a stupid question, I haven't made it explicit yet since this is BPOV and she is still in the dark.
Thanks for reading & reviewing,
Allie
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon. i'm waiting impatiently
Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
The only thing that confuses me is the title. It seems not to have anything to do with the story.
Author's Response:
The title is just kind of how Bella viewed them at the start of things, a pun on their sex in the office, but you are right as it progresses it doesn't fit as well. I am never very set on my titles because I often just come up with something so I can get the story out there, otherwise I would contemplate it all day.
If you have a suggestion I would love it. I might not change the main name since it already has followers but I would love a more fitting subtitle.
Thanks for reading,
Allie
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: Whatever You Like
I love this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, as you can tell by word count and the time delay it took some work. I was never very sure about the middle (the dancing scene,) but it makes a lot of sense with the EPOV as it is laid out now (music is very important to that side of the story.)
Thanks for reading and for the reviews!
-Allie
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say
What is Bella getting into now? Edward seems "needy"!
Author's Response:
Yeah, when you see it from his side you will see he has been dropping hints like mad that he wants this to be more than a fling; my Edward might not be a Twilight style vamp and he may act out of character but he is still Edward at heart.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 3: Lunacy, Loathing, and Lingerie
Jake is beyond stupid. Now, if he will just crawl back into the elevator and leave!
Author's Response:
The truth is I sort of love Jake (heck if my boyfriend of eight years is anyone in the series he is totally Jake, he is a goofy mechanical engineer that is two years younger than me), I just don't love the way my CW Jake reacts to this situation.
Even without an Edward to close off Bella's heart she was never in love with him the way he was with her and that broke his heart. Bella was the one that got away and he really thought that after being blown off, for the seventh time by his new girlfriend (who also is not in love with him,) he thinks he maybe should just go after the first girl he loved.
From what Jake had heard through Billy, Bella is just in NYC with a new job and no friends (which is basically true other than a coworker Angela and of course, Edward,) and he really thinks that maybe they could make it work, they are both at that point where they should settle, him for less love than he deserves and her for someone she was only ever good friends with really.
Finding her in lingerie waiting for her lover is a slap in the face; it is nothing she would have done for him.
I also appreciate the feeling of having a prior claim on someone and feeling like you have rights to them even after you part (I have felt that sort of jealously watching exs go out with someone new , even if I would deny it to them on my deathbed.)
-Allie
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: Leftovers.
Hmm...the ex is at the door!
Author's Response:
Yep.
The secret is I steal a lot from real life things that have happened to me or one of my friends. I did answer the door in lingerie expecting my boyfriend only to find one of my exs waiting there to give me a birthday present (okay it wasn't an engagement ring and we were good friends still so it wasn't this bad.)
It is actually a running joke in my life, me opening the door or looking through a window inappropriately/oddly/barely dressed to see someone I would never in my life hope sees me like that.
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Allie
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bondage and Boardrooms
This story is intriguing! I get the feeling that Edward's family is hoping that Bella is his "match"!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will try to keep it interesting in the chapters to come.
-Allie
Date: 29 Jun 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say
Excuse me, I am confused. Is Edward huiman or not? The summary had me puzzled, but in general I don't read All Human.
Author's Response:
He is a vampire, sorry it isn't clear. I didn't want for it to be obvious until it start becoming clear to her/he tells her. I am going to post his POV story in about a week. It starts before this story starts, basically right before she comes to work for the Cullens. You might be interested in that story too if you like non-human twific.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say
loving this so far. Update please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I shall update soon!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say
Great story! I love the humor!
Author's Response:
Thank you. The next chapter is a bit more lovey and lemony than funny, but I will definitely maintain Bella's sense of humor throughout. Wait until the gala...
Thanks for the review,
Allie
Date: 16 Jun 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Tell Me What You Want Me To Say
Great story. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
I'll try to keep updating weekly!
-Allie
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Lunacy, Loathing, and Lingerie
Keep the updates comin!
Author's Response:
I find I am accidentally being timely and updating weekly. It is so unlike me. I will try to continue being a planny non-procrastinating, deadline-meeting person that is completely at odds with usual me.
If you want snippets of future chapters or future stories and one shots, follow me on twitter.
Thanks for the review,
Allie
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bondage and Boardrooms
I would be interested in reading, but only if the story is supernatural. You marked it AU.If it was All Human you should have marked it AH. Please let me know
Author's Response:
It is not All Human, hence the not marking. I will be adding some chapters today and tomorrow that make it clear all is not completely right (or human,) with the Cullen family. Though they are slightly different from Twi-vamps, they are some amalgam of many of my favorite vampire lore[including those in the work of She Who Shall Not Be Fanfictioned (hint: New Orleans.)] I just wanted to tell you in case you are expecting any diamond faceted skin. They could get away with that in Forks but in New York City- not so much.
Thanks for the interest!
-Allie
p.s. I am also writing an Edward point of view, which begins before they meet and goes into the details of how they live as vampires/the rules of vampires in my world, as it might be awhile before Bella finds out in my story. That is still being worked on and I probably won't be posting any EPOV until next week
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bondage and Boardrooms
I love your story. Some Bella's annoy me, but I love yours. Looking forward to knowing Edward and the rest of the story. Well done!
Author's Response:
I love the books but *braces self for fangirl hate* original Bella got annoying to me sometimes. I wanted to make her more real, more like a girl I would want to be friends with, so thank you!
-Allie