Date: 08 Jul 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
They sure didn't get off lightly, even though the wounded will live. Poor Carlisle, paralyzed for the rest of his days and Edward walking with a cane, perhaps always! I want to hear that crazy Irina is dead and hope that Tanya will soon follow and maybe even Charlie!
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank heaven they found Bella in time! Good thing Alistair was along, too! I agree with Edward about keeping her and the twins out of reach of Jake. About the pictures of Bella disappearing from the apartments, that reeks of someone from the hotel, like Tanya maybe? She is going to be really sorry if she did that to Edward's love! I wouldn't put it past her to even conspire with Black! Hell, maybe Irina showed up! I'm ready to believe anything now!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Not exactly pleasant, but I am aware the disloyalty is a cardinal sin in their line of work! It was kind of sweet that Esme waited up for the guys to get home, and made sure that they were hydrated before they went to bed!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now Carlisle has joined the club, the one that wants to put Jacob Black in the ground! He was furious when he heard what Jake had done, as it caused him to put two and two together and get five! Edward is really starting to get his hopes up about what Bella will be to him and to his kids!
Date: 28 Jun 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
A few comments:
A) I too grew up in SC (Lexington) & currently live just north of Charlotte, NC. Although I love to visit Charleston, I could never live there bc I'm terrified of the Cooper River bridge!!! I still vividly (a little too vividly) remember the old shabby one!!! I was traveling on it during the Christmas Eve snow storm the same year Hugo came thru!!! When it was the only way into & off of Mt Pleasant-1 lane each way!!! :(
B) The farm my family owns has wild boars on it and they are nasty, mean little devils!! :)
C) My guess is that it was Tanya in the apartment! She's either delusionally jealous and thought she could make it like Bella "never existed" by removing her pics (as if!!!) OR she's working with Black &/or Charlie.
D) Now the last thing that is puzzling to me is Billy's comment to Jacob about messing with Bella. It would seem logical the he would be "in" on whatever Jacob and Charlie have going on but from his reaction, maybe not.
I guess we'll all know soon!
Author's Response: No freakin way!!!!! I went to Lexington hs, and live in Gilbert right now. Holy cow, small world. Lived in lex all my life. That bridge freaks me out sometimes too, but I love the new bridge down there. I was really little when Hugo hit. My mom tells me I slept through the whole thing. Lol I've heard stories about wild pigs, none of them are good. Tanya's an evil wiatch. Plain and simple. Lol Billy's trying to stay out of it. He doesn't want to see anything happen to a woman, especially his friend's daughter, even though Charlie is shitty to her
Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have no problem with the chemistry! I just have difficulty with the time line and that if they loved her so much they wouldn't have stayed away so long that is all. I know you explained but you would thing after a couple of years or when they were teenagers they could have gotten her. I do like the story I am not trying to be difficult.
Date: 25 Apr 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Excelllent but lots of loose ends still out there...like sex? Bellas fertility?
Author's Response: We're getting there, and very soon. It's just taking me FOREVER to get this next chapter written. But I promise, it'll be soon. And who doesn't love sexy times with Edward in any story? Lol Amy:)
Date: 01 Apr 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awww, that was so lovely and perfect. I love bouncy castles, they're so much fun, I'd be the same as Edward and want to go on it, lol. I'm glad that life seems to be getting back on track for them all, well as much as it can given their injuries.