Date: 28 Apr 2022 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm definitely going to attempt a few of these!
Thank you!!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2022 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for this beautiful journey. It's special to me since I've loved older men and had even fallen in love with my boss. Well done.
Date: 27 Apr 2022 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was imagining them in the UK, outside London mainly.
Date: 27 Apr 2022 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bwahahaha!
Well that answered my question about her not eating meat!
Date: 27 Apr 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is definitely a control freak, what with the uniform and now no ponytail? Perhaps she wants to keep it out of her face while she works??
And when she eats dinner, I notice she never eats meat. She only ever eats the starches and veggies. Is this because she's vegetarian or because she doesn't want to eat the meat he pays for because she feels its expensive?
Date: 27 Apr 2022 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hhhhmmmmm...........interesting that he never made Mrs. Whitlock wear a uniform.
Just sayin'...........
Date: 27 Apr 2022 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can you say DICK??!!!
Geesh..... talk about an ego!
Date: 27 Apr 2022 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well Edward is certainly a mystery at this point!
Thank God for TBR lists and RobAttack or else I would have missed this. ;)
Date: 22 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wonderful story! Thank you so much.
Date: 22 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wonderful story! Thank you so much.
Date: 20 Apr 2020 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just stumbeld across your story and read it in less than 24. I really loved it, thanks for sharing it!
Date: 04 Nov 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
thanks for sharing this great little story with us here ;D
Date: 26 Sep 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Is Edward a Dom??????????????????
Date: 29 Aug 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) loved this story
Date: 05 Jun 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
This story was so much fun. I definitely enjoyed it. If you ever decide to do an outtake I would love to see the meeting with Charlie.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is a slow burn as well. I have so many questions as to what Edward does all day long.
Also I would loved to have the receipes for all this deliciously sounding foods that she makes for him.
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
Nice place to leave it, I guess. I'm sure Bella will say yes to Edward's proposal and they'll marry before she starts her masters program. I see them having a very happy life together for many, many years. You just had a special touch with this story and it was one of the best I've ever read, thank you !
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you so much for writing this end the way you did. It's so nice to not have the angst and agony that could have gone on in their lives. This has been one of my very favorite Edward and Bella pairing.
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
So they finally spit out those words! About time, too, when even his family can see they love each other! If Bella makes him stop paying her, I wonder what he'll come up with to compensate?
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Since I like Edward, I guess it's not surprising that I like his family, too. They all like Bella which is great. She will fit right in when she and Edward marry, which I think they should!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
Okay, I see where this is headed and I couldn't be happier to see them grow closer. Who knows, they may even get around to saying,"I love you" soon. It will be interesting to see how his family accepts her!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh goody, goody, I hope they will never be done with one another! They are so great together and the sex is wonderful!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh boy! was it ever worth waiting for! I kind of had an idea they would be this good together, and Yessir, I was correct!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
I should hope to shout! It's time, and past time, as far as Bella is concerned!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad they got all that out in the open , talked about his misgivings and her certainties. Had a feeling his background had some sadness in it. It was so touching when he told her he's never had a happy day in that house until she arrived!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so encouraged by how this is going! It sounded to me like Mr. Cullen isn't happy at the thought of Bella leaving him in the fall to go back to school. Their increasingly shared dinners are also looking promising!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Alice and Bella sure had a good weekend, Mr. Cullen not so much. That's so sweet that he thought the house was too quiet without her in it! Considering how he cherishes his peace and quiet, that's a huge admission!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Could it have been the oysters? That was perfect for a first kiss! I'm really liking this story, the pace is just right. Romance is always sweeter than rampant casual sex! Not that there's anything wrong with that!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved that he seemed a bit concerned about the difference in their ages. Dare she begin to hope that he may have feelings for her?
Date: 07 Jun 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Right now I would be curious as to why Bella can't find any information on Edward Cullen. Also curious about his growing affection for his employee.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes, Mr. Cullen is definitely a tease, so it's a good thing Bella can hold her own with him. They both seem to enjoy each other's wit and sense of humor. Now if she could divine if her feelings for him are reciprocated, all would be well.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tell me why he shouldn't be happy, he's got things just the way he likes them and all is well in the household! Sounds like a perfect situation to me!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
I kind of wondered if Bella might not be a vegetaian, as you never wrote her eating some of the delicious meats she prepared for her boss. He really is a sweetie, buying that bicycle for her to use. No wonder she hugged him in thanks! Interesting that he hugged back!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
I must be honest, I was hoping that Mr. Cullen would offer Bella a place to live for the summer! How cool is that? Now, if she can just be a quiet little mouse, they should get along well!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder what went wrong with the lemon pound cake? Mr. Cullen has been very nice to Bella the past several days and I'm beginning to think there may be something about to change in the equation! One can always hope!
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really can't see what Mrs. Whitlock was so upset about, since Mr. Cullen has been an exemplary employer, so far. It was very nice of him to offer Bella a ride back to school, and a ride to work tomorrow.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
So far so good. Bella really made points with that rhubarb pie, how nice that it was her dad's favorite, and her employer's! By the way, your meal descriptions are making me hungry, think I'll go make lunch! The uniform deal was surprising, in a way.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
That went pretty well for the first day of work. He doesn't seem too bad of an employer, so far! Since he really liked his dinner, that's a good sign, as well as the offer to lend books. The little misstep about staying in the kitchen seemed to be no big problem.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Pretty big house for one person, but to each his own! Wonder what made Mr. Cullen become so demanding that his housekeeper couldn't stand it any more? And why would Bella look forward working for him with anticipation?
Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds to me as if our Mr. Cullen is rather set in his ways. Bella can hold her own with him so far, so this should be interesting.
Date: 05 May 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Such a cute story. My favorite part of fanfic stories is the time from boy-meets-girl to the time when they realize/admit they have feelings beyond friendship. You wrote it so well...the slow build-up between these two. Then you did a great job with the unleashing of their passion. The title was perfect. I like the way you finished it.
However, I could also enjoy a sequel, if you get the urge one day to revisit these two. Thanks for writing.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great job w/Epov!!
:)
Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful Story. You held me to the very end and I enjoy every last lemon:)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the recipes. Is great to have them. I will think you you and your Edward and Bella when I read them.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great story. I love it and how their relationship evolved. I'm glad you explained so much of why they did thing a certain way and also had each of them grow and change.
Great job!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great story. It has me intrigued and enjoying this unique May/Dec romance
Date: 12 Aug 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
loved this story , thank you
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow!!!! I loved this story, I only wish we could have read about their wedding and them have kids. Simply amazing.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this delicious story. The UST was off the charts (my kind of slow burn, indeed); Edward was just the right combination of mysterious, dominating and possessive (without crossing into creepy or pathological); Alice was lively, not crazed; and Bella managed to be sweet but not sacharine, smart and indepedent without being jaded. You write so well that I never found myself wishing there were more characters or environments introduced. You have my sincere gratitude for not creating some ridiculous, melodramatic calamity from left field that they must overcome; instead, you trusted your characters' internal conflicts to be enough... yet another sign of a superior author. So again, thank you very much for one of the best reads I've enjoyed in quite some time. And if I ever get to enjoy meals similar to dinnertime chez Cullen, I will never complain about slaving away at a hot stove again.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
So worth the wait!!! What a great payoff for all the building tension...
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
With all the build up - that simple kiss was hotter than most full-on sex scenes... Great job!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the slow build up! I hate when stories go from two people to being deeply in love in 2-3 chapters.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful story, loved it, a quick read and not to much suspense.
Going to see what else you have written.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
this story is fantastic .i could not stop reading until i was done .you are to be praised for your talent on writing this well written story
Date: 11 Jul 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Best story ever. Thank you so much!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can't put into words how much I enjoyed reading this wonderful story! I was hooked after the first chapter and couldn't stop reading it till I was finished. Will there be a future outake (fingers crossed)? They are such a lovely couple and so in love and age is only a problem if you let it. The old say "Love knows no bound" is so true with this couple. I will truly miss reading this. Thankyou
Date: 01 Jul 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
This story really held my attention and I have loved reading it again. Thanks for sharing this wonderful tale which has become one of my favourites ever.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for the recipes...they sound yummy!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think my family will enjoy it!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for this fun little journey.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
fab chapter perfect ending.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love your Miss Swan and Mr Cullen so much, I'm going to be reading this over and again so many times !
I'm glad they get to be happy together and no, they don't need more drama in their lives. I wouldn't mind visiting them in a few years time, once Bella has finished college, just to see how they are doing and how she fits working for a living, into her life with Edward and both of their families.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
fab chapter.their so perfect together.update soon
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lovely story, will be sad to see it end.. Have you on alerts for future stories!! Chow sweetness xo
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
It saddens me to admit you are correct about ending it here. I truly enjoyed reading your story, thank you for sharing!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
aww they said the l word.fab chapter that was so romantic.update soon
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
I really, really liked how sweet he was when he offered to go home with her if she doesn't get accepted at the school.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Crazy....everytime you all post a chapter were all happy. This wad good. All out on the open.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
You capture an incredible sensuality in the beginning of the chapter through the medium of food, moreso than I've ever read in any stories even those about the restaurant industry.
I'm eager to see what happens when Bella can't devote her full attention to satisfying her job description. It's easy to "say" but will it be enough?
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wonderful! So happy they spoke their love aloud.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lovely visit with the family. Glad his brothers warmed to Bella.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
fab chapter.glad meeting his family went well.update soon
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
The dynamic of this relationship still has some strange undertones.... We still don't know what Mr. Cullen really does for a living besides what he's told Bella and I'm sure there will be firworks when his brother realize their relationship.
Could make for an interesting plot line.....
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love your story! vry sexy and sweet. keep writing please -October :)
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Can't wait til family arrives. Great chap
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favourite stories I am loving it. Look forward to next update.x
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
aww their so good together.fab chapter.wonder if alice will meet his brothers.update soon
Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow that was scorching.fab chapter.they are defo falling hard for each other.update soon
Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
fab chapter the perfect first time that was so hot.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
*swoons* What a spectacular evening!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ok I didn't want to revise till I was done reading all if what you had. Claps all around...lol. I love this one. At first I thought he was a dom but looks like hes not. Even though I think he still might be hiding something. But this is a great story. Please keep posting. Sad how ff.net keeps kicking you guys off. But its our awesome story to read.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was hot. I wonder when will she be able to call him Edward outside of the bedroom. Great chapter :)
Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
I know I'm not. Sexxy Yumm
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, maybe I'll be your "100th" review!!!! Maybe!! lol Well, it was about time!! Edward finally was done fighting his demons...Nice chapter!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
FINALYYY:)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
DAAAMMMN gurl you got a gift. That was so intense and HOTT!. very much worth the wait. "I just can't quit you" thanx fic luva!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yay, finally!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. That was kinda perfect for them
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Damn that was hot. Great chapter and I cant wait to read more and see how they try and adjust now that they are intimate. Update soon :)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
BDSM story or not this is really good. I like the direction Edward and Bella's relationship is taking. More soon please!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really like this story, but I have a feeling there is something dark or sercetive that's about to be discovered......
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Such a conflicted, tortured soul u are Mr. Cullen
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
aww i was disapointed to read that it wasnt a BDSM story but i still love it anyways. cant wait to continue reading :)