Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Love the update
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Wonderful to see your new chapter. I have missed this wonderful story. Love the storyline, love the characters. Thank you - Cheri
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Cancer sucks. Too many friends.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
poor sick b.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
He is taking such good care of her :)
Date: 27 Sep 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I WAS A LITTLE SAD ABOUT THE NEGATIVE PREGNANCY TEST BUT HOPEFULY SOON THEY CAN BE BLESSED WITH A LOVING BUNDLE OF JOY.......HMMMMMMMMMM
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Maggie :-(
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Oh wow, I loved it! I am happy she isn't pregnant, but sad she got the flu. I have already donated, so I am excited :D
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Thank you!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I'm glad Bella isn't pregnant. Even though Edward would have been happy, Bella is still young and they haven't even said the ILY's yet, so a baby right now wouldn't have been a good thing. So now the kids at school think Edward and Carlisle are her brothers. I would have loved to been Charlotte hearing all the damn gossip. It's good that Bella has a friend, her age, to talk to. Maggie is a pain in the ass. Edward needs to kick her to the curb, now!
My thoughts and prayers go out to Katalina and her family.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Love it!! XD can't wait for the next update!!:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Well Maggie needs a swift kick in the ass, she is so going to be trouble for this young bride. Glad they decided to wait for a baby, enough to handle right now. Can't wait to read the fallout at school! Great story
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
:)
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
I'm glad to see this update in my inbox today! I love this story! Maggie needs to go away and get that she's lost any chance with Edward! At least I hope she has....I was kind of disappointed that Bella wasn't pregnant but guess it's for the best....So the whole school knows about her "brothers" now, do they? Wonder what repercussions that will have?
I hope your book of Breach gets published soon. I am dying to own it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
loved this!
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Great update.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
just found story love it one of my all time fav keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I love this story. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter :) Don't make me run out of oxygen! ;) heehee!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Update soon!!!! PLEASE
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Wow So far pretty Awesome I look forward to reading more and have added this to my favs.
~Jennifer
Date: 07 Sep 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
When are you going to update, it has been a long while.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
wow! they are not wasting any time. i didn't think they'd get that far in one night. but i was having a hard time imagining edward waiting for bella to warm up to him....
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
ok. i take it all back. i'm completely willing to live in your fantasy. it's different from others where the much-older edward is a dominant force who always controls bella somehow. your edward is experienced but charming. he didn't stalk this innocent high school student. i think edward's very sweet.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
why is edward so sad? did he fall for bella right away? i'm just trying to figure out what kind of emotional attachment a very debonair 31-year-old could form for a very innocent 18-year-old....but for the sake of fanfiction, i'll go with it. :)
Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Save a horse, ride Edward!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Good chapter! There is no "barrier" though. If there was, menstruation would be impossible. The pain comes from being improperly prepared. :) Glad they are trying.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Edward needs to deactivate all the cards. They can all call to be let into the house, except maybe Tanya since she makes breakfast in the morning and gets there real early. Sam can remotely access the property, so it would not be a problem. They need privacy and those people have no boundaries. Edward also needs to cut all ties to Maggie, even professionally. She sounds like she would be vindictive and try something if she had Edward alone. If Maggie thinks she is such a good actress, she can find her own work.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Ch 18
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Really great chapter!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I ahte Maggie already...
Mr Cullen is one sexy man :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I am really enjoying this story and I cant wait for the next update. They are really cute together but I am sure that they are going to hit bumpy roads soon.
Regards
Fiorella
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Damn you have some awesome lemons. lol.
I love me a possesive Edward and a dominant one too.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Love both of your stories. Still don't know what the voting process is for Kismet, but I'd would like to vote....
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I just want to say how much I am enjoying your story. Love older Edward and younger Bella stories. Thank you - Cheri
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I guess there weren't going to let that interruption get in the way of there time together. I have a feeling we know who is going to "out" them now.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Wow, the ex is a raging bitch. I almost wish Edward hadn't held Bella back. That could have been very interesting.
I can't wait for them to realize they are truly in love with each other. I mean you've done a great job portraying it so I know all of us readers can see it :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
must be so frustrating that everyone, is giving them a hard time......
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I don't have any hope for them staying together. He does not love her and too many people are involved.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Interesting story. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
I'm so glad that Edward put Maggie in her place and gave her her marching orders. It does seem like they're always being interrupted, I think Edward needs to put some boundaries in place for when he's at home with Bella and not supposed to be working. Now he's married people shouldn't expect to be able to come and go like they did when he was single.
Loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Great chapter.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Love the chapter
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
KUDOS ON YOUR FIRST .....WELL DONE
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
It was nice to see Maggie turned away so handily, but I have a feeling she'll be baaaack!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
SO AMAZING! I really loved it! I think that Maggie or Lauren may be the one to rat them out. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Ah the psycho ex appears. Ugh Lauren is such a skank.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Seriously Edward? If you didn't have Bella you would have gotten back together with Maggie? *shakes head* Well that doesn't say much for your intellgience quotient.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
wonder what kind of trouble maggie is going to cause and maybe is she and lauren will conive together
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Great chapter. They still dont feel like they love each other yet? They are awfully attached at the hip to not be, just physical attraction? Seems like more to me.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Love it
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Wow! I wonder what else will be coming out of the workwork. I feel bad for Bella, it is like they have no personnel space. Love this story to pieces and I can wait for the nexr chapter.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
MAGGIE SOUNDS LIKE TROUBLE, I HOPE SHE WON'TT SPILL THE BEANS OF THEIR MARRIAGE
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Ha!!! That was amazing cant wait for more thank you
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Loved it
Date: 17 Aug 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Interesting meeting. I love a confident Bella.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
So sorry for your loss, 96 that's impressive, I bet she had a lot of great stories and history to share.
Thanks for the update, loved it.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
*MOOTCHES*
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
a lot of fun on a sunday. laughs, and sweetness.
good luck in the contest :) and sorry about your grannie :(
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
hot damn!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
i wondered what ed thought of the uniform... guess now we know lol
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
school is gonna be interesting. sad for bella and ed that they have to be apart...
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
that was too funny!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
not sure about a baby for these two yet....
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
heehee eddie fell off the treadmill! but bella made it all better...
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
carl was an ass. wonder what eddie will think when he finds her in her room?
Date: 06 Aug 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Love this story. It quickly became one of my favorites.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
a little history and a few surprises for bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
aww he took good care of her.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
aww
Date: 06 Aug 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
oh boy poor bella!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
that was fucked up! but i guess it had to be for the story to continue...
Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Sorry for your loss, wish you all the best.
I love this story and hope that your updates will be constant, do you have a particular time between updates. If so, when will be expect the next one?
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
awww... they are both sad...
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
oh boy! gonna be an interesting morning...
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
sounds like a pretty awesome day
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
vegas would kinda suck being only 18...
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I'm terribly sorry for your loss. My best wishes for you and your family during this time.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Omg I'm living this story I can't wait to read more
Hope you up date soon
Date: 01 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Hi. I am sorry about your grandmother, my condolences.
What happened to Bella's gyn appointment that Esme fixed for her? That is something I really want to know what is going to happen to.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
LLove i
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Who knew that cookies could provoke such feelings, lol. It doesn't matter how old men get once they get together they always revert to being little boys, hahahaha! Bella likes Emmett even though he nearly scared her witless.
I get the feeling that Edward and Bella are getting close to their 'I love you's' they're certainly getting to know each other a lot more definitely getting closer.
I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. It's so hard to go through a loved ones possessions, bittersweet hearing all the stories and memories attached. I hope, eventually, that you can take comfort in those stories and memories and know that your grandmother loved you and still does, she'll be watching over you.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Lol, Edward is such a dirty perv, I effin love him.
I'm glad that things went well with Charlotte for Bella everyone needs a good friend. Who is her dad anyway?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
So Edward's a bit of a Dom. Can you be a bit of a Dom or is it and all or nothing type deal? Lol. Doesn't really matter Bella loved it and so did I, that was effin hot, phew! I thought Edward had seen her uniform, but obviously not.
Will Bella tell Edward that she's going to tell Charlotte about them? Bella's right she does have to off load on someone and she needs friends her own age to do that with and also to have fun with.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
Well oh my God! I never expected Carlisle to be teaching at the school. I know Esme's trying to get them to get to know each other but you really can't force something like this. This could serriously have put Bella on the back foot but luckily she rose to the challenge and shot Carlisle down in flames, but then this could just anger him more, he might feel that she was trying to make a fool out of him. Families....who'd have 'em? Lol.
I'm liking Charlotte, she seems nice and I'm wondering if Bella feels a little bit bad for lying to her and whether she'll come clean? Emily seems stuck up and out for what she can get, not a genuine person at all.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
So is the decision made for Bella? Fate didn't make her pregnant will she see this as a sign that now is not the right time or will she continue with her and Edward's game of Russian Roulette? Hmmm.
What will be her story at school? I take it that she's not going to be telling her new friends she's married right of the bat or who she's married to.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
Three weeks eh? Well if she's not pregnant by then I think she should use some contraception and at least finish high school. I like that Edward didn't freak and that he wants a family. He's probably more open and ready for it being older but I think Bella should give it some very careful thought, like she said it's a decision that could alter her life forever.
Eric's so funny, such a drama queen. Will he visit soon?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Contraception Bella!!!!! Oh my God has she forgotten this one thing that she remembered the day before when speaking to her mum? She was worried about being married at 18 and still in high school, well what about being married at 18, still in high school and pregnant? Talk about all or nothing. We've seen that Edward loves kids and Bella does too, but do they really want their own little rugrat 40 weeks and 1 day after their wedding? I would have thought they'd like more time to get to know each other and that Bella might actually want to go to and finish college. So again, CONTRACEPTION BELLA!!!!
I realise this isn't just Bella's responsibility and with Edward's past you'd have thought he might have asked but then he is a guy and he's not the one that will have to carry a baby for nine months and then push it out of that very small opening, lol. *eyes watering at the memory*
I thought Alice's speech was very apt and I like that way that Bella can see what's happened from others points of view. Lol, Edward fell off the running machine at the sight of his wife in a bikini, all dripping wet, hahahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Carlisle said some awful things to his brother, I hope that Esme can talk some sense into him. He doesn't have to love Bella straightaway but he does have to be at least civil to her and give her a chance to prove herself and Edward a chance to show him that they are soul mates.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
I love Alice and the way she looks after Edward. Lol, Bella was so shocked at seeing all those movie posters of Edwards, now I know why Edward was telling Carlisle that Bella didn't have a clue who he was. Now will Carlisle fall for Bella's charms or is he going to be the fly in the ointment?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Awww, they're just so hot and lovely together. Everything will work itself out in time. I hope they can keep the paps at bay though.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I am sorry about your grnadmother.
I just happened to find this story and boy am I glad I did. It is awesome and different form other stories I have read.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Just found this story today and read it all! What a blast! There are so many parts and events I'm anxious to read - when they go public, Eric's visit, all the fun they can have trying to hide the truth. Oh...and Charlie. THAT should be a hoot!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Okay, it's official, my bag's packed and I'm moving in with Edward, lol. Edward and Esme are like big kids, appearing out of nowhere and then fighting over the phone, hahaha!! I get the feeling that even though there'll be ups and downs, getting to know each other is going to be so much fun.
I love this story.
Jane x
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
sweet chapter. Gotta love cookies. Will be sure to vote for ya hun