Date: 21 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
This just gets more like Alice In Wonderland than Wizard of Oz!
Date: 21 May 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Pretty damn amazing, and within the realm of possibility! Can't wait until she springs the big surprise on him! Her mother is sure not the usual model, much more iof a free spirit!
Date: 21 May 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Bella may have tried to do the right thing but it doesn't seem to have made Edward or her very happy. Kind of makes me sad, too!
Date: 21 May 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
A shining example of why young girls should not drink too much champagne! What has Bella gone and done?
Date: 21 May 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
Guess she made that impression that I wondered about! What a great day, possibly leading to a great dinner! Also kind of sad that a complete stranger would be more considerate that her mother!
Date: 21 May 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Edward has made quite an impression on Bella; makes me wonder if the reverse is true?
Date: 17 May 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Please finish your story....
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
I hope you finish th s story, i really enjoy it and would love to know their HEA
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Please come back! I love this story
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
I Never get enough of this story.
love it and cant wait for more.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother. Losing a loved one is not easy. I hope you and your family start healing soon.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Thanks for not quitting, I really like this story!!
Date: 08 Dec 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
loved it!
Date: 28 Nov 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
You are simply amazing. I appreciate that your story isn't too outlandish and can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Wow, just found your work. Couldn't put this one down. Now time to go check out your other stuff. Hope to see an update to this one soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Loved it
Can't wait forthe next up date
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Such a fabulous story! I stared it long ago, but your update gave me a chance to go back and read it again. These two are wonderfully developed and so exciting from Chapter 1. Thanks for coming back to it and sharing all your hard work with us!
Date: 07 Nov 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
I sure hope their wasn't one of those creeps with long range lens that can take pictures of you a mile away. Prince William and Kate made that mistake on a sailboat vacation.
Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
poor girl was attacked by that ass hole to bad she didnt break his foot. Edward will take care of her.
Date: 06 Nov 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Still going good can not wait to see what is next!
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
God, this is so good, really enjoying it.
Date: 06 Nov 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Love this story it just keeps getting better and better
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Wonderful to see you back I have truly missed this story! That being said great chapter and can't wait to read more about their vacation. XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY THE WAY EDWARD IS ALWAYS TAKING CARE OS BELLA AS BEST AS HE CAN AND NOW THEY ARE ON VACATION I HOPE WE GET TO READ MORE ABOUT THE THINGS THEY DO ON THIS VACATION.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
So glad to see another chapter of this great story
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
;-)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Loved it :)
Date: 04 Nov 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Aww I loved the chapter!! :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Oh wow, a holiday, I want to go to, lol. I'm glad Bella fought back when she was trying to buy her snack, what these paps get up to is ridiculous. Now what I really want to know is will Edward make Bella walk the plank? Hahahaha, or even vice versa. With Edward wanting to keep Bella's school uniform maybe he has a pirate fantasy, let's just hope he doesn't have a Titanic fantasy although, that could lead nicely into a shipwrecked fantasy but let's not go down the Lost route. Oh my God, what have you done to me? Lol. I can't wait for more, I've missed this story.
Jane x
Date: 03 Nov 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Yes they need light and fluffy for a bit. It will help keep them on track emotionally.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
It seems like forever and ago that you last updated! I actually squealed in a roomful of coworkers last night! Enjoyed this update and awaiting more! ;-)
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
I was pleased to see an update. I like the way Bella handled the pap. Edward and Bella need a vacation. This time away is long overdue.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
How lovely to have an update - I love this story.
I want her to finish that score.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Wow! They're going great, but I have a feeling there is something going to happen!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Fantastic chapter.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Love that they got away
Date: 03 Nov 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
loved it
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
jeez the paps can be impossible!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
wow!
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
So nice to get a new chapter from you....I appreciate it tremendously. I have followed and loved this story from the very beginning....
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
good :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
How awesome. Good job Edward.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Welcome back! Great chapter as always...
Date: 30 Oct 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
loveeee this story, cant wait for the nex chapter!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
I hope you finish this story!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Update soon please, I miss them.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
I really like your story and was wondering if you planned on updating or even finishing your story. It hasn't been updated in a long time.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
i'm so happy you're continuing this story!! i've been waiting for so long!! this story is my absolute favorite and i can't wait to read whats next!!! thank you for going back to this fic!!!
love
Sarra, Paris, France.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
love it
Date: 11 Aug 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Thanks for the update! Their out;-)
Date: 09 Aug 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Awww. I am all caught up and must now wait for updates like everyone else. Loving this!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
need more need more please
Jukie
Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
wow!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Poor Bella...that really sucks how people are so mean
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Crazy!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Oh boy...it is going to be rough!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
Gotta love the in-laws. NOT!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
Wow!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Hope it works
Date: 03 Aug 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
The prom would be way awkward
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Glad they talked
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
Okay I like Carlisle now!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Our End?
Knew it was coming...
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall
Sad....very sad
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks
:( he is not being sweet
Date: 03 Aug 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Not good :(
Date: 03 Aug 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Poor Edward how terrible!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Humm...something has to give!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Poor Bella...
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Maggie is trouble!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Em is sweet as ever..let me guess the diva is rose!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Charlotte is right,,,lucky bitch!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
Dang....I need a shower
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
Carlisle...what an ass! Glad she made friends
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
No baby....yet
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
Yeah she already is...
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Oh jasper....yummm...
ed and Bella freaking HOT!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Wow Carlisle is a disappointment! He was so hot in the fist two movies and then I dont know what happened to him :(
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Oh I have bad feelings....something bad s going to happen :(
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Wow, she is so damn lucky...good V- lemon...
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Nice house but looks so cold and unlived in :(
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
Oh. Boy Alice and wonderland at its finest!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Wow!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Why the change of heart?
Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
Woah! Is he crazy!? Hell I would be lie okay too though! Bella is so dang lucky!
Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
He seems real sweet
Date: 03 Aug 2013 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Interesting lets see where it goes! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
That was so good please post more really soon. :)
Date: 02 Aug 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Oh god! Edward is such a sweetheart!
Felix needs to get something bad happen to him!
Can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
I'm glad that Bella was able to make everything right with her friends. All those girls are so jealous, it's going to take a good while for some of them to get over themselves. There's no excuse for how Felix reacted and that note he sent her, he's obviously bitter that he's not going to get his chance with Bella. I hope none of these kids turn psycho on them.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Hahahahaha!! I loved Bella's reaction to being pointed out in the audience at the awards, lol, I think I would have been under the seat if it were possible. I think that went perfectly for the both of them but Bella's right to be wary, there are going to be some very unhappy and jealous people out there that will be quick to give their opinions and start rumours and lies. Edward was right that she shouldn't read, watch or listen to anything about the two of them, sometimes though that's easier said than done. I just hope their bubble is burst too quickly.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Yikes! I hope his moma whoops Felix's hide.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
Fabulous story. Love it, and look forward to more.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
I feel so bad for Bella. I am glad that the principal actually saw some of what Bella had to face. It is pretty funny that it was her son. He is not going to have a good life for awhile.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
I don't think I could handle school uniforms
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
Bella, I know how you feel, ugh!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
I don't think I like those odds