Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
YAY! I found it so happy!! Hopefully you can update to where I was up to! I absolutely loveeeee this story awesomeness that I finally found it :D
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
Truly enjoying this story. I came across it while it was featured. It really has me wondering about his family life and Carlisle's response.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
I am so enjoying your story! Thank you!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
It would seem that it would be easier if Bella got her GED or took classes online to get her diploma. At least they would not have to have her going to highschool and being harrassed anymore than she will be anyway. I hope everything works out for them and hopefully the "I Love You" will not be to far away. I love the story and hope you update soon!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
another great chapter, the girl needes to get back to school or atleast finish high school before having a baby. been there done that its hard being prego and still be in school. cant wait to read more...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
:)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
OH WOW...SO amazing! I really loved it! So...do you have any specifications for Edward? ;) Hehe. Anyway, cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
oooh first fight and make up . YUM. roulette indeed.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
if you are then you can adapt, like everyone else.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
Edward iss such a man,shout,splutter and scream first, Ask,find out and grovel second lol.
update soon please xx
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Interesting story.At the first glance the subject mimics stories that come across every time in real life media.But, at a closer look,I find this story refreshing,maybe because of the tone, or the way the words are written.It doesn`t matter in the end.The result is amazing.Keep writing.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
love it continue
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
wow i can completely understand her enjoying his company and attention. her mother is such a loser!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
hmm i've been meaning to read this for a couple of days now but have only just begun. what an interesting start. looking forward to seeing what's ahead.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Loving the story! I can't wait to see where it goes.
Still, when will she get proactive about the birth control thing? I can't imagine she's ready to be pregnant while still in high school. Oh! and what about school? If her birthday has just past it must be late September or October by now right? When will she go back to school?
Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Almost catching up to the point we left off over on ffn.net. I'm excited to read more chapters :)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
I am so into this story and look forward to next update.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Hot Damn that was a great lemon.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
OH WOW...AMAZING :D
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
i love it
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Love Alice...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
And quite a tangy one.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
love it update soon please xx
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
Note to self stop reading this an inappropriate times i.e in class watching a documentary about the Great Depression... hehe... I laughed at this part at the wrong time:
“Go make your own, Cullen. Word has it you have a wife now. Knock her up!” an unfamiliar blond man said. It was then he seemed to notice me in the doorway, his eyebrows rising in surprise. “Oh, you must be said wife. Sorry for interrupting your child making activities this morning. My wife is an earlier riser.” Crossing the room, he held out his hand and I stepped forward to take it. “Jasper Whitlock, pleasure to meet the woman who has captured our fair Edward.”
“Ass,” Edward snorted, earning a smack on the arm from Esme.
“Language!” she chastised, then promptly returned her attention back to her laptop.
“Ass!” Ari imitated and Edward groaned.
“No, Ari, that’s a bad word. You shouldn’t say that word or Mommy might spank you.”
Alice let out an exasperated sigh. “Why do you always make me out to be the villain?”
“Because thanks to you he has blue balls,” Jasper snorted and turned his attention back to me and smiled. “Anyway, welcome to our kooky family Bella. Now, if you wouldn’t mind, could you pry my child out of your husband’s arms so I can steal him away for business?”
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
Great story so far. The part that had myself cracking was:
“It involves lots of money, I can tell that much.”
“And you have an aversion to money?”
“That I didn’t earn? Yes.”
“You are a strange girl. Aren’t you supposed to be wanting to be Kim Kardashian?”
“I’d rather be the barista at Starbucks,” I grumbled with a roll of my eyes.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Like the house...not too over the top.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Am looking forward to reading more of this story.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
LOVE jasper. ROFL for treadmill
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Oh these two.i <3 them.and btw I kinda recognize that pic there@ the end!love it!:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
wow carlisle is being a wanker
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Alice is such a blast
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
woo hoo for thier and her first time.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
:)
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Great story, I am enjoying this wonderful story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
love this storie followed you from ff.net
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Loved it!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
:)
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Oh wow...I don't like Carlisle right now...grr. Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
SO amazing :D
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Gah, so amazing :D Love this story :D
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
Love this.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
Glad you moive to TWCS.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Hi hun as you know i already love this story i feel like a stalker as followed you and others over here from FF due to the grief over stories there x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Hell, somebody pinch me and I'm just reading, LOL.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
I am sad that you can't post no more on fanfiction but I have found you You are amazing writer please continue can't wait for what happens next
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Loving the story so far!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
More please. This is great. Just promise me this is a HEA story! Reality is a bit much for anything else right now.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
So awesome as always
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
I just started reading this a while ago and I found myself hooked.
Although, I do know of Renee being erratic, I was a bit shocked that she just agreed to letting Bella stay married to Edward.
Then again, she's of legal age.:P
I hope to read more about your Bella and Edward.:)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
Not in Kansas indeed.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
i really like the story so far, please update soon!!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
:)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
I love this story! I followed you over here :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
:)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Hi,i've followed your story on FF and i hope to read ch.15 soon
This story has captivated me,love the naughty Carlisle,hope to read more soon
Keep up your good writing,fantastic story
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Great story
:-)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
nice pictures of the house! this is my favorite chapter yet! how often will you update?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
no sex yet? damn...
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
ok. well then....this is cute, funny, and a bit sexy. Lemons coming?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
really? oh come on now....let them stay married and work it out, won't you?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
that was fast! what's he up to?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
hungh! I've read until 14 already! I'm dying to know moooooar!
fell in love with this beautiful cute story!
just fell
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
well well well! Edward likes Bella. Surprise, surprise! Nice tour around Vegas, hand in hand.....
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
FANTASTIC!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
OH NO! No way! Are they really going to? I love this! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
This is so fantastic! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
So, I have had this bookmarked and I figured it is about time to read it. lol
I LOVE IT!! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Love, love, love this story! So glad to see it on TWCS! Looking forward to you continuning Bella and Edward's story! :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
So glad you moved this story over here!!! Now just waiting for the chapters that I haven't read already. Really love this story!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Beautiful ring. Uh oh for morning after regrets.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
Uh Oh drinking and chapel???? dun dun dun
Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
awww sweet day
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Cute first meeting. ugh for Renee abandoning her for the casino.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Love this story on fanfic! Sooo glad you decided to continue here!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Love this story!! So glad you have moved it over here! Look forward to the next chapter from what you got upto on ff.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
:)
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
:)
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
A fun story so far! Cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Just had to read it again!!! LOVE IT!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
:)