Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
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Date: 01 Sep 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
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Date: 01 Sep 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
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Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
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Date: 01 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Awesome chapter!
Date: 31 Aug 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Our End?
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 31 Aug 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks
Uh-oh!
Date: 31 Aug 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
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Date: 31 Aug 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
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Date: 30 Aug 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
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[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
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Date: 18 Jun 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
When is the next chapter coming cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
The perfect little get away.
Will the paps that cornered Bella in the convenience store be slapped with harassment charges?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
I'm surprised that the principals son was the accuser/attacker. Even in the elite world of Hollywood there are bottom feeders.
Charlotte and the lunch gang are pretty cool. Maybe Edward could host a pool party for them as thanks for supporting his special girl.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
Jennifer Garner welcomed the shy Mrs. Cullen. That was a nice touch.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
I wondered when Edward would need to express his anxiety over the upcoming reveal if his marriage to a much younger woman.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
I pleased with Carlisle's reaction and responses to everything that has been swirling around Edward and Bella.
I like how quick thinking your Charlotte is in sticky situations.
I feel for Edward's mother as well. But she chose to defend a ruthless action(and man) against her own son.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
I'm with Bella, not quite the way I pictured it going down. At least they were physically arrested with charges that will stick.
Poor Bella was a casualty of the attack. Will this out their marriage sooner than they had hoped?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Can't wait to read the fall out of Maggie and Lauren's deception.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
The lines of communication are opening up once again. No prom. Awe. Better yet, Carlisle is finally marrying his best friend.
Maggie's demise can't come soon enough!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
Not a bad job if groveling, Cullen.
I hope Maggie's movie costs her career! Edward better seal that deal, closed tight.
Again with the cookies......just makin me crave sweets!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
You tell him, Carlisle!
Go Renee! Hand Edward his ass and let Bella rip off his balls!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Our End?
Will Edward fond a way to follow her?
Maggie and everyone else needs to be blocked from entering their home.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall
I wonder if someone overheard their conversation?
Edward has a lot of groveling to do. He begged her to try and promised he would look after her. Broken promises are difficult to repair.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks
Who's going to step in and salvage this messed up situation? Maggie seems to have accomplished her objective.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Edward is having difficulty juggling all the special interest projects and his new home life. He often forgets that it is not just him any longer.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
I think it is Lauren that is assisting Maggie! Isn't there a time stamp on the use of an access code? Maybe a large wolf hound could attack her on one of her magical appearances? She needs to be set up in an embarrassing situation that causes her to go underground for a while.
Glad Charlie worked out as the catalyst to Edward revealing his past with his parents.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
Did Damien's comment about Edward infer he thought differently about Bella's status as Edward's little sister?
Eric was a star struck hoot.
Carlisle seems to be coming around.
How will Charlie's visit go?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
Their day to day routines are settling in but the have yet to discuss their pasts and their families in detail.
The 'brother' rumors are a perfect cover at school for now.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
Well, that makes two potential threats to E&B's blossoming love. Which one will attempt to expose the marriage?
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
Emmett, the big lug, could have sent Bella into a panic attack.
Will he keep his mouth shut?
Now I feel like baking cookies. Lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
Edward is loving the fact he has a wife at home that he can play with and fulfil all his fantasies!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
It was inevitable that once Edward saw his young hot wife in her school uniform her would act out every man's fantasy! He just added his own flare of dominance. Bella's not complaining, Haha. Neither would I!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
Can't wait for Edward to see his wife in her school girl uniform! That should be a sexy romp!
Carlisle is being a royal bastard. Why would Esme put her in his class?
Maybe Bella can compose the music for one of Edward's movies. That would be cool. Keeping it all in the family.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
Very sleek car!
Awe, Edward is go gentle with a very cranky menstrual Bella.
I can't believe Bella would not know her favorite movie had her husband acting in it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
When does Bella go back to school to finish her Senior year and graduate?
Pregnancy might be a bit premature for this unconventional relationship.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
At least Bella knows where she stands with the rest of the people involved with Edward's life.
I guess a young firm body leaving a pool with water dripping down sent Edward right off of the treadmill. HAHAHAHA
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
I figured Carlisle would be the dissenting factor.
I think Esme needs to slap some sense into Carlisle and threaten his manhood for using such slander towards Bella.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
Will Bella ever cook with Tanya?
I hope Carlisle will be pleasant when he meets Bella.
Alice is the perfect friend to Edward.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
They have consummated their marriage!
Edward is going to be even more possessive of his new wife! No one has ever been where he has. He has staked his claim.
It was time for them to make this move to solidify their bonds of attraction and affection.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Amazing home.
Bella plays piano. Did Edward hear her playing?
I think Esme already like Bella. She sees a feisty young woman that will keep Edward on his toes and won't clear out his bank account.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home
Hm, I think Edward is beginning to like the idea of having a wife who isn't interested in his money!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament
Renee is always a whirlwind of surprises.
How will Edward's family respond to a new wife of eighteen still in her senior year of high school?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Our Mess
Renee is going to be overjoyed! Then probably upset at the stupid action taken by her daughter. I hope Edward defends his new bride.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Our First Date
Does this Edward ever do things with out proper planning? This seems rather spontaneous for him. Bella will be in for a surprise well be for her night is ended.
What will Renee do when she finds out?
Who is this Edward Cullen that he is so happy that this little 18 yo doesn't know of him? Will he need a post nuptial agreement drawn up?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 Our First Outing
Renee just dumped her 18 yo daughter in the lobby of a hotel and left to gamble. Gee that sounds like a great mom!
Edward to the rescue. I wonder if he was thinking about Bella during his meeting that first day they met?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter
Found this through a very unique web search. Sound interesting.
Date: 22 May 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation
Please, take me on spring break, on the private jet and the yacht, what a way to go! They both deserve to get away by themselves and relax!
Date: 22 May 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout
That was rather horrifying, and thank God security was available! People can be awful sometimes!
Date: 22 May 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day
What a wondeful evening with the Oscar, but mostly telling the worl they are married!
Date: 22 May 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown
Edward is definitely a man of many facets, some of which are sort of scary! Just as well that Bella is good with scary and it turns her on.
Date: 22 May 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 31 - His Parents
That was unpleasant as hell, but I suppose inevitable. Ted was unbelievably awful! I was like Bella and a bit sorry for Elizabeth. Great how Bella told him of, though.
Date: 22 May 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication
It would have only been better if I could have seen it in person! That was the best smackdown scene I think I've ever read between women! Too bad Bella got hurt that's the only drawback!
Date: 22 May 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer
Aha! It all becomes clear now, disgruntled employee Lauren, in cahoots with sneaky, skanky ex Maggie, messing up Edward's life with Bella!Lovely gift from Carlisle, better one from Edward, best part of the evening the reunion of the brothers.
Date: 22 May 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning
May I please heave a tiny sigh of relief? I'm tickled they are wising up and pledging to try and make things better in their life! It sounds like it just might work, too!
Date: 22 May 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas
I guess those crossed fingers must have done the trick, they are going to try! Merry Christmas, Bella and Edward!
Date: 22 May 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness
I think Carlisle hit the nail smack on it's head and scared Edward into realizing what he was doing to Bella and himself. At least he's on the right track, going after his love!
Date: 22 May 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Our End?
This is heartbreaking! Please let them get back together and be happy!
Date: 22 May 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall
I am so hating this part of their story, because they are hurting so bad and can't see a way around the hurt!I'll just cross my fingers and hope for the best!
Date: 22 May 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Our Cracks
No doubt Maggie has been giving the paps tips on where to find photo ops of her and Edward, plus feeding them crap to print! The happy couple aren't very happy right now and I worry for them!
Date: 22 May 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva
Between work and school and life in general, I guess the honeymoon is over! Now comes the really hard part!
Date: 22 May 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving
Weird Thanksgiving, in some ways, but thanks to Charlie, Bella has a clearer picture of her husband. I am also glad that he and Edward seem to get along. As for Maggie, I wouldn't want her dead, but a lingering illness might be nice! If there was a humiliating way to ruin her, that might be nice, too!
Date: 22 May 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - My Confessions
I get a bad feeling about Eric coming to visit for the weekend. He and Bella were out and about and who knows if the paps got a picture?
Date: 22 May 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?
The flu is sure no fun, but it seems to have made Carlisle a little nicer to Bella. Hopefully there will be no repercussions from school, or from Maggie.
Date: 22 May 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 - His Life
So, Bella has met the ex, and wasn't impressed! It sure pissed her off when Maggie slapped Edward, too bad he didn't turnloose his wife. I would have enjoyed seeing her beat up on that witch!
Date: 22 May 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes
What a way to be intoduced to Emmett! I got a big kick out of Jasper falling down laughing at the big reveal and Em not believing it! It's great that you gave Bella a talent for music, sort a match for Edward's abilities, I guess. I seriously think she should find out about the nasty ex-girlfriend before she runs into her! Though it's been nearly a year, sorry about losing your beloved grandmother, I know how tough that is!
Date: 22 May 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Confidant
This is all uncharted territory for Bella, but she seems to be a fast learner. I'm glad she has confided in Charlotte, so she has a friend to talk to. Now she better get on the horn to her father, before he finds out what she has done!
Date: 22 May 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion
I was wondering if that school uniform would have an effect on Edward! Now we know! That was sort of mind-blowing!
Date: 22 May 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 - My First Day
That was quite a chapter, but I'm glad Bella has found a friend in Charlotte, and may be settling in at school. The uniform is a bit much, but like she said, welcome to California!
Date: 22 May 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage
At least Bella knows she's not pregnant, that worry is off the table for the moment. The car Edward bought her is really nice, I don't blame her for loving it! This private academy should be an eye-opener, but it's just as well that her days will be occupied.
Date: 22 May 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument
I'm ever so glad that Bella's best guy friend is gay. That should ease Edward's jealousy just a bit. This playing russian roulette with pregnancy is a teensy bit dangerous, I'm thinking!
Date: 22 May 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Our Desire
I think I love Alice and probably will her husband and daughter, too. It was pretty hot when Edward saw Bella rise up out of the pool and fell off the treadmill. What followed was even more so!
Date: 22 May 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Our Family
How sad and hurtful for Carlisle to feel that way and to speak that way to and about Bella! It sure hurt Edward and Esme, too and I'm sure Bella! I loved how she leaped to Edward's defense, though!
Date: 21 May 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Our Name
The more Bella finds out about Edward, the more she falls in love with him, just as it should be. I'm glad she and Alice hit it off and Esme seems to like her. So far, so good!
Date: 21 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Our First Night
That was an amazing first time, his with a virgin and her ever! You did a great job, quite descriptive and pretty much realistic, I'm thinking! An epiphany for them both, I believe.
Date: 21 May 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Our Home
Wow, their home is fabulous! Thanks for the pictures, makes it more real. This is going to be a real different way to start a marriage!