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Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2013 5:08 AM Title: The Sweetest Gift Of All

Most definately worth the wait. He definately gave Emmett some memories that would replace the old. You did a fantastic job as always. I love the candles he lit in the early morning by the way. Might use that myself one day. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Candles are always great hehe, thanks for the review xxx

Reviewer: iamonlyone Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Sweetest Gift Of All

This is a beautiful and touching chapter.  You are such a romantic ... it comes through in your writing!



Author's Response:

thanks so much. So glad you liked this

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:38 AM Title: Facing Fears

Wow!! That was amazing. Brilliant! To watch Emmett be so torn between to opposite experiences. His past will always be there, in the back of his mind. Always. You captured it perfectly. I can't wait to see Carlisle's pov. He is probably more torn than Emmett! Great job once again. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks hun

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 11:57 AM Title: Facing Fears

That was so sweet



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 11:12 PM Title: And On The Third Day...

Slash Angst - The finest kind.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 2:43 AM Title: Patience and Prudence

I loved it. You are a brilliant writer. I don't think I could live alone after what Charlie did. I mean come on!! Carlisle may not realize it but he is a very patient man. I love him!

Please don't let me disturb you lemon writing process. I look forward to it.

Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:51 AM Title: Crescendo of Emotions

Carlisle needs to cut himself some slack, Emmett is f*** hot and causes woodys to pop up all over the world. He isnt' forcing himself on Em, just fantasing about the possiblities. And thank you for putting just a little bit of Edward into the story. I love the pace of the relationship. It has an innocent quality to it. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:18 AM Title: Friends, Lovers, & Other Strangers

One amazing little girl has shown that Emmett that he is strong. I kinda felt bad for Jasper (who is NOT Charlie) cuz he was just checking out the hottie in a wheelchair and didn't realize the emotions he would evoke in Jasper. Yeah, it was lustful, but pretty innocent too. Who wouldn't be checking him out. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:12 PM Title: Hope and Hopelessness

I agree! People with a physical disability are stronger than most of us without. I really don't think I could do it. Great chapter. It's good to see Emmett smiling again. And, who wouldn't want Jasper? ha ha Emmett's right, Nettie has good taste. But, then again, so does Emmett! Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:48 AM Title: No Matter What Happens

I don't know whether to commend you on what is probably my favorite chapter you have ever written or scream at you for torturing our poor Emmett some more. First, the reference to the dole of doves. I'm no literary scholar but that was the perfect metaphor for me. Also, Emmett's fear that Carlisle would leave him and Carlisle's fear of leaving him while he was screaming. I was almost in tears.

Now, don't you think this poor boy has suffered enough! He just wants to go home with the new love of his life after one of the most tramatic events in his life and have some good old fashioned nookie. (Ok maybe that's what I want.) Loved this chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks soooo much for the review xx

Reviewer: iamonlyone Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:55 PM Title: No Matter What Happens

Gah!  REALLY?  Hope you update soon ....

Love this story!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xxx

Reviewer: Flutterfli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:21 PM Title: No Matter What Happens

Please let it be temporary paralysis. He has already been through too much in his short life.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:39 PM Title: You Promised No Tears

Yay! He's awake. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

many thanks xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 12:14 PM Title: Choices Must Be Made

Evil cliffy! It could go either way. Update soon. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

hey, many thanks. next chapter will be along soon xxx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:50 AM Title: Choices Must Be Made

Poor Emmett...seeing with his parents made me cry..

It seems Carlisle really loves him!

moreeeeeeee



Author's Response:

hey, thanks for the review. Next chapter is with my Beta and I am trying to sort the following one :-)

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:07 PM Title: We Should Of Had It All

I could just picture Alice talking Em's ear off and him sitting straight up to tell her to shut up. (ha ha) I hope that he is waking up and that his hand really did move. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks so much xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:07 PM Title: And On The Third Day...

Poor Carlisle needs to quit blaming himself. This is all Charlie's fault. You do a great job of conveying Carlisle's feelings. Great start. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

ta hun

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:02 PM Title: We Should Of Had It All

This chapt was heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time: heartbreaking for Carlisle but hopeful for Emmett..

Can’t wait for more..

Hugs, Rashell



Author's Response:

thanks so much xxxx

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:59 AM Title: And On The Third Day...

plz help Emmett!! Charlie can't win! He's evil!

Poor Carlisle...

more more more



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

hopefully you will like where I take this xxx

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