Date: 04 Aug 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
This story is a really good play on the cannon events and I live how you have Spence and JJ interact. The friendship they have with Will works really well to see them act as a couple and gives another perspective to the relationship. I think it would be fun to tell the team about who Henry's dad is by making Will the godfather. Good luck for whenever you post the sequel. I can't wait to see how you continue this universe.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my, I've re-read this and it's even better the second time around, I seriously can't wait for the sequel and for the team to find out even though Rossi seems to know, thanks for writing this, your awesome
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad it's still enjoyable the second time around... I'll be getting to the sequel very soon! I'm really excited to get it written - I just hope it will leave up to eveybody's expectations since you've all been waiting for it for about a year and a half at this point!