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Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 63

Just reread...and cried all over again...in all the same places.

This really is a stunning piece of work

Thank you again. T

Reviewer: LookingForIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 63

This was so amazing! I've really loved it. I wish there was more!

Reviewer: LookingForIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter!

Reviewer: LookingForIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

I know, right? I always feel so awful for Jacob; he was basically the perfect guy and his only crime was that he wasn't Edward. And I love Edward, I really, really do (all the more in Edward/Bella fanfiction), but a part of me will always choose Jacob, too.

Reviewer: LookingForIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to read this story!

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 63

Thank you for writing and sharing your story. I don't usually read angst so it has taken me a while to get around to this, but I'm so glad I finally did--it was wonderful. I'm looking forward to the possible future take as I feel like I need just a little bit more to feel complete.

Reviewer: Scamps Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 63

What an amazing, brilliantly written story!  I know that you probably won't see this, as I've join the party way after it finished. Seriously though this story totally blew me away.Thank you so much for sticking with it when you were having such a tough time.

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

WOW!!! AMAZING!!! story ;) very understandable ending ;) thanks so much for completing and posting it on here because i 1st read up till it was on hiatus on ffn and i didn't finish it on there but 'yay me!' i hope your rl is treating you well i'm going to read the extras' of this now ;D

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 61

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 60

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Date: 12 Aug 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 59

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 57

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 56

and here i thought edward was so smart

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 53

uh oh, i think wisp's temper may be coming out soon

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 50

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 49

my stupid internet connection wouldn't let me leave comments, kept kicking off-line when i tried. i tried to comment and rate each chapter even with a smiley just because i appreciate all your hard work

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

go wisp

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

oh no

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

wonder if i said "ow" it'd get the kids to do laundry? lol

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 14

what a sick creep

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

hope James doesn't get off easy with this deal

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

aww i hope getting her a pet doesn't backfire

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

poor edward, he's trying to tow the line isn't he? damn that dr for putting those thoughts in his head

Reviewer: milinpink Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

I write the same way, with out outlines. Just a vague idea of where the story should go. I think it is more exciting that way. Like I truly am going on the journey with the reader. I really love yoyr story here. 

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 63

Hello, Cris, I want you to know that your fiction WISP has been voted the 3rd best fiction of 2014. Here is the link : http://twifanfictionrecs.com/

Congratulations ! I voted for WISP every day.

This fiction is fantastic, and certainly one of the best I have ever read.

Take care of you.

Reviewer: sleeplessness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was the most touching story i've read on this site and on fanfic! I cried in so many parts and smiled at many more. Thank you for sharing this amazing story. :) Despite the 63 chapter length, I powered through too quickly because I was absolutely addicted to knowing what was next for Wispy.. I mean Bella now.. and Edward. 

I cannot express enough gratitude I have for your writing. Thank you, thank you!

xx

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 63

Wow. I absolutely loved this story. Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 63

This was such a wonderful story!  Thank you so much for writing.  There is only one section in the story that i was disappointed with, "They'd decided not that long ago that it was best they did not have children."  While I understand at that moment in time they were no where near ready to have children, but to close the door so firmly when Bella was still in her early 20's seemed a but too final for 2 people who always came through so much.  To see how much the characters came though in such a short time and not think that 10 years down the road they might be ready to have children was a bit odd.  That aside, your writing and story telling is wonderful.  Thank you again for sharing your gift.  Regards, Ruth

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 63

Wow! I'm sad to see this come to an end but am glad the way it has come to an end! Can't wait for some futuretakes

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 63

Thanks awesome chapters awesome story 

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 63

Excellent story!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 61

What a great Thanks giving gift to receive, the completion of this story!;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 63

What a great wrap up. I cried my eyes out. Haha

thanks so much for writing. 

Reviewer: Bec2b Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 63

I have been reading your story from the start.  It was wonderful, heart-breaking, happy and sometimes overwhelming.  This is what makes a great story.  Best of luck in the future.  

Reviewer: Elleg Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 63

Ohhhhh what a sweet ending! Thank you so much for completing this story and not abandoning it. You creating such a wonderful story that was at times horrifying but ultimately beautiful and triumphant. I look forward to seeing what the future holds for Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 63

Oh my you have made this such a wonderful story. Simply incredible. I can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for writing this wonderful story.  Sometimes I found it very difficult to read, I'm sure it was more difficult to write it.  Looking forward to future out-takes.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the futuretakes

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 63

Crying here, not sure if they're happy tears for little Wisp or sad tears for this amazing story ending. Feel Wisp has been a part of my life for a very long time. Truly hope to see more outtakes (loved Disneyland) or dare I suggest sequel... Would really like to see Felix get his due. Regardless of what you decide I would be thrilled to read anything you are willing to share. I have said it before but you are an amazing storyteller and I am honored to have been allowed to read your words. Thank you and I hope that this is not goodbye. Wishing you all the best. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 63

I can not begin to tell you the enjoyment this story has given me since its inception!  You never shied away from the truthes of life and yet have us a dramatic, warm, overwhelming love story.  Not just the love between Wisp and Edward, but all forms of it : Mother/ daughter, sister/sister, big brother/ beloved little sister, friend/ to friend, and even devoted professional helpers/ to their charge - oh!  And let's not forget Pet!  The instinctive love exchanged between a loving, intelligent pet and her devoted human!  How fitting that it was Pet who began Edward's path to finding Bella again!  Thank you for this magnificent journey through the human mind, spirit, and soul!   It was outstanding!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 63

I wish Felix was found but I like the ending. I would like to think the futuretake would really happen. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 62

How frightened Bella must have been when she stole the car and ran like that. That was actually rather clever. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 61

This was such a hard chapter. Poor Bella and Edward. 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 60

I'm so glad you are finishing here too. I think I've been reading this from the beginning. I recommended the story on Twilight Fanfiction Completed Stories. I think it's a wonderful story. Thanks for a great heartbreaking and heartwarming love story. I for one love the ending. Don't know if I wil review until the end on TWCS as I as rereading the whole thing on my reader right now too. Thanks again.I know this has been very difficult to write. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 63

Oh, I don't want it to be over! This story grabbed me from the very first chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I look forward to future takes! 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 62

This is so sad!

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 63

This story was awesome!  You did an excellent job!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 61

Holy crap!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 60

poor Rose

Reviewer: Gingerhat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

EReaders are wonderful things.  They bring our fantasy worlds and knowledge and entertainment with us where ever we go.  They have one glaring failure in this instance, however.  You tend not to review and that's a sad thing. 

I recently starting reading this story (and may have to 'acquire' it again from this site as opposed to FFN where I believe I originally got it) and have yet to review.  This is due a great deal to the Kindle and partially to circumstance.  Some of that circumstance?  I haven't wanted to stop and take the time to review. 

I'm finding fresh, new approaches with your story though the premise may have been attempted by others.  Your characters have certainly captured my attention and I'm enjoying the depth I find in them.  Thank you for giving Rose true believability and 'genuineness' for lack of a better word.  This chapter was particularly poignant and showed her in an excellent light.

I'm off to continue reading and just had a chance (and wanted) to let you know how much I'm enjoying this.  Your story has quite the reputation in this fandom and it is well deserved. 

Thank you for all your hard work,

Ginger

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please please please update soon. I read this story in one day. Wonderful writing. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 59

Thanks good chapters 

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 59

It amazes me how writers create new worlds so different from our own, such as twilight, Avatar, Star Wars, etc. but what's more amazing to me is when a writer creates people so complex and every aspect of that character is brought out. Creating a world is not as challenging, I would imagine, as creating a mind, a body. I would imagine a sort of God complex comes over a writer in regards to their characters. You create this life, how it looks, how it moves, how it thinks. I wish I had the talent that you and other great writers have.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 59

I'm glad that you're here. I reviewed on fanfic sorr not here too. Are you not updagting there any more(not that I blame you) I'm ohtobeyoung there by the way. I don't care where you update just so I find you. Love this story. Thanks. Gland she's growning up.

Reviewer: kara02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 59

OMG! This is the worst place for me to run out of chapters! This is such an interesting story- i don't read fanfiction as much as i used to but this is the one that i still read, even when some times i think i might not like it anymore i start reading it again and you have me hooked. I'm really excited to see where this story will go! 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 59

Wow, talk about putting it out there.  I can't wait to read more.. This has been awesome reading all these chapters, I've missed these characters. Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 59

i think that Bella could be a kidnapped heiress from Europe who is found by her family and wisked away. meanwhile, edward realizes how much he misses her and loves her romantically. a couple of years later after she receives all the help multibillions could help, she becomes a "normal" confident young lady who meets edward again. at first, bella would be aloof but nice to everyone including edward, but as edward puts his heart on the line and confesses himself, she finally sees that she does still love him.

this story is so hertbreaking...you have tackled a monumental task of tackling this and  doing a great job..

can't wait for the next update...ty

 

 

Reviewer: Elleg Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 59

What a fine kettle of fish we have here! Poor Edward and poor Bella. Both stuck in confused feelings and uncharted territory. I love that Bella is able to communicate better and is blunt and demanding. She's grown so much and it's a credit to Edward and everyone else's involvement. I think we all knew this was coming it's just so incredibly awkward. I'm not sure when you'll give us another update, but I'll be waiting! I appreciate your commitment to finishing this story. So many people are quick to abandon their work, so take your time we'll be here awaiting the next installment!

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 59

update update update update update update update update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 59

Oh my I love this story. Please please please don't keep us hanging for long.

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 59

update soon 

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 59

Amazing! Please update as soon as you possibly can, I'm an emotional wreck right now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 59

loving this

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 59

Wow, big change in W...Bella. Not sure who to feel more sorry for, Edward or Bella. As always love this story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 59

Oops. Got these already. Were you teasing us? Lol

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 59

Wow. Leaps and bounds-no wonder Edward is feeling the whiplash. I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 58

for chapter 59....he is going to break her heart if Tanya stays the weekend and she has to leave....I wouldn't be surprised if she ran away when she is at Esme's

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 58

This one left me crying. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 55

Oh my God, that is so incredibly sad. Poor Wisp.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 59

Wow this is an excellent story.

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 59

Tanya doesn´t deserve anything, she´s selfish, and finding out that Bella is able to talk now will only make her trye and persuade Edward to get rid of her, I hope something happens (not really bad) that makes Edward open his eyes to the real Tanya, he doesn´t even love her, i remember him saying and telling her that they were not good together, so why is she even sleeping there, why is he even having sex with her, it just leads her on, as much as i hate Tanya Edward isn´t being fair towards her either...Eward needs to wake up, maybe Bella should stay with Esme or Rosalie for a while, maybe helping with the baby might make her feel helpful, and her absence will make Edward realize she is more important to him than just the girl he rescued

Reviewer: bellskindagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Something tell me that Charlie is the Key 

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 49

For some reason my page has not shown updates so I haven't read this since around chapter 45 and I just happened to check and see allll these updates and I've started back. So glad i checked cause I have really missed it. 

Reviewer: Tennyson10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

Welcome back!!! So excited to see this update in my inbox!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 53

Not sure Tanya visiting is such a good idea!!! Trouble ahead.

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 53

Wow, I have missed these characters dearly. I really love the way you write. And to all the haters that you get reviews from just hit the delete button. No one needs that kind of negativity in their lives. Keep your head and the post coming ;-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 53

Thanks for the updates, love to find out how this will turn out. I can't help but imagine that if someone broke in to jail & killed James that it would be a piece of cake to get into a cabin & get Isabella. Go thru a window. I would also think if they are worried about James talking they would be worried about her doing the same. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 52

How does a prison not have cameras that would show someone from the outside coming in?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 53

thank you for the update..I'm not sure if letting Tanya come to the cabin was the right move...we will see how Wisp reacts to Tanya presense...until you post again

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 50

enjoying the updates.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

Your back!;-D))

Reviewer: Sue2265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 49

Great to have wisp back. Xx

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 53

I would be glad to have some news of you, to know that you are better, and if not, to know how I can help you. You have my support. And your fiction is amazing, you are very talented. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 53

loving this

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: angel27eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 53

As a LMT, I appreciate the disclaimer! 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 50

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You for finally updating!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49

I'm so happy Wisp is back!  Thank you so very much for continuing!  She is. A treasure!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 49

Wow, thanks for the update! I have missed these characters.

Reviewer: natalia1121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 53

I love this story!!! You are a great writer!!! Don't give up!!

Reviewer: GarrittyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

I simply love this storyline! You can't help but wonder how Wisp and Edward will survive all of the horrors that are slowly being revealed. You are such a prolific writer, and you breathe life into your characters and all the nuances of their lives. I BREATHE Edward's concern and Feel Wisp's pain. These characters are so amazing.

Reviewer: h_viki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 48

Please finish this story! It's amazing and I loveeee it!

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh no, that's another complication in an already totally complicated situation. And he dreamed about Bella :) At least, I hope it was Bella, I hope Wisp gets to that point. I just hopw that the rest of the dream wasn't foreshadowing... they're suppose to find the tatooed man, not him find her! I hope we get an update soon :)

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 48

Update soon please! I miss them!

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 47

Amazinggggg I love it up date soon

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 48

love it

Reviewer: Daggers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

Uh oh! A kitten??! Oh my...this will be interesting cuz said kitten will need a collar...& a litter box...food/water bowls...possibly a leash...

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