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Reviewer: insanemum Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires

Gee I enjoyed that! Great little story :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

Wow, just put it right out there.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?

Carpathian War god, how cool.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

Nothing like simply laying your cards on the table.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

Ah, the meeting.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Wow! So he killed her mother! What an opener!

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

I LOVE YOUR STORY THANK YOU SO MUCH IT WAS VERY ENJOYABLE.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying!

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires

so he's changing her right while he is still balls deep inside her.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 16 Acceptance

SHIT HE'S GOING TO THINK SHE DOESN'T WANT HIM.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

OH SHIT IS SHE GOING TO RUN IS SHE SCARED OF HIM NOW?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 Progress

HELL EDWARD TELL HER YOU WANT A KISS A REAL KISS

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 Peeping Tom

WELL ONE GOOD THING THEY BOTH GOT OFF ON EACH OTHER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 12 Bonding

HE'S GOING TO BELLA'S IS HE GOING TO HERE HER FINGERING HERSELF?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 Sketches

WOW IS EDWARD OUTSIDE HER WINDOW CAN HE HERE HER WILL HE KNOW WHEN THEY GO ON THE PICNIC THE THINGS SHE DID TO HERSELF THINKING OF HIM?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 10 Are You High?

WELL NOW HIS FAMILY KNOWS WHAT WILL ALICE SAY NOW.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 9 Memories

BE CAREFUL BELLA OR YOU WILL END UP LIKE YOUR MOTHER DID.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 Possibilities

WOW BELLA IS A LITTLE FORWARD ISN'T SHE?

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?

WHAT WILL EDWARD DO WHEN BELLA TELLS HIM HER MOTHERS NAME WAS REMEE? BELLA TURNS EDWARD ON HE HAD A HARD ON THE WHOLE TIME THEY BEEN TOGETHER, HE'S GOING TO HAVE TO TELL HER ISN'T HE? THAT HE KILLED HER MOTHER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6 Face to Face

SHIT HE'S GOING TO KNOW SHE IS THE DANGHTER OF THE WOMEN HE KILLED ISN'T HE? WILL HE RUN AWAY?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

SORRY I'M LOST DOES SHE KNOW HE'S A VAMPIRE?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 Destiny

WAS THAT EDWARD'S FIRST " O " ?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 Welcome to Bran

SHE GETS LEFT BEHIND DOESN'T SHE.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

so what happened to the child

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

That was enough to make a person want to be a vampire, just to be able to do that for eternity! The  last part was very touching, and this was a really good story. Always love Bella and Edward!



Author's Response:

Thank you darlin'!!  Your reviews were fantastic and touched me with the atteniton to detail.  Almost makes me want to go back and read the story again! LOL

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires

What a way to go! That was an amazing love scene and you did a beautiful job with it! What a wonderful thing for them to have found each other and to have forever together! I loved it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

The fact of his fashioning a headstone for her mother resonated with Bella. That , coupled with the letter, and his obvious caring for her really stood Edward in her good graces. Maybe this will work out better than I feared.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 Acceptance

Bella must have the most forgiving heart in this world! She is an amazing woman and Edward is blessed to find her. It's just as Jasper said, if anything had gone differently, they would have never met. One act caused the other, you might say.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

Seriously,Edward? You thought this the opportune moment to tell Bella what you are?  By the way, the poetry at the chapter heads is really great!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 Progress

Edward must be very comfortable with Bella to have made that slip about feeding the human. A few more like that and she'll have her answer about vampires.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 Peeping Tom

My oh my! Edward found out all kinds of interesting things. Luckily he didn't find Renee's letter, that might have spooked him enough to run away. He and Bella need to talk things over, and soon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 12 Bonding

That was quite  a pep talk from Jasper and how can you not love Emmett's constant optimism? He may have been unmated all this tim, but Edward has been very fortunate to have a caring family.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 11 Sketches

Bella has it as bad as Edward does! I pretty much have to conclude that they are made for each other. It may sound crazy but I find no other explanation.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 Are You High?

Took him a minute to get through Emmett's silliness, but I'm pretty sure Edward has his attention now, as well as Jasper's. It's devastating news even for vampires. I'm thinking Edward is truly between a rock and a hard place. Whatever he does, it can't end well.

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 Memories

The cheescake recipe sounds really good, sadly I have no sweettooth. Bella has such a shock in store, as she is bound to find out the truth. This is very sad because of their strong pull to one another. I doubt it will be strong enough to overcome the fact of Edward being the death of her mother!



Author's Response:

I've made the cheesecake... and it's not sweet.  You'd have to add some kind of berry topping or be heavy handed with the powdered sugar!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 Possibilities

The girl has no idea how close she came to death with that maneuver! Fresh blood in her mouth and sharing it with a kiss, with a vampire. Of course, Bella was thinking about vampires earlier, just not now, when it might be relevant.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?

Kind of odd that Alice didn't see this complication. Maybe she didi and just didn't want Edward to know. It's the cruelest irony that Edward wants the daughter of his last kill. Wait until Bella finds out that piece of information!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Face to Face

Promising , that Bella not only was aware of Edward all this time, but deliberately  caused him to show his true intentions. I guess having a couple black belts and a can of pepper spray hepled.She seems to be as affected by him as he is by her! Very promising.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

Here Edward thought he was being so unobtrusive, too. Bella doesn't miss much, except for the fact she's been followed by a vampire who wants more than just her blood! Still, she must appreciate him running off those two cretins!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 4 Destiny

Can't help the sympathy for Edward's circumstances, not even an erection in all these many, many years? Never mind your psychic sister sees all , and tells you what to do! That would be sort of embarrassing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 Welcome to Bran

Bella has some connection to this Romanian castle, that seems to be quite strong. Alice on the bus must be the Alice who is Edward's "sister", so that's pretty interesting. This has to be why Alice told Edward to stay at home for this last tour.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Reflections

That was a horrible thing to have happened to his intended, no wonder Edward ran off unprepared to find the ones who committed the atrocity! All roads seem to lead to Carlisle, though, don't they? Beats being dead, I suppose, though Edward sometimes feels differently.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Edward killed Renee? The repercussions from that are going to haunt him, I'm guessing! Kind of gave me goosebumps.

Reviewer: merrybc18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

I am from romania, so I love the ideea!



Author's Response:

Wonderful merrybc!!  I hope you enjoy it :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and enjoying!

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16 Acceptance

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 14 Progress

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Peeping Tom

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 12 Bonding

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Reviewer: tufano79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

Amazing story! You are truly one of my favorite authors with unique and different story ideas! Bravo!



Author's Response:

Aww tufano.... yer makin' me blush darlin'!  hehe.  Thanks so much, from the bottom of my heart.  I like to stretch my imagination and see what I can come up with, that's for sure.  Who says you have to stay in one genre with one pairing?

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

I loved this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks of much for reading and enjoying binki...it's much appreciated :)

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

Such a lovely extra and as I'm sure I've said before these two or so cute xxx



Author's Response:

What a wonderful grouping of reviews darlin'... thank you sooo much!!  I'm touched that you enjoyed it so much.

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires

Kinda knocked off my feet there :P I rly love this characters and the whole story it would be amazing to see a bit of Bella meeting the rest of the Cullens may I ask it there any plan for a sequel ? Just wondering because this such a beautiful story with so much potential xxx



Author's Response:

A little late here, sorry, still getting used to how the reviews on here work.  Thank you so much for the kind words, at this time, however, I have no plans to extend this.  This grouping hasn't talked to me since I did the epilogue and since it is set so many years ahead, I feel like I wrapped this one up.

 

Thank you for reading!

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

This is a great story. The smuttyness at the end was worth the wait. Different from other stories I have read. Loved it. Not sure I love this web site yet. I guess I use to fan fiction which I am boycotting as asked.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the support and for heading over here to read.  So glad you enjoyed it!!

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye

Oooooh naughty Edward stepping out again :P I love it xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 Acceptance

Oh dear poor Edward I hope Bella doesn't take too long xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 Beauty and Innocence

Is it hot in here or is it just me that kiss was gooood :P xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 Progress

Ending on a cliffs :O hehe I love how playful they are together xxx

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13 Peeping Tom

Ha I knew it naughty Edward :P hehe xxx

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 12 Bonding

Loving the jasper in this story he's so cool :D Xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sketches

Another rly hot chapter babe my hoohaa is squealing hehe xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10 Are You High?

Haha I was giggling at Ems behaviour he is such a child, so cute :P xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9 Memories

I can't help but notice the mention of Bella not wearing any clothes does this Edward have a thing for looking into people's bedrooms like SMs Edward xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Possibilities

It's so fab seeing a Bella who isn't too shy in front of her Edward xxx

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?

Oh dear what's Edward gonna do now ? Yikes xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 Face to Face

Nice to see Eddie(hehe) get some confidence back xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

Awww lil stuttering Edward is rly cute hehe xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4 Destiny

That was so hot !!!!! And totally unexpected this Eddie has a dirty side :P xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 Welcome to Bran

Wow an artsy Bella is a nice twist :D xx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2 Reflections

Oh pot Edward that's awful what happened to him before Carlisle changed him xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Wow just wow epic beginning bb rly looking forward to reading more xxx

Reviewer: trishc Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue

Great story, loved your writing, thanks for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and enjoying trishc... so glad you enjoyed it!  At some point I hope to come back and add pictures to this, but for now, I'm just trying to get my stuff moved over here... lol.

 

thanks again!

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 Sketches

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 Are You High?

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 9 Memories

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 Possibilities

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 Face to Face

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 4 Destiny

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 3 Welcome to Bran

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 Reflections

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

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