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Reviewer: JDRAST Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 39

Hello.  I love this story here!  It is quite different with the Mike/Victoria scenario, etc. And I liked the anticipation of the sequel "Be Careful What You Wish For" story.  I like how Angela met Bella at school and mentioned at lunch that she hoped that Dr. Cullen would adopt her.  It makes sense, in an ironic way.  I'm glad that you picked-up on that and decided to write these 2 stories revolving around that.  Genius!  Kudos for a well-written story!  Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yay finally, I know they have a lot to talk about, but I hope it will be much easier to do now. 

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy crap! I thought that phone call was Edward, and not Jacob, and Charlie dead! Jesus. I never expected that. SMH 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 39

thanks for the story i enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 38

i am glad she called him on it.  she forgives sometimes so easily

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 37

yeah!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 35

i knew it... she lied.. it's jacob i hope he doesn't kill bells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 34

i am sure bella did it to save ang and ed.. i know she doesn't mean it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 33

It's bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 32

poor ang!!! i hope they get to her

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

well i was reading this on twiwrite and then i found her finished so i am finishing up here!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jeez...talk about heart breaking!

Reviewer: ratchet Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

totaly hooked...

reduced to tears in this chapter.lol

xx

Reviewer: allforkedup Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 39

Actually, it's an excellent way to end one store and begin another.

Reviewer: 30somethingmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 39

Great story!!!! I really look forward to the sequel. Loved the prologue and how you brought out Angela's statement about being adopted by the Cullens. Really good intro for the sequel.

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm happy that Edward and Bella are together again and that Jake and Bella will still be friends.

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 39

It should be interesting to see how Angela reacts and how she adapts to her new life. I hope we get to hear a lot about how things are going to Bella and Edward and about their wedding and honeymoon.

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thanks for a great read!  Really enjoyed it!  Already have you all set up on author alert for the new story!  Really looking forward to it!  Can't wait!

Sarah

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

I loved the ending and can not wait for the next story to begin.  My favorite part of this chapter was Edward's talk with Carlisle when he went to get the ring.  I am glad that Edward has made peace with Carlisle and realizes that he brought his pain on himslef.

 

I have started posting a story of my own called "Use Somebody".  It is AH, but if you would like to check it out, I would love to hear your thoughts.  Thanks :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

YES.. he is a big jerk.. *throws a stone at his glass house*

HUMP!!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Got to love Carlisle.  So good. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

He said mean and hurtful things to her, and they are going to be pissed when they find out... BWAHAHAHA.. 

You know, it really was his fault.  Jasper could have gotten himself under control once they had him out the door.  It was Edward that pushed her into the damn coffee table.. yep.. it's offical.. I am pissed .. again..

but love your story..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

OK.. I have read this before, but it was on fan ficition.. and you update so good that I wanted to re read it again.. hahaha.  So I am off on a "Different Kind of Moon" journey today.. yipee.  (Cause I am having writers block myself.. boo).

thanks for the wonderful story... AGAIN.. lol

See you next chapter.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it very much and so excited to read the next step for all of them....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 39

cant wait for the sequel

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 38

awww eddie.... she is just shocked and a little sad i think

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 38

Wow, I wouldn't have thought about Bella's reaction to Edward changing Angela to be like that, but it made a lot of sense.  He was so against changing Bella, but willingly changed Angela without a second thought.  If I were Bella, I would be really hurt by that.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 37

Glad the chapter ended on some romance after all the angst. Will Angela and Daddy Carlisle bond over their religious faith I wonder, or will she turn into a dirty girl and try to seduce Ben?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 37

That did clear up the questions I had.  I am glad Jake and the Cullens got there in time.  And I am sooooo glad Bella was the one to rip Mike's head off.  She deserved that honor.

Now a wedding and a new Angela...hmmm, I wonder how that will all turn out.

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 37

YAY Everyone is ok, the treaty is intact and they are gonna get hitched. Woo Hoo. But what happens to Angela now? She will now be the odd man out like Edward was.  looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm gitty now ... i cant wait for edward and Bella to get married and do the honeymoon thing *sigh*

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

I'm actually a little teary-eyed here; great chapter...although I think Mike got off too easy :-)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it very much and glad things are how they should be update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 36

AHH!! I need more!!!! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

hope angela will be ok

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 36

I am a little confused.  Is this chapter happeing at the same time as the last one?  And if that is the case, did Jacob find Bella in the meadow because of Carlisle's call or just by luck?

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 36

very good story keep up the good work

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 36

So does this chapter happen "during" the last chapter or was Jacob already in the meadow without the Cullen's for warning?  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sarah

Reviewer: kimono12356 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think Bella should have stayed human

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

Oh shit!  The wolves are here!  What is Jacob going to do about the new and improved Bella?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

woo hoo.. Let Jakey take care of Sleezy Mike

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 35

Poor Edward! I want to go comfort him. I hope Jake will rescue Bella from Mike!

Reviewer: Lee1028 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 35

you are so NOT funny, Please hurry with an update you are just plain mean LOL

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 35

Arghhhhhh you did it again. LOL.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad to see that Charlie relented and is letting Bella live with the Cullens, and I'm looking forward to seeing how she interacts with the rest of the family when they arrive.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

Good chapter. It was nice to get Esme's point of view and watch Bella continue her path back to semi-normalcy.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter. It was nice to see Esme so involved right from the beginning and that Bella is making an effort at coming back on her own.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella's thoughts were so piognant they actually made me tear up, empathizing with her feelings. You have quite the way with words, bringing your characters to life in a way that readers can easily identify with.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ah, poor Jasper. He takes everything to heart just as Bella does, and I hope she eventually finds a way to help him alleviate his guilt over the birthday fiasco. Well-written chapter - it's nice to get a glimpse into the mind of Carlisle. He was so short-changed in the books we never really got a chance to know him.

Reviewer: Dyxie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great beginning to the story. It always bothered me that the Cullens never seemed to truly understand exactly what they did to Bella emotionally by leaving, and having them brought face to face with the reality of it seems very realistic. I also never quite understood how Charlie could just sit there and watch his daughter waste away for four months like he did, it was one part of the saga that always rather bothered me, and I'm anxious to see where you go with the story from here.

Reviewer: Kimi2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMG! I am dying right now. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 34

ok this just has to be a ploy from Bella  so she can try and save mike and teach him the cullen ways .. at least it better be LOL

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh my goodness!  Okay, didn't see Mike doing that to Victoria, betting Bella is luring Mike away on purpose, and totally didn't expect Edward to turn Angela...Wow!  Looking forward to the rest of the story.  Thanks for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

OH shit, Edward just bit Angela. Bella has a plan to take care of Newton, but what is it and why is Edward not trusting her? 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34

I thought this was a E/B story?  Ugh, I am not a Newton fan by any means lol

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh crap!  Angela is going to kick Edward's ass when she stops burning!

I would bet anything that Bella told Mike to take her away so neither of them would feed on Angela.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 34

of course bella is going to draw the psychp away

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 33

Bella I assume or maybe they turned or kidnapped  someone else she didnt know about

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 33

Short but sweet, the stories really moving now.

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 33

ugg my fingers are getting tired hanging on the edge ...plzz update soon

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 33

I'm betting it's sparkly Bella!  Please tell me we get to watch Mike get his ass kicked in the next chapter?  Please???  We've been so good reading and reviewing.  We have been so patient.  Please give us what we all want sooooo badly?!?

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

Hmmmm....Bella?  Glad they talked Bella out of going in alone.  Great chapter!  Next should definitly be an interesting one! 

Sarah

Reviewer: TwiRPLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

Of course I wanna kick Mike's ass. I always wanna kick his ass! The idiot! GAH

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

Oh Angela help is coming. It hopefully will work out. Mike's an ass. Can't wait for the cullan's to hand it to him. Right before Bella rips his head off. Meg

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 32

Poor Angela.  How are the Cullens ever going to get her out of this alive.  And yes, I would love to kick Mike's ass, but I would rather see Bella do it.  She has way more reason and there is the whole vampire strength thing going for her. ;)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32

found your story today and just finished .. ugh what a place to leave off.. I need more :)

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

Mike needs to get beaten up with his own arms and Victoria needs to be told exactly how Mike feels about. That once again the men that was suppose to love her wanted Bella even more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

just kicking his ass is too good for him

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 32

Never did like Newton!!! Now I dislike him even more. Things are getting very intense, I wonder what Victoria will think when she realizes that Bella is no longer a mortal, but that she is a vampire, A newborn herself with more strength than she has. Great chapter. Hurry with more!!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 31

I bet they send those pics to Bella

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 31

nothing good is what they are up to!!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

Fun fight practice ... love that Bella took down Em.

Poor Ang ... hope those pics don't work Bella up too much. She needs to keep her wits about her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 31

poor angela

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 31

I feel so bad for Angela.  The nicest girl in Forks doesn't deserve this.  I hope Bella kicks both Mike's and Victoria's ashes.  Then her and Alice can dance around the ashes.  I love that visual! LOL ;)

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 30

I so loved the memory she had of their kiss in her bedroom. Looking forward to them getting Victoria and having some more lemony goodness.  Hurry with the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 30

woo hoo!

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 30

Excellent scene. I love that Edward is building back Bella's trust in him.

Would love to see more input from Jasper and Carlisle.

Reviewer: Kimi2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 30

I love this story can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 30

Mmmmm, I love lemons!  I love how Bella tempted Edward with his own words.  Very hot.

I thought that was an excellent conversation they had before the lemon.  I think it is so important to Bella that Edward see her as an equal partner and I am glad that Edward is not trying to keep Bella from learning how to fight to protect herself.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 30

Yum I love the way you think update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 29

I suppose it had to be Angela that was taken as even though Bella would have been drawn to help Lauren or what's her name, Angela has always appeared to have been a good and kind person to everyone she knows so none of the Cullens would wish for her to be harmed in any way. Wish it had been what's her name though, backstabbing false bitch!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Angela.  I wonder if the Cullens will get to her in time or maybe be forced to change her to saver her.  Hmmm, that would be interesting.

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella is doing exactly what they hoped she would

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 29

aww poor Angela.  

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no that's so sad, poor Angela. Hope you update again soon

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

This is probably one of the most interesting twist I've read.  I like it when it's unpredictible.  Amazing job, please hurry.  I am hanging on a limb now.  Thx

Reviewer: carolina_girl_1275 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

I've really enjoyed your story.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  THANKS!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

I am getting white knuckles hanging on the edge here...love the story cant wait for you to continue...the writing is very good too ..and i like your style too.....you are not repetative  as much as i have seen other authors be.....I hate when they go round and round with the guilt thing .. talk about kicking a dead horse over and over.. so your story is refreshing.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh man, anything that has Alice that freaked out can not be good.  I am surprised that she hasn't seen anything about Angela being missing yet. 

Another excellent chapter!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad that Bella is holding her own against Edward and not immediately submitting to him as usual. Can't wait to see what Evil Newton and his Ginger Princess are cooking up against the Cullens. MWAHAHA

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

It can't ever be easy for these two

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow, the hits just keep on coming for them don't they? Lol! Hope you update again soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

Ugh  can we just castrate mikey and behead vikki.   LOL

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

Haha Emmett is so gonna take the mick for Bella marking Edward lol. Nice!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yummy

Reviewer: cwal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 27

Even thou this story is 27 chapters it moves pretty quickly.  Bella seems to forgive so easily.  Good read!

Reviewer: Raven Jadewolfe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 27

woo-hoo!!!

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

LOVED IT!!!!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 27

Yes, you made us wait for this, but that was a good Bella/Edward lemony moment.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 27

That was a very tasty lemon.  I love fiestly Bella especially when she pinned Edward to the bed and later when she bit him.  Very hot!

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