Date: 26 May 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awww, a happy ever after, the best way to end. I've really enjoyed this story, you're the only author that can make me like Jake and that's saying something as I am firmly Team Edward with Jasper a close second, lol.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for all the reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and liked my Jake. He was my favourite at the time although I moved over to Team Edward eventually :)
Date: 25 May 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Uh-oh! Jake's just opened a whole other can of worms, the rest of the band might not be too happy about it but they can't expect him to live a secret life forever. I'm glad that some of the guys, at least, are okay with Jasper.
Date: 24 May 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my God, so he did play him - a little bit. Now the big question for Jake is whether he can trust him again. Maybe Jasper should put on a sort of display for Jake so he can begin to recognise the feeling when Jasper uses his talent.
Hi Jane, thank you for reading and reviewing this story. Glad that you're enjoying it so far. There is more drama ahead, but also sweetness :)
Date: 23 May 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, Rose is her usual vile self. Jasper shouldn't have waited so long to feed, I hope him turning up means that he wants to be with Jake and he's not come to dump him because he feels guilty for what he did.
Date: 23 May 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Jasper. Why has he let himself get so hungry? Was it because Jake didn't turn up when he said he would? I hope he doesn't turn him away and turn down going to live with the Cullen's, they could help him so much. I'm so glad that Jake's dad is so supportive knowing what Jasper is.
Date: 23 May 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jake is so taken with Jasper, so taken that he treated Jasper as a normal boy. It's sad that Jasper had to leave his family like that, they'll wonder and worry about him for the rest of their lives. It's a shame as well that Jasper ran off like that, I hope Jake can find him soon.
Date: 30 Nov 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was an unexpected, but really sweet, pairing. :) They seemed to fit together so well. You tweaked canon, but not enough to be too noticeable.
Thanks so much for writing.
Thank you for reading this one, I'm glad you liked it :)