Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2019 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved this story!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great ending!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2018 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

Jessica is a bitch!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Charlie is a prick and a terrible father! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 26

damn it!

wish you didnt kill her off so quick...

how about a bit of or a lot of torture before

finishing her off? just a little bit of vengeance 

goes a long way

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

Read this for the Mobward Facebook page it's the story of the week there. You were a very enthusiastic author. Hope all is well. Best wishes.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 28

I love this story  it's my go to story on a rainy weekend!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

Amazing story! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 27

Awesome ending! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!  I think it was Tanya that was in their apartments!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

I really hate Jacob! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!  Poor Bella! Charlie is a horrible person and father! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!  They are so cute together! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for letting the girls take care of Tanya.  good riddance.

So happy that she's pregnant

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Glad that she's admitted to her feelings & told Edward.

These kids are so cute.  Just love them.  Also, I thought it was cute how everyone ended up in the same bed.  Safe from the storm.  

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

Good chapter. I really like your discription of the hotel nice. Poor Edward did not have easy with his baby momma. At least he is a really good father though.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella crapy life cant have kids. Edward gets to fall in love and have kids. This story is intriging and frustrating at the same time. I feel bad for Bella and pissed at the Cullens. Really they hade someone check on her. Well they did a crapy job.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really dont read story's were Charlie is a bad parent. I think he got screwed enough in the books, but i will give this story a try.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 27

They definitely got their HEA.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 25

I was expecting Tanya to make an appearance by now, and Edward to take a more 'controlled' role in the family business since Carlisle is paralyzed. Esme is one strong-willed cookie.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

Very emotional chapter.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

What a cliffy... you have me hanging on.

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

YAY!!! She's rescued. 

I'd be suspicious of Tanya.

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Just when I thought her situation couldn't get any worse.

Sherry  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

What a tragic situation. 

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

You have me sitting on the edge of my seat.

Sherry  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 18

It may be moving fast but it is so right. 

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

An amazing chapter.  About time Bella realizes what she means to Edward and his kids. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

How awful for Rosalie.  Hopefully Bella will be able to take something from it and use to help heal herself. 

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella's parents are a piece of work.  Good thing Edward was there with her. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

Now that was an interesting twist. 

 Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Cat fight. lol.  Cut that bitch Bella. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

Charlie is nuts.

Sherry 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

Out of the mouths of babes. 

Sherry 

You must login (register a new account) to review.