Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats
Marriage? These guys move pretty darn fast!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:47 AM Title: Spooning in Forks
I was gonna give you shit for the comment about it all going downhill after the lemon, but now that I'm at the end, I get it.
You treated Charlie's illness respectfully. I would hope Bella can accept that Charlie was responsible for his death by his drinking choices, and while it hurts to lose him, she had no responsibility for it. Sometimes it does seem like life hands some folks a very large shit sandwich, but in the end, what matters is that we get through it. I like your ending notes as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks...those notes made me cry. I'm glad you appreciated how I handled the illness. Your reviews kept me laughing at the reactions while you read.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:34 AM Title: When a Stranger Calls
I was thinking Charlie ... that's all I can think of. Funny that Edward had to take matters into his own hands! god, I'm sick!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: Positively Negative
Good chapter! Forgot to mention that I'm thrilled Esme recovered so well from the accident, I got so carried away with B/E working things out.
I love Alice's dress, and the bridesmaid dress. The gold one, Esme's dress, right? It definitely works for a mob dress. I like the other two a lot.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Indescribable
The date was wonderful, but ... totally love the dress! I want it!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:05 AM Title: Finding Inspiration
It's about time! Yay, a date!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
The second song was spot on! Did I detect that Jared is kinda interested in Bella, or no?
Author's Response:
Jared isn't into Bella...some healthy flirting in the beginning, but not for a while.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:49 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
Thank you for at least moving it along, rather than dragging out the angst for chapter after chapter.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:43 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
no words.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:36 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
Oh. Oh? is something wrong with Esme? No. no, no, no. Add another layer to the mess.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:24 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
Well after the end note, I am thoroughly confused! I get that she had cervical cancer and had to have a hysterectomy, and in the bigger scheme of things, she survived and is alive. There are a million options today when it comes to having a family.
Of course, Edward would take it poorly, he'd have to be a saint to do otherwise. I'm confident he'll come around, because he's truly a good person at heart. I don't see how she could have told him any sooner, so ... step up Edward. Show us who you are.
Author's Response:
Talking about her not having a child, I mean biologically...like she can't carry a baby herself. Plus with so few eggs, she's worried it'll never happen.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:12 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
What does Rosalie know about Bella?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:03 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
Why was she lying about Quil? I'm confused! Spill it!
Author's Response:
She was lying about her reaction, she didn't want him to know why she was bummed...you'll understand when you think about her secret.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:52 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
I always like to hear Edward's POV, especially when he's this sweet. I suspect there's more we need to hear about Ms. Bella's past.
Author's Response:
I see that you've reviewed everything, so I'm only going to comment to answer a question to save time so I can get back to writing, but thanks for reviewing every chapter!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:44 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
Warm and fuzzy it is. Don't you wish real life was like that? I do!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I do! Had fun writing protective Edward in this one.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Wow! Things sure do happen quick in the world of bars and writing research!
Author's Response:
Bars, yes...writing research, only if you look like Edward!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:29 AM Title: Research
hehehe! I'm familiar with that one ... about shitting where you eat, that is. This could be fun! Is Jake gay? I love gay Jake characters. It takes them right out of the running, but they're still fun to hang out with. Once again, lust at first sight for these two!
Author's Response:
Jake's not gay, just not into Bella in this one, but I do love a gay Jake too!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:44 PM Title: Little Things
Great story... I've been still holding on to hope that Bella would find her mother's ring. It breaks my heart that something like that got stolen. I am glad though that Bella had her peace with her father. I would have been very upset if they didn't make up. It's horrible that he died though.
Again, wonderful story. Can't wait to read the sequel and see how that turns out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to show me some love! I'm really excited by whats happening over here and I'm glad that you liked the story. The sequel just had a new chapter posted...I hope you enjoy~
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:56 AM Title: Research
Love it, love it, love it! Can't wait to get started on the Family you Make.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and I'll see you on the TFYM review page!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Little Things
Enjoyed your story! Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks, your reviews were great and I loved the feedback. The sequel, The Family You Make, is in progress on this site. Have a great night.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:41 AM Title: Without You
Love how Esme and Carlisle have included Bella into their family. I can't believe how crazy busy their lives are. Oh and Cartier...is there a ring in Bella's future?! Enjoying.
Author's Response:
There lives will continue to get even crazier, a ring before the end of the story??? Methinks it is possible...
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:52 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
Loved the floor plans and the pictures! Oh Bella and Edward are getting their own place with room for a baby. I love that this story, isnt't crazily angsty. I think you deal with some realisitic problems...cancer and loss. But you don't drag the angst out for chapters and chapters. Thank you! Enjoying
Author's Response:
I try to make it as true to life as possible, sometimes things are angsty for a while buit other times to drag it out makes it worse, so I try to balance it. Glad you appreciate it.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Wedding Bells!
I love the idea of Leah being the surrogate. It would be perfect. Oh and Bella finally letting Edward see her and touch her where no man's tongue has gone before. LOL! Wonderful! Love the whole wedding scene with the interchanging POV's. Enjoying.
Author's Response:
This is one of the most talked about chapters. Between the lemon and the surrogacy thing...which is a major part of the sequel.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
I love all the pictures that you include with the chapters. The dresses, and now the sixpence and the ring. Oh and Bella and Edward are moving in together equally. I love that Esme is so sweet to to Bella. Bella needs Esme. I'm sure the wedding will be wonderful. Enjoying.
Author's Response:
Edward's family takes her in and she does need it. The pictures are something I found while writing on the other site and I had to create an album, but now I get to put them at the bottom so more people see them. I'm a really visual person, so it helps to show you guys what I was thinking about.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:34 AM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats
Well at least Alice seemed to have a good time...Leah too! Yeah...poor Jasper! LOL! Oh and I'm glad Bella didn't pull away...marriages???? Enjoying.
Author's Response:
The girls had a blast and Edward got something out of it.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Spooning in Forks
Oh poor Bella. It's a sad day when your parents die. You are the one left to carry on. Will Bella keep Edward near her or push him away?
Author's Response:
Its a hard thing to be the oldest member of your family...or worse the last member, but she's got Edward to lean on.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Without You
I love that you add pictures to your author notes. I especially appreciated the one of your floor plan for the condo. I'm such a visual person, so it really helps. I can imagine things, but I'm usually a little off. LOVE the guest room bed set btw. It's gorgeous. And I was so engrossed in the story that I forgot to write this on the appropriate chapter, but I cried like a baby after their fight, when Rose and Emmett showed up at Edward's. Everything Emmett had to say just absolutely struck my heart. That was such a great moment. Many kudos for that one.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:57 PM Title: When a Stranger Calls
Oh I'm wondering if the calls are from Charlie...like he's calling from different phones at the police station...but I don't know why he wouldn't talk to Bella. So I'm probably not right. Bella should report this to the authorities and let them get to the bottom of the calls. Enjoying.
Author's Response:
Once again the conspiracy theories crack me up...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: Positively Negative
Bella's planned date was sweet too...loved the song. Life is continuing on for them...book writing, new bar plans...I am enjoying watching Bella and Edward fall deeper in love.
Author's Response:
They're finding a way to grow as individuals while working together as a couple, it is a beautiful thing!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:32 PM Title: Indescribable
Good chapter! The date was wonderful and Bella and Edward talked. They were honest with each other. Sweet.
Author's Response:
They needed to have that conversation. It was important, but they had to be in a good place to have it. Thanks for the reviews
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:24 PM Title: Finding Inspiration
Yay Esme is home! Oh and Edward's note and the request of a date....so sweet! I think Edward may be a damn good writer! LOL! Enjoying.
Author's Response:
I love that you enjoyed the request for a date and that you think he's a good writer. ;}
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Way Beyond Empty
Loved Edward being a little jealous! Glad he realized that there was nothing to worry about. Let's hope Edward and Bella keep each other happy.
Author's Response:
Jealous Edward is really funny.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:04 PM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
So limbo it is. I think Edward is back for Bella, it's just too difficult with Esme being hurt so bad. I think this does take precedent...at least for now.
Author's Response:
Edward needs for Esme to be okay so he can't deal with much more, but answers come quickly.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:55 PM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
Poor Esme! I hope she will be ok. Bella is there for them...she knows exactly how they feel.
Author's Response:
Bella supports them because she knows how bad it can get and wants to be there. Love how you review practically every chapter, if not every one.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Another Country Heard From
Sounds like a bad time for Edward to not answer his calls. So everyone gave Edward some tough love. I liked Leah. She's direct and a good friend to Bella. Edward needs to figure things out. It is a decision...I mean Bella could still get cancer. Can he deal with that? Enjoying.
Author's Response:
I wanted Leah and Bella to be like sisters because she's the only one who has been there for everything! You're right, he has to think about that...I'm not sure how he would react to that...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:56 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
Ah poor Bella! Edward didn't take it very well did he? Perhaps they should have had this talk sooner, but like Bella said they haven't known each other very long...when do you bring things up like that in a relationship? I am hoping Edward was just surprised and will get over it. I am sure Bella is really hurt by this, but knowing her she'll just figure it's her lot in life to be alone....sigh!
Author's Response:
wow...I love how you have your own conversation in the reviews...its great, its awesome.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:44 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
Oh so how does Bella know Rosalie and what happened between them? Why is Bella afraid of driving in the snow...she does have secrets doesn't she? Can't wait to see what happens...though I am a little afraid! Enjoying!
Author's Response:
I love how you're going all detective on me with this one...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:28 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
Oh they both said their ILY's... I wonder what Bella was keeping from Edward about her feelings about Christmas and children... What was with Charlie? Why did he refuse to see Bella? Oh and Alice is a force of nature isn't she? I'd like to see Bella's NYC. Enjoying.
Author's Response:
You'll be seeing her NYC in the sequel, which is up now.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Research
OMG!! LOVE it! Sassy Bella is always a plus. Can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much hope you enjoy it and I'm sorry it took so long to get back to you.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:44 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
I wonder who robbed Bella? Will she find her ring? I enjoyed seeing Bella and Edward getting to know each other better. Bella had it rough...emancipated minor, a father that doesn't seem to care. What else is Bella hiding? Love Alice! Enjoying.
Author's Response:
Bella has had a rough life as you now know. The ring is lost and the robber is just one of those things that never gets found out.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
LOL! Bella took Leah's advice and fired Edward so they could date. Oh and it was good that Edward walked Bella home. Enjoying.
Author's Response:
The firing scene was fun to write, and the second chapter was the first lemon I'd ever written, so it was fun to go there.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Research
Enjoyed this first chapter. I liked the way you set it up. Already like Bells attitude. Reading on!
Author's Response:
Thanks...I'll be leaving short responses unless answering a specific question, sorry I didn't ge back to you sooner.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: Little Things
This was a beautiful birthday chapter and a beautiful story. Loved each and every chapter, even a couple of the hard ones. I can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words.
Author's Response:
This review means so much to me. This story was my baby and the love that I've gotten for it means the world to me, especially from all the people who found me over here after the move!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Without You
Great job with the furniture, everything was obviously done with Edward in mind. Our loving duo seemed to handle the distance better than expected, can't wait for their reunion.
Author's Response:
Bella definitely thought about Edward's taste, which mean I had to too, but I love doing the research and apartment hunting for these stories!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Wedding Bells!
Your description of the wedding was wonderful, the conversations so enjoyable, I was giggling and crying. That was an incredible lemony ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks...that was my first wedding and my first lemon of that variety as a writer...I was so scared to write them both. Happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:44 PM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
The ring and flower girl's dress are beautiful. I never heard of the sixpence for your shoe, but I like it a lot.
Author's Response:
The sixpence thing was something I found doing all the wedding research and I fell in love with it!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats
That was fun, enjoyed the girls and the bachelorette party, nothing got to out of hand. It seemed like Edward definitely benefited from their outing.
Author's Response:
Oh yes...Edward had more fun than the groom that night~
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:53 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
Beautiful chapter, I loved every word.
Author's Response:
Thank you...the song was something I was so nervous to put out there, but it ended up being well received. I really enjoyed this chapter~
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
She will officially be known from here on out as Saint Bella.
Author's Response:
Awe...Bella is very selfless when it comes to the Cullen's and Edward, even early on.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:44 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
Please don't tell me Esme has breast cancer. I don't know how much more angst I can handle right now.
Author's Response:
Well, I know you're well past that, but nothing that bad for Esme, what does happen is bad enough~
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:41 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
There is still a possibility if she had her eggs frozen, they still could have children or at least one natural child. Adoption is always possible and we know Edward loves her, so I hope he'll come around soon.
Author's Response:
There are still options, they just have to find a way to work past it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:52 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
Wow I like this pace, only 3 chapters and Edward knows he loves Bella already, yea! Looking forward to hearing more about both their backgrounds and for Bella to recognize her feelings.
Author's Response:
There past comes to light pretty quick too and with everything happens the pace keeps up.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:12 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
That was fast and very lemony. I loved the interaction with the Cullens, that was fun.
Author's Response:
That was my first ever lemon so I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:55 PM Title: Research
I love the way this story started, fast right out of the gate. Bella & Edward flirting from the get go is very hot.
Author's Response:
Awe...I'm glad you liked it! They do jump right into it~
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Little Things
i just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed your story ,i am new to this site and your story was one of the first ones i read thanks again and i now off to read the sequel
cheers
elaine
Author's Response:
Wow...thanks for the review and for making mine one of the first stories you read over here! Hope you like what's coming~
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:25 AM Title: Little Things
Loved it. What a sweet birthday. Can't wait for the sequel.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks for all the reviews and I can't wait to see what you like about the sequel as well!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:50 PM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
Gah! Why didn't I meet a man who is drop dead gorgeous, very rich, sweet, kind, gentle, and such a great lover that he can give multiple O's w just penetration? Oh that's right! I'm relegated to the crappy real world and RPattz will only exist on screen (and in my dreams) for me. Le sigh
Author's Response:
Yeah,..if I could I would give each and every one of you your very own Edward, but I can't even find me a Jake!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Wedding Bells!
I think that's incredibly sweet of Leah and an amazing gift. Adoption is just as difficult and can be just as financially draining as ART (artificial reproduction).
And as far as B giving that up- well, I'm glad u did it the way you did. Its not like everyone loves it! I mean maybe while its happening, but yeah, I like how you made the trust factor in that a big deal.
Author's Response:
When I wrote it I made it a trust issue because it gave the intimacy somewhere to go, but it also gave me a chance in my first story to work up to that kind of a lemon. I was so scared! Leah has watched Bella suffer because of this so to be able to give her what she has always wanted is as special for her as it is for B&E.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:34 PM Title: Sixpence for the Richer
The only thing I'm confused about is if the Cullen's have so much $ why in the world were they setting up instead of hiring people to do it?
Author's Response:
I was going back to the novel where Alice did everything herself, now granted she was a vamp so she could do it in seconds, but still it is her big day so she wants to have people she trusts doing it, and Bella is good at that sort of thing.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: Positively Negative
I forced myself to read the chapter and not just skip right to the pics! Ty for putting them right in the chapter!
Author's Response:
I always hated that I found all these people and on ffn so few people would go to the photobucket album for it. This is so much easier and so much better!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:35 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
When A called her "Mommy" I lost it. And B is so strong. I know it was years ago but I can't imagine the hurt goes away, you just get used to it. And to be there for them... I especially loved when E says "if" and B doesn't try to correct him or tell him not to think that way. She just repeats him and let him feel and think whatever he needs to.
Author's Response:
Sometimes you just have to go to the dark place and let those fears out, and Bella was able to do that for Edward, and as for Alice...she just announced she's getting married so she needs her mother more than ever...which is something Bella understands too!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
I just hope that he doesn't take too long to go to her either.
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long to get back to you...I know you already know the answer, but thank you for reviewing and for reading the story so quickly!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 11:03 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
That is so devestating and truly can be an end to some couples. If she had a hysterectomy did she have her uterus removed and therfore can't even carry a pregnancy or just her ovaries and would have to have IVF? Either way I have known couples who have survived infertility and those who have not. Sadly this isn't even something they are dealing w after marriage- this is so soon in a relationship to have to deal w. I feel bad for the both of them.
Author's Response:
A hysterectomy is when they remove the uterus, she had a complete hysterectomy which means they removed her ovaries as well which they do because ita harder to detect ovarian cancer once you've had the procedure. With Bella's cancer fear she wouldn't chance it. They do still have options. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:36 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
She can't have children is my big guess though. Something about going to the gyn telling him not to worry about the condom. Stating she wasn't preg right away.
Author's Response:
*Quiet stare* I'm not telling, but one of your guesses is right~
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:26 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
Lol at your a/n. Wondering about B's secret. Illness? Something to do w her parents? Maybe a previous bf?
Author's Response:
Love the speculation...and that note got some laughs at ffn too!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
Love an ooc take charge B.
Author's Response:
I love my lil spitfire too! thanks~
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:23 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
I like how you don't waste anytime w all the silly back and forth flirting!
Author's Response:
This was my first story and I wanted the fact that he could leave tomorrow and have no tie to be what moved them forward!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:10 PM Title: Research
Don't know if I've read any of your other stories but I've seen your name referenced in a few other stories. Glad I found this one.
Author's Response:
Probably A Cullen Wannabe, thanks for heading over, I hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
Great chapter, keep on writing
Author's Response:
Hawkeye...you made the jump! Yay! I was keeping the story up for you, so now I can take it down without messing you up! Thanks hon~ Hope you enjoy the drama free site!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:48 AM Title: Little Things
omg... i am so happy i found this story.
it was awesome
Author's Response:
wow...thanks so much! Be sure to shoot over to The Family You Make, which is its sequel!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 11:12 PM Title: Research
No worries about the earlier message. I'm glad you did let me know that not only had I had to fav/alert my favorite authors but their stories as well.
I like TWCS library ~ FFn is good but didn't like all rules and regulations and them pulling or suspending really good writing! No one needs "big brother".
Almost done with the first story and cannot wait to delve into part 2!
Author's Response:
Awe...thanks! I've noticed a lot of people used to ffn not realizing that so when I saw the first comment and then nothing after I figured I'd drop a note just in case! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I'm working on betaing the rest of the sequel!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:38 PM Title: Spooning in Forks
I've been reading this story from yesterday and my family life and comfort is paying the price as meals and laundry have been pushed to the side.
This chapter brought tears to my eyes as I witnessed my dad dying of diabetes and was there when he passed. It brought back many memories. You did a good job.
Even if I don't review every chapter, wanted to let you know your writing is very good.
Author's Response:
Awe! Thank you for the support. I sent you that message because I wasn't aware of the need to fave both the story and the author, so I'm glad you dove back in, though dinner breaks are important! Thanks for feeling that I did the moment justice, its a weird thing to say I'm glad you felt that way...becasue I'm glad I was able to move you, though not happy to see you cry ;..( Your continued support really does mean a lot!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:03 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
Feeling lots of Love great chapter
Author's Response:
Yes it was. Lots more love and it will continue on. Thanks for the reviews and I can't wait to see what you think of the rest!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:30 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me
So she feel like if she is not there with him he wont love her??? This is also a growing exprence for her she can serv time in a hospital not a fun thing.
Author's Response:
Bella's had people turn their back on her for a lot less so with someone as important to her as Edward is she's not chancing it. It's not that he won't love her, its that he won't think her worth it. Having that kind of self view is hard and that is a failing of Charlie as well as past boyfriends. It will be a learning experience for them both.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:08 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
How could someone not leave some love after that one tears of fear for Esme and then tears of happness because Bella is back showing her love.
Author's Response:
I've been on both sides of that so I wanted to show how much it means to be there for someone and to have someoen there for you. Bella loves him so it was never a choice for her and the whole Esme thing is what makes them see how short life really is. Thanks for the love, as always~
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:52 AM Title: Little Things
loved the dress can't wait to see what happens next....
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! The prologue to the sequel is up so you can head over and check that bad boy out! Thanks for all the support~
Date: 26 Feb 2010 5:27 AM Title: Little Things
aww what a happy ending!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you all liked the ending! Thanks for the support and be sure to check out the sequel...the prologue is up!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:12 PM Title: The Great Real Estate Search
aww everything is going planned for them im happy cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
The next two chapters...aka the last two chapters of this (before the sequel starts) are fun, more planning and running around but all around happy!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:36 AM Title: Wedding Bells!
great chapter cant wait to see what throws them for a loop next !
Author's Response:
Always have a loop ready for them...you'll see!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:17 AM Title: Spooning in Forks
alright i teared in this chapter ! but im glad they made up !
Author's Response:
I cried writing it, I knew Bella was going to have this moment with Charlie at some point and it broke my heart to take away the last of her family, even if he wasn't a part of her life in nearly a decade. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Research
=) I actually started reading this story on fanfiction, but I never finished it, so now I'm going to go and finish it. I can't wait. =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it again. It should be completed on here in the next day or so I can't wait to see your response to the rest! Thanks for the review and making the jump!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:40 AM Title: Indescribable
love the dress can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks...one of my favorite things is goin all Alice when it comes to clothes and things that I'm writing, I love finding pictures and using them for my stories so I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:18 AM Title: Finding Inspiration
loved it very much can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! More coming soon!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:17 AM Title: Another Country Heard From
No not Esme Love Leah that is what you call a best freind Thanks
Author's Response:
Yeah...I went after Esme...you'll see more in the upcoming chapters. My girls are a lot like Leah, that's where the inspiration came from. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:29 AM Title: Indescribable
aww their getting back on track love it !
Author's Response:
Yes they are! More coming soon, thanks for the reviews!~
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:12 PM Title: Finding Inspiration
Loved it very much can't wait to see what he will do next update when you can thanks for sharing....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:11 PM Title: Finding Inspiration
Loved it very much can't wait to see what he will do next update when you can thanks for sharing....
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm enjoying all the new love for my baby so I can't wait to see what you think of the coming chapters!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:31 PM Title: Finding Inspiration
aww a date
Author's Response:
Yup...when I was planning the date I fell so in love I wanted to fly to Seattle and I had made everything up!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:48 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty
aww now everyone sees that he loves her ! not just his family ... great chapter keep them comming i love the story
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter and are enjoying the love. Thank you for the review!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:21 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt
alright i teared in this one ... i cant believe hes being a dushward/!
Author's Response:
I love watching you guys picking sides like my reviewers on the other site did. Edward is being selfish, but he feels justified. Thanks for the review~
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:20 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
The dress is so cute. the neclace is so Alice. What is wrong with Bella? Can she have kids? You are having fun writing this story and it shows I am loving it keep it coming
Author's Response:
Thanks...I really do love this baby! Bella's issue will be revealed very soon and I'm off for the day now so more chapters will come!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:25 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
Yes I enjoyed it lots of good back ground on both of them I dont like Charlie that is for sure. On a personal note my parents deviorced when I was 8 when I was 10 we were within 50 miles and would not come see us tell my mother if she wanted him to see us she needed to bring us to him ya we did not see him he was a prick kind of like Charlie. Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I had fun with their background. Charlie has lots of issues and he took them out on Bella, but more on that later...
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
Oh wow. Why do I hAve a feeling someone touched Bella when she was younger? I feel like happened when she was with her dad. I'm impaciently waiting for more. ~ Meg
Author's Response:
You know out of all the readers I've had on both sites, I think you're the first person to go that direction...some people said other things, but I can't remember anyoen thinking that and tying it in with her attitude towards Charlie. I'm working hard, so you won't be waiting long!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:10 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
Wow love~ I was not expecting him to realize it yet. I like how you have developed Edward.
Hope you post more soon!
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella fall in love very fast in this one...which is where some of the problems arise! Thanks for the E love~
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:49 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster
A taste of lemon. Love Em's mighty mouse comment. Looking forward to more chaptes being added here.
Author's Response:
Mighty Mouse sticks so enjoy it! Sorry I'm responding out of order a little, but I'm happy you're having fun with it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:36 PM Title: Research
love the start. I found the coffe house when the site which will not be named started dumping my fav stories.
So enjoying your Bella can't wAit for more. Thanks for sharing your writing. ~ Meg
Author's Response:
Thanks hon! My stories are all making the move and will soon be off that site! It's nice to post without fear of getting attacked! Thanks for the reviews~
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:19 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All
Thanks it is not hard to support a great story. I love Edward POV very much I cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Awe...*Blushes and toes foot into the ground* EPOV is a lot of fun to write in this one...
Date: 21 Feb 2010 5:49 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman
So was Jess trying to set Edward up with Lauran? I was so happy that Edward was there for her. Why didnt he ask her where she wanted to sleep? I cant wait for next
Author's Response:
No, Jess was just excited to be able to show off her connections to Lauren...these two aren't trouble makers in this one. When you ask about him not asking about where she wanted to sleep, did you mean at the end...becasue when he asked if she was joining him in her room that's what he was doing. I'm home from work which means more chapters are coming!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:25 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster
Love the lemony goodness. waiting for more
Author's Response:
Glad you loved it, that was the first lemon I ever wrote and when I first posted it I was so nervous but obviously people like my lemons because they keep reading my stuff! Working on chapter three now. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:07 AM Title: Research
oh Edward wont know what hit him..... neither will Bella - i cant wait : )
great first chapter !!
Author's Response:
hehehehe...that review made me laugh really hard! I'm glad you liked it, it will be updated soon so fear not!