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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 10:05 AM Title: Research

Loved it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 10:50 PM Title: Little Things

too bad all your pictures are gone

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Date: 29 Nov 2020 2:21 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster

wow that was fast

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 11:34 AM Title: Little Things

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 10:53 AM Title: Without You

Loved it!

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Date: 01 Nov 2020 10:22 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search

Loved it!

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Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:59 AM Title: Wedding Bells!

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:38 AM Title: Sixpence for the Richer

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2020 9:18 AM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 10:12 AM Title: Spooning in Forks

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:57 AM Title: When a Stranger Calls

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:47 AM Title: Positively Negative

Wonderful

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:31 AM Title: Indescribable

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 9:02 AM Title: Finding Inspiration

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 8:43 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 6:46 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 6:38 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2020 4:18 AM Title: Another Country Heard From

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 9:41 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 9:26 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

Awesome

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 5:25 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:38 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All

Great chapter!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:21 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman

Loved it! Poor Bella! Who broke into her apartment?

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:50 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:34 AM Title: Research

Loved it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:23 AM Title: Research

great start

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Little Things

I really enjoyed this storyline;) it's cool Edward wears jewellery I'm looking forward to the sequel ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 7:29 PM Title: The Great Real Estate Search

I loved your drawing of the condo but I thought they would have more bedrooms, I don't understand Charlie's place though?;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 6:40 PM Title: Wedding Bells!

Awesome! I thought that Leah would be perfect before it came up ;) I hope it happens before the end ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 4:12 PM Title: Spooning in Forks

OK I was right about Charlie  but does Leah and Seth have  different last names? How come nobody knows each other? ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:28 PM Title: Indescribable

Excellent so far, I'm so glad they talked it out ;) I love this dress you posted for this chapter but not the last one although I did like the colour ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2014 2:02 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

Wow when you said curve ball I hope this was the only one ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 11:30 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

Cool! So what's she hiding? A baby? 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 10:43 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All

I love epov as well thanks for ages but how old is Edward?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 9:52 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster

Sooo cool!!!!!! This is excellent for your first multi chapter story. ;)

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:53 PM Title: Little Things

Lovely story,i really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 7:24 AM Title: Another Country Heard From

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 7:04 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 1:49 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:35 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:09 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All

loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:33 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman

awe! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:43 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

 

loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 2:43 AM Title: Research

Loved it!

Reviewer: BiteMeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:34 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

Hot, hot, hot!!!!!!

Reviewer: MissVicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Indescribable

I always think it's so weird that in most stories they have their lovers get redressed...but I was just thinking, do most people where underpants to bed?

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:01 AM Title: Little Things

I love your story...I hope will continue it

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:26 AM Title: Positively Negative

I just love your story! :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:54 AM Title: Indescribable

Great chapter, and I loved date night. ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 4:55 AM Title: Finding Inspiration

So glad Esme is home...Awww, that card Edward gave Bella is so sweet. *swoon* xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:26 AM Title: Way Beyond Empty

Your story is so fabulous and I thank you for writing it. I may have already said that, but it deserves repeating. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 9:02 AM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

Not sure what to say. But big hugs to you for writing this story. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:44 AM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

I don't know what to say right now, other than I really love your story, so much.  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:28 AM Title: Another Country Heard From

Oh lord, now what? Things are so emotional right now, I feel like crying or hiding under the covers like Edward. I hope Esme is going to be alright. This was another really powerful chapter. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:01 AM Title: Buried Under the Guilt

I didn't cry while reading the chapter, but I feel like I might now. Things are going to be rough for our couple for awhile aren't they? I'm so sad for both of them. I hope Edward doesn't push Bella away, but I have a feeling that he might, or the other way around. Powerful chapter, wow. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:32 AM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

I absolutely can't wait to know what Bella's secret is, and how she knows Rosalie, and how Rose knows her secret. First I wonder if has something to do with Bella getting checked/monitored for cancer, or if something happened to her. I can't help but think that something is up with her physically because of the fact that she wouldn't let Edward perform oral sex on her. Then there was her reaction to Quils girlfriend being pregnant. Or I could be totally off base. I better just get to reading to find out!  :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:43 AM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

If only we all had an Alice in our lives! :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:03 AM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All

I was right! I knew I'd love your story, it's great!  :)  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:38 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman

Awww, I just love your Edward and Bella. Edward is so sweet. I can't wait to find out more about their pasts, and if whoever broke into Bella's place knows her, or if it was just random. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:07 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

Nice. Just jump right in the deep end already!  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 3:44 AM Title: Research

Sometimes I can just tell right away; I think I'm really going to love your story. It's started out great. xo

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:35 AM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman

oh i wonder who broke in... interesting.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:19 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

okay that was quick

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 1:01 AM Title: Research

sounds like it is going to be good

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Little Things

Wonderful chapter, lvoe your story !!!! 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:37 AM Title: Little Things

How awesome is it that they are going to get married on the anniversary of the day that they met! That has to be the fates smiling down on them that they got that date and the place that Bella wanted to get married at.



Author's Response:

That was a fun little thing to work out and it works in with a few other plot points...thanks again for all the reviews!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Without You

It is amazing that Bella and Esme got the whole condo furnished in a matter of days!! I am jealous it took me years to pick out what I wanted in my house and I don't think that I am still happy I need a new living room set!



Author's Response:

When you have a future MiL like Esme and unlimited money, you can do a lot!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 12:34 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search

They got their condo!! I wonder how much they are going to have to rein in Alice and Esme??

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:47 PM Title: Wedding Bells!

That is an amazing gift that Leah is willing to give them by being a surragate for them. I was cracking up at some of the conversations while they were dancing and I think that Alice might make Edward and Bella an Aunt and Uncle in the not so distant future.



Author's Response:

OMG, you did it again! Do you have AgoodWITCH radar?  I need you when I have a writer's block?  Seriously, i flove you! I had fun with those dances and the surrogacy is something that will continue into the sequel as you saw.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:27 PM Title: Sixpence for the Richer

It is finally time!!!! YEA

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Some String and a Bag of Oats

I am sure that was a nightmare for Jasper! It was funny for all of us though.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:45 PM Title: Spooning in Forks

That was really sad! it was really glad that Charlie and Bella got to see each other one more time and that she found out that Charlie didn't blame her for not staying with him after her mother died and that he got to say how sorry he was for treating her the way that he did.



Author's Response:

This for me was an important thing because i'm all about the family you choose vs the family you're born into and for her to move forward with the Cullen's she'd need to resolve her issues with her father and it was the only thing that force Charlie to reach out to her after all this time.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:25 PM Title: When a Stranger Calls

Is is Charlie trying to get into Bella's life now after he has caused so much dammage already?



Author's Response:

Maybe...hehehe, you seem to call me on a lot of my things.  You're good!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:12 PM Title: Positively Negative

The dresses for Alice and Jasper's wedding are beautiful! It is nice to see that Edward and Bella are trying to take things slower than they were.



Author's Response:

I wanted that to be a slower burn this time...and planning these weddings were my first two and i had them planned very early on, knowing that it wouldn't be happening for E&B until the sequel.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Indescribable

They are so good together I really hope that they get a llifetime of happiness.



Author's Response:

That's the plan, lovie...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:10 PM Title: Finding Inspiration

Edward finally asked her out and that card was a great way to do that.

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:45 PM Title: Way Beyond Empty

That was sweet that they have a song about Bella even more amazing was that she got up on stage and sang with them.

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:25 PM Title: Someone to Watch Over Me

That is so sad. I really hope that when Esme wakes up she is he and remembers her family. It is good that they have each other to lean on because it is sad when a family doesn't come together to help each other through something like this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

I really hope that Esme is going to be ok!! It was really sweet that Bella came to make sure that they were all taken care of even if her and Edward are figuring out things right now.



Author's Response:

Bella knows what they are going through and she couldn't sit by and let them suffer, even if Edward and her are having issues, she loves that family and wanted to be there for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:14 PM Title: Another Country Heard From

Oh no there is something wrong with Esme!! I hope that she is ok!! It is good that Leah went to talk to Edward because it gave him more insight into Bella!



Author's Response:

Leah is all about Bella being happy and she knows that despite his issues, he's good for her as long as he can be there fore Bella.  We'll get to Esme in another review...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:28 PM Title: Buried Under the Guilt

That is so sad that she had her future ripped away from her when she was 20. I have cervical cancer and endometriosis running in my family which sometimes makes it hard to have children. I was blessed to be able to have one but now have problems that will probally make it hard to have children later on. I really hope that they talk to each other and work things out.



Author's Response:

My mother had cervical cancer, which is why I first thought about it...I've always been worried about having it before I could have a family...that was the birth of this story.  I've had some amazing people tell me their stories and I appreciate you sharing yours.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:08 PM Title: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

It really is a small world that Rose and Bella know each other. I wonder what secret she is keeping from Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:50 PM Title: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

How amazing are they that they are buying her a whole new wardrobe for christmas!



Author's Response:

Alice is definitely going overboard and bringing the family along with her, but its a sweet thing after what she's been through.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Cleaning Up and Baring All

That is sad about all of the stuff that got taken from her apartment especially her engagement ring. I really hope that she doesn't get that mad about the fact that Edward told Alice about her coming to christmas.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: An Officer and a Gentleman

That is sad that someone broke into Bella's apartmant but it is a good thing that she wasn't home. What is Edward going to do now that Bella fired him from working at the bar.



Author's Response:

Okay love, I'm gonna comment on most of the reviews but not all, mainly to answer or chat about things you bring up!  Thank you though for taking the time to review every chapter.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Flirting with Disaster

I wonder what Leah said to her to let her guard down enough to have sex with Edward in her office.

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:19 AM Title: Research

That is funny that Edward came in there looking to do research and got a job!

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:04 PM Title: Little Things

It's a great story, but the ending seems a bit abrupt.  You see everything fall into place, but it sort of hangs at the end.  I did enjoy it and there were some really great funny parts.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us!



Author's Response:

i was bringing the story of them finding each other to a close on a content note.  The sequel picks up where this leaves off, following them as they get married and begin to build a life together, please check out The Family You Make to see the story continued.  I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the honest opinion...this was my first fic and my endings have become much smoother since then.

Reviewer: sarah101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: Little Things

Great story



Author's Response:

thanks, hope you like the sequel too...its a WIP! I appreciate the love~

Reviewer: CornerWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 3:07 AM Title: Research

Okay. seriously. wish there really was a bar like this. I've danced ballet for 17 years and I could use a place like this. Good story!



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:01 PM Title: Little Things

I really loved this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I hope you like the sequel, "The Family You Make" as well!

Reviewer: nellie1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 11:18 PM Title: Research

I came across your story in the most recent section, and it was a great story and I am currently enjoying the second story. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: charv241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Little Things

really enjoyed the story!!!...now im off to read the sequel!!



Author's Response:

Wow...thank you so much!  I hope you like what's coming~

Reviewer: krstn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:35 PM Title: Flirting with Disaster

Great chapter... HOTness all around

 



Author's Response:

Yup...no angsty will they/won't they in this one!

Reviewer: krstn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Research

This is great for a first fan fic. I can't wait to read more

 



Author's Response:

wow, thanks!  I can't wait to hear what you think of it!

Reviewer: sassy153 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Without You

I love the furniture! Please get these two in the same city and room soon, ok?



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews and you'll see them together again net chapter!

Reviewer: sassy153 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search

I love visuals!

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Great Real Estate Search

I love visuals!

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:18 AM Title: Wedding Bells!

Wow, so much to take in. I loved it all, and that's all I'm gonna say for now!

Reviewer: sassy153 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:07 AM Title: Sixpence for the Richer

Love Angela's dress!

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