Date: 06 Dec 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
wtf
Date: 26 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
ok I REALLY LIKE this story,
Don't get me wrong, I was just going through some of my saved stories. So I was like uh wonder if she ever finished buried amogst the begonias!! I totally love that story!! Its awsome!!! So if you are still working on fanfiction where PLEASE!!!
Date: 18 May 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
i have been searching for this fic forever!! the latest chap doesnt show up! and curious to where buried amongst the bogonias is at? ur amazing.btw. just dark enough for me!
Date: 14 May 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
OK. I know the story is supposed to be complete. And it really doesn't need another chapter, 'cause you know, my imagination is running wild, driving me into dark places. But one of the reviews you answered - one more chapter, and really, I found with your stories, no matter how wild and dark my imaginations are, they can never compare to yours. So, maybe an epi??
Date: 05 Mar 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I didn't get the ending! Fay said she was gonna make them a star. What did she do? Made them join the circus for eternity? 0_o
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Whats that suppose to mean?! I hate riddles. haha!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
fuck man. I love reading your stories!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 8:56 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
what the shit?! I'vd missed reading your stories!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
hey durty nelly !! plz update !! i've been dying to read ur nxt part plssssss ...
Date: 09 Nov 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
oh DurtyNelly, where have you gone? why did you have to take your twisted little mind away from me? pay no mind to what people say! i enjoy and understand your stories, nothing has captured my mind so much in such a long while like your stories do! i fell in love with BURIED and have been longing for the break of tortured in the tulips. please say you haven't removed yourself forever and your taking a small break. although i can't help but notice your we site has been wiped clean : ( i'm holding out, till then.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Where are you? The suspense has been going on for months!!! I need my release baby come on! Daisies too what will Edward do to pussy Phil and whory Renee?
Just tell me you will eventually be coming back. Please
Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Ooh i love it! hope to see an update soon:D
Date: 11 Oct 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
awesome!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Some how I didn't receive any of these updates. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Oh no! I'm feeling really sick....!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
What are they going to do to edward?
Btw, thx 4 sharing, you're a really great writer :)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
What? Who? Where? How? Why? In other words, WTF?
But, you are, after all, the Queen of Suspense and Horror. This was a truly magnifiscent little piece of magic.
Thank you!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
Cool chapter! Is this the last chapter? I hope not, I want to find out what happened to them. Please update soon.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Wow now I'm really curious. Great job.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Oh another twist.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Oh wow didn't think Edward would go through with it.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
I really feel bad for both Edward & Bella. Edward's upbringing made him a troubled soul. I don't think that Bella's spell did anything to Edward.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
What a story! Now I'm very curious as to what will be happening. Hope I can handle it:)
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I cant wait to read more. Love this. It is fantastic.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I liked this addition, but I'm freaking! What the hell is going to happen to them? I'm really enjoying this story. I just don't know how dark it's going to get. I've never been put off by dark stories before, so hopefully I can tough it out for you.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
What were they turned into? What kind of side show could they have been smuggled out as?
Oh man, I've loved the suspense even as it creeped me out. lol
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Oh. I can't take it. What have they done?
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
OMG! My mouth is hanging open. Loved the newspaper article...and just waiting fore more...:D
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
K, I am trying this again. lemme know if it works. I so dl chrome just for u, babe.
Loving this fic. I want the final chap- like ...yesterday. K.... so gimme gimme, as well as the rest of that article.....
Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Bummer for them!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Where are they stuck?? Please update more, need to know where and why they are stuck, who are the people that kidnapped??, And why?
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Now I'm more curious, I wonder what will happen to Bella??
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
i love this story so much! thank you for posting another creative genius!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
OMG that is awesome. This story is amazing, I can't wait to see what Edward did or does to her!!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT! They're GONE!?!?!?!?! SHIT!
(Very nice touch with the newspaper clipping!!!)
As always & forever, I bow to your awesomeness..Love Linda xo
Date: 27 Aug 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
A very nice and unexpected touch. I love it.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Such an awesome chapter. So they will both be lost and kept for show somehow in this carnival?
Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
So Fran and Fay are 2 different people. Are they going to use Edward and Bella in their carnival for show somehow
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I love this!! This would have to be one of the most creative ways to post a chapter i've ever seen.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Pure Genius. Nothing else is necessary. Brilliant!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I am dying to know what has happened to them and what Fay meant by Edward not feeling anymore pain. I absolutely love your writing. It always leaves me wanting more.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Interesting ....
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
is this the end?
Author's Response:
No, doll. One chapter left.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Love how you did this!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
A "Star"? Hmmm...
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Oh shit!!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Durty, babe ur on fire. I don't kno if the reaction you were looking for from us is fear. But yes I'm scared as hell rite now lol.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
I love how twisted this is! Can't wait for more.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
What is this? Who is she and how does she know what he's thinking? A favor to be collected later? Or his soul?
Ugh. These questions and more will be plaguing me until the end. I just know it. And now I feel like going back and searching for lost clues. lol
Again, thank you for sharing this. It's been a long while since I've had to alternate between biting my nails and scrolling down while reading.
xoxo
Mel
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Sacrifice. Because tampering withthe way it's supposed to be should be punished.
*sigh* But at least there's help.
Love the old-timey magic and mystique.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Oh. shit. Oh shit. Oh shit. I sheer brutality of it. The time and intentionality of it makes me shudder.
And his lack of remorse. The cockiness. And smarts at locking himself back up. Oh, he has bad deep down in him. It's not just the curse.
Oh no.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Ohmygod. That's horrifying. Of course it is... because it's supposed to be. lol
His detatchment, I don't know, it felt almost as if it was just a task... need not passion, if that makes sense. He became less human and more of a monster and it scared the shit out of me. lol
Is she saved? Or something worse? Eek.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
This reminds me of a story I read as a kid about a traveling circus and a girl who made a wish for a boy to set down roots.The message of being careful of what you wished for has stuck with me since elementary.
This is that stories older, scarred, and whiskey guzzling older brother to me. I am repelled and intrigued all at the same time. And even when I walk away from the story, it follows me around. I love that.
Thank you for going through the effort of switching sites and reposting. I love the generosity of the fandom... and your creative and slightly disturbing mind. lol
xoxo
Mel
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Chills...that is all. I seriously got chills. I can only hope that an update is in the very, very...did i say very...as in its already there and I can keep reading, future. Yeah, didn't think the chap was there. But you can't blame a girl for hoping. Maybe we needs a spell on you...maybe we need a F. Wormwood...MWAHAHAHA. Ok, don't mind the voices, just update soon. Scrappy
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Is it wrong of me to try to figure out where you are about to take us. I don't know why I bother because as long as I've been reading your stories, I've never come close (well maybe once) to figuring it out. But as usual, you leave me trying to think in the beautifully twisted way that you do so that I don't have to wait for the scratch of the mental itch you've started. Durty, I do hope you keep the updates coming...I hate the sweet torture of waiting for your return. You know how I like it....Scrappy
Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
It takes a mad skill, or a mad mind, to make a reader not only understand but LIKE the demented. Of course, to my satisfaction you have a little bit of both. Keep the updates coming. Yours madly, Scrappy
Date: 25 Aug 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Need more!
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
I am so into this story - I love the twist it's taken with Fay Wormwood. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
So is wonder what he had to do to pay his debt. Why didn't he ask her?
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
The plot thickens. I love the twists that have shown up in the last two chapters. I can't wait for your next one.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
oh my god, whats going on?
I want the next chapter... please????
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Edward did it and it was good!
You write brilliant as always!
I cant write more, because I have to read ;)
Fuck Fanfiction.net!
Greetz from germany!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Hot damn....
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Wow...I am soooo glad I found this here. I had started it on ff.net and kept hoping it would update and wadda ya' know? Here it is! woot woot ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Poor Edward, having to deal with the devil to get rid of torment ...
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Love it!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Oooh! Wormwood! I love this story.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
That somehow just made me think of Wicked or something similar...one good witch Fay, dealing with Edward and one bad witch, Fran dealing with Bella
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Gee..I wonder how she's gonna help her..LOL. xoxo
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
OMG. Was wishing you would update!! You know how much I love your stories. They are the BEST in fanfiction!!! xoxox
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
OMG !!! I love your stories!!!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
OH JESUS Dirty!! What the fuck? Who killed & blendered the 2 fucktards? What's the deal with Fran & Quazimoto dude? AKKK She's brewing up a new batch of freaks for her show isn't she?????????? Oh hell..THIS is why I love your depraved mind...you feel My depraved mind so.damn.good!!!! Need More...Love ya hard, Linda xo
Date: 22 Aug 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Oh Shit...what's in your fucked up brain now Nelly?! I'm scared!!! But that how you want me huh?!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Oh god, creepy!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Omg what did she do to Bella? Is she going to take all of Edwards love away now. Is that the only way she can fix him? But wht did she do that to bella then. Please more I need more!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Ahh! What's she going to do? A needle? All I can think of is that hunchback dude named Lud and I've already got scary thoughts running around my mind.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Man...... Durty this ish is good az hell. I'm like wow. Plez post more chappies soon Love :)
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
The two questions are solved and one curious when I think I'm going to solve here comes another, another curiosity to make me crazy here lol.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
I just gets better and better! Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Now I'm doubly curious ..... a super park by another for the carnage .....
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
I forgot to review last chapter to let you know how much I've missed this story!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
So happy for another update. I wonder if he killed them. I sure wouldn't have blamed him. They were sickos. God I hope he's not to far gone from all of this and he and Bella can come out of this ok. Please tell me they have a hea. I want another update soon!! Please??!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
I hope they were tortured like he was!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
I wondered how that little plot line had ended? He is one shifty SOB...
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
Mmm, really interesting chapter. I wonder who did it. It's making me think that the person who knocked him out in the previous chapter is the same person who killed them.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
ohhhh damnnn, I wanna know what happened to him!!! don't die on us now Edward!! lol
FANTASTIC (as everything you write)
love!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
I wonder who saved Bella from rape? Jacob was? or the owner of the tent?
I'm sorry Edward, an alcoholic mother (probably by his father abusing her) and an abusive father who sells sexual favors from a young and if he does not agree, sells her favors to a pedophile for this violent it. After all this is still the girl he always loved all your life and casts a spell to make him suffer even more each time gets away from it and become more violent ......'m really sorry for him and he probably will end dead because of this spell ...... that would be to have a happy ending for him? maybe a happy ending for him along with it ...... I think I'm asking too much.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
Wow I'm really enjoying your story, it is sensational. I'm not a big fan of horror stories, but its called me and so I started reading I could not stop, I had to go back to the beginning now to comment His chapters are amazing. I have already put in favorites.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
OMG!!! IS IT ALICE?? dID SHE KNOCK HIM OUT???
Date: 21 Aug 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
YES! ABOUT TIME! is what I screamed when I saw alert cuz I've been wondering when you remembered me & my Robwardcession with this story!
Now who the hell clubbed him????? I absolutely LOVE this story..love love love it! Linda Obselka Schiefelbein *waves bloody knife at her beloved durty girl*
Date: 21 Aug 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
I was actually just thinking about this story the other day, so I was pretty happy to see the update email in my inbox.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Omg I have sooooo missed this story so please don't leave us hanging. Please update soon!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Hmmmm...wtf happened?!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
WHAT!!?! WHO? I could go on but I'm pretty sure you know exactly what I need right now. Way to come back and get me all jazzed up again. I'm so pumped and ready for more. Hurry back Durty...I needs some more!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Thank you thank you...the wait is over :) but ahhh...I am just a greedy girl and want it all now:)
-Renee
Date: 21 Aug 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Welcome back, as always you know how to leave a girl hanging
Date: 19 Aug 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
Hi Nelly is this ever going to be continued??? Or have I missed the link somewhere???
Date: 15 Jul 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
Freaking amazing!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter One - Twenty One
Holy shit thats rough...