Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:01 PM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
Great story. Sad to see it end
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:51 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
awww that was really the perfect ending for the story ^^
i so loved reading it and resisting the inevitable.
can't wait to read more of the daily grind, i saw the pm u sent and i am so excited.
thanx, you truly are an amazing writer, not just words, just the truth ;)
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:34 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
:) loved this story
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
c'est toujours un plaisr de lire vos histoires alors merci
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
Outtakes. Outtakes! Please? :))))))
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
Oh this was awesome! I hope we get to see the second honeymoon on a future take.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
Love it!!! I am going to miss these two.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:48 AM Title: Epilogue: Where there is love
Great epilogue. With the future outtakes it would be nice to fast track it like you did at the start of this one.
Hope to hear more of the life of this family.
:)
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: Trial and Error
If this was writers block, u may want it more often!!! Wow-this was awesome!!!
Pls update soon!!!
P.S.: I luv ur Seth!! :)
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:01 PM Title: Surprise!
great chapter!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:17 AM Title: Trial and Error
Aaawww! It's sad Elizabeth had to die for Eric to open his eyes and his hatred had killed the only person that love him.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Trial and Error
Holy crap! I know you warned us but wow...you must have eaten an angst burger before you wrote this. It was awesome!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:36 AM Title: Trial and Error
Intense is an understatement. You had by heart pounding and my stomach in knots through the entire chapter. I guess that speaks well of you as a writer that you would have such a profound impact on your readers. I'm so glad she and the baby are alive.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:09 AM Title: Trial and Error
Such a beautiful chapter. Cried a little in places through the chapter. RIP Aunt Elizabeth and welcome to the family baby Elijah.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:39 AM Title: Trial and Error
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:26 AM Title: Trial and Error
Great chapter. Update soon!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Trial and Error
intense chapter, more please :)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 7:20 PM Title: Trial and Error
I did not see that one coming. I thought he would try something, he was too sure of himself. But to have killed his mother? That was crazy!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:49 PM Title: Same day another Masen and Cullen?
Hi, just want to tell you how much a love your storie. Hope you wont be offended but i'm french canadian and some of your translation are not accurate. Since you offen use the term '' peu aime'' (little love) i will tell you that the right translation is ''petit amour'' ... i know that sometimes translator dictionnary are not very good so hope you wont be offended. Keep up the good work ... i really love your style.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:48 PM Title: Trial and Error
OMG I cried , I cried like a baby! Thank God that they were able to save both.. That damn man, I seriously hope that Orlando makes him his bitch in prison or better yet, kills him in prison!!!
BUT I knew that when Liz kept asking for forgiveness in the begining of the chapter, I knew something was going to happen to her, deep down, something major. BUT i wont lie, I thought she was going to shoot his ass in the court room!!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Trial and Error
Loved this chap cnt w8 4 nxt update x
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:31 PM Title: Trial and Error
Love it!!! Glad Bella and the baby are okay.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:13 PM Title: Trial and Error
i loved the chapter so much :( but i hated that elizabeth died !!!
thanx so much for updating, can'ät wait to read more
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:06 AM Title: Trial and Error
wow so intense and angsty! loved it :)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:23 AM Title: Trial and Error
holy crow Exceptional Chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:55 AM Title: Trial and Error
great chapter, I am glad the bastard will go away for a long time..sad about Liz.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:40 AM Title: Trial and Error
Really intense! Eric is a devil! I'm just so sorry that someone has to die in this update.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:02 AM Title: Trial and Error
omg I love it.....
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:31 AM Title: Trial and Error
no it cant end you have to keep going.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:29 AM Title: Trial and Error
Great chapter.......sorry to see Aunt Liz die, but glad that Eric may finally see the error of his ways....thanks for writing!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:44 AM Title: Trial and Error
Sad that Eric's mum had to die, but at least Bella and the baby are ok
Date: 09 Oct 2012 11:46 PM Title: Damage Control
uhhhhh yeah probably erick, i dont know! but how much can these affect them? the interview was great, so finally the damn world can understand them!!no more crazy papparazzi I hope! I hate them, make me remember papparazi movie!!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: Damage Control
loved it
keep going
can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:33 PM Title: The mind of the enemy
faith! easy there are few choices, victoria, jane, faith and matilda. matilda just want edward, as jane too who also have a past with edward then wouldnt with orlando. victoria like james, really why will he make contact with his cellmate when he can directly with james, then faith have everything planed, been with mac knowing he will have money, planning everything hating bella AND edward, and there it goes orlando asking were she find the money... HEY I AM GOOD WITH ANALITIC, hehe I may work for the cia
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:23 AM Title: Damage Control
looking orward to more
Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:27 AM Title: Damage Control
Faith being dead, hum...great she had it coming. the interview was killer, B and E rock.......
Date: 28 Sep 2012 7:42 PM Title: A Nightmare
Hey I love your story and can not wait for an update. I followed it over here from fanfiction after I read the part before this story. I was wondering if you knew how to get email updates for your story. Anyways update soon please.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:24 PM Title: Damage Control
Ahh so this is the death and I shouldn't be worried? I thought it was going to be faith but I didn't know. I think she took her own life. Ah but eric was saying he wanted her gone....hmm
I hope the interview doesn't hurt their case! I love that Bella is momma bear and they explained the situation from thei view!
Love them!!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:13 PM Title: Media Madness
I heard somewhere that there is going to be a death in here and it's not who we would want. Bella and Edward don't get killed do they? I'm so worried!
Im glad that the media's stories aren't true! They need to lay off them!!
I love this little family! Worried about Eric tho...
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:20 PM Title: Damage Control
I didn't see that coming. Nice cliffy.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:49 AM Title: Damage Control
Wow I totally did not expect that!! Now I seriously cannot wait for more!! Amazing Job!! Update real soon!! Please and thank you very very much! Xoxoxoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:07 PM Title: Damage Control
Loved the interview, so great how they responded to everything and then the paparazzi not yelling at them because of what Bella said was priceless. I had a feeling Eric would find a way to get Faith killed thanks to his pov last chapter. I really hope he gets what is coming to him-he is a sleaze ball and deserves to be killed some how lol. I can't wait for the next chapter, I love the story and your writing.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:18 AM Title: Damage Control
I enjoyed the chapter very much. I like how you have them so in love with each other after how long they have been married and 3 and a half kids later. I hope you update again soon. Great Job.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:44 PM Title: Damage Control
nice chapter, more please :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:06 PM Title: Damage Control
Loving it more please :D
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:56 PM Title: Damage Control
The interview went great. I'm not surprised about Faith since Eric was hinting around about eliminating her. And, we know he did it!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:30 PM Title: Damage Control
i so loved this chapter ^^ and i can't say i am sorry for what happened to faith she had it coming, it was probably eric's doing.
thanx for updating :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:36 PM Title: Media Madness
Eric is evil!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:18 AM Title: Damage Control
LOVED their inrterview!! I didn't thought that it was posible for me to love them more but I do!!! hahahaha... they are amazing!!!! and eid Eric kill Faith?? What will happen now?? Will only Edward's testefy by enough??? Can't wait to read more...
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:37 AM Title: Damage Control
For sure it has Erics name all over it!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:27 AM Title: Damage Control
hell yes i think eric is to blame for that crap!!! unless it was some fan thats locked up thats obssessed with Bella and Edward and they think they must avenge Faith's crime against her since Bella did say she thought what she got wasnt justice lmao.. that would be hilarious!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:20 AM Title: Damage Control
Great chapter
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:53 AM Title: Damage Control
Great chapter!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Damage Control
i feel the drama coming. of course eric is in on it. as long as there together they can overcome. i really love both stories. i have reread resisting the inevitable so many times. love it now dont take to long updating
Date: 15 Sep 2012 11:37 PM Title: Media Madness
Love it!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 10:39 PM Title: Media Madness
please tell me eric does not get away with this tell me they find more evidence on him and that if he does get to bella that she shoots him and ends his misery once and for all i cant wait for tomorrow I hope we get more details involving the trial
Date: 15 Sep 2012 10:20 PM Title: Media Madness
weeee u updated ^^. i am so happy, can't wait to read more!!!!!
thanx!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:57 PM Title: Media Madness
LOVED IT!!!! I totally love how Edward and Bella are with each other!!! I could read fluff about them forever!! I love the character that you have created!!! Thak you so much for sharing it with us!!
So what will happen with Eric??? Will he manage to hurt Bella??? Or will he go to jail?? Can't wait to read more...
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:56 PM Title: Media Madness
As so you're going to torture us some more with Eric then huh!? Lol!!!!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:16 PM Title: Media Madness
Thanks for the update, love this story :)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:22 AM Title: My love My life
Hey, the Lemonade Stand banner you have is in violation of the rules. Big time. Teens scrolling for M rated (and under) stories don't need to see sex and oral sex. Perhaps if you put it somewhere readers can see it AFTER they've clicked "yes, I'm over 18"?
Date: 15 Sep 2012 8:43 AM Title: Media Madness
Really enjoyed it xx
Date: 15 Sep 2012 5:11 AM Title: Media Madness
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next part of the story
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Media Madness
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:22 AM Title: Media Madness
Eric is a pig! Fucking hope he is burned alive !!! But suer cute moments with Edward and Bella. And totally excited for More tomorrow!! Worth the wait'
Xoxox
Kitty
Date: 15 Sep 2012 1:58 AM Title: Media Madness
Damn Eric, i hope he meets with an 'accident', before he gets a chance to hurt Edward and his family
Date: 11 Sep 2012 9:42 PM Title: The Perfect Day
hope u finish
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:43 PM Title: The Perfect Day
I love this story and that silly rabbit too.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 12:36 PM Title: The Perfect Day
Aaaah so good,
I missed ya!
More...... Yeah needy I am!,
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:27 PM Title: The Cullen's
I like the simple, domestic scenes but know a story needs more than that to keep it good. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:54 PM Title: The Perfect Day
It was perfect. So sweet.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 10:15 AM Title: The Perfect Day
it was very good for me lol
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:04 AM Title: The Perfect Day
nice chapter, more please :)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:07 PM Title: The Perfect Day
Brilliant chapter. Definitely made up for being late as you said. The kids are soooo cute and them letting Queen Elizabeth out all the time is just hilarious. It was also great that they got to have a family day and had fun. Looking forward to the next chapter. :) 😃😜💋😜😃
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:11 PM Title: The Perfect Day
Great chapter!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:48 PM Title: The Perfect Day
awwww!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:47 PM Title: The Perfect Day
You really made up for everything!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:41 PM Title: The Perfect Day
lookjing forward to more
Date: 09 Aug 2012 11:56 AM Title: The Perfect Day
That was so good and beautiful!
I'm glad they got to have family time.
Queen elizabeth is such a crazy animal! Glad Ethan could help out!
I love this family!
Fingers crossed Bella doesn't have the baby in the courtroom!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:03 AM Title: The Perfect Day
I loved this chapter .. they're amazing together and their kids are just adorable .. Please update soon .. I love this story
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:00 AM Title: The Perfect Day
It's always perfect.....thanks for writing!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:28 AM Title: The Perfect Day
Good chapter.....
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:57 AM Title: The Perfect Day
If you dont get nominated for some award for having the PERFECT edward... then i swear i'll cry and then die! Your Edward is my Dream edward.. the love he has for his wife and kids, the protective side, everything that is him.. is puuurrfect.. plus the hot sexin he gives bella... i swear my computer screen fogs up everytime.. your edward is a delicious morsel[or however you spell it] i myself love me a scruffy edward.. the five'o clock shadow or the week without shaving face.. sure smooth faced edward is handsome but gaah..
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:34 AM Title: The Perfect Day
They so need to get a dog like a German shepherd or a lab ..but loved the chapter update soon
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:22 AM Title: The Perfect Day
Yep! Thanks for update, love this story :)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:13 AM Title: The Perfect Day
awesome chapter, funny about the rabbit ^^
kiah is really smart acting like that :D
Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:09 AM Title: The Perfect Day
loved it
keep going
can't wait to read the next chapter
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:36 PM Title: Breaking the News
I thought Faith was justa bitch when Mac was announce publicly he was a Masen. I didn't imagine she was that despicable. Wow!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:14 PM Title: Breaking the News
Ugh!! Pls update soon!! This is so good which is why I normally don't read stories that are not complete!! I'm not too patient & I always fear they'll never get completed.
Date: 02 Aug 2012 12:17 AM Title: Family First
My Female Suspects list: Faith. Victoria. Matilda. Jane. *(I'm really hoping Sofia is clean!!)
Male partner suspects: Chad w/Victoria - Which is why she wanted to know if anyone knew of her visits...like James.
Break-in suspects: Royce. Faith using Mac's keys. Matilda. Chad for Victoria.
Am I close??
:)
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:07 AM Title: Breaking the News
God I love your writing it's going to suck when you finish both this one and It takes two. I was wondering if you have any plans to start a new one if you haven't already? Also I thought you did a great job on how faith was set up and arrested. Although it would have been nice if Bella would have punched the crap out of her knocking her butt out instead of slap. Can't wait to read the next chapters on both stories.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Breaking the News
omg i so can't wait to read the next chapter ^^
thanx for updating
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Breaking the News
I loved this!
I'm so glad they got faith! She's such a Cow! Also glad they cleared Mac in the press!
I just love them!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Breaking the News
OMG THIS WAS ABSOLUTLY AMAAAAAAZE!!!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:06 AM Title: Breaking the News
Thank you for the update. I love this wonderful story. Cant wait to read about Daddyward. Thank you for all of your hard work and for continuing with this story. I love everything you write and think you are amazing.