Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
awww sweet that he brought her to see
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
C'mon B. Ya know it will be good for ya
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow Carlisle really hit them with a doozy. Love it though
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
hmmm now what does Carlisle have in mind I wonder?
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Def. Sign language is a wonderful thing with everyone helping her she'll be babbling in no time.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
hmm now what is she up to?
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awww for Em coming to look for her.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
Sounds like B has her share of issues too.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is going to be a hard nut to crack
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Women like that disgust me.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad He's letting Esme help a bit
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
lol for Bella being afraid of a lamb
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow Bella needs a little bit of a filter I think.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm Alice doesnt seem happy. Knock it off Alice and make goo goo eyes at your man
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
lol for smitten Bella. Bethany just sounds too cute.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wonder how long till Edward will listen.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Certainly hope Esme isn't afraid of E. That wouldn't be good.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love that Bella isn't going to take crap from him
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm sounds like E is going to be a handful
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
ah a parent in denial. So sad for the kids when that happens.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ah so Esme invited them huh? interesting
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Kitchen sounds wonderful
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Seems that E is a little standoffish
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
ROFL for Bella. Rose def is sure of herself.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Alice is just nutso
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like a cool place for a vacation.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Glad her dad didnt know about the $$$ othewise I'm sure he would have stuck around. Go for the girls giving something back.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah well that sorta explains Alice. Attachments are far and few in foster care and doggie give unconditional love (mostly)
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG I love my pets, but Alice is wayyyyyy over the top. Sadly I know too many people who are that way. Ugh
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't say I'm a fan of little dogs either. lol
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. You've peaked my interest.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 58
LOVED IT!!! Thank you for all your hard work!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 57
I think I am going to cry! Being a SLP I know the joy and excitement to watch a child hear for the first time!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 56
He said he would!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 54
Good job Ed! You are god Bella!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 53
I hope Ed doesn't get pissed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 52
Go get her Bella!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 51
I hate good byes!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 50
Funny! Of course Ed wasn't letting her out of his sight
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 48
How embarrassing!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 46
Surprise it is Bethany! Dang that was hot!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 42
Wow impressive Ed!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
Come on it is Edward...you gotta love him!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh Bethany what did you do?
Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 38
You found your tongue!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 36
How sad to feel that way
Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Ed sure knows how to stck his foot in it...hell knee high!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Well Ed that was impressive!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Bella :(. She is just as bad as brooding grumpy Ed!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
Are you sure Bella isn't a speech language therapist?
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love that little girl
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Grow up Bella my friend
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am so like Bella I am afraid of animals too
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
How terrible! Poor little girl
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Like duh Bella she didn't come from the garden!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is work not fun...I hope she gets some fun
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh Ed listen to bella
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love your Bella! Tough as nails!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella a handful....no way
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Esme wonderful as always
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
As I said grouchy and moody
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Moving quickly,,of course Bella gets the moody grouchy one!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Game on Cullens look out!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Nice job way to give back!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
The girls, always a riot!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOL Bella is so funny!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Ed I wonder what happened
Date: 09 Jun 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
living breathing electric shock!!!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!! I just finished my master of darkness. And yes.. Im a lurker. But I couldnt help the living electric shock!!! Bwahahahha. Thank you so much for writing. (I am so sick of fan fiction purging stuff!! What the hell are their ratings for if not to warn people about content!!! Stupid heads!!!)
Okay. Im off to read the rest of your stuff now. :o) Thank you!!!!!
Date: 08 May 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 58
I am disappointed you put the CI system in Bethany... You can "fix" deafness.. They will always be deaf... And it's not as easy as switching on a unit either ...
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 58
What an amazing story! Should have had a happy tearful tissue warning at the end though. :) Would love to see some future takes of Bethany and all of the other children together and maybe even a marriage for her. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 58
beautiful story
heartbreaking and full of hope and wonder, inspirational
love it all thank you
Date: 28 Mar 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
wow that is an awesome idea
love it
Date: 28 Mar 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
some women should never be mothers. i am glad she gave up her rights
Date: 28 Mar 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow edward step back
but again he doesn't know bella and he is a very proud and stubborn man
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 58
Absolutely darling story, and I loved it!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 57
No wonder they are pacing the halls and popping Tums! How exciting!