Date: 16 Jul 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please tell me that you plan on Bella and Edward killing Renee and Mike, Sr.? Being sent to an institution for life is way too good for that crazy bitch! You should first be a human to be treated like one!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 6:02 AM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
I hope Renee tries something illegal and spends the rest of her life in prison! Or else Bella can shoot her for hurting the children, either way, I want her out of Bella's life! With eleven or twelve chapters to go, there's all kinds of time for Renee to mess up everything! Let's not forget to nominate the jerk in the restaurant for ignorant asshole of the year, shall we? Some people are just beyond help!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 3:35 AM Title: Babies and Beef
Emmett really can be gross when he puts his mind to it! That black pickup is undoubtedly Renee, stalking again. I'm pretty curious as what she wants, too. Because you know she's after something!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:57 AM Title: NYC
Just to be a horrible old woman, I wish Renee would just disappear and trouble them no more! Since I knowthat won't happen, I hope you don't let her hurt anyone. This trip to New York was a resounding success, as far as I can see!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Anger, Apologies and Injuries
The Masens have quite a relationship with the local police department, they are in touch so much! I don't blame Edward one little bit for urging Bella to swear out a complaint against her mother, nor for the restraining order. What a pitiful excuse for a mother Renee is! Hope she doesn't show up to cause trouble while Edward and Bella are in New York!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 10:40 PM Title: Mommy Dearest
There are few things in this world sadder than an old broad trying to dress and look young! It's just pathetic and makes you almost feel sorry for them! Renee is going to end up a bone of contention between Edward and Bella, I can tell. She's flat lying about wanting to see her grandchildren, there's another reason up her sleeve! The deal with Dr. Gerandy is kind of skeevy, too!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 9:32 PM Title: A Masen Family Vacay
Sick children notwithstanding, this was a pretty good holiday trip to DisneyWorld! Now Edward and Bella need to rest up from their vacation!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Happiest Place on Earth
All things considered, Edward and Bella had a pretty easy time getting their brood to Florida, if you discount the search of Lizzie at the airport. That is such a bogus thing, to search a little girl like that! Hopefully everyone is rested and ready to have a wonderful time!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 7:54 AM Title: Jolly Old St. Nicholas
How sweet of Esme to offer to keep the triplets the night before they all leave for Disney World! It will be fun and probably also stressful to take the kids to Orlando, but they will no doubt love it! Really nice Christmas dinner with all the family and friends gathered together!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 7:12 AM Title: Baby, It's Cold Outside
That Christmas Ball went really well, especially the part where Edward was made chief of staff! Winning the bid on the weekend in New York was pretty cool also! Dr. Gerandy was pretty pissed he didn't get the chief spot. Too bad!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:26 AM Title: Run-Ins and Interviews
Being prejudiced, I think Edward should become head of the hospital! Who else? As for Renee causing more trouble, why can't something really bad happen to her? Not to Jake, though, it would be too sad to let him succumb to AIDS!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:50 AM Title: Lunch, Thanksgiving and Incoming Bad Weather
Let's all be thankful, mommy dearest just showed up! And it was such a nice day,too!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:27 AM Title: Renee
Why would Renee be after Bella now? Has she found out Edward has a lot of money, maybe? Nobody seems to like her, so I guess I won't either!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 2:52 AM Title: Words
The way you have written about Bella's feelings for her mother, I wouldn't be surprised if she didn't take that call! Wonder why she is calling Bella anyway? Great night Edward and Bella had, by the way! It was cute the way he gave away the tickets and rushed his wife back to the hotel! They still crave each other, that's for sure!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 2:32 AM Title: Dr. Kate
Kate must be very ignorant to think everyone is as amoral as she is! There are lots of people in this world who would never dream of dishonoring a spouse by cheating! I know some personally! It's wonderful that Marie has said some words to her parents and touched Cynthia voluntarily. At least Kate was correct in her diagnosis, that Lizzie was talking so much that Marie felt she didn't need to! Autisim and Aspberger's are sure mysterious afflictions!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 1:05 AM Title: Seattle
By something's up with Dr. Kate, I assume you mean she has a thiong for Edward. That won't win her any points with Bella,, and might get her injured! At least she seems to be a good doctor and will help Marie, I hope!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:45 AM Title: Fall Out
It should have boosted Bella's self-esteem to have the offer of the promotion, and to have the superintendent's support. It might be a great compromise between staying home fulltime and doinga job she hates. The injuries are sure not worth the risk!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 12:04 AM Title: News
Bella should feel better now that Edward has had the neurological workup and MRI, and doesn't seem to have any new problems. That's the trouble with life, it keeps you on your toes sometimes with all the surprises, small and otherwise!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 11:36 PM Title: Reasons
It is kind of sad that Alice and Jasper's boy likes football and his parents are totally clueless. Good thing Emmett and Edward can fill in. Bella is probably doing the right thing. Her family needs her and she's miserable at work, so it makes sense to quit. Besides, I think she needs to be there for Edward right now, his health may soon be a problem if those increasingly frequent migraines are any indication.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 10:44 PM Title: Reconnections
Good to see these characters again. I'm sure to enjoy the further adventures of this loving family!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 5:52 AM Title: Words
oh it seems renee is going to grace us with her self. can't wait to see how bella handles it
Date: 18 Jun 2013 5:06 AM Title: Dr. Kate
love marie and glad she is talking
man kate you should have been reprimanded awhile ago not 20 fathers in
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:06 AM Title: Reconnections
oh i am thrilled about the sequel
thank you for writing
Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:31 PM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
Bella needs to start trusting Edward's love. He has been nothing, but loyal to her. He has earned her trust.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 2:49 PM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
Loved this chapter. I was a little surprised at Edward in the beginning. I knew he would be upset but to sleep in the guest room and leave Bella all alone, Wow. Loved their night out. There is nothing wrong with some kink!!!!!!! It keeps things interesting!!!!!!! lol
Can't wait to find out what is up with Renee. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 3:41 AM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
ok so I read the first part of the series and loooved it!!!!! so good finished it in two days!!!!!!!! then I started this one and yeah renee is so fucking messed up!!!!!!!!!!!!! like what is it with Bella and everyone around her being so fucking nuts!!!!!!!!!!!! like seriously!!!!!! anywho absolutel loving the story and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 5:48 PM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
Sweet date and yummy ending.
Date: 03 Jun 2013 11:03 AM Title: Reconnections
Awesome!
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:30 AM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
:) loved this
Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:48 AM Title: Ignorance Isn't Bliss
looking forward to more
Date: 10 May 2013 8:37 PM Title: Babies and Beef
I really enjoyed this chapter. You have done a GREAT job with this WHOLE story. LOVING it!!!!!! Can't wait for your next update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Date: 10 May 2013 6:05 PM Title: NYC
I am so glad that their New York trip was not ruined. I expected everytime that they called home that something was going to be wrong. Glad that is was not. I am really enjoying reading this story. I have enjoyed being able to read from chapter to chapter but that is going to stop with the next chapter. I will have to start waiting on updates. Hope you update soon. :)
Date: 10 May 2013 2:18 PM Title: Anger, Apologies and Injuries
I hate that Bella is going through all of this with her so call mother. I hope they catch her soon.
Date: 09 May 2013 10:11 PM Title: Mommy Dearest
Renee is a real piece of work. I can see both Edward's and Bella's side of their arguement. I just don't want the kids to get hurt.
Date: 09 May 2013 10:07 PM Title: A Masen Family Vacay
Glad that their Disney vacation went so good.
Date: 09 May 2013 5:46 PM Title: The Happiest Place on Earth
I am glad that none of the kids had a brake down on the plane. Loved the HOT HOT sex scene. GREAT job.
Date: 09 May 2013 2:35 AM Title: Jolly Old St. Nicholas
I am so glad that their Christmas was full of joy and happiness!!!!!!!
Date: 09 May 2013 2:35 AM Title: Baby, It's Cold Outside
So glad that Edward got his promotion!!!!!! Loved the HOT HOT HOT sex.
Date: 08 May 2013 11:12 PM Title: Run-Ins and Interviews
OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe that Renee hit on Edward like that. She has no shame!!!!!! Poor Bella. I am glad that Edward's interview went well.
Date: 08 May 2013 4:06 PM Title: Lunch, Thanksgiving and Incoming Bad Weather
Wow, Renne shows up to ruin their Thanksgiving. Loved little Marie's speech at the Thanksgiving table. Loved the texting between Bella and Edward. lol.
Date: 08 May 2013 4:06 PM Title: Renee
Loved the section with Marie, Lizzie and David. That was really cute. Poor Edward, I am sure the working drunk driving accidents brought up a lot of memories. Oh no, Renee!!!!!! Can't wait to found out more about her.
Date: 08 May 2013 4:05 PM Title: Words
Loved the HOT HOT HOT sex!!!!!!! Loved that Marie is talking more. That is so sweet. Oh no, Renee!!!!!! What kind of problems is she going cause???
Date: 08 May 2013 4:05 PM Title: Dr. Kate
OMGosh!!!!!! Can not believe that Kate did that. Boy she wasted no time going after Edward. She jumped his bones. I feel sorry for Bella. Kate lied to Edward about Bella hearing Marie's voice. That was awful. I am happy that Marie told Bella that she loved her a lot. So very happy that Marie is starting to say some words. Plus she also held Cynthia's thumb. More improvements.
Date: 08 May 2013 4:04 PM Title: Seattle
I am glad that their trip to Seattle was uneventful. Glad that Maria did not throw a fit. What do you mean....something is up with Dr. Kate???? Can't wait to find out. I am surprised that Marie was hesitate to get in the pool, thought Edward and Bella had a pool at their house.
Date: 08 May 2013 3:54 PM Title: Fall Out
I can not believe that Bella got hit like that. Boy Mr. Merritt is an asshole. Bella thought she was losing her job but then was given a promotion. WOW!!!! Can't wait to find out what she decided to do.
Date: 07 May 2013 2:57 AM Title: News
THanks for giving us a look into Edward's mind. Glad that nothing is really wrong with Edward. So happy that Rose is pregnant. Big changes for everyone around there.
Date: 07 May 2013 2:09 AM Title: Reasons
I do not blame Bella for quiting her job. She sounds like she is sooooo unhappy with it. They do not need the money, so stay at home with your babies!!!! I am worried about Edward and his headaches. I hope it is not anything really serious.
Date: 07 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Reconnections
Picking up where we left off. Can't wait to read this story. Thanks for continuing this wonderful story.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 3:32 PM Title: Babies and Beef
How can Bella be so stupid? Does she not care about herself and the wellbeing of her children? How often do you see same type of vehicle behind you and sitting across the street from a house that you are visiting. Bella knows her incubator is crazy. It is better to be wrong than to not report and something bad happen to you or your children and you could have prevented it.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 10:03 AM Title: Babies and Beef
great chapter! thanks for the update :) cant wait for more
Date: 23 Mar 2013 9:57 AM Title: NYC
just a question do you plan to finish the story the next chapter it's a wonderful story and would love to read the rest of it. i a big fan of yours and have been reading your storys for sometime now anyways i love it so please finish it.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:58 AM Title: NYC
i adore this story and i adore your writing.
i love everything about this story, the drama, bits of comedy, the halarious family moments, edward and bella's relationship that is so loving and passionate its beauitful to read. i also love marie! i think she is adorable and i am so glad that she is thriving now she has the help she needs.
im so sad that ive caught up for now ill have to wait for updates. but thank you for continuing to write the story eventhough u have having some toruble with momentum. for me this story gets better and better so please dont get to upset with yourself.
update when u can :)
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:22 AM Title: Baby, It's Cold Outside
I saw your comment above and I felt that I should comment. I myself have three autistic children, and to write about life with an autistic child without having one yourself is not an easy feat. Thank you for including it in your story. And for the person who rudely commented: every child with autism is completely different, every story is unique. There are also a vast number of treatment options or therapies available, and us parents of autistic children are probably the most opinionated people you'll ever meet (even though we don't all agree). We daily fight for our children and so we tend to get a bit defensive. That being said, you are doing a good job with Marie in your story. I just want to hang out with her - she's precious!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:19 AM Title: NYC
Great chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 20 Feb 2013 12:58 AM Title: NYC
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Jan 2013 9:43 PM Title: Jolly Old St. Nicholas
loved it!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 9:24 PM Title: Baby, It's Cold Outside
loved it!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 5:40 PM Title: Run-Ins and Interviews
Loved it!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 5:12 PM Title: Lunch, Thanksgiving and Incoming Bad Weather
loved it!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Anger, Apologies and Injuries
Marie is adorable being there for her mom. Renee is just plain evil. I hope they have fun in new York they need it.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Anger, Apologies and Injuries
:)
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:26 PM Title: Fall Out
I would wait until I had a more solid diagonisis on marie
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:32 PM Title: Reconnections
YEA NO WAITING TO START THE SEQUEL
Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:42 PM Title: Mommy Dearest
love it please update asap please
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:34 AM Title: Mommy Dearest
i hope you finish with the story because it is getting good
Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:27 PM Title: Mommy Dearest
Renee is such a bitch that outfit was slutty even for a twent year old. I hope Edward does not stay mad long. The kids are just so cute.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 11:02 AM Title: Jolly Old St. Nicholas
Amazing chapter, really loving this story :)
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:55 PM Title: A Masen Family Vacay
I loved Animal Kingdom (said that, I know) and I went on the Dino ride, too! LOL! Also, the World Showcase or whatever - that was awesome. We ate in Japan and can I just say - BEST STEAK EVER??? Benihana, you don't have NOTHIN' on Japan! :)
Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And, for those who are rude to you, I'm sorry you had to see those. It's always so hurtful when people are rude. Not being a parent, not experiencing Autism 24/7 I think you're doing an outstanding job portraying Marie's issues. I believe all of it - as if you have a child with this disability and that's saying a lot, I think. Bravo, and I can't wait to see more of this!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:21 PM Title: The Happiest Place on Earth
I loved Animal Kingdom. Although I almost shit myself when we were on that safari thing and the bridge 'went out' as like a trick. I'm TERRIFIED of bridges. Someone needed to warn a bitch! LMAO!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:30 PM Title: Renee
So I've kind of lurked. Sorry! I know how I like reviews/comments. I'm trying to do better, I just don't wait to wait to click next! :)
That forcast was hilarious! I can't believe it, poor Masen clan. They sure can't catch a break, can they? I can't WAIT for Renee!! LOL!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:44 PM Title: A Masen Family Vacay
Gah I cannot imagine having to deal w/3 small sick children & on vacation @ that. Sounds like they made good memories though. I have never been to Disney World, but when I was 5 (I think) we went to Disney Land. I'm 41 now & I still remember a lot of it. Definitely makes a lasting impression when your a child.
I'm enjoying the story so much. I'm anxious to see how the upcoming drama w/the doc & Renee are dealt with.
Excellent Chapter,
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: The Happiest Place on Earth
Hollywood Studios is my fave. I love that they're at WDW! It's my happy place!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:03 PM Title: The Happiest Place on Earth
:)
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:03 PM Title: Lunch, Thanksgiving and Incoming Bad Weather
:)
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:41 AM Title: A Masen Family Vacay
looking forward to more