Date: 25 Aug 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG!!! AWESOME!!! ;) please come back to make a sequel from this because you left it wide open for one ;D
Date: 23 Jul 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
They are together! !!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, after 5 years they are finally going to get to see their guys. I am glad that Jane came to live with them. Bree sounds cute as a bug.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
So glad that the girls are together. They can help each other heal.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
NO!!!!!!!!!!! Don't let her die.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok, now I am scared for Bella now that I know that her distention is a dance studio. Has James sit her and Edward up??
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it but I thought that they would make love and Bella would end up pregnant. That way she would always have a part of Edward with her.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
What in the world did Alice see?
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad they found her and she told them everything that she heard.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
I would be s a red shit less if I were in Bella's position. I bet Edward is scared not knowing where Bella is.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved that they were getting to be normal. Edward is going to kill Emmett ..
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad that they are getting to experience some "normal" things.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad the girls got to spend time together. I had to laugh at the guys busting in on the girls in the tub. Lol
Date: 21 Jul 2014 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad that Bella is healing. I hope this new girl hurts James. I am wondering if Dimitri and Felix had anything to do with what happened in the torture room.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad they are working things out. Hope they figure out who did it. What happened to the guys mothers?
Date: 21 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Some how I knew the guys did not do it. I am scared of Rose now. Glad she could prove it was not Edward.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
What he'll has happened? Something tells me that Edward and Jasper are just as surprised as Carlisle.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad the dinner went well. I thought Edward locked the door every time he left. Why would Bella remember to lock a door that she has never had to lock before.?
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. She has been so much in such a small amount of time. I hope the dinner goes well.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
What is going on with Edward? Why did he disappear for 3 days for.
Can't wait to see what is in the next chapter.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is an ass. Maybe she can use Edward to get back at Charlie.
Well at least they are making some progress. But I don't blame Bella, I would not trust Edward either.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward definitely has a dysfunctional family
Date: 17 Jul 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
It sounds like Bella is in lots of trouble.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Edward is so sweet!
Date: 27 Aug 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
What an sweet chapter!
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
Uh-oh! Poor Bella!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Edward and Bella!
Date: 16 Mar 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Please tell me there is a sequel on the way! PLEASE!!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!! I SO NEED MORE!!! LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Please, please, please write a sequel!!!
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm loving karma is a witch. I thought I should check out your other strory. I laughed. I cried. All around I feel like you are an awesome author. Glad I took time to read.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great story!
**I have questions though-What about Carlisle? Is he good or evil? - I was hoping we'd at least get to witness their first "sexy time". :) - What were they doing for 5 years??? - Where were they located the whole time???
Because I like HEAs & in case u don't write anymore Epi's, I'll assume Carlisle is good, they all married, had babies, took down the mob & lived happily ever after! :)
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't beleive that this story has so little reviews! I have been reading this non-stop its so addictive. You really are a master of the cliff hangers. This sotry has been exciting and fast paced and I really enjoyed reading it.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad I found your story after it was finished, oh Queen of the cliffhangers! Thanks for the suspense & band of friends & overall good read, complete with HEA.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome show down at the ballet studio. Your B is one tough cookie.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent chapter, very tense with B hiding near ceiling learning what the boys need to know. Well done!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
So I am guessing that everyone is good, even Carlisle?
I am wondering if this is the end of the story or would you be doing a continuation of this? The reason I asked is you left so much out at the end.
What actually happened in the warehouse?
Why Carlisle was not there?
What actually happened to Marcus?
What happened to the rest of the Volturi?
Will all of them get their revenge and go after the rest of the family?
You did leave it open for a sequel but I am not sure if you are going to do one???
Loved the story only took me a day and a bit to read. Thank you for the adventure you took me on that I wanted to keep reading until I had finished.
Regards
Fiorella
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed your story. The relationship you showed with Bella and Charlie were particularly well written-you have a knack for writing true to life tragic scenes. There were some other sections, such as when Bella almost drowns -that came across extremely strong. Also, some the creative development you put into her character, really sold her as believable - fore instance, her wanting to hide and finding unique places to hide away. The hiding place she found in the office, where she accidentially listened in on the 'Fathers' was brillant and the whole small hiding places was a well used plot device. Also, your Edward was very sweet - as was their relationship. I liked how he handled Bella in their first few days together as well as his reaction to seeing her in the end.
The last chapter made me more curious as to what happened during the 5 years of training and the free lance rescue work. Your Bella at the end was bad ass -it would be an evolution of the character that I would interested in seeing!
I know you created Edward, Carlisle, Emmet and Jaspher to be good guys - and they were good. I just had a hard time believing that if they were raised by men like Caius and Aro in the environment you described - that they ended up such good, moral guys. While you did provide a few reasons for Carlisle and Edward to be 'nice'- it was still a hard sell. For me the story would have been more believable, stronger - if they weren't so moral - fore instance, that Emmet and Jaspher hadn't yet slept with Rose and Alice was difficult to believe. That they might have waited, developed a relationship with the girls first, would have been believable - simply because they had been together for a longer time. Your bad guys, particularly James and Caius came across extremely believable. Bella's fear of them and how you littered this throughout the story really worked particularly by the end when they get a hold of her again.
Again, enjoyable read! Looking forward to your next story!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Amazing! You made me cry about a billion times! I loved it and I'm do sad it ended but at least their together :)