Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
OH WOW, SO amazing! I really loved it! Cannot wait for their photos :)
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
I know you both read all the reviews so I waited until the end of the updates to review!!! I love the heart and soul Coming Home. I don't know of a single reader that you haven't touched something in their lives. Each of you are amazing authors but together you are a dynamic duo that is a force to be reckoned with.
Words that come to mind - palpable, tangible, happy, sad, love, want, desire, togetherness, alone, promises, tenderness, all-consuming -- I could go on and on. Can't wait until tomorrow - And Deb you put a kitten here also!!!!
Thank you both for writing for our fandom -- I <3 U both!!!
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
P.S. the promise ring was a really good idea. I can't remember when the last time I thought of one!!! But it was simply perfect for these two.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
*sniffles* This is so beautiful! I love the ring.
Now, I must be a selfish person cause let me tell you if I had to choose between more time in Florida with the love of my life who is hundreds of miles away and my father who is three hours away...hmm...I choose the love of my life. Like I said, selfish! It is only the beginning of July. They could have stayed at least three more weeks. ;) jk I know, I know the story must go on. *giggles* I can not wait for more! :)
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella
Oh wow, SO amazing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
fantastic chapter that was so emotional sat sobbing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
So sad -- but I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 115: Bella
wow that was hot!!!fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward
fab chapter.aww bless her looking after em all.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 113: Bella
fab chapter aww bless him.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
I dont know if its pregnancy hormones or what but this chapter has me at my desk boo-hooing. I hope they arent apart long *tear*.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
sniff sniff
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 115: Bella
yummy play time.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward
awww nice date day at the beach
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 113: Bella
awww so sweet to do all that cooking for them
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
Aww that was so sad but I think this another one of my favorite chapters. Loved the writing. Thanks for the updates! Can't wait for the next ones. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
I knew I shouldn't read this at work.... but silly me, I did and cried my eyes out. Thank goodness no one cam in the office!
It brightens my day, everyday, to read your updates. Thank you so much!
Catherine
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
That was so sad and sweet!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 110: Edward
Gah, I really loved it!!!!! YAY!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 109: Bella
OH SNAP! Love the teasing ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
For the love of all that is holy - y'all are going to cause me to spontaneously combust at work. I tried so hard (well not really) to wait until I got home to read the updates.....that never works. Thanks for my yummy Sarge fix. Lord I need a cold shower or 5 now...
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
Great updates. It got a little hot in here. Are we gonna skip ahead a little after they go home? I hate to have the separation longer for us (them). Thanks ladies....
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
fab chapter.their gonna look hot!update soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella
im a puddle of goo!fab chapter wow that was even hotter!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
Pictures sound like great idea.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 110: Edward
wow!glad ive got an icecream that was scorching!fab chapter
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella
DAYUM!!!!! Yummy Yum Yum yum
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 110: Edward
Ooooh Yum.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
Such a sweet story of love.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 109: Bella
Hmmmm ice cream
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 109: Bella
think i need icecream to cool down lol.fab chapter.wow that was hot!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
Great chapters! Thanks for the morning lemons! ;) Can't wait for the next updates!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
These chapters were great!! I love their sexy times!! I can't wait for the pictures! What a great idea!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
Thanks for the amazing chapters and looking forward to the photos and how all of them will handle the last 3 months of being separated.
Love you girls!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:34 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
4 chapters today oh you spoil us. But I should have not read them at work cos now I all hot and bothered and it has nothing to do with the hot weather here in sunny London ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward
I look forward everyday to seeing what's happening to Sarge and Bella. I love this story and love all the twists - Tanya's phonecall - so want Bella to bitchslap the she-witch in a future chapter. You have both made the characters so believable and people we can care about. Love the lemons - wow, omg, thud. Love the double postings especially when they're citrusy. Thanks for cheering me up everyday. Looking forward to lots more of Edward and Bella xx
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 109: Bella
Love it, I have so enjoyed this story and the fact that post daily is the da bomb as my kids would say.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
WHAT CAN I SAY TO ALL OF THAT AFTER ALL EDWARD IS SEX ON A STICK ANY ONE UP FOR LICKING THAT SSTICK CAN WAIT IN LINE I'M FIRST. LOL
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 107: Bella
I'M GLAD TANYA DIDN'T WIN OUT IN THE END. AND ALL IS GOOD WITH EDWARD AND BELLA.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
Love it, fabulous story and look forward to the updates daily.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
OH SNAP! That was great ;) I love their innuendo!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 107: Bella
OH wow, so amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
Great chapters! I like this one where they are just laughing and having fun. They are too cute together. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
that sounds like a fun group date
Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 107: Bella
oh Bella silly girl. Hope she feels better now.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
lol fab chapter loving the innuendos lol.glad their back on track hope tanya leaves em alone.update soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 107: Bella
fab chapter awww poor bella.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
he defo is.awww bless her that was so emotional.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
aww poor bella!tanyas a bitch!fab chapter.hope she tells edward n if she doesn't the girls certainly will.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
That was fun. I'm glad they got the hard stuff out of the way before the innuendo began. Can't for tomorrow. Thanks ladies!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 108: Edward
They are sooooo cute!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 107: Bella
I love the words he said to her!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
those skanks always try to come back later & make things bad for the guy!! I think in their effed up minds they think because they were with the guy for a little while that they are entitled to him in some way, like the guy she have no one else. Since the guy is with someone else (and better) they get jealous & the skank comes out. so sad but I think Edward handled it perfectly. I bet Garrett is definitely in trouble!! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
so was Tanya lying about Edward contacting her?? or is she just delusional?? How did she get his home phone though? guess Edward has some explaining to do. ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
well Charlie wasn't hard on him at all. Guess he figures Edward has had a rough life & he deserves this happiness. great chapter :) ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
LOL, Charlie trying to intimidate Edward, how funny! So the clock is ticking until they have to go home :( ~Tracey xoxox
Date: 22 Jul 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Good lord! Talk about hot and bothered! :D I see where bella's coming from, it's not easy to trust people especially after someone like mike, who by the way totally deserves Tanya and vice versa :P
The suspense! Be proud, coming home is definitely a page turner, or whatever the equivalent is haha love it!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
Oh dear! I hate her I hate her I hate her! Ugh what a witch!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Oh my,,,,Mad Edward is sexy as .... no word to describe.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
I know they will work it out! Emotions are not always logical.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
I feel Bad for Bella! I can't wait for Edward to straighten it out!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward
I love how Sarge turns to mush for Bella.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella
Sarge is pissed. Too bad they won't be able to use that in a naked way.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward
Always with the panties. Lol
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella
I am so glad that Bella is preparing herself now for what is to come instead of pushing it into the back of her mind. At least this way she will be a little more prepared.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Oh wow, amazing :)
Date: 21 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
OH NO!!!!!!!! I really hate Tanya even more now.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Another good one! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
Great chapter! Poor Bella. You would feel insecure either way with how new the relationship is. Can't wait to read more. We know Edward will reasure her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Good chapter. Glad you didn't draw it out & they came to a quick resolution. Looking forward to watching the story continue to develop & seeing how they deal with a 2nd seperation & eventually living together.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Hope Garrett does something about his pitiful daughter. Go Strong Eddie!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
ugh delusional skankya. what do you wanna bet it was stuff that she either stole from his storage or from her Dad who was keeping for him
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Im hoping TWCS will fix their email thingy, so I can get update alerts instead of having to refresh on my favorites page 50 million times! *huffs*
Great chapters BTW *sheepishly looks away before dashing away*
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Damn! Tanya is one messed up bitch. I can kinda understand where Bella is coming from...I mean Edward has a LONG history with her, and the way they met was unconventional. But I think Edward has assured her enough that she should be secure in their relationship. She was strong for part of the phone call...what happened? Surely that vile woman telling her that she had some of his things didn't cause that much doubt. Can't wait to see what she says tomorrow....
Date: 21 Jul 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
Totally understandable
Date: 21 Jul 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
I don't blame for being a little freaked out. She is human and acted normally you can't expect her to react perfectly in every situation. She did hold her own against Tanya. I am glad Edward told her off rather than the gentleman apporach.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Wow poor bella. I cannot wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
Awesome story. I'm just completely addicted.
XoxoxoxoX
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
I love the Charlie!!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
october cant ge here fast enough!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
SO AMAZING! YAY!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
Charlie is so cool
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
OH wow, that was amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
Okay, his conversation with Charlie brought tears to my eyes. It was very fatherly and I loved it. Especially now that they are on a first name basis....Can't wait until tomorrow!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
Bella is so cute. Hee hee for Charlie's angels.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
coming home is my reward every day so thank you !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 104: Edward
fab chapter.glad charlie likes edward.can't wait till their home for good with their girls.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
aww its gonna be a very emotional goodbye.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward
awww bless.fab chapter.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 102: Edward
Love it and the lemon on the date she. Should wear the love bite proud
Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 102: Edward
You guys do an amazing job. Don't listen to the haters out there they're just jealous they can't have sarge. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 101: Bella
i defo wouldn't have!wow that was scorching!!!fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 100: Edward
wow that was hot!!!!need a fan to cool down!!!fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 99: Edward
awww bless fab chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward
That is a sweet zoo. Went their once on a field trip.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 101: Bella
Woo Hoo YUMMYY!!!
You get two for that chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 100: Edward
oooh sexy times.