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Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

Great update girls. It was great of Irina to keep stuff that she thought would be imporrtant to Edward...memories of his life with his family as he starts a new on with Bella. Great job. Can't wait until tomorrow!

Reviewer: sparkledamnu Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

Ladies, I was a full week behind -- bad, bad -- but also good for me!!!  I got to read all those chappies at one time.  And there will never ever be enough of this story at one time.  I'm sorta looking forward to rereading when it's completed.

I also enjoyed the pics of Sarge's things.  So sweet of Irina to save those things for him.  People simply don't realize the that mundane, everyday simple things are the ones that usually have the most memories of those we loose.  Beem there, done that!!

I enjoy each and every chapter that you girls write.  Words aren't enough to say how much I appreciate you two writing for our fandom.  We have so few really, really good authors that know how to tell a story on pages!!!

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter    Sparke Damnu Phillips on FB

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

SO amazing!  I really loved it!  So sweet!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 127: Bella

Oh wow, that was amazing :D

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

That was really sweet of Irina!!  I hope we get a glimpse o maybe Edward and his son sitting in that chair!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 127: Bella

Yeah!   His stuff is there just waiting on him!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

I'm glad Irina was such a smart woman. She was completely right and Edward and Bella are both going to be able to cherish those things for a very long time. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 127: Bella

I wonder what else was sent. 

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

That was sweet!  And I appreciate the frequent, multi-chapter updates...

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

Such a sweet chapter!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

Things are moving along so nicely. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 125: Bella

Of course that would turn him on. Guys are suckers for girl on girl contact. 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

Fabulous 2 chapters. Enjoy as always.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

SO amazing :D  I really loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 125: Bella

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: dana1644 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

Hell YEAH!!! Getting closer. I suck at reviewing! I'm hanging my head in shame.... Do you know what I am most looking forward to? Charlie's wedding!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

Lol love that they are getting ready to be together

Reviewer: ALewis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 121: Bella

I laughed so hard reading this chapter and some of the reviews listing cheesy pick up lines. I have to ditto most of them for me as well. I also wanted to tell you about a situation where I overheard three men talking about me by accident.

I was walking across a skywalk downtown (bridge between buildings one story up) when I passed three men. One mentioned something about how I was capable of walking in heels so fast and another said and I quote: "I don't know about the heels but if that isn't an ass I want to grab and hair I want to fist, I don't know what is."

Considering they were fairly younger than me I wasn't sure if I should be offended or happy that some young pups found me attractive.

I asked a guy friend at work who was about their age and he told me to feel proud.

I even asked my hubby about it and he told me that he concurred with their assessment. Ha. Men are so funny!!!

Keep up the great story, I'm loving it!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

I really hope that there are no surprises in store for Bella whn Edwards possesions arrive. No Tanya, or drama of any kind...right? Thanks for the updates. See you tomorrow!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

I'm so glad he is sending his things to her especially his very important piano!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 125: Bella

They are too cute!!  That is very sweet of Bella!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

You guys are incrediable! I love this story!! ... PS... Another time jump? :) Oh... and just what is she sending Sarge? ;o)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Very hott

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

thank you!!! :) Love you and Deb!! Though in a race with Edward,,, sorry... Love me some Sargward!! ;o)

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Great updates. I love that their Skype dates are getting more....well just more. I was also lmao when I was reading some of the pick up lines. Loved it...C-ya tomorrow ladies.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Loved it and looking forward to more. Thanks for the wonderful chapters and amazing story.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Damn yummy! Was out of time and missed a couple days but good stuff.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

Sarge does not play around.:)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Awww...  I loved their sexy Skype time

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

OMG! I LOVE THIS.

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

I loved theirvskype date!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 123: Bella

So very sexy!!

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Thanks for the updates! Great chapters! 

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 121: Bella

Those were funny lines!!  

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

aww that was so romantic and a scorching hot skype date!fab chapter.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 123: Bella

yep defo need another towel.hot chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 122: Edward

wow that was hot!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 121: Bella

fab chapter.id fan myself too lol

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

OMFG never mind lemon warnings you should put a panty liner warning up (how many we gonna need) I love them together but love the texts emails and the skype. LOve you guys x

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

Oh Bella is such a tease. I hope Edward is alone when he reads that message or someone might get the wrong idea. Lol

 

Im really glad you left Robert and Kristen's personal lives alone. We don't know The whole story and we never will. They deserve the privacy to work things out on their own. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

SO AMAZING!  I really loved it!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 123: Bella

SO AMAZING!!!  I need more than one towel ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 122: Edward

OH SNAP!  I think that Edward should have made a mold of his cock and that way, he could technically be there with Bella during these sessions ;)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

The guys handled things just like you would expect. Cool and mildly broody. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 121: Bella

SO AMAZING!  I really loved it!  I wonder if they get married, if they get married, will he wear his dress uniforms for th wedding?  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

Hopefully this will be the hardest goodbye they have. It's almost over hopefully. Maybe they will even get to see each other again before October. 

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

I don't comment often but I do look forward to reading the two chapters (sometimes more!) after work.  You ladies are doing a great job!

 

The worse pick up line EVER was when I was in a bar.  I was talking to some people and this guy came over to me.  He looked at me like he knew me and then approached me.  He said, "hey there you are."

Me: Sorry, do I know you?

Him: Yes, yes you do-he smiled.

Me: I'm sorry I don't remember you.  Where do I know you from?

Him: He grabbed my hand and sasid, "evey night you are in my dreams."  I rolled my eyes while he tried to covince me to go home with him and we'd have a breakfast picnic in teh park.  Needless to say that NEVER happened!

 

Keep up the good work ladies!

PS-I love how you guys handled the "news" in the past AN.  It was very classy.  Good job :)

 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Lets see a guy said are u breakfast,lunch or dinner cuz ill eat you for all 3 meals lol

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Jake is a douche, I am glad that Charlie stepped in. Hmm...the worst pick up line I ever heard...I actually was hit with TWO in one night..

ONE: When they made the alphabet, they should have put 'U' and 'I' together....GAG!!

TWO: Do you have a  mirror in your pocket, cause I can sure see myself in your pants.

Thank God I met my husband and didn't have to hear anymore...C-ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: leadmehome Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

I love charlie!!!! His best line ever! Lol

Reviewer: dana1644 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Loved these chapters! The first time I talked to my husband was actually to tell him my boyfriend's sister was into him! He told me he wasn't interested in her and had his eye on someone else, but he had to wait for her! ! month later (after some flirting) I figured it out. I was 17 at the time and he was 22. We have been married 27 years!

Reviewer: leadmehome Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

*Tissues, tub of Ben & Jerry's and a sappy chick flick :D so sad!! 

Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Oh I see you are a nurse maybe u could be my naughty nurse....

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Sweet chapter. Love this story soooooo much

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

Love Charlie standing up for b and e.

And no its not unheard of for them not to be in same state for reasons u gave. Work, kids schooling, stability for kids, medical needs, etc.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

SO amazing :D

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

Oh wow, that was amazing :D

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Aww..  BTW - I must have misread the pervious chapter, because I thought Bella was asking Edward if he wanted her to play with *his* ass...  Suffice to say, I was curious what his answer would have been.  LOL! 

Reviewer: CrazyKate28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

  • When my the hubs finally went out on our first date (this is after his month of Internet stalking me and emailing me and texting and talking did I finally agree to go) so the first part of our date wad to go see. A movie and I was meeting him there cause I didn't want him to know where I lived yet (ya know just In case he turned out to be a dud and I needed an out) so I meet him there and he is already in line for tickets and I walk up and say hello and hug him and give him the friendly kiss on the cheek. He doesn't really say much, when we get inside he asks me if I want anything to eat or drink and I wasn't really hungry because I had eaten at work earlier in the day so I just got something to drink. At this point in mylife I lived in Hawaii and at the movie theatre there they sold fresh pineapple, mago, papaya, bananas, and chocolate covered strawberries in these little carts filled with ice. So he goes and buys pineapple and chocolate covered strawberries. Now I'm thinking who is this guy, what man goes to the movies and buys fruit? No they buy nachos and hotdogs and popcorn and whatever, but fruit? Something was up with this cat. But I just snickered at him and made a little joke and stole a piece of pineapple. So, we go in and find our seats, but he still really hasn't said much to me and I'm trying to get him to chat with me before the movie starts. Then he just turns to me , looks me in the eyes and says, "so do you how much a polar bear weighs?" and I just look at him, shaking my head thinking what in the hell? And his reply is, "enough to break the ice." and just when he said that as I laughed at his little pick up line, I had a thought in the back of my head telling me, that knowing me I would end up marrying this guy. Well turns out 14 months later we got married. We were married December 3, 2007 under one of the trees on the bank of Pearl Harbor. 4 days later he left for a 15 month deployment to Iraq. He came home on leave on on our 6 month anniversary to the day and during his leave he knocked me up lol (those boys have super swimmers when they get home) he made it through his deployment he got home thursday February 26,2009 in the evening and Sunday morning at 5:30am march 1 he was driving me to the hospital, where at 7:02pm we welcomed our son Tristan into the world. And now in approx. 36 hours he will be arriving home from his second tour in Afghanistan and I can't wait for him to see how much our son has grown. He left and Tristan still was his little baby and now he is probably 4-5 or so inches taller and weighs ten pounds or more than when he left back in September. He is coming home to his little boy. I just want to record it when Tristan goes running up to him the moment he sees him and says, "daddy" and throws his little arms around him. It will be so awesome, and well I can't wait to get me some of my hubsters loving either. I have spent over half of our marriage alone and acting as a single parent. Being a military spouse is probably the hardest thing I have ever done in my life. Especially when your spouse is an infantry man "HUA" lol. You live with a ghost and memories, and you live with the hope for tomorrow, because as an infantry man's wife tomorrow will never be a guarantee, and the only promise he can make you is that no matter what I will always love you whether I am with you or not. It's a life where 3 am phone calls that last five minutes are better than any bouquet of roses, emails in your inbox are like a million love poems even if he was just reminding you to pay his star card bill so he could get a new pair of boots and some peanut butter cups when he gotto his FOB (forward operating base) because he has been out on missions for the last three months and they finally get a weeks break. And if he is lucky a hot shower (in a real shower stall and not just bottled water and baby wipes for once...FYI if you ever want to throw in a flash back dream, there is something for ya. My hubs before he finally got to go back to his FOB there unit hasn't had real showers in months, and more times than not on the phone with him I could hear rounds being fired and  mortar rounds going off. And most of the time we were unable to Skype because their I internet cafe was down so whe we chatted IM he was working t the moment on radio watch, using a work computer. So we hardly ever got to Skype and when we did, the connection was crap and we would constantly get disconnected. But, honestly all of that doesn't matter none of the worry, anxiety, loneliness, none of it, because when he IS home he IS home. My husband has been through 3 tours 2 in afghanistan and 1 in Iraq. He may look a little rougher, have a little less hair, be a little bit grayer, and even having to work through his PTSD and reacclimating himself every time, NOTTHING and I mean NOTHING will ever compare to how your heart, your soul, Christ even the way your skin feels the moment he smiles at you and wraps his arms around you. Because at the moment you know your home, and that you are in the safest place in the world, and there is NOTHING else out there that will ever feel like that. And that is how you know it's all worth it. And I know that it is just the same for him the moment he has our sons my arms wrapped around him, everything he does, evrything he has done doesn't matter because it was all worth it, because it kept us safe, because he took care of us, because he knew that when he was away I could take care of us, and that no matter what we always take care of each other. It doesn't matter whether you are five inches or five thousand miles apart from someone, love knows no distance, and true love knows no boundaries and unFortunaely only a military spouse (girlfriend/boyfriend) or family member can attest to the full weight of what true separation is. And I don't say that to offend anyone who has had to spend time away from a loved one, but until you have to do it and basic needs, and basic tools of communication are not a constant, when weeks go buy without any word and you appreciate and can find happiness in that because in my world the saying, "no news is good news." has an entirely different meaning, and it means all is right in your world. Because I would take weeks without a word from him any day rather than getting an FRG phone call and two uniformed nco's knocking on my door thanking me for my husbands service and what he has sacrificed for his country. Because if there's one thing I never want to repeat in my life it is a funeral for a solider and you can take that to the bank. The memory of a gun and helmet with dog tags and the young mans picture and a pair of dirty boots will never leave your mind. I can still smell the mildewiness of the air conditioning in the church, I remember the blue flowers printed on the black of the women's dress who handed me a kleenex, and the sound of ave Maria will never sound the same to me ever again. I have unfortunately been to a lot of funerals in my almost 31 years of life, but nothing has ever stayed with me like that has. My ears still ring from the shots fired when I think about it. 
  • But as I was saying I don't want to demean any person who has been separated from a loved on, but in all honesty you just don't know, unless you know. Because their heart doesn't stop every time their door bell rings, they don't check out the window first to see if the vehicle in the driveway has government plates on it or if there are two people in uniforms standing waiting to do a job that they really wish they didn't have to do, to say the unemotional words do scripted appreciation that they have to say, and they don't want to have to stand there and watch the light go out of another persons eyes. And I thank every deity there is that my husband is coming home on Saturday. He has 6 years left in the army the next three of which are none deplorable (thank god) and I can only hope that by that time they won't need to send him anywhere again. 
  • Okay sorry about my rant there ladies I really just wanted to share my pick up line story with you, but I just kind got lost in e whole of it. I love your story and look forward to it everyday. It puts smile on my face, knowing they will get their happy ending, because in about 36 hours I am going to get mine (well again...if they would stop deploying him I could Juy get to the...and they lived happily ever after bit...lol) anyway keep up the good work ladies xoxo
  • Crazykate

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Great chapters! Can't wait for the time jumps. I think the worst pick up line I ever heard was "You know how hard it was to come up to you? I didn't think you would give me the time of day since you looked kind of concieted." Yea...I just looked at the guy like um Thank you? I didn't know whether to take it as a compliment or an insult.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

lol fab chapter ooo love possesiveward!update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

fab chapter aww bless charlie getting wed thats fab news.bet jakes face was a pic lol hahaha go charlie get him told.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

OH, wow.  The worst pick up line EVER was whispered in my ear, he said "Angel, get your wings out and stretch them, cause I'm about to send you flyin' over and over again."

 

Whispered, in my ear.

 

In a bar, on a Friday night.

 

I turned and looked at him, furrowing my brows at him. and said "WHAT?"

 

Then he yelled it, oh wow.

I rolled my eyes and got up and left... alone  :)

Reviewer: Bellstar67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Great chapter! They are such a cute couple. 

Th worst pickup line I've ever heard is; "Call an ambulance, your giving me heart palpatations!"

Reviewer: Tonia Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

Amen on the note about Robsten. Let them be and stay out of their lives. I can't wait to hear about Soldierward's reaction when he finally gets home to Bella and meets the Mutt in person!!! with the style of writing that you two girls do it will be EPIC!!!

Lots of Love, Tonia from TN

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

So do the guys get any weekend leaves to travel to Seattle or meet them halfway?

Don't have any pick up lines to share all though when I was younger a guy tried to pick me up when I was working he was about twice my age and had his children with him. Freaked me out a bit.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

I am glad Charlie spoke to Jake.

About KStew and RPatts. I totaly agree with you. It is their buisness, who are any of us to comment on what they should or shouldn't do next or what they have done.

Reviewer: mystic1709 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

some military wives might but chances are they wont because its such a short time they are in tampa. if it was for a year or 2 then yea most would. (hubby was in the army for a term)

Reviewer: Deantish Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Oh how I love Sarge!!  I never really got any pickup lines..although a girlfriend of mine loved to use them on men (weird but true).  Anyway..my husband was a blind date..so I did't get to have a pickup line used.  When we first met he did look at me for a second, then lowered his head like I was hideous....needless to say I was dumbstruck.  Anyway turnes out he was just shy and I was to hot to look at...LOL!!!  Love him I do, but when that happened lord..WE almost didn't happen.  Anyway..can't wait to here what Bella has to tell Sarge...I'm sure it's a good one, and probably given by that skuz ball Mike!

PS...on a light note Sarge could use my body anyway he wanted...Good Lord!  I'm at work...have to stop reading while I'm at work..shamwow's would be alittle weird to take to my desk with me...LMAO!

Waiting with bells on for the next two chapter!!

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

I love it when she calls him baby. I don't know why but babe has always seemed impersonal to me. It just doesn't have the passion and feeling that baby, sweetheart or love has. It makes me think of some jerk tryin to hit on me at a bar "hey babe" LOL just how my brain works. Loving the story! Can't wait for October!!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Yeah i love this...cant believe its 119 chappies and hope itnever ends!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Can't wait for their Skype session!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

I love this Charlie!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

The guys are great!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

That was so sad but Sarge is so sweet!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Glad boys are doing ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

Poor girls. Hope she'll be ok

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Ya'll have done a great job telling it like it is.  It's soooo hard to let them go...

 

Catherine

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

awww bless em.fab chapter and i agree i bet his face was a pic lol.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Jasper is right. The hard part is over. Now they can get back to work and the time will fly...Thanks girls.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

awww that was so emotional sat sobbing.fantastic chapter.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

That was crazy sad. I have a really large lump in my throat. Off to Edwards side...

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Hes dating sue? 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella

Hot sex

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Great chapters! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

SO amazing :D  Love it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

SO amazing :D  I really loved it!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Great chapter...

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

Fabulous 2 chapters. I am glad that it wasn't officially party time with the guys after the girls left to cope. Very nice

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

That was incredibly sweet and heartbreaking. 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

OH MAN I CAN STAND IT I'M SO LEFT WANTING MORE BUT NOT A LITTLE BIT I WANT A LOT MORE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 115: Bella

WELL THATS SOMETHING I'VE NEVER DONE HAVE AN " O " IN THE OCEAN OR GAVE A HAND JOB THEY SEEMED TO LIKE IT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward

I THINK BELLA IS GOING TO BE DOING A LOT OF CRYING WHEN THEY HAVE TO LEAVE AND ALICE AND ROSE TO IT'S GOING TO BE SO HARD ON ALL OF THEM. THREE MONTHS IS A LONG TIME. MY HUSBAND LEFT AND WAS GONE FOR 13 MONTH. THAT WAS VERY HARD TO DO I HAD OUR THREE KIDS TO LOOK AFTER ON MY OWN I GAVE BIRTH ONE MONTH AFTER HE LEFT A DAUGHTER WAS BORN MY OTHER TWO WERE BOYS.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

Thanks for the tissue warning...I needed it. Poor Sarge and Bella...I know they can get through this. They've made it this far...Can't wait for tomorrow.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

Enough. I have read 3 stories today and cried with each one. Now... enough.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

OH WOW...that was so amazing!  I really loved it SO much!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 115: Bella

AMAZING :D

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

Aww I freaking loved this chapter. It even made me want to cry. He is do damn perfect and so freaking sweet. When she leaves I think I'm going to be bawling like a lil bb. Cant wait for tomorrow

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward

Oh wow, that was great!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 113: Bella

So amazing :D

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