Love it!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the updates. I'm glad I got to read them before I went to work. I love a little possesive Sarge. I wonder if they'll have the elevator to themselves on the way back...

Lil for tour guide. Sweet time for them

Wow just started reading this yesterday night and this is a really good story. Will we be getting a baby Edward? Lol I love how you have wrote Bella's character! Just a good all around job. :D

Awesome! I loved the bow...did Bella even notice? Can't wait for tomorrow!

Completely agree on the Ryan front, cuuutttte!! :D I don't know how she lasted so long haha obviously after the initial elation and all, apologies but I would've jumped him lol

Gah, that was amazing :D  Really loved it!

God they are so amazing together. 

Awww! That was great. Not only did Bella get a wonderful suprise but the kids did too. I will never forget how awed my daughters class was when their adopted soldier came for a suprise visit. 

I would love to have seen those boxers!!

oh girls.. so sweet.

Lol for boxers. Yummy tlmes

Great chapters! So eager to read that I read the EPOV before the BPOV. I was wondering why I was reading his first. I didn't figure it out till I got to the bottom. Can't wait for the next update!

Dang.... another two chapters out of the park girls!!! Love you guys!!!! Love Edward lovin'!!!

SO amazing :D

SO amazing :D

I was really hoping that Mike would piss his pants. Yay! He's there...(yes I jumped up and down like Alice)...Can't wait for tomorrow!

Yay!!!! Another reunion, which was definitely much needed, especially by Bella! Can't wait to find out about that other bow haha and it seems like Alice is as sneaky as jasper :D love them all!

lol that was hilarious mikes face was a pic.fab chapter aww their gonna have a hot weekend.best birthday present ever.

Awww... he's so sweet. 

Catherine

i love bows *snort and giggle*

That was awesome! She did very well keeping herself together.

Awe for sleepy skype calls

Oh he could keep me captive and I wouldn't mind/

I`m so happy for this chapter.I know is fiction but the work of both of you, is so amazing and so real that everytime I can`t wait to read another chapter.Thank you for your story.

Can't wait for her surprise!!

loved it~ perfect.

Guys, really enjoyed the updates!!!  10,000 reviews on FFN - wow!!!  But look up top - you have almost 1,500 on TWCS - and that's awesome for this web site.  New fics on TWCS don't get hits like Coming Home has unless it's been up for quite some time.  So congrats again ladies!!!

The love between these two simply transcends the pages of this fic.  It's quite palpable, not only when they talk to each other, but reading their thoughts.  Simply beautiful, sweet and droolworthy!!

Love that Sarge is surprising Bella this way for her birthday.  Dare I ask if the red ribbon will come into play -- nicely tied around and ever-growing appendage?  It's 8:15 p.m. here in Georgia - yes, I was late reading updates today, but that makes less time between them and I'm already impatient as hell for tomorrow!!!

Love you guys.  Love your writing.  I'm not looking forward to withdrawals when this comes to conclusion -- guess that means that you two have to come up with another plot bunny just as good.  I know you can do it!!!!  Just think of all the girls on the FB page not having anything like this to read!!!  Feel guilty yet?

Thanks for writing for our awesome fandom. 

Elaine -  sparkledamnu on twitter    Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB

SQEEE!!!! Is he gonna where a red bow??? Can't wait!

Yay. I am glad he is taking leave.

Yeah. I'm so glad he's going to her. Best birthday ever. 

I can sooo see the guys sending someone to her school. Especially if you let Emmett plan things. 

Cool sounding pics

fab chapter edwards gonna get one nice surprise when he sees them pics.

Awww...  Can't wait to read all about their reunion!

Woo hoo, I love it!! Bring it on!!

SO amazing!  That package sounds wonderful...as a fellow teacher (or rather, I just graduated with a teaching degree and am looking for a teaching job), I fully appreciate the things inside :)  Cannot wait to read more!

sounds like wonderful gifts

hmmm wonder what all got delivered if Edward wasnt expecting it. hmmmmm

yeah for clean room and painting done.

hmmm hes gooooodddd

OMG  what pathetic pick up lines..... of course I wouldnt complain if they were used on me.  LOL

Great update. I wonder what he's gonna do for her b-day? See ya tomorrow!

My sister turned out the same way and my parents are the sweetest, most giving people ever! It's not always the parent. I so love this story and can't wait to see the reunion. Six weeks!

fab chapter.can't wait for them to come home its gonna be awesome.update soon

loved it n hope he stays true to his word coz hes gonna make one old womans day lol.

aww bless dusty lol.fab chapter.

hes gonna be one hot music teacher!fab chapter.

so good to smile.

Thanks for the chapters... ya'll start my day off with a big grin!

Catherine