Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
Love b ripping j apart. Ugh Renee huh.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 163: Bella
Yea for Charlie and sue. Jake is a twit
Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward
Jake is so pathetic.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 161: Bella
Shes a snot but cant help feeling sorry for melissa. Obvious Jake is using her
Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
what!? the next button was missing! lol love you guys!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
Hot, loved bella laying into jake
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 161: Bella
love it! <3 thanks for the douboe...on to the fameM smootches!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Oh wow, SO amazing! I really loved it! YAY...except for the Jake thing you mentioned. I am not looking forward to that, but if you say you had fun, maybe it will be funny ;)
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 159: Bella
SO AMAZING! Loved the girl talk ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Can't wait to see your take on Jake :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Ya'll's story still warms my heart, each and every day! Makes me wish I had someone like him...sigh
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Great chapters!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Great chapter as always. Nice honeymoon.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Lol i cant wait im being teased with edward lol
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 159: Bella
Rofl for girl time.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 160: Edward
Can't wait for tomorrow. I am so hoping that Jake gets his ass kicked!!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
Bella is just one of the boys. Nice job with all the shooting range action.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
I love Em! That last part was too funny. Great chapters!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
Bella is kick ass!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
Great day at the range
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 157: Bella
Aww for sleepy sarge. Yummy breakfast.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
Great job girls. Can't wait for tomorrow, or the meeting with Jake!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 155: Bella
Sweet Chapter.... and Prayers are with your family, Jenny
Date: 13 Aug 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
I wanna go shooting now
Date: 13 Aug 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 158: Edward
Really loved it SO much :) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 157: Bella
SO amazing :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
So amazing :) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 155: Bella
SO amazing :) Will be praying for you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
thank goodness I was able to get caught up this weekend. absolutely loving this story! he is finally home, YAY!! so funny that Bella is spoiled by both of them. luckily they didn't get caught on stairs :) keep up the great work ladies, I love the daily updates (even though I was behind) and love the sweet story!! ~Tracey xoxox
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 119: Bella
Love it!! Thank you both so much for such a wonderful heartfelt story!! I agree that Robert & Kristen's lives are there own & should remain that way...Private!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
I teared up when Charlie called him son! Great job ladies!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Jennys dad is in. My prayers. Loved this chapter
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 155: Bella
Jenny - First I want to say I love this story. It just keeps getting better :). Also, I personally know what its like to.have a dad fighting cancer. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
he is getting dirtier by the day naughty sarge lol
loving it
Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Can't wait fo the ret of their weekend!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Love it, you guys are great!! Love the comraderie with E/J/E and Charlie!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Charlie is really cool. Sue is sweet.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 155: Bella
lol for his baby taking his baby for a drive
Best wished for you dad
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
patience? :( im not a jedi yet...still a padawon... patience i have not. lol can you ell i have star wars on he brain? lol
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
i now need a cold shower i dont know about bella
jeee sarge was on a roll there wasnt he very dirty boy or maby that was just my mind being so far into the gutter it would need a step ladder to get out lol
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
They are definitely made for each other!
Good job on the twin letters :-)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Lol aww they are so cute
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 156: Edward
Just found this story last week. It's awesome
You two have done an awesome job with this story
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
oh my god sarge im sooo jelouse
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 155: Bella
Hi jenny nothing to say about the chapter that hasn't already been said by others ok great as always, i am sorry to hear that news about your old man and it goes without saying him,you and the rest of your family will be in my prayers hugs and love from blighty Dakota-lou xoxox
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
god sarge is sooo hot i need to fan myself .....
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
oh my god i sooo luv sarge
you two are brilliant writers on your own but together your fucking fantastic
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
SO AMAZING :)
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Edward is such a guy. He had to mention getting her naked. Lol
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 153: Bella
Oh wow, that was SO amazing! I really loved it! Edward is so perfect!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 153: Bella
They are so incredibly sweet.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
So I totaly misinterpeted the trimming the tree part. All I could think is October is too early for Christmas lights. I then realized that you meant as in pruning. Silly me.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Don't know how ya'll do it, but every chapter just keeps getting better and better.
Thanks for brightening up my days!
Catherine
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Aww the guys are sweet to help edward with the yards i hope he helps them with theirs
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Can't wait for tomorrow! Great updates. I love that they went back old school! So sweet...
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
love ms mary. E&B are so sweet together.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
I loved the last 4 chapters! I leave for work early on Fraiday and don't return til late Saturday morning so for me, it's a double post! I forget to review each chapter because I am to anxious to get to the next one. I LOVED their reunion! Miss Mary... soooooo sweet! Oh the letters, great minds think alike. As usual, Fantastic. When I open my updates I automatically grab the tissue box, because I know I'll shed some happy tears! Off to check out the pic porn on Sarge Girl's face Book!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 153: Bella
awww what a wonderful letter.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Two very sweet chapters and as usual can't wait for more!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 153: Bella
That was the sweetest letter!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Loved how these two got back to the basics or their beginning. I am looking forward to the meet/greet that's coming up.
Have a lovely weekend!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Fabulous story and great 2 chapters today. Looking forward to more. A Sarge sundae sounds might good.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
Aw how cute are they?! I cant wait for the shooting range with Charlie. :)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
I am enjoying this story it is Awesome! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 154: Edward
I love your story it's weird really cause I get sad when I finish reading the chapters every day because it's the end of the chapters for that day but at the same time I'm so excited waiting for the next chapters to post I can't wait for the next ones I'm so looking forward to see what happens next
Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Now the guys can truly. Will Edward follow in his fathers or his mothers footsteps. Maybe Miss Mary's husbands story will inspire him.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 149: Bella
Wow. I'm shocked they lasted that long. Lol
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 148: Edward
Amazing. But there was still no tissue warning.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 147: Bella
Hey! Where was our tissue warning?
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
SO amazing :) Oh Tanya, will you ever learn?! Cannot wait for more!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
I loved it! YAY!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 149: Bella
SO AMAZING!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 148: Edward
SO amazing :) I really loved it! I just realized the date! That's my parents' anniversary!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 151: Bella
OH WOW, SO amazing :)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 145: Bella
I love there countdown so cute.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Definitely looking forward to the face to face meet/greet for Edward and Charlie.
Enjoy the weekend ladies!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 144: Edward
I don't remember her story. I am surprised I remember my name sometimes.
Emmett is great. I wonder if he'll really hide the games? Because truthfully it may be more painful if he does. I'm sure Emmett would be a big baby about it.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 143: Bella
I'm glad Bella's okay.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 142: Edward
That was a really sweet birthday.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 141: Bella
So was there story of where they were during 9/11 based off of where you were? I was at Temple Univ. when it happened. Didn't find out until almost 11:00 am because we were in a class that started at 7:40. Our whole school was evacuated because we were considered a target. It funny how after all these years I still remember every moment.
Wow that was really dirty. Loved it.
Author's Response:
No, both Deb and I were out of school already. I was getting ready to take my son to preschool when it happened. :(
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Fabulous!! I love this story and while I don't always review, you guys are favs.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
I see Tanya has moved on, which obviously she wanted any way since she sent the Dear John letter. :) Adjusting to everyday life is good. Love this story.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
surprised Tanya didnt try to get a little revenge with the box. ah well.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
This was the sweetest chapter. I loved it. I am so glad that he is acclamating well! C-ya tomorrow!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Love the story. Please don't ever stop writing! It makes me happy to read a little bit about them. Love their new begining together!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Great chapters!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 151: Bella
Yea. Yummy way to wake up. Lol for Mary
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
Love it
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 152: Edward
I'm so glad he is home and that it is everything he was hoping for and more!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 151: Bella
I love Miss Mary!! I do love that they can't get enough of each other!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 149: Bella
I THINK BELLA IS IN FOR A LONG NIGHT OF LOVING. I HAVE HEARD ROB PLAY AND I LOVE IT HE PLAYS VERY WELL.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 147: Bella
Aw, what a wonderful welcome home! I LOVED IT! YAY!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
Great updates. I'm glad that he's home and that he got misty-eyed knowing that Bella had his things around. Can't wait for tomorrow!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
*dancing big time!!!* You guys are amazing!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
Holy cow where is the shampow!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
You ladies rocked these last few chapters!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
Yummy yummy. Rofl for the retirement of Mr Sparkly.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 149: Bella
Sweet introduction to the house
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 150: Edward
I love how they can't get enough of eachother!!