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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Just Wow! That gave me goosebumps. :-)
Thanks sooo much for writing this both of you!!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

perfect ending its ended how it started with letters to each other fantastic story so emotional and romantic.very very hot!!!at times loved it.they defo deserve their happy family.can't believe its ended gonna re-read it.look forward to outtakes.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Thank you for giving us everything...it was ecellent!

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

i cant believe its the end!  it was a great ride ;) in more waysbthan one. lol. i will miss this story very much! thank you fir all your hard work!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!  Thank you for sharing it with us!  I hope you both keep us up to date on any new stories you both write either separately or together!!

Reviewer: veraleeon Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Love it :')

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I cant write for crying. I loved this thank you so much. Love to you all xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Wonderful end to the main story. Cant wair for the epilogue and outtakes

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

That was a cute proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

Glad they adopted. I have two adopted ones at home.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Sweet presents

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

Aww sweet Christmas times

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Love it, my cat and dogs get along just fine

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Aww he got her the dog she fell in love with

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

So good!  I'm going to miss daily updates on Sarge and the gang.  *Huge sigh*  Thanks for sharing their story.

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

deb,

i am soooo gonna miss this story! it seems as if these charatures have become part of my life! gonna miss my friends! 

Reviewer: shannabanana1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Really going to miss my daily Sarge updates! This story always made me smile! Thanks Gals!!!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Great ending to a great story!  Looking forward to the Epilogues...

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

What a superb story! Only took me maybe ten days or or so to read start to finish. Absolutely loved it. *BIG smiles* Thanks for such a wonderful distraction.

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

I wouild leave you some love but can't see the dam keys through my tears, sniff xx

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Love it. Sad that it has too end soon, but I guess it wouldn't make sense to write it forever.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Aww. The proposal was so cute. I'm kinda sorry to see this amazing story coming to an end. Ill miss you guys so freaking much.  I hope to see more of u guys very soon. U guys make an excellent team so I really hope to see another great story I the making ;). See u soon for the epilogue *sniff

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Oh I love it!!! bunches!!!!!

Reviewer: cloudiekp Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

I know Pepper is for Peppermint but I can't be the only one singing "Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band", can I?!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Thank you both for wonderful story - - I didn't start reading it right away, but once I read the first couple of chapters, I was hooked.  I had hoped to learn how to review using my IPAD, but I haven't yet.  Luckily my netbook is now working and I was able to finally review.  I know that like the other fans, I don't want this story to ever end.  Looking forward to the epi and future outtakes.  Again, thank you for an outstanding ride!

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Cute proposal

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

I rather take an animal from the shelter too. The commercials kill me each time. Thankfully my kids are too young to understand that they are abused.

I am glad  they went that way too.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

Did you know that they are coming out with a Christmas Story II? I can watch it once during the season, but not contiuously.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Good lord, girls. That proposal was too beautiful and irresistible. I loved it!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Fanfuckingtastic!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

I am in denial

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Great chapters! Loved the one with Sarge and the kitten. Thanks for a great story. Can't believe only the epi is left. I'm going to miss seeing an update in my inbox everyday. Hope you both decide to do another story together. I loved reading this one. :) 

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Excellent job writing this story ladies!  I'm so sad the ride with Bella and Sarge is all over.  I look forward to the epi and outtakes.  Great job ladies again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

SO AMAZING!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens during the epilogue!  YAY!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

AWWWWW!!!!  YAY!  I loved the dog and the ring :)  Perfect!  Wendy and Tink (my cats) are fixed, and 7 years old, but we wish we could have let Tink have ONE litter of kittens.  She has adopted several of her toys and cries for them like they are her kittens, and carries them around in her mouth, so precious.  Anyway, Pepper is adorable!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

Oh wow, SO amazing :)  I really loved it!  I am SO happy they adopted from a shelter!  YAY!  I have two female cats and they can be demanding, but are so sweet!  One is 22 pounds ;)

Reviewer: Bec2b Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

I can honestly say this story made my days brighter. i have had a really rough month or so with deaths and friends being on life support(still waiting to hear if she is brain dead or not) so when ever I got back home I would take time for me just me to read your updates. I will miss your story but know it had to end somewhere even thou I was hope it would end with great grandchildren LOL thank you both for all your hard work. I will keep an eye out for updates and any new stories you may write.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Perfect way to end the story... with me in full blown sobs.  Beautiful, beautiful story.

 

Time to ga back and read it again.....

 

Catherine

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

*sobbing* This is so absolutely fantastic!!! I knew he had been paying attention to her at the animal shelter. *sniffles* So wonderful. I will miss them when this stroy is truely over.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

I love the name "cookie"

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

That was awesome & perfect & made me tear up again 

 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

*sniff* I can't believe its almost over!Can't wait for the epi!

Reviewer: Legs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

Well yeah what to say i have laughed cried and growled throughout this story,i have also been a nightmare every morning when i got up and throughout the day i was checking to see if there was an update and on occassion did a happy dance when there was(meeting for the first time in person)there are very few books/stories i read twice there are too many to read this however i will be reading again Thank you ladies for giving me/us such a wonderful story to read i am going to miss looking for updates everyday,now the personal bit Jen i will continue to keep you,your old man and family in my prayers each night god bless treacles and thank you again  xoxox Dakota-Louise x 

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Omg you got her the puppy then asked her to marry you

Im crying now 

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella

I really enjoyed the G rated fun time with the group. (can a Wii really offer special characters or is it more trying to create a particular look??)

Author's Response:

Hehe You can create a particular look, I believe, but there are some characters you can download from online. :)

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

Go back & get the puppy he would be a great companion for Cookie 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

Aww...his proposal was so sweet.. I am anxiously awaiting the next one. Thanks ladies.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

I want to cry knowing that this is almost over. Especially sonce I didn't get to read it until today and I got the email that the next chapters were up. Great job on this one!

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

WOW I THOUGHT EDWARD WAS GOING TO COME BACK WITH THE PUPPY BELLA WAS LOOKING AT.

Reviewer: HelsBells Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Brilliant as usual, sad to hear we are coming to the end of the journey with these two. It's been a blast and I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters!! Thanks so much for a great story.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Hot lemon

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

No No No not over!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

Love!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

No, don't stop!!! Love this and look forward to reading more from you two,.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

SO AMAZING!  I really loved it!  SO sad it is ending.  Cannot wait to see what will happen in the next few chapters!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

OH WOW...that was amazing :)  I really loved it!  I LOVE A Christmas Story...my family watches it on repeat at least twice ;)

Reviewer: sayla22002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Can't wait to read the rest...amazing story, it's a real page truner!

 

Reviewer: atomicflamingo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:55 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

I have left four reviews total since I started reading fanfiction years ago. Since you are winding this story up, I felt that I should leave feedback for the fifth time.  This has been a remarkable story that I have enjoyed reading every day.  I have looked forward to my lunch break each day so I could grab my iPad and go read the latest chapters. Thank you for this wonderful story and the hours of entertainment. I hope you will be posting new stories in the future. Excellent work!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Really enjoyed this story -- can't wait to see how you guys wrap it up!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

I'm so sad to hear this story is finishing!!  I love it so much!!  Do you guys have any thing planned for the future, either together or separately?

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

I dont know who would be a scarier shopping partner. Renee? Or Alice?

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

What a sweet way to spend Christmas!

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Oh no I hate the end of a good story. I just found this a couple weeks ago :(

you 2 did a great job with it 

Reviewer: Tonia Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

NOOOOO!!! What about the future of Sarge and his lady??? The Wedding and the Babies that they have??? What about the funtimes with the fam on the holidays. You didnt even give them a easter with the gange or a crazy 4th!!! Please dont stop while you two are on a roll!!!

Reviewer: Bellstar67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

Thank you 's Sarge's Girls for the wonderful story:O)

 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

The beautiful story brought tears to my eyes, but the A/N made them flow.

Thank you both so very much for sharing your talents with me.  Everyday I would read your words and then have a small smile on my face for the rest of the day. 

Guess I'll start over at the beginning and read this again for the third time. Never fails to make me happy.

 

Catherine

 

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

It was a good visit for all of them!! I'm glad Renee was a good person!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

Renee is funny, I like her!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

Great update. Thanks ladies, see ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

As always... sweet, endearing, heart warming and just damn good!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

:-)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

Awww i like ur renee

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

Ha! She really is something, but you can tell she loves her daughter. She is just how you said...flighty.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

Oblivious....good word. Hmmm make out in theater. Yeah

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

Evil or bitch, no. Selfish and scatterbrained, definitely

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

So fantastic! :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

Wow, that was amazing :D  I really loved it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

Oh wow, Renee is definitely an interesting character :)  Loved it :D

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Hot panio sex

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Sexy!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 165: Bella

Fun cookout!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Oh Deb you do him so good.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 165: Bella

:-)

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

I will never be able to look at a piano the same again. Thanks ladies!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Yummy piano time

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella

Wonderful average day

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Fuc yeah

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

Yummy, damn that was good.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward

OH WOW...SO amazing! So, wonder what that song would be called ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella

Oh wow, so amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward

SO amazing :)  Renee...interesting ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 163: Bella

OH SNAP!  Their wedding was beautiful :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward

OH yeah!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 161: Bella

SO AMAZING!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward

Tht was a sweet wedding!!  Good for Bella, telling Jacob off! She and Edwrdvare so sweet!!

Reviewer: dana1644 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 163: Bella

Awww, it took me three tries to read the wedding. My husband is tolerent of all my Twilight love. but when I start crying when I am reading he busts my chops! I hate when it rains and he has the day off! Ohhhh Jacob is in trouble.......

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward

That was hot!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward

Okay, so Jake is a total tool and Paul is no better. I'm still torn on them going to see Renee....See ya tomorrow!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward

I love double chapter days. Just keep bringing on the love!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward

Jake sucks balls

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