Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
Just Wow! That gave me goosebumps. :-)
Thanks sooo much for writing this both of you!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
perfect ending its ended how it started with letters to each other fantastic story so emotional and romantic.very very hot!!!at times loved it.they defo deserve their happy family.can't believe its ended gonna re-read it.look forward to outtakes.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
Thank you for giving us everything...it was ecellent!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
i cant believe its the end! it was a great ride ;) in more waysbthan one. lol. i will miss this story very much! thank you fir all your hard work!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing it with us! I hope you both keep us up to date on any new stories you both write either separately or together!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
Love it :')
Date: 23 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
I cant write for crying. I loved this thank you so much. Love to you all xx
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Wonderful end to the main story. Cant wair for the epilogue and outtakes
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
That was a cute proposal
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
Glad they adopted. I have two adopted ones at home.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Sweet presents
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
Aww sweet Christmas times
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Love it, my cat and dogs get along just fine
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Aww he got her the dog she fell in love with
Date: 20 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
So good! I'm going to miss daily updates on Sarge and the gang. *Huge sigh* Thanks for sharing their story.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
deb,
i am soooo gonna miss this story! it seems as if these charatures have become part of my life! gonna miss my friends!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Really going to miss my daily Sarge updates! This story always made me smile! Thanks Gals!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Great ending to a great story! Looking forward to the Epilogues...
Date: 19 Aug 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
What a superb story! Only took me maybe ten days or or so to read start to finish. Absolutely loved it. *BIG smiles* Thanks for such a wonderful distraction.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
I wouild leave you some love but can't see the dam keys through my tears, sniff xx
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Love it. Sad that it has too end soon, but I guess it wouldn't make sense to write it forever.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Aww. The proposal was so cute. I'm kinda sorry to see this amazing story coming to an end. Ill miss you guys so freaking much. I hope to see more of u guys very soon. U guys make an excellent team so I really hope to see another great story I the making ;). See u soon for the epilogue *sniff
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Oh I love it!!! bunches!!!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
I know Pepper is for Peppermint but I can't be the only one singing "Sgt Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band", can I?!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Thank you both for wonderful story - - I didn't start reading it right away, but once I read the first couple of chapters, I was hooked. I had hoped to learn how to review using my IPAD, but I haven't yet. Luckily my netbook is now working and I was able to finally review. I know that like the other fans, I don't want this story to ever end. Looking forward to the epi and future outtakes. Again, thank you for an outstanding ride!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Cute proposal
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
I rather take an animal from the shelter too. The commercials kill me each time. Thankfully my kids are too young to understand that they are abused.
I am glad they went that way too.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
Did you know that they are coming out with a Christmas Story II? I can watch it once during the season, but not contiuously.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Good lord, girls. That proposal was too beautiful and irresistible. I loved it!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Fanfuckingtastic!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
I am in denial
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Great chapters! Loved the one with Sarge and the kitten. Thanks for a great story. Can't believe only the epi is left. I'm going to miss seeing an update in my inbox everyday. Hope you both decide to do another story together. I loved reading this one. :)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Excellent job writing this story ladies! I'm so sad the ride with Bella and Sarge is all over. I look forward to the epi and outtakes. Great job ladies again!
-Lisa
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
SO AMAZING! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens during the epilogue! YAY!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
AWWWWW!!!! YAY! I loved the dog and the ring :) Perfect! Wendy and Tink (my cats) are fixed, and 7 years old, but we wish we could have let Tink have ONE litter of kittens. She has adopted several of her toys and cries for them like they are her kittens, and carries them around in her mouth, so precious. Anyway, Pepper is adorable!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
Oh wow, SO amazing :) I really loved it! I am SO happy they adopted from a shelter! YAY! I have two female cats and they can be demanding, but are so sweet! One is 22 pounds ;)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
I can honestly say this story made my days brighter. i have had a really rough month or so with deaths and friends being on life support(still waiting to hear if she is brain dead or not) so when ever I got back home I would take time for me just me to read your updates. I will miss your story but know it had to end somewhere even thou I was hope it would end with great grandchildren LOL thank you both for all your hard work. I will keep an eye out for updates and any new stories you may write.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Perfect way to end the story... with me in full blown sobs. Beautiful, beautiful story.
Time to ga back and read it again.....
Catherine
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
*sobbing* This is so absolutely fantastic!!! I knew he had been paying attention to her at the animal shelter. *sniffles* So wonderful. I will miss them when this stroy is truely over.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
I love the name "cookie"
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
That was awesome & perfect & made me tear up again
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
*sniff* I can't believe its almost over!Can't wait for the epi!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
Well yeah what to say i have laughed cried and growled throughout this story,i have also been a nightmare every morning when i got up and throughout the day i was checking to see if there was an update and on occassion did a happy dance when there was(meeting for the first time in person)there are very few books/stories i read twice there are too many to read this however i will be reading again Thank you ladies for giving me/us such a wonderful story to read i am going to miss looking for updates everyday,now the personal bit Jen i will continue to keep you,your old man and family in my prayers each night god bless treacles and thank you again xoxox Dakota-Louise x
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Omg you got her the puppy then asked her to marry you
Im crying now
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella
I really enjoyed the G rated fun time with the group. (can a Wii really offer special characters or is it more trying to create a particular look??)
Author's Response:
Hehe You can create a particular look, I believe, but there are some characters you can download from online. :)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
Go back & get the puppy he would be a great companion for Cookie
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
Aww...his proposal was so sweet.. I am anxiously awaiting the next one. Thanks ladies.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
I want to cry knowing that this is almost over. Especially sonce I didn't get to read it until today and I got the email that the next chapters were up. Great job on this one!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
WOW I THOUGHT EDWARD WAS GOING TO COME BACK WITH THE PUPPY BELLA WAS LOOKING AT.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Brilliant as usual, sad to hear we are coming to the end of the journey with these two. It's been a blast and I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters!! Thanks so much for a great story.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Hot lemon
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
No No No not over!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
Love!!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
No, don't stop!!! Love this and look forward to reading more from you two,.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
SO AMAZING! I really loved it! SO sad it is ending. Cannot wait to see what will happen in the next few chapters!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
OH WOW...that was amazing :) I really loved it! I LOVE A Christmas Story...my family watches it on repeat at least twice ;)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Can't wait to read the rest...amazing story, it's a real page truner!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:55 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
I have left four reviews total since I started reading fanfiction years ago. Since you are winding this story up, I felt that I should leave feedback for the fifth time. This has been a remarkable story that I have enjoyed reading every day. I have looked forward to my lunch break each day so I could grab my iPad and go read the latest chapters. Thank you for this wonderful story and the hours of entertainment. I hope you will be posting new stories in the future. Excellent work!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Really enjoyed this story -- can't wait to see how you guys wrap it up!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
I'm so sad to hear this story is finishing!! I love it so much!! Do you guys have any thing planned for the future, either together or separately?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
I dont know who would be a scarier shopping partner. Renee? Or Alice?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
What a sweet way to spend Christmas!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Oh no I hate the end of a good story. I just found this a couple weeks ago :(
you 2 did a great job with it
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
NOOOOO!!! What about the future of Sarge and his lady??? The Wedding and the Babies that they have??? What about the funtimes with the fam on the holidays. You didnt even give them a easter with the gange or a crazy 4th!!! Please dont stop while you two are on a roll!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
Thank you 's Sarge's Girls for the wonderful story:O)
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
The beautiful story brought tears to my eyes, but the A/N made them flow.
Thank you both so very much for sharing your talents with me. Everyday I would read your words and then have a small smile on my face for the rest of the day.
Guess I'll start over at the beginning and read this again for the third time. Never fails to make me happy.
Catherine
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
It was a good visit for all of them!! I'm glad Renee was a good person!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella
Renee is funny, I like her!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
Great update. Thanks ladies, see ya tomorrow!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
As always... sweet, endearing, heart warming and just damn good!
Catherine
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
Awww i like ur renee
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella
Ha! She really is something, but you can tell she loves her daughter. She is just how you said...flighty.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
Oblivious....good word. Hmmm make out in theater. Yeah
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella
Evil or bitch, no. Selfish and scatterbrained, definitely
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
So fantastic! :)
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 168: Edward
Wow, that was amazing :D I really loved it!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 167: Bella
Oh wow, Renee is definitely an interesting character :) Loved it :D
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
Hot panio sex
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 165: Bella
Fun cookout!!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
Oh Deb you do him so good.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
I will never be able to look at a piano the same again. Thanks ladies!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
Yummy piano time
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella
Wonderful average day
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
Fuc yeah
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
Yummy, damn that was good.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 166: Edward
OH WOW...SO amazing! So, wonder what that song would be called ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 165: Bella
Oh wow, so amazing :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
SO amazing :) Renee...interesting ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 163: Bella
OH SNAP! Their wedding was beautiful :)
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward
OH yeah!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 161: Bella
SO AMAZING!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
Tht was a sweet wedding!! Good for Bella, telling Jacob off! She and Edwrdvare so sweet!!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 163: Bella
Awww, it took me three tries to read the wedding. My husband is tolerent of all my Twilight love. but when I start crying when I am reading he busts my chops! I hate when it rains and he has the day off! Ohhhh Jacob is in trouble.......
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward
That was hot!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
Okay, so Jake is a total tool and Paul is no better. I'm still torn on them going to see Renee....See ya tomorrow!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 164: Edward
I love double chapter days. Just keep bringing on the love!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward
Jake sucks balls