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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 77: Bella

mr spaekle? lol

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 76: Edward

awwww

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 75: Bella

both songs are a perfect fit to the story...

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

mutual real time gratification....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 73: Bella

ooooo sexy texts....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 65: Bella

that cleared up a lot. gotta suck being so close but still not knowing when they can meet..

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 64: Edward

good job sarge, you said it all perfectly.

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 63: Bella

oh bella! he is gonna put your mind at ease...

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 62: Edward

uhoh what's up with bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella

i just kinda figured the girls would go down anyways... the boys won't be on lock down will they?

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 60: Edward

almost time....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 59: Bella

getting so excited for these two....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward

yay going home means way less likelihood of anyone getting hurt! means they can meet!!!!!

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 57: Bella

can't imagine any phone call like this would be any different... happy to sexy to happy to sad to sobs.... :(

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 56: Edward

the first time together.....yummy

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 55: Bella

heehee only teasing if you don't follow through... used that myself in the past...lol

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 54: Edward

oooo he's giving directions now....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 53: Bella

heehee she should learn not to read the emails when she can't 'deal' with the outcome...lol

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 52: Edward

he got the doc to measure for him?!?!? i guess it was done right then... lol

all i how you use it though...;)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella

and she finally asked the... heehee.... 'big' question! lol

sarge gonna pull out a ruler?

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward

aww silly eddie is cute. he is gonna lllooovvveee the pics....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 49: Bella

ooosexy pictures will help him through the next 4 months...lol

a little something more to look forward to....

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 48: Edward

so cute...

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 47: Bella

glad she has the girls to help her through this...

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 46: Edward

aww the ily's !

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 45: Bella

time to be the army wife and put on a brave face...

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 44: Edward

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella

awwwwww

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward

heehee

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 41: Bella

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 40: Edward

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 39: Bella

awww..... :)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 38: Edward

;)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward

:)

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 35: Bella

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 34: Edward

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 33: Bella

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bella

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella

rough day for bella. happy to see she is gonna start telling the important people.

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward

full on blatant naughtiness goin on now....yay!

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella

woohoo bella! pretty sure ed's gonna need another shower....

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 26: Edward

well at least ed got a chance to take care of things...lol

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella

ah email/chat/phone sex.... so much fun! but it just makes the actual first meeting all the better....

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward

he's back!!!

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 23: Bella

poor bella missing and worrying about her eddie

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 17: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:49 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

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Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:48 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

ok warning my stupid smart phone won't let me review... so for all of the chapters i read at work i will have to leave a smilie or something... but i am reading and loving it...

btw - tanya = bitch!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 64: Edward

That's right!  You tell her!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 22: Edward

OMG!  This story is so goddamn GOOD!

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Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 9: Bella

This is just too goddamn cute!!!!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

I would blow up a building for............  *GIGGLE SNORT*

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

What MOVIE was this from?  Greatest lines ever!  I looooooooooooved this and it so works with these three guys!  I'm excited to read more - off I go!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I have been putting off reading this because I didn't want it to end. I LOVED this story. I love it that you ended it the way it began. Two beautiful kids, one just happens to be named after me. That's right, I am an Elizabeth Marie, I just happen to go by Liz, not Ellie....

Thanks for writing such an amazing story!!

Reviewer: leadmehome Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Oh my goodness!!! I go away for three weeks and come back to find you've finished it without me :D however, I think it made it sweeter in a sense because I got to read the end in one big go, which was just beautiful! Ugh! SUCH a good story ladies, can't wait to read the outtakes whenever they arrive :) I love everything about this story, the characters, the plot, the letters, especially the letters :) so sad that's it's over so soon it seems, but really glad I found it and was able to share the whole thing with everyone who read it and you guys too 

Humungous hugs of appreciation!! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

This was truly a amazing story. I am very honored to of had the chance to read this amazing story. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED THE ENDING AND SAD TO SEE IT GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

NOOOOOOO I dont want it to be over.

Wonderful end to the story ladies.  Loved every minute of it.  Thank you for writing and sharing and posting with us here on TWCS.

 

ty

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Absolutely perfect! Thank you so very much for this wonderful story.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

The letters were the perfect ending to a truly wonderful story. You two can collaborate together any time.

MWAH... Thanks for sharing your love for Sarge and Bella.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Feels like I have lost a member of my family with this wonderful story ending...... You did a great job!

Reviewer: cravingj155 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Absolutely amazing!!!! Loved this story and wish it could go on forever. It is an incredible story. Thank you ladies for bring such an amazing story to life!!!! I am ready for your next creation.

Reviewer: Legs Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Perfect just perfect 

Reviewer: debmel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Beautiful epilogue.  The whole story - no words can describe how fantabulous it is.  I have absolutely loved.  I'm going to miss my daily dose of Sarge and Bella. Thank you for such a great story, great emotion and OMG lemons.  I will look forward to the outtakes and will definitely be re-reading this story again and again.  Thanks for cheering me up for the last few months - I've definitely needed the good feelings.  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Aw, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  Their letters were perfect!  And their kids' names?  AMAZING!  I really loved it!  YAY!!!!!  But, I am sad that it is over :(  I cannot wait to see what you come up with next!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

totally loved it   nothing else will do it was fab

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Perfect ending

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

That couldn't have been any more amazing.... Thank you both so very much for your wonderful story and sharing it with all of us in the wonderful reading world of Fan Fiction!!!!  Like you said, till next time!!!  Which we alll hope is sooner rather than laters....

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

I have so enjoyed this wonderful journey with Sarge and Bella and the gang. thanks so much.

Reviewer: brown2eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Perfect way to end for them. I enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: handa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Oh my God I cant believe its over..  so beautiful!

 

Thank you, Jen and Deb, not only for writing this fantastic love story, but for also putting us fans all together on Facebook.  It was an absolute ride, and I loved every single moment of it.  :)

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