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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 99: Edward

awww sweet presents

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

Loving this!!!
I've never been to Lowry Park in 40 yrs.
So did you mix in the flume from Busch Gardens or does the park have one ? flume

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

Oh wow, SO amazing!  I really love it!  YAY!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

love it

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 101: Bella

well we knew once they got together we would have combustion!.. whoohoo.

Houston we have ingnition.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 101: Bella

GAH!  I don't think I would have made it home...especially with a man like Edward ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 100: Edward

GAH!  So amazing!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 99: Edward

So amazing :D

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

I really, really want Sarge!!  He's incredible:)

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 101: Bella

well i would let you know what I think but I can not speak type think (sigh)

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 100: Edward

OMFG when they were dancing it was so hot. I want Edward with his tie off and shirt sleeves rolled up grinding from behind. Bloody hell another 3 chapters to go not sure I will make it. Leaving you all lots of love

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 100: Edward

The dessert room gave it away for me. Ybor is struggling a bit these days.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

fabulous 4 chapters! Why don't the girls stay a little longer?

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

I loved the date. I laughed about the car. The zoo was fun....20 questions was oh so sweet. Great job. Thanks for the updates. Can't until tomorrow!!!

Reviewer: edwardfan1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

Just LOVE this story, can't believe I only recently discovered it!  Very happy to read a "happy" story.  There are so many heavy stories which are okay sometimes but often too much.  This is very sweet love it. Thank you for sharing! 

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

Great chapters! Loving the story. Can't wait for tomorrow. :D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 99: Edward

:-)

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

you guys never cease to amaze me! loves it! 

i'll tune in... now i gotta run! i'm late for work! tehehehe... priorities! 

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 101: Bella

That was so sexy and sweet!!!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 100: Edward

Hot!!!

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

awwww, Edward's 'not yet' was so cute & he didn't deny it later with her. so sweet. bet those soldiers get a tough workout tomorrow lol.  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

OH SWEET EDWARD GOT THERE JUST IN TIME SO BELLA DIDN'T HAVE TO SAY ANYTHING TO THE GUY EDWARD HANDLED IT JUST FINE.

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

man.... is it hot in here or just the florida sun?

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Loving it.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

OH YEAH!  I love posessive-ward!

Reviewer: leadmehome Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Cannot wait for their date! Just one more sleep haha sarge is so damn cute when he goes on a jealous/possessive rampage, especially when he whipped out that checklist :D

Reviewer: leadmehome Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

Swoon! I love Sarge :P at this point not too shabby to be in Bella's shoes, or Alice's or Rose's for that matter haha

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

LOL, too funny that Edward just happens to show up at that moment :) As for the haters out there, I hope you didn't take any of their rude remarks to heart! I love this story & have been addicted. I absolutely love that you post daily, such a joy! Please know your story is amazing *two thumbs up*  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Ha! I like possessive-ward. Especially when he whines. ;) Great chapter! 

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

*giggles* Sarge is marking his territory. ;) 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

I love Possesiveward! Great updates. Can't wait until tomorow!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

possesive wards hot!fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

wow he sounds hot!fab chapter.

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

I love possessive-ward xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Rofl...the poor privates. Eddie is too cute

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

Lol for jealous man. Cant blame him though.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Love this side of edward!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

They are so sweet together, I love it!!

Reviewer: mrshaney87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Love!!!

Reviewer: shirleypositive72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

My old possessive boyfriend never made possessive that damn sexy. He needed Sarge's training class, I think.

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

Jealous Sarge is a sexy Sarge. love it and keep it coming!!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

Bahwaa

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Awww so sweet

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

man, i love this story! 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Oh my! I think that the no panties thing means he is gonna fullfill one of their fantasies. Can't wait until tomorrow!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Yeah, yummy, love this story, and keep it up please.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

I love Sarge ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

So amazing :D

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Sarge must be in heaven..hot sex and home made meals, pluse love.  Yeah, he is being spoiled.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

thats a good rule she would only ruin em coz hes so hot lol fab chapter.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

fab chapter that was hot shower sex!awww its gonna be an emotional moment when they do.

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Sounds like a hot date!!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Loved it xx

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

I'm glad she is having tis time with Edward now!!  It will be hard but they will make it!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Yep he  has to get her an ID you can get temporary.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

He did promise her public sex :-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

already thinking about leaving. I think it would be better to clean up the bedroom. Perhaps wash those sheet.  Get something to do and the time goes faster.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

Laughter and teasing are good!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Yea for date plans.   Yea the gulf side is really calm.   Some waves for body surfing but not the real kind.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

yummy lemon and great talk

Reviewer: mrshaney87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Look forward to new chapter tomorrow :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

Wow, SO amazing :D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

It's not so hot this year in Tampa as long as your not reading this. LOL

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

Oh yeah!  Loved it!  I would gladly listen to him play the piano too!

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

Gads what a good story! As a wife of a retired Navy Chief (and Yes I was there for the entire 24 years of active service) I can tell you I Love this story! Navy wives have the duty to have their men deploy for  6 months at a shot and on a regular basis. It's not easy but it's worth it if you have the right kind of relationship and trust. Your doing a good job.....

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

fab chapter aww he had the perfect birthday.wow that was hot!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

That was really romantic. 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

awww that was so romantic.fab chapter

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

Swoon

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

What a great birthday he had!!!  They are so cute together!!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

So sweet both of them!!

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

Thanks for another great update! Cant wait to read the next ones.

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

Aww! I'm swooning over Edwards playing. *sigh*

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

That's how to have a Happy Birthday/ :D

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

Yummy, can't wait till tomorrow

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

oooh sweet ending.  

For him

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

Yummy, lemons are good

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

Oh happy day! Great updates. Thanks ladies. See ya tomorrow!

 

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

awww sweetness

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

I can't speak( sigh ) xx

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Love the hot lemons!

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

so glad they are not nervous or being too quiet around each other. Edward made sure to hit the erotic points for Bella's pleasure and then gave her one of things she always wanted to do. he is being so sweet & wanting to just take care of her. now she wants to take care of him, they are just so perfect together. just lovin this story ladies :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 91: Bella

just that amount of sweet & sexy! just perfect!! amazing chapter :)  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 90: Edward

holy hell & this is just the beginning?? omg!!!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

GAH!  YES! ! I really loved this!  AMAZING!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 91: Bella

OH MY GOSH!  Those Shamewow panties did NOT work...maybe I should go without from now on when it comes to Sarge ;)  Squirting?!  Amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Thanks for busting your asses for us!! This chapter was fanfriggentastic!! It shows all the love you have for us! ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Delicious!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 91: Bella

That was one hell of a wet spot to sleep in!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Thanks for the AMAZING CHAPTERS! I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE. LOVED IT ALL

Reviewer: samolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

dang! you guys rock! time to gab my guy and head to bed to take care of this throbbing! AMAZING!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 90: Edward

:-)

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

EEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPP FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 89: Bella

so bitter sweet! but if you wait til you get home then you can go at it as many times as you want in any many ways as you want without interruption, much better in the long run lol  ~Tracey xoxox

Reviewer: JessJess76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

You women are absolutely wonderful. This was definitely worth the wait. I love how sweet they are with each other. It really is as if they have been together for years. I have loved watching the story unfold so far and even through all the trying to break my phone to make the story go on (which so doesn't work) I can't wait for more. Thank y'all for this awesome story.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Hurrah for morning sex on top!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

These were the BEST updates...so far! I'm so glad they are together. And a piano...what a great surprise! Can't wait for tomorrow!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 89: Bella

I guess the others are all doing it in a cab. lol

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 92: Edward

Thanks for all the updates! Can't wait to read more. :D 

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 91: Bella

I like the part were she thought she peed haha...too funny! Great chapter! A great lemon too. ;) 

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