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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward

Maybe the girls can see their boys when they go to Florida for Summer vacation!
A fall down drunk celebration is not going to be difficult for these ladies! The hang-over afterwards not so well received, haha.
Thanks for sending them home!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella

There are some definite mood swings that take place when unable to physically touch the one you love. Highs of greeting and the lows of disconnecting can take a toll on the mind and heart.
They'll get through this. I have faith in both of you!
Bella did an amazing job of getting Edward off!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward

That was everything I expected it to be!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella

Renee's loss, Esme's gain!
Charlie is also gaining the daughter he was robbed of having as she grew up. Unfortunately you can't go back and make up that time.
Drunk Bella is rather cute and needy! I'm sure Edward will step up to the challenge.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward

LMAO....ShamWow! Coffee Girls definitely need coodo's for that one!
The gang going to the shooting range is even better. I can just imagine how competitive Emmett can be. He lost his iPod. Rose is going to be pissed. LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella

Serves Bella right for opening this email in class. HAHAHA
Did she just tell Edward that she knows how to shoot a gun? He is going to be turned on even more! Looking forward to that challenge at the shooting range.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward

I'm still cracking up over Edward's comment about the doc keeping his measurement to himself!
So Edward didn't really answer his own question about craziest place for sex. Does that mean that he and Tanya were rather traditional in their copulations?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella

I dislike Coffee (not totally, love the smell, hate the taste) more than Bella does! But if I must indulge to wake up, it's black. Reinforces my dislike for the taste and tells me to figure out better ways to perk up. Caffeine comes in so many forms now! haha.
The house will be something that I'm sure Edward will want to upgrade the size in order to please his girl. But that can be discussed when he finally gets home!
Size, hm, maybe he can send her an image to put her questions to rest or instill greater desire. Either would be funny!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward

Edward's circus ramblings are hilarious.
His dreams of a family and future with Bella is almost tangible.

Photos, consequences??????? Can't wait to read his responses to her in Blue!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 49: Bella

To the future and beyond!
Marriage and children; can Edward hope to be as lucky in love with Bella as his parents were?
Sexy pics, will the boys reciprocate?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward

Now Bella needs to lay it all out for him. In just the same open and honest fashion.
I would love to see a video of Emmett plastering Edward's face with smooches. lol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella

I'm not sure what is would be like to be the spouse of a military man. The extra stress of constantly wondering if or when an injury/accident might take the man you know and love way from you.

To their future.......Salute!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward

The chance of Edward not getting injured in some way shape or form was greater than him returning home unscathed due to the location of his detail.
Glad the ILY's have made an appearance!
time for them to prop up each others emotions for them to ride out the next four plus months.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella

I'm not sure I wouldn't have been in complete hysterics knowing a friend would only have been in my house due to an accident that my loved one was in.
Considering everything, I think Bella was very composed.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward

That was way too close for anyone's comfort!

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella

Mike was just as Emmett said...a pussy.
Good thing he took to heart all the words, more like threats, that were spoken on behalf of Bella and Edward.
BTW, way does Emmett get away with calling Edward Eddie? lol
Bella Blue......when will she reciprocate by sending more photos of her in blue lingerie?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward

You just gotta love Emmett!
Hope Mike gets the picture now.

Wondering about that leak that was discussed earlier by the lieutenant. Is that the reason they lost the supply truck and three men?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella

Now Edward has Mike to worry about making a move on his girl. I think Alice and Rose also need to step in and show Mike photos that their Husbands are under the command of Bella's boyfriend and don't have a problem following orders to keep scum like Mike away from Bella.
Her P.S. was very sweet!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward

No Panties! Does he really want his girl waltzing around with no undergarments while he is thousands of miles away? Probably not. He can make those demands when he is standing in front of her. hehe
It's very clear that he is looking for the same love and devotion that his parents displayed. I hope Bella grasp this from his words.
Threatening Jacob was funny.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella

Oh Charlie, you truly do understand your daughter.
Glad the father daughter talk took place where she could review all the evidence Edward has left in his emails confirming his growing love for her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward

Bella needs to send him some of her shower gel or her lotion so he can smell her as he thinks about all the naughty things he wants to do to her. In the shower or an Elevator anywhere will do!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella

I'm thinking Bella is in need of a great release. They need a Skype sex date soon! That elevator scene is so very naughty yet appealing! Fans waving madly to cool down. hahahah
Edward the sex volley is in your court. Make the returning shot memorable!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward

Oh boy, his words are becoming more and more laced with desire and want......
Would Bella be as bold with Edward if she were face to face? or is this method of communication allowing her to express things she would have normally waited until they were more intimate?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella

Bella just has zero filter when it comes to expressing herself to Edward! LOL!
Charlie is Charlie. Glad to hear he shows up later on in this tale of two separated hearts.
Exhibitionist....our little Bells like the idea of getting caught, hm. Edward's mind will be racing with ideas to make that dream of hers a reality for him!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward

Is Edward really nervous about Charlie's thoughts on him?
Poor boy really has some rough teen memories regarding girls and coming to grips with his ability to act normal around them.
Good thing our past stays 'in the past'.
Nice tight end, sigh!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella

The girls reaction to their men in uniform was priceless. Loved Rose's comment!
Will Charlie feel like he is being replaced in Bella's life? or just leary of a man so far away yet having such a profound affect on his daughter. Rose and Alice have their work cut out for them in convincing Charlie that Edward is a stand up kind of guy.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward

We all know that you broke protocol when you let Edward discuss his conversation with a superior. Let's face it, a soldier's out bound conversations are monitored closely, especially electronic ones. Any way....I think there may be a leak in one of the squads....hmmmmm. That puts everyone in danger. Keep our boys safe through this journey, please!
Cookies as ninja death stars, HAHAHAH.
I enjoyed Edward's latest question in the game.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella

He is the perfect boyfriend!
Sweet, caring, protective and sexy in so many ways!
chuckling at Edward's bargaining skills for Bella's precious cookies.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward

Edward's heart shows through every word he writes about Christopher and Bella's ability to continue to look after a frightened little boy.
I wonder if Charlie will email Edward to follow up as a father would hope to do face to face? That would be interesting to read!
The boys sure know how to put a smile on Edward's face. Loved the familial connection through the women they cherish!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella

I think Bella's cautious approach was favorable but I'm sure teachers are instructed to immediately inform SS of any possible abuse situation. I'm also aware of situations where a teacher stepped in without full knowledge of a child's situation and caused the family excessive emotional stress and financial burden through the court system. It is not a perfect set up.

Bella is taking this relationship to the next level by including her father. I hope Edward is ready for that connection.
Long thick fingers.....GAH! She is giving as good as she gets! Edward should be needing another round in the shower. He'll be the cleanest soldier in the camp!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward

Bella should be blushing a beautiful pink color after reading how Edward thinks about taking care of her and how well endowed he claims to be! Sarge has my attention. LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella

The boys are going to figure out soon that their Sarge has been getting off to his beautiful girls words and images! LOL. Bella will make sure that he has something other than the war to focus on when he is in camp!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward

I noticed they are both signing off their emails as "Yours". I like the progression in subtle words. They are definitely both in the same head space where their hearts are concerned.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella

These two are about ready to combust! LOL
It's probably a good thing that they didn't continue. I'm sure Sarge didn't want the lieutenant walking in on them in the middle of pleasuring each other over the phone.
I'm sure Jasper and Emmett have gotten caught a timer to with their wives. Lol.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward

It was good to hear a verbal commendation, by the lieutenant, for Edward's efforts with his team.
The timing if finding the pictures of Bella was perfect!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella

You would put our beloved Edward through an injury situation, would you?
For Bella, absence truly does make the heart grow fonder.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward

Good thing she has Rose and Alice!
His honesty is beautiful.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bella

Of course Emmett and Jasper made an appearance. Laughing at Emmett's poor choice in verbalizing his thoughts on Bella kissing Alice. Haha, Rose would be the first to smack him up side the head.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 20: Edward

Oh so sweet and the anxiety they both felt was for not!
Let's play 20 Questions!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella

Bella has surrounded herself with women that are willing to take the risk. Of course they would know the ins-n-outs of being a military wife.
Let's find out what their first words are to each other!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward

Unique circumstances allowed for all the B.S. to be put aside and their true selves to shine through. No wonder they fell in love so fast.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17: Bella

It doesn't matter now.....she's fully vested in this arrangement. She doesn't need an out from Edward; just the go ahead nod that states he is in as deep as she is!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward

Well the honesty just flowed from his finger tips!
I'm sure Bella's building lust/friendship and dare I.say love will show all over her face as well during this long awaited Skype date.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella

Not sure how Edward's going to take the balls to the wall comment! Lol.....he may have to relieve himself several times before their Skype date. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward

Edward sure closed that email off in a steamy fashion! Fanning myself!

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella

I love Bella's rambling email about her self imposed flaws, rant about using brute force on Tanya and her musical ocd. Too funny.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: Edward

Awe, Bella has a smile from him attached to her email. Too cute!
Was Edward in financial straights after his father killed himself? Is that the reason he joined the army?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bella

Will Edward be curious enough about him being the topic of girl talk to ask what exactly they discussed?
Flirty Bella, talking about her lingerie. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward

Equal reaction from Edward! Playful, endearing and all male! Haha. Lovin it!
Skype oh yeah!

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella

She also gave him a peek into her bedroom and the need for hair pulling when the urge strikes! Lol.
I'm sure Sarge is getting a bit over heated by her suggestive tones.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward

If I were Bella I'd be very angry and then distraught over Edward's explanation as to him not having anyone to give a shit if he makes it home alive or in a pine box. He does make up for it by appreciating Bella's need to communicate and check in via email.
Loss of any soldiers life is tragic!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella

Jen,
Your story sounds like a true old fashion courtship! The kind where jumping into the sack was not the main event but learning each others strong suits as well as short falls; building a foundation of friendship to establish a healthy love affair to last until death do you part. That's amazingly beautiful. So rare these days, in our disposable society. Congratulations.

Lovin this story! Liberties taken and all!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

So the loss of Tanya is another reason for Edward never to return to Chicago!

I'm really enjoying the pen-pal status between Edward & Bella.
Will we hear any more from Emmett or Jasper or even Alice and Rose for that matter?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Their reparte is every easy and fun to read.
I also like the fact that Edward is equally ready to share parts of himself and not shy about asking for things to make his life easier.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward

I like the concept chosen to reveal their individual traits. It truly is like getting to know someone new!

Reviewer: Julesgirl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

I've done that feed the bird thing in the Dallas zoo it was cool but on the downside a bird poo'd on my shoulder thank god I was wearing a tank and it was easier to clean up and disinfect lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Hello I just read it all so sweet and romantic thank you for all of it

Reviewer: dbg Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:28 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Love this chapter. I can imagine Bella baking and shopping for someone she didn't know just to be supportive.

Reviewer: kaciemk Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:38 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Loved Emmett and Jasper's idea!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Loved it

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella

Yummy!  loving this story and im soo glad i found it after it was finished  that way i can read till my hearts content or i fall asleep first  ;)

Reviewer: katroy730 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward

woo hoo!  go white sox!  i'm from the south side of chicago, as were my parents and south siders are white sox fans.  thanks for that.  most people and tv shows and movies only talk about the cubs.  i live in PA now and really miss my sports teams.  don't get me started on my deep dish pizza cravings!  anyhoo,  i'm loving this story and wanted to say thanks for the good read.  god i miss the midwest!!!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

This has been one of my favorites to date. Since I'm a military wife it hits home to me of a time long ago when my husband was serving his country. He has since retired which I am so thankful for. Thank you for such a wonderful story. I loved it!!!

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward

omg, I am so screwed. have to get up in 3.5 hours and cannot stop reading this damned story SHIT!! :)

 

I am so fucking in love with Edward. seriously, in love. damn.

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward

OK, I AM ALREADY IN LOVE WITH HIM TOO!  lol..damn.

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Hi there,

Just read this wonderful story. I read straight through without reviewing but I figured since it was already done that was okay. I loved their progrssion through letters and really being open with each other. They had nothing to lose in the beginning and just threw stuff out there. But they stayed true to themselves and fell in love. Thanks this was great.

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Omg I love this story.  It's amazing tu guys are awesome!!

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:19 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Love the premise. Can't wait to delve into this fic. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Great story.... :-)

Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

I love me some possessive-ward...yummy. :-)

Reviewer: chatnoirmd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

LOVE  this story so far. It reminds me of my first love. We met in college and he went home to finish the rest of his degree (halfway across the US). We wrote letters and emailed a lot. It was this sort of easy banter. You both do a great job with the characters. I can't put this story down :)

Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward

Shamwow....too funny.

I'm really enjoying this story...the quintessential love story... :-)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Aww love the tatoos

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

So awesome!  I love his swan tattoo.  Edward is so perfect! :D

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

I love it when James and his crew are in a story as good guys. :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

That was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens after their tattoos heal ;)

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

That was a great chapter,I love it; The tattoo idea is amazing. Thank you for sharing. It's always a pleasure to read a new chapter of Coming Home.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Sweet tattoo's.  Love you guys!!!!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

I loved it!  I've missed Sarge and the gang.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

The tattoo choices were so symbolic of these two. It was really a thoughtful romantic gesture. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

That was great love the tats.

Reviewer: CookieMunster23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

Cookie Thats my cat's name My cat is going to be 2 yrs old on october 14th

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

This is so great!! :)

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Love the outtakes!!!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

BEAUTIFUL

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

That was great!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

awesome outtake loved it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

That was really heart warming. Nothing could replace his mother but it's nice to see that all is to lost. 

Reviewer: rkarendavis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

thanks for a wonderful story

 

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Oh my...what to say other than thank you so much for a beautifully written story! I am looking forward to more outtakes.  I also have to say that this is one of my all time favorites along with Heaven Hell & Harleys. 

Reviewer: ghartling Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

Loving this story!!!!

 

G

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

the format of the ending was perfect for this story, it began and ended with letters. sigh

nicce to see the major parts of their lives come through in the letters here

a nice sweet lovey happy story.

thank you both for sharing your story

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella

a perfect ending to this little love story.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 172: Edward

yay eddie that was epic!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 171: Bella

aww she wants the puppy and he matches the description of what eddie wanted in a kitten....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward

sounds like a perfect christmas...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella

awww...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 168: Edward

:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 167: Bella

:)

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