Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward
Maybe the girls can see their boys when they go to Florida for Summer vacation!
A fall down drunk celebration is not going to be difficult for these ladies! The hang-over afterwards not so well received, haha.
Thanks for sending them home!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 57: Bella
There are some definite mood swings that take place when unable to physically touch the one you love. Highs of greeting and the lows of disconnecting can take a toll on the mind and heart.
They'll get through this. I have faith in both of you!
Bella did an amazing job of getting Edward off!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 56: Edward
That was everything I expected it to be!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella
Renee's loss, Esme's gain!
Charlie is also gaining the daughter he was robbed of having as she grew up. Unfortunately you can't go back and make up that time.
Drunk Bella is rather cute and needy! I'm sure Edward will step up to the challenge.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
LMAO....ShamWow! Coffee Girls definitely need coodo's for that one!
The gang going to the shooting range is even better. I can just imagine how competitive Emmett can be. He lost his iPod. Rose is going to be pissed. LOL
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 53: Bella
Serves Bella right for opening this email in class. HAHAHA
Did she just tell Edward that she knows how to shoot a gun? He is going to be turned on even more! Looking forward to that challenge at the shooting range.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 52: Edward
I'm still cracking up over Edward's comment about the doc keeping his measurement to himself!
So Edward didn't really answer his own question about craziest place for sex. Does that mean that he and Tanya were rather traditional in their copulations?
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella
I dislike Coffee (not totally, love the smell, hate the taste) more than Bella does! But if I must indulge to wake up, it's black. Reinforces my dislike for the taste and tells me to figure out better ways to perk up. Caffeine comes in so many forms now! haha.
The house will be something that I'm sure Edward will want to upgrade the size in order to please his girl. But that can be discussed when he finally gets home!
Size, hm, maybe he can send her an image to put her questions to rest or instill greater desire. Either would be funny!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 50: Edward
Edward's circus ramblings are hilarious.
His dreams of a family and future with Bella is almost tangible.
Photos, consequences??????? Can't wait to read his responses to her in Blue!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 49: Bella
To the future and beyond!
Marriage and children; can Edward hope to be as lucky in love with Bella as his parents were?
Sexy pics, will the boys reciprocate?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 48: Edward
Now Bella needs to lay it all out for him. In just the same open and honest fashion.
I would love to see a video of Emmett plastering Edward's face with smooches. lol
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 47: Bella
I'm not sure what is would be like to be the spouse of a military man. The extra stress of constantly wondering if or when an injury/accident might take the man you know and love way from you.
To their future.......Salute!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 46: Edward
The chance of Edward not getting injured in some way shape or form was greater than him returning home unscathed due to the location of his detail.
Glad the ILY's have made an appearance!
time for them to prop up each others emotions for them to ride out the next four plus months.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 45: Bella
I'm not sure I wouldn't have been in complete hysterics knowing a friend would only have been in my house due to an accident that my loved one was in.
Considering everything, I think Bella was very composed.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 44: Edward
That was way too close for anyone's comfort!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella
Mike was just as Emmett said...a pussy.
Good thing he took to heart all the words, more like threats, that were spoken on behalf of Bella and Edward.
BTW, way does Emmett get away with calling Edward Eddie? lol
Bella Blue......when will she reciprocate by sending more photos of her in blue lingerie?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward
You just gotta love Emmett!
Hope Mike gets the picture now.
Wondering about that leak that was discussed earlier by the lieutenant. Is that the reason they lost the supply truck and three men?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 41: Bella
Now Edward has Mike to worry about making a move on his girl. I think Alice and Rose also need to step in and show Mike photos that their Husbands are under the command of Bella's boyfriend and don't have a problem following orders to keep scum like Mike away from Bella.
Her P.S. was very sweet!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 40: Edward
No Panties! Does he really want his girl waltzing around with no undergarments while he is thousands of miles away? Probably not. He can make those demands when he is standing in front of her. hehe
It's very clear that he is looking for the same love and devotion that his parents displayed. I hope Bella grasp this from his words.
Threatening Jacob was funny.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 39: Bella
Oh Charlie, you truly do understand your daughter.
Glad the father daughter talk took place where she could review all the evidence Edward has left in his emails confirming his growing love for her.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 38: Edward
Bella needs to send him some of her shower gel or her lotion so he can smell her as he thinks about all the naughty things he wants to do to her. In the shower or an Elevator anywhere will do!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella
I'm thinking Bella is in need of a great release. They need a Skype sex date soon! That elevator scene is so very naughty yet appealing! Fans waving madly to cool down. hahahah
Edward the sex volley is in your court. Make the returning shot memorable!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 36: Edward
Oh boy, his words are becoming more and more laced with desire and want......
Would Bella be as bold with Edward if she were face to face? or is this method of communication allowing her to express things she would have normally waited until they were more intimate?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella
Bella just has zero filter when it comes to expressing herself to Edward! LOL!
Charlie is Charlie. Glad to hear he shows up later on in this tale of two separated hearts.
Exhibitionist....our little Bells like the idea of getting caught, hm. Edward's mind will be racing with ideas to make that dream of hers a reality for him!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 34: Edward
Is Edward really nervous about Charlie's thoughts on him?
Poor boy really has some rough teen memories regarding girls and coming to grips with his ability to act normal around them.
Good thing our past stays 'in the past'.
Nice tight end, sigh!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 33: Bella
The girls reaction to their men in uniform was priceless. Loved Rose's comment!
Will Charlie feel like he is being replaced in Bella's life? or just leary of a man so far away yet having such a profound affect on his daughter. Rose and Alice have their work cut out for them in convincing Charlie that Edward is a stand up kind of guy.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
We all know that you broke protocol when you let Edward discuss his conversation with a superior. Let's face it, a soldier's out bound conversations are monitored closely, especially electronic ones. Any way....I think there may be a leak in one of the squads....hmmmmm. That puts everyone in danger. Keep our boys safe through this journey, please!
Cookies as ninja death stars, HAHAHAH.
I enjoyed Edward's latest question in the game.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella
He is the perfect boyfriend!
Sweet, caring, protective and sexy in so many ways!
chuckling at Edward's bargaining skills for Bella's precious cookies.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward
Edward's heart shows through every word he writes about Christopher and Bella's ability to continue to look after a frightened little boy.
I wonder if Charlie will email Edward to follow up as a father would hope to do face to face? That would be interesting to read!
The boys sure know how to put a smile on Edward's face. Loved the familial connection through the women they cherish!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 29: Bella
I think Bella's cautious approach was favorable but I'm sure teachers are instructed to immediately inform SS of any possible abuse situation. I'm also aware of situations where a teacher stepped in without full knowledge of a child's situation and caused the family excessive emotional stress and financial burden through the court system. It is not a perfect set up.
Bella is taking this relationship to the next level by including her father. I hope Edward is ready for that connection.
Long thick fingers.....GAH! She is giving as good as she gets! Edward should be needing another round in the shower. He'll be the cleanest soldier in the camp!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: Edward
Bella should be blushing a beautiful pink color after reading how Edward thinks about taking care of her and how well endowed he claims to be! Sarge has my attention. LOL
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 27: Bella
The boys are going to figure out soon that their Sarge has been getting off to his beautiful girls words and images! LOL. Bella will make sure that he has something other than the war to focus on when he is in camp!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 26: Edward
I noticed they are both signing off their emails as "Yours". I like the progression in subtle words. They are definitely both in the same head space where their hearts are concerned.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
These two are about ready to combust! LOL
It's probably a good thing that they didn't continue. I'm sure Sarge didn't want the lieutenant walking in on them in the middle of pleasuring each other over the phone.
I'm sure Jasper and Emmett have gotten caught a timer to with their wives. Lol.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward
It was good to hear a verbal commendation, by the lieutenant, for Edward's efforts with his team.
The timing if finding the pictures of Bella was perfect!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 23: Bella
You would put our beloved Edward through an injury situation, would you?
For Bella, absence truly does make the heart grow fonder.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 22: Edward
Good thing she has Rose and Alice!
His honesty is beautiful.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bella
Of course Emmett and Jasper made an appearance. Laughing at Emmett's poor choice in verbalizing his thoughts on Bella kissing Alice. Haha, Rose would be the first to smack him up side the head.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 20: Edward
Oh so sweet and the anxiety they both felt was for not!
Let's play 20 Questions!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella
Bella has surrounded herself with women that are willing to take the risk. Of course they would know the ins-n-outs of being a military wife.
Let's find out what their first words are to each other!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward
Unique circumstances allowed for all the B.S. to be put aside and their true selves to shine through. No wonder they fell in love so fast.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17: Bella
It doesn't matter now.....she's fully vested in this arrangement. She doesn't need an out from Edward; just the go ahead nod that states he is in as deep as she is!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
Well the honesty just flowed from his finger tips!
I'm sure Bella's building lust/friendship and dare I.say love will show all over her face as well during this long awaited Skype date.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 15: Bella
Not sure how Edward's going to take the balls to the wall comment! Lol.....he may have to relieve himself several times before their Skype date. Haha
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14: Edward
Edward sure closed that email off in a steamy fashion! Fanning myself!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bella
I love Bella's rambling email about her self imposed flaws, rant about using brute force on Tanya and her musical ocd. Too funny.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: Edward
Awe, Bella has a smile from him attached to her email. Too cute!
Was Edward in financial straights after his father killed himself? Is that the reason he joined the army?
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: Bella
Will Edward be curious enough about him being the topic of girl talk to ask what exactly they discussed?
Flirty Bella, talking about her lingerie. Haha
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
Equal reaction from Edward! Playful, endearing and all male! Haha. Lovin it!
Skype oh yeah!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9: Bella
She also gave him a peek into her bedroom and the need for hair pulling when the urge strikes! Lol.
I'm sure Sarge is getting a bit over heated by her suggestive tones.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: Edward
If I were Bella I'd be very angry and then distraught over Edward's explanation as to him not having anyone to give a shit if he makes it home alive or in a pine box. He does make up for it by appreciating Bella's need to communicate and check in via email.
Loss of any soldiers life is tragic!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Bella
Jen,
Your story sounds like a true old fashion courtship! The kind where jumping into the sack was not the main event but learning each others strong suits as well as short falls; building a foundation of friendship to establish a healthy love affair to last until death do you part. That's amazingly beautiful. So rare these days, in our disposable society. Congratulations.
Lovin this story! Liberties taken and all!
Date: 12 Aug 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
So the loss of Tanya is another reason for Edward never to return to Chicago!
I'm really enjoying the pen-pal status between Edward & Bella.
Will we hear any more from Emmett or Jasper or even Alice and Rose for that matter?
Date: 12 Aug 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
Their reparte is every easy and fun to read.
I also like the fact that Edward is equally ready to share parts of himself and not shy about asking for things to make his life easier.
Date: 12 Aug 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
I like the concept chosen to reveal their individual traits. It truly is like getting to know someone new!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 102: Edward
I've done that feed the bird thing in the Dallas zoo it was cool but on the downside a bird poo'd on my shoulder thank god I was wearing a tank and it was easier to clean up and disinfect lol
Date: 17 Mar 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Hello I just read it all so sweet and romantic thank you for all of it
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:28 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Love this chapter. I can imagine Bella baking and shopping for someone she didn't know just to be supportive.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:38 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Loved Emmett and Jasper's idea!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Loved it
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella
Yummy! loving this story and im soo glad i found it after it was finished that way i can read till my hearts content or i fall asleep first ;)
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 32: Edward
woo hoo! go white sox! i'm from the south side of chicago, as were my parents and south siders are white sox fans. thanks for that. most people and tv shows and movies only talk about the cubs. i live in PA now and really miss my sports teams. don't get me started on my deep dish pizza cravings! anyhoo, i'm loving this story and wanted to say thanks for the good read. god i miss the midwest!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
This has been one of my favorites to date. Since I'm a military wife it hits home to me of a time long ago when my husband was serving his country. He has since retired which I am so thankful for. Thank you for such a wonderful story. I loved it!!!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 16: Edward
omg, I am so screwed. have to get up in 3.5 hours and cannot stop reading this damned story SHIT!! :)
I am so fucking in love with Edward. seriously, in love. damn.
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward
OK, I AM ALREADY IN LOVE WITH HIM TOO! lol..damn.
Date: 09 Nov 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
Hi there,
Just read this wonderful story. I read straight through without reviewing but I figured since it was already done that was okay. I loved their progrssion through letters and really being open with each other. They had nothing to lose in the beginning and just threw stuff out there. But they stayed true to themselves and fell in love. Thanks this was great.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
Omg I love this story. It's amazing tu guys are awesome!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:19 AM Title: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Love the premise. Can't wait to delve into this fic. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Great story.... :-)
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward
I love me some possessive-ward...yummy. :-)
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
LOVE this story so far. It reminds me of my first love. We met in college and he went home to finish the rest of his degree (halfway across the US). We wrote letters and emailed a lot. It was this sort of easy banter. You both do a great job with the characters. I can't put this story down :)
Date: 28 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 54: Edward
Shamwow....too funny.
I'm really enjoying this story...the quintessential love story... :-)
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Aww love the tatoos
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Loved it :)
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
So awesome! I love his swan tattoo. Edward is so perfect! :D
Date: 07 Oct 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
I love it when James and his crew are in a story as good guys. :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
That was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens after their tattoos heal ;)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
That was a great chapter,I love it; The tattoo idea is amazing. Thank you for sharing. It's always a pleasure to read a new chapter of Coming Home.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Sweet tattoo's. Love you guys!!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
I loved it! I've missed Sarge and the gang. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
The tattoo choices were so symbolic of these two. It was really a thoughtful romantic gesture.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
That was great love the tats.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
Cookie Thats my cat's name My cat is going to be 2 yrs old on october 14th
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
This is so great!! :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
Love the outtakes!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
BEAUTIFUL
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
That was great!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
awesome outtake loved it.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1
That was really heart warming. Nothing could replace his mother but it's nice to see that all is to lost.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1
thanks for a wonderful story
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 175: Outtake 1
Oh my...what to say other than thank you so much for a beautifully written story! I am looking forward to more outtakes. I also have to say that this is one of my all time favorites along with Heaven Hell & Harleys.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
Loving this story!!!!
G
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue
the format of the ending was perfect for this story, it began and ended with letters. sigh
nicce to see the major parts of their lives come through in the letters here
a nice sweet lovey happy story.
thank you both for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 173: Bella
a perfect ending to this little love story.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 172: Edward
yay eddie that was epic!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 171: Bella
aww she wants the puppy and he matches the description of what eddie wanted in a kitten....
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 170: Edward
sounds like a perfect christmas...
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 169: Bella
awww...