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Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2016 8:11 PM Title: Author's Note!

I just finished & I have never laughed or cried so much reading a story before.  Excellent job to the both of you!  I look forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward

To bad Bella makes Edward always defend himself. She  won't stand up to Jake and when Edward does he was wrong. But when Tonya was an issue Edward stood by Bella and put Tonya in her place. I wonder is back at the restaurant with the waiter if things were reversed how wow Bella feel if Edward was laughing and scolding her and being extra friendly to waitress how Bella would feel. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 174: Epilogue

Deb and Jen you lovelies rock. I simply loved that. Just all of that. xoxo

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 106: Edward

All I know is I never met a man who likes insecure women. Just like women hate clingy men. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella

Okay Mike was NOT the love of her life by her own admission so this insecure shit needs to shift already. What she has with Edward in 4 months blows away the hold on folks 6 months she had with dufus. Besides if nothing else Tanya humiliated Edward and he has told everyone that SHE loves and TRUST that he loves her. Dayum gurl! To quote Cher in Moonstruck...'snap out of it'!

 

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Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 86: Edward

You ladies are powerhouses in this land of fic but damn Deb can you write the best mother-fucking Edward's EVER!!! Nuff said! ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 85: Bella

I think Edward was more honest about his fear. Skydiving? Please Bella!!!!'

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 64: Edward

Amazing Deb as always!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 63: Bella

She's not being honorable at all. She's definitely being insecure but what she really is doing subconsciously is testing him. Making him prove his loyalty and desire for her. There were women on his base if he wanted that as he mentioned.  I call bullshit, if you love him hold on and fight when and if ncessary. End. Of. Story. 

Reviewer: vickilee Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 1:02 PM Title: Author's Note!

This was awesome one of the best i have read.And believe me i have read over 1000.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

thanks soo much for sharing this AWESOME story with us on here ;) i've read it before but i still loved it ;) i hope you get to posting that other o/t soon ;D

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2014 6:52 AM Title: Author's Note!

Wish I could give some money, but things are tight. Tell him we all thank him for his service and that what he does makes a difference, no matter how small or big his job. I grew up with a father in the Navy and live in Colorado Springs CO where a great deal of service men and women ship in and out of. We are proud of them! Each and every one!

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 16: Edward

#snkff hes so wonderful and honest

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

I read this entire story and have to say loved it. I cried, cheered,feared, loved, celebrated, grieved with the story. Amazing concept. I was in the story. Feeling Bella when Ed was in Germany. Also when she was on her way to see him. I could also be there seeing Ed points. I did get frustrated that she shamed him for his caveman feelings and as I saw being to friendly to the waiter to make her point. And with Jake. I saw it as excusing his behavior while Ed didn't excuse Tanya bad behavior but stood up to it. The timeline was extremely confusing though. At ages of 25/26 they are great to have grown to know who they are as individuals what I got stuck on is if Ed was 8 yrs in the Army and had not heard from Tanya except one letter never taken a leave. Yes I would image there was no relationship on either side, but in that aspect the writing was like he had been at war a year ... and her failing out of college and thing did not follow the 8 yr timeline. Thank you both for sharing your creativity. Up there on my favorite stories.

Reviewer: Sianxxcxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

Loved this story so I will now go read the rest of your fic's :-) xxx

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 144: Edward

Emmett, typical male roommate. Can't wait to hear Rose's reaction to his shannanigins.
Time is nearing their trip home!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 143: Bella

Argh, flight delays. They suck the life out of ya. It's the worst if you're on the red eye flight and still have to go into work the next day. Definitely an excuse to plead illness or working from home.
First official birthday wish. Too cute!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 142: Edward

That wasn't so bad.....at least the wait will be at its shortest point and the the lifetime of fun begins. Bad aim, still chuckling. Good thing my husband doesn't mind cleaning toilets. A blessing!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 141: Bella

Chocolate goodness!
Parting is such sweet sorrow!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 140: Edward

She really does own him!
Wow, that was some intense possiveness displayed for all of downtown Seattle to see!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 139: Bella

How sweet, Edward blushed as he was kissed in gratitude for his boy scout effort in retrieving an old woman's hat. Too cute!
No panties.....that was Sarge's order afterall!
Smirking at Bella's follow through.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 138: Edward

Tour guide Bella.....she was more interested in her personal view than showing him the sights and sounds of his adopted home. Hehe

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 137: Bella

One minute.......
Then the good stuff starts!
Again!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 136: Edward

He really did owe her a good birthday surprise. I think he delivered the goods! LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 135: Bella

Alice is a great collaborator!
So much for Edward's romantic plans!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 134: Edward

Mrs. Cope was too sweet for words. Enjoyed reading how she put both Mike and Lauren in their proper place!
Sarge and the kids was an adorable scene. So glad he answered Carrie's two questions!
Wonderful surprise for Bella. Will Edward see Alice and Rose so he can relay hugs and kisses from their men?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 133: Bella

The time apart is more than taking its toll on Bella. Her jovial spirit is waning.
Just a couple more days until she can freak out with joy.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 132: Edward

Will Emmett and Jasper be joining Edward for the weekend in Seattle?
Alice will pull this off flawlessly.
I like Sarge's sentiment about staying away from the house until he's out of the Army!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 131: Bella

Rose and Alice are so right in the fact that Edward will absolutely love the soft-porn look of Bella on his Baby Grand!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 130: Edward

Did Edward just give a clue about Bella's b-day present? Will he call Charlie to help arrange something special?
When the boys leave the army, will they stay connected through continued training of new recruits at a base in Washington?
The three little boys in her class sound adorable.
Yeah, Angela and Jessica have joined the fold.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 129: Bella

Love Miss Mary. Cheeky little old lady! Haha.
The gift box from Edward was so thoughtful.
The panties were funny!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 128: Edward

They are almost ready to play house together!
Irina's actions were those of close family. I hope Edward finds a way to stay in contact with her and Garrett. Maybe even introduce Isabella?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 127: Bella

Any chance that the boys are heading towards Washington?

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Date: 19 Aug 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 126: Edward

Music teacher, I like it!
More easy talks and teasing, just so comfortable!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 125: Bella

I laughed when I saw the colors you chose for the piano room. They are very similar to the colors my youngest daughter chose to paint her room approximately 5 years ago. She has long since moved out after university and now has her own home and next month she's getting married. Time flies by as your household is in constant flux.
Edward must be feeling a new sense if family as Bella prepares her place for him to move in.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 124: Edward

Edward was having visual withdrawal symptoms.
Hope the sexy Skype chat helped.
Jello and dough......great visuals. Haha.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 123: Bella

These two are so good together. More, yes please!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 122: Edward

Good thing the boys are still outside helping the neighbor!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 121: Bella

I'm rather wishing Jake would have pushed further. Bella needed to make contact with her knees to his balls and her fist to his face!
The pick up lines you can up with were funny and cheesy. Lol.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward

Were back to the awesome emails!
The flow of each letter is as if they are standing in front of the recipient. Such an easy nature exists between E&B.

Regarding your prior authors note.....I agree. Even if the relationship is strained. Make the effort to spend time with parents. You just never know. Then there will be no regrets.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella

I was a given that Charlie would want his girls present when he proposed to Sue!
Bella should have used more than a knee on Jake. Thanks for letting Charlie step up and represent himself as a protective father and as Edward's proxy, to protect his girl!
Oh my, we're back to suggestive emails.........wonder his Edward will respond to potential backdoor Lovin? Nude Skype........she is such a tease!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward

You captured guys bonding over beer chili dogs and gaming rather well!
Nice to see Jasper and Emmett pulling Edward through the rough patches by expressing past experiences.
The email routine re-starting was a nice touch.

Chuckling, boys and their fantasy dream girls!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 117: Bella

Ah, Lone Star, great sounding band!
More sniffels! No laundry getting done. Sigh, oh well.
Let's read on!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward

Yea, you're right. Sarge has a way of getting under the skin and melting anyone's resolve.
Bella's trying to be strong like Alice and Rose said they try to be for their man's sake. But this is Edward's first real heartache to deal with and I'm wondering if his new recruits will take the brunt of his frustration? Will Edward's superiors decide to send them on leave?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 115: Bella

The memories created over the past two weeks are only going to make it more difficult for our favorite couple to separate when the time comes.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 114: Edward

There's always something interesting to see when at the beach, Haha!
Each of the boys are equally sad that the time with their ladies is almost over.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 113: Bella

Bella's trying so hard to take care of the boys! I like the girls preparing her meals for them to eat in the future.
Pictures as a reminder of their first face to face meeting and weeks together. Love it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 112: Edward

I'm just glad this story is complete so I can read at my leisure. Huge grin!
Formal pictures, hm. What else are the ladies up to?
Emmett will get over it. Haha.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella

Gah, that scene was unbelievable! Loving the explorations these two are so willingly engaging in. Will it become more kinky? Sarge's commanding voice could make any girl cum!
His happy dance epitimizes both of their feelings of contentment.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 110: Edward

Sarge has his hands full!
Bella is just full of him! Yesssssss, please!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 109: Bella

Their teasing is encouraging the others to join in a couples form of fun. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 108: Edward

Innuendo is very fun to read!
Emmett's going to loose another bet. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 107: Bella

Bella will always attempt to put Edward's well-being ahead of her feelings or good judgements. That's just her nature.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 106: Edward

Garrett needs to reel his daughter in; reprimand her illegal behavior and then forward Edward's legal dealings immediately to Marcus!
I'm not upset with Bella's for fearing the worst. This is a very new side to their relationship and trust is still being established.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 105: Bella

I'm hoping Rose or Alice have already texted their husbands.
How did Tanya get Edward's relocation information? She's no longer his point of contact for emergencies!

How long before Tanya gets the picture she is no longer a part of Edward's life?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 104: Edward

What else could Charlie say or ask from do far away? I'm just pleaded that he's willing to accept Edward for Bella's happiness is his happiness.
Washington, look out Sergeant Masen is headed you way!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 103: Bella

I was about to ask if the Charlie/Edward conversation would be an outtake? Along with the first week of training for Shown and his recruit buddies dealing with Emmett, Jasper and Large. They would be hilarious to read. Fifty percent isn't so bad. I'll take the father/boyfriend first.

Charlie talking to the gang brought home the limited amount if time remaining for the girls in Florida.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 102: Edward

What s perfect no pressure kind of day.
I appreciate that their desire to continue to learn and ask questions of each other has not grown stale or tiresome.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 101: Bella

Just as I suspected! They couldn't hold out!
Public enough for now. They are pushing each other in the direction of sexual explorations! How kinky do they want to become? Sarge loves to give orders......no panties all weekend!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 100: Edward

Let's Get It On!
Will they make it out of the parking lot? Hehe.

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 99: Edward

Not only sweet but very smooth!

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Date: 17 Aug 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward

I would have expected nothing less than the commanding role Sarge laid out for the new recruits. Love Bella's ability to make him reign in his aggressive approach. She schooled him. She's such a good teacher. LOL.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 97: Bella

I'll bet the fear of God shook that poor unsuspecting young soldier. Was he on of the recruits that Sarge was training?
Emmett is going to have fun making these three move double quick!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 96: Edward

Oh how sweet, a group picnic at the beach on base. How many whistles will the three ladies attract?
No panties! Sexy Large has spoken!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella

I can't even fathom the anxieties experienced by spouses or the families of our soldiers as they risks their lives to defend us and the countries where we send them.
The girls will now be able to release their loss if closeness with Bella as she will need consoling as well.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 94: Edward

I'm sure "HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME" is playing on a loop in Edward's very satisfied head right now. Haha.
The drinking game didn't reveal anything new about E or B.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 93: Bella

My son-in-law uses the piano as a form of stress release. My daughter loves it! So does my granddaughter!
I like the way Bella understands his compositions, as if he is communicating with her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 91: Bella

Oh yeah, that was worth the wait!
They were born to take care of every aspect of each others lives. This physical side is just the manifestation of the love built up through their time communicating and caring about the mind, soul and last but not least the body.
So worth the wait!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 90: Edward

Oh my..................
He is all that he has made himself out to be. A very attentive lover!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 89: Bella

How long will the house be occupied by just E&B?
Let's Get It On! Is playing on a loop in my head. hehehe

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 88: Edward

The electricity was flowing full force between them. Beautiful!
Perfect choice in first dance music.
Glad the girls and boys were enjoying the fruits of this joint effort!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 87: Bella

So well planned out!
Love it!

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 86: Edward

Good thing Emmett didn't get his way or the evening would be ending very differently. haha
Again, Edward just knows what she needs from him.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 85: Bella

Fear of the unknown has a way of wreaking havoc on our subconscious. No matter how self assured we are there are to many variables that could change to outcome. Glad Rose and Alice are with her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 84: Edward

Man, Edward is stubborn when it comes to going out and relaxing with his boys. Thanks to Alice and her pushy ways, he conceded.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 83: Bella

So Bella's not the delivery, lol.
Can't wait to read Sarge's reaction.
On with then......

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 82: Edward

Lighthearted is very good!
That tattoo is becoming a permanent thought in Bella's head.....Will Edward find an image to capture everything he feels and enjoys about this amazing girl?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 81: Bella

They are just pushing the teasing limits. Their time together can't happen soon enough.

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Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 80: Edward

I think Rose's tough girl attitude is wearing off on our sweet Isabella. haha
They always seem to know just what the other is needing at any given moment. True hearts communicating through a difficult separation. Building a strong foundation!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 79: Bella

That dream was so hot. Edward will take that and multiply it ten fold to fulfill his wildest fantasy.

Scuba diving is awesome. I was certified in the area of murky water dives, deep water dives (100ft) and wreck diving. My now husband was an instructor at the time of my training! Perks of knowing the teacher, hahaha!

Does Charlie know he is being used as an excuse to be out of communication range for awhile?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 78: Edward

Alice is multitasking, HAHAHA! Jasper is as needy as Edward is when it comes to his wife!
When is the next time jump?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 77: Bella

The guys must be razing Edward all the time now that he is in constant text/sexting mode! haha
I could never shy dive.....jumping off a 50 foot cliff into cold Lake Michigan not that was a rush! Dry suit was very necessary!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 76: Edward

Bella in a blue bow!
Will the other two couples leave them alone long enough for him to unwrap his gift.

Put Bella in a box in his doorstep! haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 75: Bella

Such longing in her words!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 74: Edward

They are so combustible together, wow!
I think Jasper and Emmett knew what Sarge was up to! hehe

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 73: Bella

Great looking Swan tattoo!
Edward is speechless!
I'm sure he is trying not to drown in his own drool! haha
She got him good.
Is Bella ready for payback?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 72: Edward

Edward better have the unlimited everything plan or his bill will be outrageous! haha
Texting will now be the Sarge's mode of being teased by his sexy girl.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 71: Bella

June 20th, Edwards birthday, right.
Jasper is the only one who could pull this off without Edward finding out!
Emmett needs his soft boob pillows to fall asleep. haha.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 70: Edward

Bella's color scheme was a nice touch.
Edward and his peanut butter cookies. You are tempting me with their crumbly goodness! I'm abstaining from sweets, my weakness.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella

Edward is gonna want to see that tattoo soon! Hm, I'm sure the Sarge has at least one tattoo, but piercings.....if his chest was bare of decoration.....hm, delightful thought.
Is Bella considering getting her bellybutton or nipples pierced? He would die. haha

Enough about the lazy, self absorbed Renee. She has been given enough time to fix her relationship with her daughter. Not happening!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 68: Edward

The clean bill of health wasn't even something I considered as a potential problem. Good thing the army is thorough!
The sale of middle names was a very funny addition to this chapter. Will Rose and Alice have to protect their girl, Bella, from their cranky hubands?
Edward's hands anywhere will do, GAH!
Hm, does Bella have ink hidden on her body?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella

I'm just a disappointed in Renee as Bella is. To be last on a mother's list of priorities is a feeling I can relate to. It makes you want to do and be better with your own children!
A second job for Bella. Can't wait to hear about some of the stories she will be editing! Will she need to research some of the subject matter to become a better editor?
That master bedroom better have the furniture nailed to the floor. Haha.
It's going to be ridden hard and put away wet! lol

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward

Another reassurance from Edward that his need for her is greater than even he knows how to deal with it.
The heat is building once again!
I wouldn't consider that their first fight. Just a step in building the foundation for a strong and lasting love affair of the heart!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 65: Bella

I know Bella's not stupid and that she realized she reacted out of her fears and insecurities but she should have talked to her girls first and then explained to Edward what she was feeling. Avoiding this hiccup in their forward progress.
Edward was very determined to set her straight. Glad he expressed his insecurities about not being around as she goes to the bars and out with the girls. He has no control over those situations any more than Bella does while Sarge is in a foreign country.

Happy to read her teasing comments at the end.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 64: Edward

My favorite line in this chapter:
Nothing about our relationship is disposable to me!

These days everyone thinks its easy to throw away a relationship and start over. Ha, what they forget is we take our SH*T with us where ever we go! Whining they say.....'it's hard work', really, you just figured that out? I'd like to cuff 'em up side the head for stringing the other party of the relationship along pretending to be in it for the long haul.
I'm off my soapbox for a while. I may jump back up there at any given time if the mood hits. hahaha.
Hope Edward got his point across!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 63: Bella

Her letter is so formal. Almost as if she has already said good-bye.
Has she even considered everything Edward has told her about himself and what he wants in life? Has she forgotten he has made a choice already that he was excited about? She told him to move in.....that is something he has already accepted.
Edward needs to find a way for him to be able to meet her when he gets off the plane in Florida. That should solidify his feelings and remove any doubt she has to his intentions.
If I were Edward I'd be a bit pissed at her for letting her head take her in directions that will hurt their chances of a successful relationship!

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: Edward

I'll bet Bella is worried that her man will be attractive to the local women.
She should have let him reply!
Now he will worry that he has done something wrong.
That evil thing called Jealously just reared it's ugly head.
Hope Edward figured out he needs to email her immediately following his night out.
She went out, double standard? She's not thinking straight.

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 61: Bella

I guess she followed thru with her promise of having a few for Sarge!
I hate throwing up after a night of debauchery!Haha

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward

Glad Bella is still sending him treats!
Will Edward's level of leadership be increased once he is state-side? Lieutenant sounds mighty nice!
How about jasper and Emmett; will they get promotions before they are discharged?

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Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 59: Bella

The T-shirt was perfectly timed!
I'm amazed that he sent his family photo for he to keep. Another huge step in his trusting love for this woman!

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