Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 162: Edward
To bad Bella makes Edward always defend himself. She won't stand up to Jake and when Edward does he was wrong. But when Tonya was an issue Edward stood by Bella and put Tonya in her place. I wonder is back at the restaurant with the waiter if things were reversed how wow Bella feel if Edward was laughing and scolding her and being extra friendly to waitress how Bella would feel.
Date: 05 Feb 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
Okay Mike was NOT the love of her life by her own admission so this insecure shit needs to shift already. What she has with Edward in 4 months blows away the hold on folks 6 months she had with dufus. Besides if nothing else Tanya humiliated Edward and he has told everyone that SHE loves and TRUST that he loves her. Dayum gurl! To quote Cher in Moonstruck...'snap out of it'!
Date: 05 Feb 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 63: Bella
She's not being honorable at all. She's definitely being insecure but what she really is doing subconsciously is testing him. Making him prove his loyalty and desire for her. There were women on his base if he wanted that as he mentioned. I call bullshit, if you love him hold on and fight when and if ncessary. End. Of. Story.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 6:52 AM Title: Author's Note!
Wish I could give some money, but things are tight. Tell him we all thank him for his service and that what he does makes a difference, no matter how small or big his job. I grew up with a father in the Navy and live in Colorado Springs CO where a great deal of service men and women ship in and out of. We are proud of them! Each and every one!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
I read this entire story and have to say loved it. I cried, cheered,feared, loved, celebrated, grieved with the story. Amazing concept. I was in the story. Feeling Bella when Ed was in Germany. Also when she was on her way to see him. I could also be there seeing Ed points. I did get frustrated that she shamed him for his caveman feelings and as I saw being to friendly to the waiter to make her point. And with Jake. I saw it as excusing his behavior while Ed didn't excuse Tanya bad behavior but stood up to it. The timeline was extremely confusing though. At ages of 25/26 they are great to have grown to know who they are as individuals what I got stuck on is if Ed was 8 yrs in the Army and had not heard from Tanya except one letter never taken a leave. Yes I would image there was no relationship on either side, but in that aspect the writing was like he had been at war a year ... and her failing out of college and thing did not follow the 8 yr timeline. Thank you both for sharing your creativity. Up there on my favorite stories.
Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 143: Bella
Argh, flight delays. They suck the life out of ya. It's the worst if you're on the red eye flight and still have to go into work the next day. Definitely an excuse to plead illness or working from home.
First official birthday wish. Too cute!
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 134: Edward
Mrs. Cope was too sweet for words. Enjoyed reading how she put both Mike and Lauren in their proper place!
Sarge and the kids was an adorable scene. So glad he answered Carrie's two questions!
Wonderful surprise for Bella. Will Edward see Alice and Rose so he can relay hugs and kisses from their men?
Date: 20 Aug 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 130: Edward
Did Edward just give a clue about Bella's b-day present? Will he call Charlie to help arrange something special?
When the boys leave the army, will they stay connected through continued training of new recruits at a base in Washington?
The three little boys in her class sound adorable.
Yeah, Angela and Jessica have joined the fold.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 125: Bella
I laughed when I saw the colors you chose for the piano room. They are very similar to the colors my youngest daughter chose to paint her room approximately 5 years ago. She has long since moved out after university and now has her own home and next month she's getting married. Time flies by as your household is in constant flux.
Edward must be feeling a new sense if family as Bella prepares her place for him to move in.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 120: Edward
Were back to the awesome emails!
The flow of each letter is as if they are standing in front of the recipient. Such an easy nature exists between E&B.
Regarding your prior authors note.....I agree. Even if the relationship is strained. Make the effort to spend time with parents. You just never know. Then there will be no regrets.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 119: Bella
I was a given that Charlie would want his girls present when he proposed to Sue!
Bella should have used more than a knee on Jake. Thanks for letting Charlie step up and represent himself as a protective father and as Edward's proxy, to protect his girl!
Oh my, we're back to suggestive emails.........wonder his Edward will respond to potential backdoor Lovin? Nude Skype........she is such a tease!
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 118: Edward
You captured guys bonding over beer chili dogs and gaming rather well!
Nice to see Jasper and Emmett pulling Edward through the rough patches by expressing past experiences.
The email routine re-starting was a nice touch.
Chuckling, boys and their fantasy dream girls!
Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 116: Edward
Yea, you're right. Sarge has a way of getting under the skin and melting anyone's resolve.
Bella's trying to be strong like Alice and Rose said they try to be for their man's sake. But this is Edward's first real heartache to deal with and I'm wondering if his new recruits will take the brunt of his frustration? Will Edward's superiors decide to send them on leave?
Date: 18 Aug 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 111: Bella
Gah, that scene was unbelievable! Loving the explorations these two are so willingly engaging in. Will it become more kinky? Sarge's commanding voice could make any girl cum!
His happy dance epitimizes both of their feelings of contentment.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 106: Edward
Garrett needs to reel his daughter in; reprimand her illegal behavior and then forward Edward's legal dealings immediately to Marcus!
I'm not upset with Bella's for fearing the worst. This is a very new side to their relationship and trust is still being established.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 105: Bella
I'm hoping Rose or Alice have already texted their husbands.
How did Tanya get Edward's relocation information? She's no longer his point of contact for emergencies!
How long before Tanya gets the picture she is no longer a part of Edward's life?
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 103: Bella
I was about to ask if the Charlie/Edward conversation would be an outtake? Along with the first week of training for Shown and his recruit buddies dealing with Emmett, Jasper and Large. They would be hilarious to read. Fifty percent isn't so bad. I'll take the father/boyfriend first.
Charlie talking to the gang brought home the limited amount if time remaining for the girls in Florida.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 101: Bella
Just as I suspected! They couldn't hold out!
Public enough for now. They are pushing each other in the direction of sexual explorations! How kinky do they want to become? Sarge loves to give orders......no panties all weekend!
Date: 17 Aug 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 98: Edward
I would have expected nothing less than the commanding role Sarge laid out for the new recruits. Love Bella's ability to make him reign in his aggressive approach. She schooled him. She's such a good teacher. LOL.
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 95: Bella
I can't even fathom the anxieties experienced by spouses or the families of our soldiers as they risks their lives to defend us and the countries where we send them.
The girls will now be able to release their loss if closeness with Bella as she will need consoling as well.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 91: Bella
Oh yeah, that was worth the wait!
They were born to take care of every aspect of each others lives. This physical side is just the manifestation of the love built up through their time communicating and caring about the mind, soul and last but not least the body.
So worth the wait!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 80: Edward
I think Rose's tough girl attitude is wearing off on our sweet Isabella. haha
They always seem to know just what the other is needing at any given moment. True hearts communicating through a difficult separation. Building a strong foundation!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 79: Bella
That dream was so hot. Edward will take that and multiply it ten fold to fulfill his wildest fantasy.
Scuba diving is awesome. I was certified in the area of murky water dives, deep water dives (100ft) and wreck diving. My now husband was an instructor at the time of my training! Perks of knowing the teacher, hahaha!
Does Charlie know he is being used as an excuse to be out of communication range for awhile?
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 77: Bella
The guys must be razing Edward all the time now that he is in constant text/sexting mode! haha
I could never shy dive.....jumping off a 50 foot cliff into cold Lake Michigan not that was a rush! Dry suit was very necessary!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 69: Bella
Edward is gonna want to see that tattoo soon! Hm, I'm sure the Sarge has at least one tattoo, but piercings.....if his chest was bare of decoration.....hm, delightful thought.
Is Bella considering getting her bellybutton or nipples pierced? He would die. haha
Enough about the lazy, self absorbed Renee. She has been given enough time to fix her relationship with her daughter. Not happening!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 68: Edward
The clean bill of health wasn't even something I considered as a potential problem. Good thing the army is thorough!
The sale of middle names was a very funny addition to this chapter. Will Rose and Alice have to protect their girl, Bella, from their cranky hubands?
Edward's hands anywhere will do, GAH!
Hm, does Bella have ink hidden on her body?
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella
I'm just a disappointed in Renee as Bella is. To be last on a mother's list of priorities is a feeling I can relate to. It makes you want to do and be better with your own children!
A second job for Bella. Can't wait to hear about some of the stories she will be editing! Will she need to research some of the subject matter to become a better editor?
That master bedroom better have the furniture nailed to the floor. Haha.
It's going to be ridden hard and put away wet! lol
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward
Another reassurance from Edward that his need for her is greater than even he knows how to deal with it.
The heat is building once again!
I wouldn't consider that their first fight. Just a step in building the foundation for a strong and lasting love affair of the heart!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 65: Bella
I know Bella's not stupid and that she realized she reacted out of her fears and insecurities but she should have talked to her girls first and then explained to Edward what she was feeling. Avoiding this hiccup in their forward progress.
Edward was very determined to set her straight. Glad he expressed his insecurities about not being around as she goes to the bars and out with the girls. He has no control over those situations any more than Bella does while Sarge is in a foreign country.
Happy to read her teasing comments at the end.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 64: Edward
My favorite line in this chapter:
Nothing about our relationship is disposable to me!
These days everyone thinks its easy to throw away a relationship and start over. Ha, what they forget is we take our SH*T with us where ever we go! Whining they say.....'it's hard work', really, you just figured that out? I'd like to cuff 'em up side the head for stringing the other party of the relationship along pretending to be in it for the long haul.
I'm off my soapbox for a while. I may jump back up there at any given time if the mood hits. hahaha.
Hope Edward got his point across!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 63: Bella
Her letter is so formal. Almost as if she has already said good-bye.
Has she even considered everything Edward has told her about himself and what he wants in life? Has she forgotten he has made a choice already that he was excited about? She told him to move in.....that is something he has already accepted.
Edward needs to find a way for him to be able to meet her when he gets off the plane in Florida. That should solidify his feelings and remove any doubt she has to his intentions.
If I were Edward I'd be a bit pissed at her for letting her head take her in directions that will hurt their chances of a successful relationship!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: Edward
I'll bet Bella is worried that her man will be attractive to the local women.
She should have let him reply!
Now he will worry that he has done something wrong.
That evil thing called Jealously just reared it's ugly head.
Hope Edward figured out he needs to email her immediately following his night out.
She went out, double standard? She's not thinking straight.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 60: Edward
Glad Bella is still sending him treats!
Will Edward's level of leadership be increased once he is state-side? Lieutenant sounds mighty nice!
How about jasper and Emmett; will they get promotions before they are discharged?