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Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

fab chapter yey emmetts back.wow that was hot airplane sex!update soon

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

OH WOW...SO amazing!  You ROCK!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 26

fab chapter wow that was hot!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

Holy hell! That was hot. I loved that they decided to enjoy their flight lol! 

 

And Tanya seems to have legit reasons so I'm glad! And Emmett being there, how I've missed him lol! Glad to see a familiar face! 

 

And next chapter is going to be good...hmm I wonder what's happening!! 

Reviewer: smiley2204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

Hey,

 

airplane sex...nice ;-) I'm really curious about the next chapter!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

perfect

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love how they are learning about one another & all the depths of themselves.

I also loved the mirror exercise...I love watching!

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

holy fuuuuuuuuuck!!!!!!!!!!!!

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

What a douche this Carlisle is!!! 

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Finally my internet came back on! But now I must sleep...will be at it early tomorrow with any luck! 

xoxox

ba

 

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

damn i love this fic !!!

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww...Papi takes good care of his Bellezza!!!

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

sofaking HOT!!!!

and SO nsfw...but I can't stop reading it now!!!!!!!!! 

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Finally...I have started to read this!  

Amazing chapter bb!!! 

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: bunch2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter

Reviewer: WitchyVampireGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

You did a great job.. it was hot and sexy and DAYUM... I want this Edward to show up on my front door.... great job.. loved it..ever single word.....

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

Please tell me that you will be feeding my addiction SOON!

 

Copper

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Each of them can become so engrossed in their own concerns that they don't realize the fissure that is developing in their line of communication.
Tanya is correct, Edward needs to put a ring on her finger. Soon!
I think Edward needs to reconsider his possible early retirement from politics. He is stronger than that. He has the reinforcement from both Tanya and Bella to be the best he can be. Not to mention the media will use his relationship with an ex-call girl to crucify him.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 26

Cant wait for more! Loved it!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

omg,... there are just no words....

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

damn!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

loved thechapter looking forward to more 

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

so hot!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

OH WOW...SO amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next for them!  YAY!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

OMG! So hot! Seriously girl you rock!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aw, that is so sweet, already planning how to best serve the Senator breakfast at the end of their night.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Exactly, who would?

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 26

that was awesome!  the punishment was dead on!  They both needed that.. can't wait until next chapter for more!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW.  That was, WOW.

Reviewer: edaddict3254 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

thanks for the update!

it was a really good chapter and i like how talk about the future, his career and personal life, are pretty much front and center now.

thank you for writing!

 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

awww their so perfect for each other.fab chapter that was one hot party.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 24

fab chapter.wow that was hot!!!papis scorching!!

Reviewer: smiley2204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

Hey,

 

I'm so glad that you continue this story here and I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love how at the end of this chapter there was a little I'll up you with these two.

Who gets the last word in the end... Edward!

Exciting fun filled story that I have loved reading from the beginning and I cant wait to see what is going to happen, I am going to guess that in the end people are going to find out what is going on between these two... I am wondering if Charile is going to find out what Bella did for a job?

I really hope that he does not upset her.  I am also going to take a stab in the dark and wonder if the public will find out also.  I am wondering if Bella can hide her past by changing her last name and taking Charlie's but then again I am sure that they will find that out in the end a well. 

I dont think I would ever trade my life for a public one. 

Thank you for this story and I cant wait for more. 

Fiorella

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

OH MY GOSH!  SO amazing!  YAY!!!!!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great job!  LOVED IT!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

Amazing :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

OH WOW...SO amazing!  I know I say that a lot, but it is so true :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

OH WOW!  So amazing, as usual!  I really loved it!  I know they can make it through this little hurdle.  I found a little mistake, here, (which was actually correct the second time you used the word, ironically) "I think I'm ready for desert,"  it should be "dessert".  Remember, you want more than one dessert and only one desert ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

GAH!  Amazing :D

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

OH WOW...SO amazing :D

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

GAH!  So amazing, as always ;)  Cannot wait to read more!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

GAH!  That was amazing!  I really loved it!  I noticed that there are 2 extra (unneeded) commas here, "I reached down between us, ta, ,king".  It should be "taking," not "ta, , king" :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

OH WOW...So amazing :D  I really loved it!  

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

GAH!!  So amazing, as always ;)

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 11

OH WOW...AMAZING!  I was NOT expecting that from Jake!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

OH wow, so amazing!  I am so happy for them :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

OH GAH!  Your lemons are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

OH WOW...I really loved it!  Yoda sounds like a cutie!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

OH WOW...SO amazing :D

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome chap! I think Papiward will be wanting to see his little girl again.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Another hot couple of chapters. I can't wait for Bella to meet Charlie.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 06 Jun 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

So thrilled to see you have posted here.  Have loved this story and was so afraid it would be pulled from FF along with all of the other stories that I love. 

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! - Cheri

 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: pia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for updating here!! Your story is great! I'll wait for the last chapters, 'cause I was reading it on FF.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Saw your story & it looked interesting, so here I am

Reviewer: fprm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

awesome

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

awesome

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

I loved this chapter. It was a real turning point for them when Edward took the control that Bella refused to give to him.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Found your story. It's great. I can't wait to get caught up.

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