Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
looking fowrard tomore
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love this story so sad it's coming to and end I'm gonna miss it..this chapter was really good I was a little bit nervous about the scene because I hate sharing but it was really good. Thank you :) anxioulsy waiting for more!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
No.. this can't end.. *sniff*
I love this story.......
Great chapter and the scene was amazing..... thanks!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 29
Soo fucking good.... *sigh* You make me want an Edward just like this!!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter! i love the way you write their scenes together.
i love how you write ewdard's dominance, control and possession of isabella. i've also realized that i really like your bella too, and i can't say that very often.
i hate that this wonderful ride is coming to a close! it will always be one of my favorites!
thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
This story was very well written. I was always wOrried they would be exposed. Can't wait for the epilogue. Great last 2 chapters.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it worth the wait xx
Date: 04 Aug 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hey,
great chapter, I really liked the scene! But it's really sad that this wonderful story will be over so soon, I really like it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'll be sad as well to say good-bye to Papi and Bella
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
I have loved loved loved this story and will be really sad when it ends. x
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
OH WOW, that was amazing! I never thought about Charles joining them in a scene, but it was SO perfect! I cannot believe it is almost over...I will miss this too. But, I can still reread it anytime I want :)
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter... all but the assisting part... I'm not into sharing at all. I hate to see this end as well.. looking for forward to the next chapter..
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 30
I can't wait for the wedding!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
SO amazing :) I really loved it!!! They are amazing together!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am gonna be sad to see this story end! I hope they epi is in EPOV!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
PLZ KEEP writing this it's great. I think it's interesting to read about the obscure realotionship between E and B. kEEP WRITING COS UR fab at it @)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
I enjoyed this chapter being in EPOV, as I think it adds information on how seriously he takes his role as a "daddy" and the not-exclusively sexual responsibilities included therein. About the contract, is it legally binding? Does one contact a notary for these types of contract? I understand that it brings a comfort of binding and helps to beget trust in the precarious beginnings of a relationship like this one, but is it anything more than a formality? Thank you for sharing your hard work with us!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
the text is way too small. i've had too enlarge it in order to read this. that being said, i really liked the first chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh that was so much fun! can't believe emmett showed up that way i would have had a heart attack!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
I really love this story..I can't believe they're finally engaged..I really loved this chapter, it was so romantic, I just love this two.
Thanks for the update, waiting for more ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter! poor bella, glad she told edward what was really bothering her. all kinds of hot, and loved him taking care of her at the beginning of the chapter and feeling helpless!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh my, i love them! glad i found you had moved here or were here after being kicked off FFN. i have missed this story!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
That proposal was beyond words! Beautiful, heart warming; a perfect blend of nervous anticipation and dreams coming to fruition.
Edward's emotional release brought home the idea of people really thinking they are unworthy of experiencing the basic joys of a loving relationship.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
Now that Bella's past has been covered up, will Edward complete his term?
How selfish were Tanya's motives?
Date: 16 Jul 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! sooo good ty bb
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
loved the chapter
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG, THEY'RE ENGAGED💍!!!!!!!!! YESd84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;
Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
Holy batman, they just joined the mile high club... HOTT, but now he got me thinking about what is going to happen
Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Omg, I still want to know what she did at Alice and Jasper's house... But besides that it was a good chapter as usual
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
Love these two and these sweet, sexy chapter. I'm worried about what they will face in the near future and hopeful that the happiness they have with each other will help them through any tough times.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
loved the update... made me love edward more when he was able to let some of his emotions go... that tear falling made my heart beat a little faster...
Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
oh i have missed this story! couldn't find it at first and had a group on facebook tell me where it had moved from FFn...thanks for writing!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love it! Not only the kinky, but the endless love and devotion they have for each other
Date: 10 Jul 2012 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
First off I was so disappointed when I went to read the latest updates for this story (sorry for the delay on that) on FFN only to learn that the story was removed!! Once I learned the story was moved here, I was fine but now I don't have my reviews for this story from FFN to guide and remind me of what has previous happened (its one of the reasons I even review, to guide me through long stories such as this).
Anyways:
It was very cool to see Bella/Edward out in public together and experiencing something else together which is making their bond even stronger.
Well done!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, that was beautiful.
Thank you.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
That was so beautiful!
I might have shed a tear with them!
xoxox
ba
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
I so love these two! They are perfect for each other! I want a Papi like Edward:)
Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
So incredibly awesome! I have loved each and every minute of this story!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
Aww!! I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Great proposal.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
What a wonderful chapter! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
the way they made love almost brought tears to my eyes. it was beautiful!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
WOW, stunning, beautiful, romantic, erotic. Damn girl, you covered them all. Nicely done.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 28
awww...soo very very sweet.... loved it!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
I like this story, but I really do hope you explore at some point the line between their fetish and if they do indeed decide to have children one day. I think that would be very interesting to see what would happen there...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
awww fantastic chapter so romantic and emotional.yey their engaged thats fab news.update soon
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
OH WOW...SO amazing! I am SO happy for them! YAY!!!!!!! Cannot wait to read more!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
This was beautiful!
She said yes! So excited!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved this chapter!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hey,
how great, he proposed to her and she said yes...I really liked it!
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
Next chapter might be a good one, but this one was WONDERFUL!!! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 27
Interesting twist with Charlie and Tanya changing Bella's name like that. I have a feeling it won't complete save them in the end.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow so much going on in that chapter. I'm just glad the both removed their heads from thier butts and reconnected :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the play party. What a way to bring out their exhibitionism :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love how Edward stood up for Bella with Jacob. That was awesome.
I love their intimacy. Even though they are getting down and dirty the intimacy shines through :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
holy crow! i didn't realize i was caught up til just now!
i'm lovin this story something fierce!
xoxox
ba
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
I can't wait for Jake and Eward to meet. I have a feeling it could be quite entertaining.
Yay for Bella wanting to know if she can have kids :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yay, Charlie wants to see her. I just want to know what Renee told him when she stopped updating him when Bella turned 18. I'm sure it's because she didn't have contact with Bella but I wonder what she told Charlie.
*sigh* I think I fell in love with Papi even more this chapter. I love it when we get into his head and get to see what he's thinking and feeling.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow. I so did not see that coming. I just assumed her dad was Charlie Swan. I did not see you switching it up on me like that.
Poor Bella. I understand why she was scared to submit to Edward but I think she learned that no matter what she needs to. Hopefully the lesson sticks. We all know how stubborn she is.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I wanted to slap the crap out of Edward's mom. Once again it was all about her. It sucks that she always hurts Edward.
Other than Mommy Dearest they did great at the charity function. It was a great introduction of Bella to his world.
Sexy times afterward was hot and so emotional. They both needed that. I think too dirty or rushed would've totally defeated the purpose. Great job with that one :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
I knew the media would eventally burst their happy bubble. Bella is right, they need to come clean before the media finds out everything. That is definitely the best strategy.
His mom is quite the piece of work. Of course she would be more worried about what this would do to her and the family. I totally agree with Bella that it sucks that his mom never said she was leaving Carlisle because he was such a prick to Edward.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH NO.. he is a kinky bastard isn't he. Now, I just have to say.. Tanya being his PA makes me nervous. Just saying
Loved the Edward POV.. Thanks
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well.. I'll be.. that was fun. I was told about this little gem from Jennmc75... she said I should read and give your fic the love it deserves. I am loving it so far. Jenn usually doesn't steer me wrong.
Can wait for me. Thanks for posting we are glad you are here.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love how they can start off being sweet and then it gets dirty and gritty.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
I loved girl talk. It was shocking that Tanya stuck around for that. She definitely didn't strike me as the girl talk type. I loved seeing Alice's view of everything and Bella's view on a few things.
Wow, that punishment was intense. I totally got what Edward was doing. It's so endearing to see the concern he has for Bella especially after she collapses like she did after that punishment. He really does love her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah, Charles was quite entertaining.
I loved the Edward told her he loved her. I think her response that she was falling in love with him was perfect. Poor girl needs baby steps.
I lost it when Edward was so eager to get a room and Victoria was so clueless. Poor guy. LOL!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, Papi has skills in the playroom. Bella is one lucky little girl.
Charles was interesting. I wonder if we will see him in the future.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm dying laughing at the "old man" having a hard time keeping up with Bella. It sucks to get to an age when you can't drink, etc. like you used to.
I love their little happy bubble they are in while in Italy. I wonder what will happen to change that once they get home.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nonna was awesome. Bella definitely needed to feel the love and acceptance from his grandparents. I have a feeling the rest of his family won't be that easy.
I love that he has admited he is falling for her and that in her own way she is seeing that she is falling too.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOL, Emmett is great.
I love how Edward is realizing that he is falling for Bella but also that it won't happen over night.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can't believe Jake wouldn't at least call Bella and tell her he was getting married. I would have to say that was definitely not good BFF behavior.
Yeah, her punishment makes her regret her actions now but I can definitely see this strong-willed Bella forget her lesson and be bratty at a later time.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
I was shocked to see Bella acting like such a brat. It's nice to know there was a reason for it.
I love seeing Edward's feelings become deeper for Bella. It is quite obvious that Bella's are becoming deeper as well.
It will be interesting to see how they both handle his trip to DC. I'm also wondering when he will find out that Dr. Brandon is one of Bella's close friends.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Okay, I need a drink and a cigarette after reading that. It was intense physically and emotionally. It was awesome to see both of them let go like that.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
I flove Tanya. She is greatness.
Master Yoda is so cute and such a good idea for Edward to get him for Bella.
Yeah, I didn't think their sex embargo would hold up. Hello, if I had sexy Eddie at my disposal I know I wouldn't be ble to hold out.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a way for Bella to wake up and realize how her life is not what she wants it to be.
Edward was so perfect with how he handled her melt down. Yeah, she definitely needs her Papi :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, Carlisle is quite a piece of work. I think I would avoid my family too if it always ended like that.
Tanya is one hell of a good friend. She is quick to call in Bella and always seems to be right when she does.
Me thinks the Senator is developing feelings for our dear Bella.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
I knew Bella was doing a major no-no when she touched herself. I love how you thoroughly take us through her thought process while she is being punished and how it makes her feel.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh the joys of a window with dark window tinting. Each chapter gets better and better and I find myself loving your Edward and Bella both more and more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jacob is awesome. I just love it when authors give me a Jake I can love rather than despise.
I think I need a cigarette after that and I don't even smoke.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think I would have to tell mommy dearest to eff off. With his job and a mother like that no wonder he wants to escape into his role of Papi. Yeah, one of those socialites would freak out if he tried to pull any of that with them. He def needs someone like Bella.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* Yeah, Senator Cullen would have my vote too if I were Bella. I think I'm really going to like this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
Can't wait to see the next chapter...
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
What are they going to get up to at the ballet?
;-)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love this story! So happy you kept posting it!!(:
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yay I found you! I was so worried that you would stop wiring after ff pulled your story.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW, I just want to be Isabella for 24 hours. That's all, just 24 hours.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
I really love this story! can't wait to see what happens in Italy!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow, bathrooms in 1st class must be a lot bigger than those in coach!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was hot!!! I'llbe thinking of this chapter when I'm sitting on an airplane tomorrow.... ;D