[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
I gave this a reread. 10 years later and it’s still a banger. I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this the first and second time. Papi and Belleza are fire together. Best wishes. Ajfflady
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2022 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
I gave this a reread. 10 years later and it’s still a banger. I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this the first and second time. Papi and Belleza are fire together. Best wishes. Ajfflady
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm a little confused. Did Edward and Charles have sex all those years ago at boarding school or was it just a little harmless exploration? Some chapters conflict with others when explains this.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just stumbled upon this and I am already excited about reading more of this story!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
great story, i'm on my way to read the outtakes now!!
i love that you didn't make them all perfect with one being good and one having a past or both of them being virgins. the story was something that could and does in fact happen in real life.
thank you for sharing your talent
Date: 25 Sep 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
A very good story!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
i really love this transition for Bella.
I came across as very natural for her.
i know there is still a lot to sort out.
it's hopeful
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Just a quick comment. Laurent is a man so wouldn't say je Suis très heureuse mais je suis très heureux. Adjective change with the subject gender.
Secondly , while comment vas tu? Is perfectly correct when you don't know someone you use " vous" instead of "tu " , which is used for people you are closed to.
So Edward should have said : comment allez- vous? Like you put in the footer :)
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
The writing for the party was great so hot I hope you write another daddy /little story
Date: 28 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holy shit that was hot! Good I wish I had a daddy like that.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
i wouldnt be surprised if everything Edward thought and has been told about his biological father was false..
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh Papi I love you so! And you too Miss Rachy for giving us a peek into his life. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! x Donna
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love this story. I used four days to finish it and now I feel very content . Will be looking for more stories fm you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
I'm glad that you wrote this so realistically, not some over inflated sense of constant sexuality even after children. Amazing. I loved this!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved. This. Beautiful, and well woven story, with fully fleshed out characters. Amazing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
I almost feel badly for Charles. He got to join them in the scene, but there was no release for him.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
Man, when these two sstart going at it, they are impossible to sate! Lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love that while they still have the basis of the Daddy/Little relationship, they have surpassed the physical, and become so emotionally connected that the entire relationship has become a true give and take. They have the best of the vanilla and the kink worlds.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 27
A good one, eh?! Yay!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh, Papi. She genuinely wants this future with you as we'll!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
What are they going to do for their scene?!?? I'm so excited about that.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am hoping to have to look up an anal anchor... Never heard of one before!
Author's Response:
its like a plug with a hook on the end that helps keep it situated
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was such a sweet chapter!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Charlie wants to know her... I just wonder why he never looked her up after she was eighteen, or at least after Reneè and Phil died!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
His patience and tenderness are so endearing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
It is still odd to me to read a heartless Carlisle!! I have read several renditions of him, but it never gets easier!!
I am so glad that Bella was able to be there for and with him at the ball!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think that is wise... Out yourselves on your own terms rather than wait for the media to twist it into their own warped view.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah, I imagine with age play that a pacifier would be deemed extremely hawt!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was so beautiful between them! Vanilla's not so bad every now and again!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow... That was heavier pain play than I was anticipating these two involved in... Although, I do share Bella's affinity for wax. *shudder* I think I'll have to put the bug in hubby's ear on that... It's been too long!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
Saying no to the pleasure he gives would be just plain silly!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really like how you described that - how he sees her. As what she CAN be, and who she already IS inside. He's not blind to her shortcomings, but cares for her even still, knowing that he can help her achieve more if she'll let him.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's awesome that he is willing to take that leap, put his heart on the line first, and free her to offer hers to him!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
The punishment ALONE could push buttons and invoke a bratty attitude!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love that he took responsibility for his part in her stress. Because, while it is not his "fault" that he has to go away for work; he DOES know that their relationship is new and she is both needy and insecure. She needs to be reassured of his commitment to her, and what he feels for her. I love how he let her control their lovemaking without feeling as though he was losing control. In a way, there was an act of submission on both of their parts in this. I love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, shit! That was so incredibly hawt!!! Dammit. The hubs is asleep. :(
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think they will quickly find that their needs and desires match. ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
He's finding out slowly that it isn't just the Frisch and role play are not what is making him feel fulfilled, bt Bella herself.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'd like to service Papi!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, my!!! I really like Papi!!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thanks for the story got a little over the top for me in some places, but I enjoyed it sometimes
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
Of course Ed has to be able to do it all! LOL
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hard to picture jasper as a sub,,,,
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Interesting turn of events?
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
That is my kinda maid!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok didn't prefer that....
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
The I love is out that means something bad s going to happen!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
She is going to run from him, someone s going to blackmail her!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett is funny love him
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yuk....as I said I like to read it but really don't ever want to do it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was thinking he would take her too....guess I was wrong
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sometimes I just freaking hate Bella.....she is so damn lucky
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hum interesting twist of events
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow nice family....NOT!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love D/s but nt the spanking. That is why I read it and don't do it!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Darn sex in a limo....yum!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hummmm, where is ths all going to go. They are going to freak when the press finds out she was a call girl!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ed, I will be your girl and do it for free! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely LOVE the fuck hot banner for this story! Can't wait to start reading it when I get some time :P
Ms Torres
xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32
I loved reading this story. It was amazing!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
HELL I'D NEVER GIVE IT UP
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
THIS CHAPTER HAD EVERYTHING PACKED FULL OF EXCITMENT FOR ME ANYWAYS I CAN'T THINK OF BUT ONE THING I'D CHANGE AND THATS FOR ME TO BE THE ONE IN BELLA'S PLACE.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story please update soon
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox anyutik-k@yandex.ru . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you so much for sharing this story, i loved everything about it!
And the Epi wrapped it up beautifully!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hot scene! I really like Charles!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved the scene, good job!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
You sure know how to write your lemons!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was so hot!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love EPOV!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was one hot party!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope she can have his babies!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Can't wait for when Bella meets Charlie!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Isn't this your story? I received a community rec to this link and immediately thought of you cause I loved this story. When I went to check it out, I was blown away cause its your story word for word. I'm not sure if you were starting another profile or what, but I wanted to make sure you at least knew about it in case they were just stealing your story. I tried to send you a message but it said it was disabled.
http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7089775/1/Who-s-Your-Papi#d_menu
Author's Response:
Lol, WYP was first written for a contest and then continued afterward. If you look at the dates you'll see that it was written before I posted the full story
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was an unexpected twist! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hot! Hot! Hot!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Go Bella!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Suddenly i'm craving chocolate!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
So sweet that they told eachother how they feel towards one another.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Damn that was intense! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful!!!
Love Nonna btw!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
This Fic is so great!!
And finally Edward realise he is starting to have real feelings towards Bella!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for another great chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
That last line cracked me up!! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope they'll be ok, and explore what ever it is they are feeling towards eachother!
Thanks for a great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, they're falling for eachother!