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Reviewer: Jersygal101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm a little confused. Did Edward and Charles have sex all those years ago at boarding school or was it just a little harmless exploration? Some chapters conflict with others when explains this. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just stumbled upon this and I am already excited about reading more of this story!

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

great story, i'm on my way to read the outtakes now!! 

i love that you didn't make them all perfect with one being good and one having a past or both of them being virgins.  the story was something that could and does in fact happen in real life.

thank you for sharing your talent

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 32

A very good story!

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

i really love this transition for Bella.

I came across as very natural for her.

i know there is still a lot to sort out.

it's hopeful

Reviewer: fanfictionalcolics Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

Just a quick comment. Laurent is a man  so wouldn't say je Suis très heureuse mais je suis très heureux. Adjective change with the subject gender.

Secondly , while comment vas tu? Is perfectly correct when you don't know someone you use " vous" instead of "tu " , which is used for people you are closed to.

So Edward should have said : comment allez- vous? Like you put in the footer :)

Reviewer: Countrygirl2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

The writing for the party was great so hot I hope you write another daddy /little story 

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 32

Me encanto

Reviewer: stickyfeathers Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Holy shit that was hot! Good I wish I had a daddy like that.

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

i wouldnt be surprised if everything Edward thought and has been told about his biological father was false..

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

Oh Papi I love you so! And you too Miss Rachy for giving us a peek into his life. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! x Donna

Reviewer: keitachibana Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love this story. I used four days to finish it and now I feel very content . Will be looking for more stories fm you!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 32

I'm glad that you wrote this so realistically, not some over inflated sense of constant sexuality even after children. Amazing. I loved this!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved. This. Beautiful, and well woven story, with fully fleshed out characters. Amazing.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

I almost feel badly for Charles. He got to join them in the scene, but there was no release for him. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

Man, when these two sstart going at it, they are impossible to sate! Lol

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

I love that while they still have the basis of the Daddy/Little relationship, they have surpassed the physical, and become so emotionally connected that the entire relationship has become a true give and take. They have the best of the vanilla and the kink worlds.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 27

A good one, eh?! Yay!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh, Papi. She genuinely wants this future with you as we'll!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

What are they going to do for their scene?!?? I'm so excited about that.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 24

I am hoping to have to look up an anal anchor... Never heard of one before!



Author's Response:

its like a plug with a hook on the end that helps keep it situated

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

That was such a sweet chapter! 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 22

I am glad that Charlie wants to know her... I just wonder why he never looked her up after she was eighteen, or at least after Reneè and Phil died!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

His patience and tenderness are so endearing. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

It is still odd to me to read a heartless Carlisle!! I have read several renditions of him, but it never gets easier!! 

I am so glad that Bella was able to be there for and with him at the ball!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

I think that is wise... Out yourselves on your own terms rather than wait for the media to twist it into their own warped view.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yeah, I imagine with age play that a pacifier would be deemed extremely hawt!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was so beautiful between them! Vanilla's not so bad every now and again!! ;)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow... That was heavier pain play than I was anticipating these two involved in... Although, I do share Bella's affinity for wax. *shudder* I think I'll have to put the bug in hubby's ear on that... It's been too long!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Saying no to the pleasure he gives would be just plain silly!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really like how you described that - how he sees her. As what she CAN be, and who she already IS inside. He's not blind to her shortcomings, but cares for her even still, knowing that he can help her achieve more if she'll let him. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

It's awesome that he is willing to take that leap, put his heart on the line first, and free her to offer hers to him!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

The punishment ALONE could push buttons and invoke a bratty attitude!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love that he took responsibility for his part in her stress. Because, while it is not his "fault" that he has to go away for work; he DOES know that their relationship is new and she is both needy and insecure. She needs to be reassured of his commitment to her, and what he feels for her. I love how he let her control their lovemaking without feeling as though he was losing control. In a way, there was an act of submission on both of their parts in this. I love it!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh, shit! That was so incredibly hawt!!! Dammit.  The hubs is asleep. :(

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

I think they will quickly find that their needs and desires match. ;)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

He's finding out slowly that it isn't just the Frisch and role play are not what is making him feel fulfilled, bt Bella herself. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'd like to service Papi!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh, my!!! I really like Papi!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thanks for the story got a little over the top for me in some places, but I enjoyed it sometimes

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

Of course Ed has to be able to do it all! LOL

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

Hard to picture jasper as a sub,,,,

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

Interesting turn of events?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oookay....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

That is my kinda maid!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ok didn't prefer that....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

The I love is out that means something bad s going to happen!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

Red butt Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

She is going to run from him, someone s going to blackmail her! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Emmett is funny love him

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yuk....as I said I like to read it but really don't ever want to do it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

I was thinking he would take her too....guess I was wrong

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sometimes I just freaking hate Bella.....she is so damn lucky

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dang he is hot...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hum interesting twist of events

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow nice family....NOT!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love D/s but nt the spanking. That is why I read it and don't do it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Darn sex in a limo....yum!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hummmm, where is ths all going to go.  They are going to freak when the press finds out she was a call girl!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hot!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ed, I will be your girl and do it for free!  LOL!

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely LOVE the fuck hot banner for this story!  Can't wait to start reading it when I get some time :P

Ms Torres
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Reviewer: PercyJacksonFan1997 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 32

I loved reading this story. It was amazing!! 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

HELL I'D NEVER GIVE IT UP

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

THIS CHAPTER HAD EVERYTHING PACKED FULL OF EXCITMENT FOR ME ANYWAYS I CAN'T THINK OF BUT ONE THING I'D CHANGE AND THATS FOR ME TO BE THE ONE IN BELLA'S PLACE.

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story please update soon 

Reviewer: anyutik-kk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox  anyutik-k@yandex.ru . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you so much for sharing this story, i loved everything about it!

And the Epi wrapped it up beautifully!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! :)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hot scene! I really like Charles!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved the scene, good job!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

You sure know how to write your lemons!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 27

That was so hot! 

 

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love EPOV! 

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

That was one hot party!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope she can have his babies!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Can't wait for when Bella meets Charlie!

Reviewer: Urmylyfnw Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Isn't this your story? I received a community rec to this link and immediately thought of you cause I loved this story. When I went to check it out, I was blown away cause its your story word for word. I'm not sure if you were starting another profile or what, but I wanted to make sure you at least knew about it in case they were just stealing your story. I tried to send you a message but it said it was disabled.

 

http://m.fanfiction.net/s/7089775/1/Who-s-Your-Papi#d_menu



Author's Response:

Lol, WYP was first written for a contest and then continued afterward. If you look at the dates you'll see that it was written before I posted the full story

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

That was an unexpected twist! :)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

Go Bella!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Suddenly i'm craving chocolate!!!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

So sweet that they told eachother how they feel towards one another.

 

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Damn that was intense! :)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Beautiful!!!

Love Nonna btw!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

This Fic is so great!!

And finally Edward realise he is starting to have real feelings towards Bella!!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for another great chapter!!!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

That last line cracked me up!! :)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hope they'll be ok, and explore what ever it is they are feeling towards eachother!

Thanks for a great chapter!

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh, they're falling for eachother!

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Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for another great chapter!

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Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 4

So hot! Fanning myself over here!!

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