Date: 05 Oct 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
great story, i'm on my way to read the outtakes now!!
i love that you didn't make them all perfect with one being good and one having a past or both of them being virgins. the story was something that could and does in fact happen in real life.
thank you for sharing your talent
Date: 16 Jul 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
Just a quick comment. Laurent is a man so wouldn't say je Suis très heureuse mais je suis très heureux. Adjective change with the subject gender.
Secondly , while comment vas tu? Is perfectly correct when you don't know someone you use " vous" instead of "tu " , which is used for people you are closed to.
So Edward should have said : comment allez- vous? Like you put in the footer :)
Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love that while they still have the basis of the Daddy/Little relationship, they have surpassed the physical, and become so emotionally connected that the entire relationship has become a true give and take. They have the best of the vanilla and the kink worlds.
Date: 21 Feb 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow... That was heavier pain play than I was anticipating these two involved in... Although, I do share Bella's affinity for wax. *shudder* I think I'll have to put the bug in hubby's ear on that... It's been too long!!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really like how you described that - how he sees her. As what she CAN be, and who she already IS inside. He's not blind to her shortcomings, but cares for her even still, knowing that he can help her achieve more if she'll let him.
Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love that he took responsibility for his part in her stress. Because, while it is not his "fault" that he has to go away for work; he DOES know that their relationship is new and she is both needy and insecure. She needs to be reassured of his commitment to her, and what he feels for her. I love how he let her control their lovemaking without feeling as though he was losing control. In a way, there was an act of submission on both of their parts in this. I love it!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox firstname.lastname@example.org . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Isn't this your story? I received a community rec to this link and immediately thought of you cause I loved this story. When I went to check it out, I was blown away cause its your story word for word. I'm not sure if you were starting another profile or what, but I wanted to make sure you at least knew about it in case they were just stealing your story. I tried to send you a message but it said it was disabled.
Lol, WYP was first written for a contest and then continued afterward. If you look at the dates you'll see that it was written before I posted the full story